THE TRANSLATION OF COHESIVE DEVICES IN INDONESIAN AND ENGLISH ABSTRACTS IN BIOLOGY THESES.

THE TRANSLATION OF COHESIVE DEVICES IN
INDONESIAN AND ENGLISH ABSTRACTS IN BIOLOGY
THESES

A THESIS

Submitted to the English Applied Linguistics Study Program as the Final
Requirement for the Degree of Magister Humaniora

By:
SONDANG DAMERIA
Register Number: 809111043

ENGLISH APPLIED LINGUISTICS STUDY PROGRAM
POSTGRADUATE SCHOOL
STATE UNIVERSITY OF MEDAN
2014

THE TRANSLATION OF COHESIVE DEVICES IN
INDONESIAN AND ENGLISH ABSTRACTS IN BIOLOGY
THESES


A THESIS

Submitted to the English Applied Linguistics Study Program as the Final
Requirement for the Degree of Magister Humaniora

By:
SONDANG DAMERIA
Register Number: 809111043

ENGLISH APPLIED LINGUISTICS STUDY PROGRAM
POSTGRADUATE SCHOOL
STATE UNIVERSITY OF MEDAN
2014

ABSTRACT

Sondang Dameria. The Translation of Cohesive Devices in Indonesian and
English Abstracs In Biology Theses. Thesis. Post Graduate Program, state
university of medan, 2014.

This study aimed (1) to describe cohesive devices are used in Indonesian and
English version of the Abstract in Biology Theses, (2) to explain the frequency of
cohesive devices used in Indonesian and English version of the Abstract in
Biology Theses, and (3) to explain the translatability of the cohesive devices in
the process of translation of the abstract in Biology Theses. This study used
descriptive research sample of 10 abstracts thesis of students of Biology Study
program of State University of Medan (UNIMED). The data themselves were
single sentences, clauses of the abstract thesis. The results showed that (1) It was
found all cohesive devices occur in the whole abstracts analyzed. The most
occurence of the cohesive devices in the whole abstracts belongs to Grammatical
Cohesion namely; Reference (2) The researcher found that in writing the
Indonesian version based on Grammatical Cohesion, the writer most use
Substitutionfo llowed by Reference, Conjunction and Ellipsis. In English version,
the writer most use Reference followed by Substitution, Conjunction and Ellipsis.
Based on Lexical cohesion, the writer most use Repetition followed by
meronymy, Synonym, hyponymy and Antonym Indonesian. In English version
the writer most use Repetition followed by Meronymy Synonym, hyponymy, and
Antonym. (3) There is no untraslatable words found in the abstracts analyzed,
because in writing the scientific writing, it must use the general words and
grammar, and the writer does not use cultural mindset in writing the scientific

writing. So in translating the sentences, the writer does not get a difficulty.
Keyword : Translation, Cohesive devices, Abstracts

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

First of all, I am indeed very grateful to the Almighty God, the
Creator of heaven and earth, the Alpha and the Omega – for giving me the
strength, the understanding and the life to complete this work.
I am indeed very grateful to my most affectionable and beloved
parents Mr. and Mrs. Nainggolan for their prayers, love, understanding,
moral and financial support. I owe you a lot because you have made me who
I am. May God Almighty continue to strengthen you more and more.
I wish to express my utmost appreciation to my honorable advisers,
Dr. Eddy Setia, M.Ed., TESP and Prof. Dr. Lince Sihombing, M.Pd, for
their encouragement, assistance and support despite their very tight
schedule. Thank you, I am indeed very grateful because without your
support, this work would not have been a success. May God continue to
bless you and your family. I am grateful also to all my lecturers in the
Department for their assistance and the knowledge they have given me,
especially to Prof. Dr. Busmin Gurning, M.Pd (Head of English Applied

Linguistic study Program) and Dr. Sri Minda Murni, MS (The Scretary of

English Applied Linguistic Study Program). May God Almighty be with
you all.
I wish to appreciate also to my beloved brothers and sister –
Christina Nainggolan, Mateus Nainggolan,S.Pd and Markus Nainggolan.
You have all been supportive and understanding. May God be with you all.
Furthermore, I also wish to express my profound gratitude to my beloved
husband Hotman Zakaria Marpaung, S.Pd for his prayers and moral support
every day. May God bless you.
Finally, I thank all my friends and colleagues, especially for Grace
Sembiring, Friska Sinaga with all Sinaga Family of Tuasan, and “METIM”
members for all their concern, prayers and support. May God continue to
shower His blessings upon you.

TABLE OF CONTENTS
Pages
ABSTRACT
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
TABLE OF CONTENTS

TABLE
CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION
1.1 The Background of the Study ...................................................................................................... 1
1.2 The Problem of the Study ........................................................................................................... 6
1.3 The Objective of the Study ......................................................................................................... 7
1.4 The Scope of the Study .............................................................................................................. 7
1.5 The Significance of the Study ..................................................................................................... 8

CHAPTER II REVIEW OF LITERATURE
2.1 Language .................................................................................................................................... 9
2.2 Text ............................................................................................................................................. 9
2.23Translation ................................................................................................................................ 10
2.4 Translatability and Untranslatability ......................................................................................... 11
2.4.1 Translatability .............................................................................................................. 11
2.4.2 Untranslatability ............................................................................................................. 12
2.5 The Concept of Cohesion ......................................................................................................... 13
2.6 Types of Cohesion .................................................................................................................... 15
2.6.1 Grammatical Cohesion ................................................................................................... 15
2.6.1.1 Reference ........................................................................................................... 15
2.6.1.2 Substitution ........................................................................................................ 18


