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APPENDIX A
DATA ANALYSIS OF THE STUDENTS2
COMPOSITIONSERRORS
Frcqucnt Errors N{adeby ESL Studcrrts
A C I I . E E I \ IE N T
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n r o n o u nr r r . l r e f c | e n td , \ n ( , 1i t t r . \ ' c
A I I T I C L E S A N I ) D E T E R I \ II N E R S
PUNCTUATION
Onrission
pcriod
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O nris s i o n
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scnricolon;
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ot llsf
ctc
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C(-I}IPAIIISON:i
u s a/ / A c
LlsC///c .tar/f.,o.t
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.._Lrscdi[[erct,t.fionr
usc cf
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use ntore than __
use /r? e.r/
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usc //r?/ro.\/
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o t l t c f s ( ( l a s l t -p l r f c n l i r c s i s .c t c )
s f_l ' r' ti \ c t_
l n c o n lI l c l c s c n l c n c c
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l \\ ., \( nl(lt\ ii
t . .t ) I . , L ( l r t , I
\TEIIt}S
t c n s ci n c o r r c c t
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lbrnr incorlcct
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d o n ' t u s e/ o a { i c r a n r o d a l
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d o n ' t u s e l / r g a f t c rt o
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usc /o + l.erb fornl
u s cp l a i n f o r m
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CO NTENI'
i n c o r r c c ti n l b r m a t i o n
arvku,ard:nccdsrcrvording
c a n ' t u n d c | s t a n d1 , o u rn t e a n i n g
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NOUNS
shouldbe singular
_
s h o u l db epIu ra l
inrproperli'rrn
-n ra s n
s o u n(s h o u l db c s i n g u l a r)
_
use llg fornr
Incorrcct
scqucnce
of tenscs
CONJUNCTION
coordl nati ng
conj uncti ons:
and,but,
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both. ..and,or, etc
subol di nal i ngconj uncti ons:that,
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although.\\ficn. ctc
P,\IlACRAPIIINC
bcgin ncrv puragraph
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llo ncl, palltlaph
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n t c a ni n g i n c o r r c c t
itcntincorlcct
\ ' o r d ( s ) u n s ui t a b l c
ut'tneccssarv
u,ord(s)
Ibrm incor.rcct
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P RI i P O S I I ' I O N I ]
Onrission
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incorrcca
t d i c c t i v cr r ' o r do r d c r
o b s c r v cS V O I ) l a c cl ' i n t c u ' o r d o r d c r
r n c o f r c c qt u e s t i o n\ \ ' o r do f d c r
i n c o r r c c t i n cl u d c d - q L r c s t i o n\ r o r d
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DATA AN;\LYSIS OF THE STUDENTS' COMPOSITONS E,RRORS
I.
Ll
S t u d c n t2
A s s i e n n r c nI t
Kinds of crrors
A gr c em ent
A r t ic lc s and
Det c r m incrs
Nlistakcs
t.
2.
Conr par is o n s
Contcnt
rvcaringa glasscs
a n d a g l a s s c s... .
Corrcction
I . . . . n ' e a r i n gg l a s s c s
2 . . . . a n d g l a s s c s ., . .
r v e a r i n gg l a s s c s
a n d g l a s s c s.,. .
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s ( ' f h i s i s a
s u bj c c t i v ep a r a g r a p hc) . g .
I l c r v l s a r , \ i g c r i a nn t a n .
2 . D c l e t et h i s ( T h i s i s a
s L r b i c c t i vpea r a g r a p hc) . g .
I I c c a n r cf i o n t a c h u r c hi n
I l c n u cS t a t c .
3 . . . . , e s p c c i a l hr r h c nh c
l , a s s n ri l i n g .
4 . . . . a n dn o t l t .
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s ( 1 h i s i s a
s L rjbc c t i v ep a r a g r a p h )
. 1 .l l c r v a s n ' tl ' a tb e c a u s ch c
didn't like to catntuclr.
5 . I I c h a du h i t c s k i n .
l . . . . a n d w i t h o u t\ \ ' e a r i n ga
, r - l a s s e.s. ..
l . I l c d i d n ' t r v e r rg h s s e s .
l . . . . a n dh e d i d n ' t r v e a r
qlasscs....
| . . . . b u t h e . i u s tl i k e d $ h i t e
l . . . . b u th e . l u sl itk c dw h i t e
c o l o u .r. .
2. ... becausc
hi sski nw as
al sorvhi tc.
Conjunc t io n
W or d c hoic e
and $' or d o rd c r
crro r
1.2
t.
2.
l. Uc s'rs harclirot.c..)ntct{)
n r c a n d r v c s h a k c do u r
LIlnos.
2 . I I e l o o k c dv o u n g r l i t h h i s
i , r o r v ns k i n . . . .
Nou r r s
P ar a g r a p h i n g
P r c pos it io ns
Punctuation
S enlenc e
Vcrbs
Revision
2. lvlovc the sentence"lle
h a d r v h i t es k i n . " A f t e r t h e
s c n t c n c e" [ I i s h a i r \ \ ' c l c n ' t
... nalr.
A qc iorr rr. .nf
K i n r l so f c r r o r s
D c l c t c t hi s
2. IIe uolc tirht bcigc
h i g h l l t c r t l o u s c r sa n d h c
d i dn ' t r r c a r g l a s s c ss. o h c
lookcd vou ng rilh ,/iis
brovn skitt.
l . D c l c t cr l r i s
. 1 .I l c r v a s n ' tl a t b c c a u s eh e
d i d n ' tI i k e r o c a t m u c h .
5 . . . . b u t h e . j u s tl i k c d r v h i t e
colour because his skin
vos also rlhite.
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NIist:rkcs
Corrcction
R c vi si o n
Aglrcnrcnt
A r t i c l c sa n d
Dc t c r nt ine rs
I . . . h a sb u t k r no r I l i p .
. . . r o u n ds n r a l ln o s c ..
I t a l s oh a s s n t a l l" . 1 " . .
2
I . . . , h a sa b u t t o no r l l i p .
2 , . . . . a s n r a l lr o u n d n o s c .
i . l t a l s oh a sa s m a l l" J " . .
4 . . . . s t i s k c r s .. . .
l . . . . h a sa b u l r o no r l l i p .
2 . . . . . s m c l lr o u n dn o s e ,. .
i . I t a l s o h a sa s m a l l. , J " . .
. 1 . . . . a l h i s k c r s ,. . .
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Cor npar is on s
Contcnl
Nouns
l. l'hc l)ip is u ith ".lordln".
i1's
i n b l u cc o l o L r r
"r'rittcn
l.
. the tccthl.rrush
box is
L ' l ' h c I ) i p h a sl " . l o r d u n "
s r i t t c ni n b l L r c .
t . - t h c l o o t h b r u s hb c i xi s
I . ... thc tcctltbrushbox is
2.
2 . . our toothbrushcs.
J . . . . O L r rD f t r S h c s .
I . . . . a n dc a n b c h u n g
l . . . . m a d eo l h a r d p l a s t i c .
u n b r c a k a b l c... .
| . . . . a n d i t c a nb e h u n g .
. o u r b r u s h.
l . - f h c1 1 i ips r | i t h" J o r d a n " .
i t s r r l i t t c ni n b l u cc o l o u r
Pardqraphing
Prcpositions
Punctuation
Sentcnce
\/crbs
l.
Conj u nc tion
| . ... r ra b b i rr
t h o n r.
2 . . . .. c a nb c o p c n c d .
l . . . . a r a b b irtr h i c h. . .
2 . . . . .a n dc a nb c o p c n c d .
W or d c hoic e
and l' or d ord c r
crror
l . . . . a m o u s t a c h c. . .
2 . . . . r o u n ds n r a l nl o s c . . .
3 . . . . . i t ' s u r i t t c r irn b l u c
c oi o ur .
, 1 .. . . t o h a n g . . . . t o p u t a n d
to kcep...
1 . . . .r v h i s k c r s . . . .
f . . . . . a s r n e l rl o u n dn o s c .
3 . . . . . i t i s r v r i t t c ni n b l u c .
t.
I.-)
n r a d eb v h a r dp l a s t i c .
r10t e a s i l ) b r c a k a b l c. . .
. 1 .. . . t o h a n ga n d t o k c c p
| . . . . n r a d co l ' h a r d p l a s t i c .
l ' r o tc a s i l ) ,b r c a k a b l c. . .
l.
a rabbit rr,hont
'l
canbc opcncd.
l . . . . a u ' h i s k c r s. . .
2 . , . . . s n r a l rl o u n dn o s c . .
l . . . . . i t ' s u , r i t t c ni n b l u c
coIour.
J . . . . t o h a r r qa n dt o k c c p
cnt3
Assignnr
K i n d s o f c r r or s
Nlistakcs
A gr ec m c nt
A r t ic les and
Dc t c r m ine rs
C o r n p ar i s on s
Content
Correction
lLcvision
I . ... thcrci s a ci rcl el anrp.
I . ... thcrearea ci rcl cl amp ,
2 . ... a res tu d ;' i n sgq u are
...
3. A crossanda fan is on ...
l . , . , r s a s q u a r.c. .
3. A crossanda fan areon
2 . . . . i s a s q u a r .c. ,
J. A crossanda lan areon
4 . ..., th e rei s a l s os o n remy
p h o to.. .
l. l-he shapeis a square.