2.6.1.3 Ellipsis ............................................................................................................... 20
2.6.1.4 Conjunction ....................................................................................................... 23
2.6.2 Lexical Cohesion ........................................................................................................... 26
2.6.2.1 Reiteration ......................................................................................................... 26
2.6.2.2 Collocation ........................................................................................................ 28
2.7 Abstract .................................................................................................................................... 30
2.8 Previous Study........................................................................................................................... 31

CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
3.1 The Research Design ................................................................................................................. 33
3.2 Data and Data Source ................................................................................................................ 34
3.3 The Technique of Collecting the Data ....................................................................................... 35
3.4 The Technique of Data Analysis ............................................................................................... 35
CHAPTER IV DATA, DATA ANALYSIS FINDINGS, AND DISSCUSSION
4.1 Data .......................................................................................................................................... 36
4.2 Data Analysis ........................................................................................................................... 36
4.2.1 Reference ................................................................................................................................ 37
4.2.2 Substitution............................................................................................................................. 45
4.2.3 Ellipsis .................................................................................................................................... 55

4.2.4 Conjunction ............................................................................................................................ 65
4.2.5 Lexical Cohesion .................................................................................................................... 75
4.2.6 The Frequency of The Occurrence.......................................................................................... 85
4.2.7 The Translatability of Cohesive Devices ................................................................................ 85
4.3Findings ..................................................................................................................................... 85
4.4 Disscussion ............................................................................................................................... 86

CHAPTER V CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
5.1 Conclusion ................................................................................................................................ 88
5.2 Suggestions............................................................................................................................... 88

REFERENCES
APPENDIX

TABLES
Pages
Table 1 Table of Reference Abstract 1 ..................................................................................................... 37
Table 2 Table of Reference Abstract 2 ...................................................................................................... 38
Table 3 Table of Reference Abstract 3 ...................................................................................................... 40
Table 4 Table of Reference Abstract 4 ..................................................................................................... 41

Table 5 Table of Reference Abstract 5 ...................................................................................................... 43
Table 6 Table of Substitution Abstract 1................................................................................................... 45
Table 7 Table of Substitution Abstract 2................................................................................................... 47
Table 8 Table of Substitution Abstract 3................................................................................................... 49
Table 9 Table of Substitution Abstract 4................................................................................................... 51
Table 10 Table of Substitution Abstract 5 ................................................................................................ 53
Table 11Table of Ellipsis Abstract 1 .......................................................................................................... 55
Table 12Table of Ellipsis Abstract 2 .......................................................................................................... 57
Table 13 Table of Ellipsis Abstract 3 ......................................................................................................... 59
Table 14 Table of Ellipsis Abstract 4 ......................................................................................................... 61
Table 15 Table of Ellipsis Abstract 5 ........................................................................................................ 63
Table 16 Table of Conjunction Abstract 1 ................................................................................................ 65
Table 17 Table of Conjunction Abstract 2 ................................................................................................ 67
Table 18 Table of Conjunction Abstract 3 ................................................................................................ 69
Table 19 Table of Conjunction Abstract 4 ................................................................................................ 71
Table 20 Table of Conjunction Abstract 5 ................................................................................................ 73
Table 21 Table of Lexical Cohesion Abstract 1 ....................................................................................... 75
Table 22 Table of Lexical Cohesion Abstract 2 ........................................................................................ 77

Table 23 Table of Lexical Cohesion Abstract 3 ........................................................................................ 79

Table 24 Table of Lexical Cohesion Abstract 4 ........................................................................................ 81
Table 25 Table of Lexical Cohesion Abstract 5 ........................................................................................ 83

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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS
5.1 Conclusions
Based on the findings and discussion, it can be concluded that:
1.

It was found all cohesive devices occur in the whole analyzed abstracts. The most
occurrence of the cohesive devices in the whole abstracts belongs to Grammatical
Cohesion

2.

The researcher found that in writing the Indonesian version based on Grammatical
Cohesion, the writer most use Substitution followed by Reference, Conjunction and
Ellipsis. In English version, the writer more use Reference followed by Substitution,

Conjunction and Ellipsis. Based on Lexical cohesion, the writer more use Repetition
followed by meronymy, Synonym, hyponymy, and Antonym Indonesian. In English
version the writer more use Repetition followed by Meronymy, Synonym, hyponymy,
and Antonym.

3.

There is no untranslatable word found in the abstracts analyzed, because in writing the
scientific writing, it must use the general words and grammar. So in translating the
sentences, the writer does not get a difficulty.

5.2 Suggestions
As what the research result shown that the analyzed abstracts categorized less of
cohesive in term of ellipsis. It occurs because, in writing abstract, or scientific writing, the
writer must write the sentence completely, and do not use pronoun.

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With reference to this one, the researcher suggests the following:
1.


Other researchers can develop the research of analyzing the abstract, with other aspects
of language, not cohesive devices anymore since their result can help, so that the
writers of the abstracs can create good sentences in writing the abstract,. as a
summarize of their scientific writings.

2.

The abstract writers should pay attention. It is very crucial to do in using words
selection, so the abstract readers can understand the meaning of the writing.

3.

Other readers who want to learn how to write down English abstract to be careful
enough in following the way of writing scientific writing.

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