2 . . . . h a sb l u cc u r t a i .n..
J . l v l u s i cfro n r...
4 . ... s o n g s .
5 . ... s tu d ifn e s q u rreta b l c
4. .... thcreareal sosomeof
nly prlotos.
l . T h e s h a p ei s s q u a r e .
2 . . . . h a sa b l u ec u r t a i n. . .
J.l'he nusic from ...
4. ... thc songs.
5 . . . . a s q u a r es t u d , vt a b l c . .
4. ..., I hangup my photos
studiofranle.
l . 1' heshapei s square.
2 . . . . h a sa b l u ec u r t a i .n. .
3. A nrusi cfronr...
4 . . . .a s o n g .
5. ... a squrrestudl ' tabl e.
6 . ... b i g b ro rrn rv o o d
cuirboard...
6 . . . . a b i g b r o s , nr v o o d c n
cupr)oafd..,
6. ... bi g bros' n* ,ood
cr,rpboard
.. .
| . . . . i s p l a c cl o ( l o n r a n \
l i r i n g sd c a l i n gr l i t h a l l . . .
2 . . . . i s i n l l r ci l f s l p l r t r n d
t , r l c l l s i d eo l n t v h o u s c .
l . . . , h a s a c i r c l cl r n r p .n r v
l i r l r tb l L r cr r n l l .a n i l\ \ ' o n
I il n p i c t u r c s. .. .
l . . . . t o r ' t 1 t knct c c l s i c f t ( )
l r i r ds o nc s .
i . . . . a b o r c n r \ f o ( ) n rd o ( ) rt { )
r i v e a c o o l r v i n db c c l L r s c
t l r i t c n l p c f i l t L l ri cs n l t o 0
l
i n r v h i c hI d o a l l
2 . . . . .i s i n t h c l c l i l l o n tp a r r
ol nrr bousc.
1 . . . .t h c i ci s a c i l c l cl u r r p r r r vl i l l r t b l u cl r l l s r r i t l t
\ \ ' o n I ] i n p i c t u l c s... .
' 1 . . . t o r n a k ci t r l i s i c l l i r r
r r r ct o l i n d t h c s o n [ s .
.l
5 . . . . u b , r rc t h c i i o o r . h c
l a n q i v c sc o o l
tcnrpcfrlturc.
i n r v h i c hI d o r l l
l . . . . i s o n t h c l c l i l i ' o n tp a r t
o l n r . ,h o u s c .
l . . . . t l r c r cr r c a c i r c l el a n r p .
n r v l i g h t b l u cr i a l l sl , i t h
\ \ ' o n I l i n p i c t u l c s... .
l . . . 1 o | 1 ' I r k ci t c : i s i c rl b r n t c
i 0 I r nd a s o n c ,
5 . . . . l l n r c n r l l o o r l .T h c
lrn qi\cs cool tcntpcrature.
colJ andnot too hot.
6. A blthroonr is orr thc llrst
pa in my roorn and it has
a shower.
7 . l ' h c l l o o r sa r e l i g h t \ \ h i t e
and it is madc liom
ccrtmlcs,
l . . . . . n r y l i g h tb l u c u ' a l l .
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x . . .
3. . .. big brorvn rvood
cupt.nard.. .
4. ... a broun rrrxrd
d l c s s i n gt a b l c. . .
5 . . . . s o r l c n t \ ' l i h o t o. . .
Nouns
I ' : rr agr aph in g
I ' r c posit ions
I'unctuation
S,cntcncc
\/erbs
Conjunction
\ V or d c hoic c
nnd \Yord ordcr
crror
1.4
5....shich ...
6 - . s o n r cn r ) l r l ro r o
l . . . . r n v f c e l i n rl i c c
\ \ l t c L l t c .r. .
1 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x h c s i d cn r r
f u dr o t : ] p c. . . .
L . . . l ' m s t i l ll r i n g o n .
2 . . . . . n r a d cl i o n r . . .
1 . . . . a n dW o n l l i n p i c t u r c s
l . . . . , . ) , l i g h tb l u er v a l l s
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x e s . . .
3. ... a big brol,n loodcn
c u p b o a r d. . .
4 . . . . a b r o r v nu o o d c n
d r c s s i n tt l b l e .
5 . . . . s o n r co l n r v p h o t o s .
l . . . . . n r v l i g h tb l u er v a l l s
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x .. .
3 . . . . b i g b r o r r , nu ' o o d
c u p b o a r d. . .
. 1 .. , . a b r o r v nr v o < l d e n
d r c s s i n tt a t r l c .
5....nrr'l)hotos...
I . . . . n r o v c dt o . . .
2 . . . . i n t h c s a n r c. . .
l. ... inlhich ...
. 1 .. . . i n t h c l l r s t . . .
5 . . . . o n , , rl r i c h. . .
( , . . . . s o n r co l n ] \ p h o t o s .
1 . . . .n r r l c c l i n
I licc
1 , . . . n r o v c dt o . , .
2. .., in the strlc ,
3 . . . . i n r r h i c h. . .
- 1 . . . .o n L l r cl l s t .
5. ... on rlhich...
o.... nl\ Irnolos..
I s t i l ll i c o n
nrlt,.Je
ttl' . ..
I . . . . r v i t hW o n l l i n p i c t u l c s
1 . . . . n r r i c c l i n gl i c c .
r r l r c t h er ' . . .
l . . . . p l r r s t i cb o x i s b c s i d c
r r \ r i t . ii ) l u ) c . . .
l . . . . 1 ' r ns t i l ll i c o r r
l . . . . n l i l co i - . .
1 . . . . \ \ i t i r \ \ ' ( J nI l i n p i c t u r c s ,
| . ... liont my slccp.
2. ... t'wo nrediunrsquare
bro"vnwindorvs...
3 . . . .s o m e t h i n g . . .
4 . . . . s t u d y i n gs q u a r et a b l e
I . D cl ctcrhi s
2. ... tn'o nrediunrbrou,rr
squarc
$ i ndo\\' s...
3 . . . .a n ; t h i n g
...
4. ... a square
studytabl e.
I . D c l c t ct h i s
2. ... t\\o rlcdiunrsquarc
r v i n d o ls . . .
3 . . . . a n l r h i n g. . .
4 . . . . a s q u a r cs t u d yt a b l c . .
) . . .. I n s r d e
ol ...
6 . . . . s t u d i of r a n t e s .
7 . . . . a b o v en r v r o o m d o o r .
8. I'"lyroorn ...
9 . l v l y l h v o r i t cr o o r n . . .
5 . . . . a t t a c h et od . . .
6. D cl ctcthi s
7. ... abovctl redoor.
8. lvlybcdroom.. .
9. N IYl rr,ori tcbcdroont
.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
\\ ltcLncf ...
L . . . p l r s t i c l t c r x c sl i l c b c s i i l c
n r \ l 1 ] d l ot a n c . . .
I
. . . a t t a c h c tdo . . .
. . . s t u d i ol i a n r c .
. . . a t r o v cn t \ ' t ' o o l l ,
N ' l l b c d r o o n t. . .
l r 4 1l r v o r i t c b c d r o o n r
A s s i q n r e n t4
Iiinds of crrors
Agrccnrrnt
. \ r t i c l c sa n d
l) c t cr nr in c rs
| . . . . n t o v c da t . . .
2 . . . . a t t h e s a n ] c. , .
i.... rlhich..,
6 . & T . l h a v ea p r i v a t e
6 , & 7 . I a l s oh a v c a p r i v a t c
bathroorl insidc nrv
b a t h r o o r li n s i d cn r y
bcdroonr.lt has a shou'cr
bcdroonr.It has a shorver
and thc tloor is covcrcd
and thc flools arc covcrcd
r v i t hl i g h t \ \ h i t c c e r a m i c s .
r v i t h l i g h t r v hi t e c c r a m i c s .
I\list:rkcs
. . . . \ \ ' c a r sa l r c a lc l 0 t h c s .i i
s h o c s a. g l a s s c sl.n d . . .
. , . \ \ ' e a ra n c a tc l a l t l ' t c.s. .
ano a snocs.
. . . a h i g hs p i r i t. . .
l ... rn inventivc
r r a rs .
5 . . . h a v ea e o o dq u a l i t i c s
C or r c c t i o n
L . . . . \ \c l i f s n c l l l c l o t l t c s .
s h o c sl.l l s s c s .a n d . . .
2 . . . . r v c a rn c a tc l o t l t c s. .
a r 1 0s n o c s .
3 . . . . h i g hs p i r i t , . .
4 . . . . . a n i n l c n t i v cu a r ' .
5 . . . . h a v et o o d q u r l i t i c s
ilcvision
. . . .\ \ c i lr s l l c l l tc l o t h c s .
s h o c s . , : l l s s clsn.i l . , .
. . , \ \ c u r n c l t lc l o t h c s. .
andshocs.
J . . . h i g hs p i r i L
...
4 . . . . r n i nv cn t i v c\ v a v .
5 . .. hu e goodqua)itics
6 . . . . a g o o dr v a 1 , .s. .
7 . . . . a g c n c r a t i o nl ' ( ) rl u t u l c
life.
Conr p: r is ons
ontcn
I . l h c r c i s a u n i v c r s i t ay t
o n e p l a c e .T h a t i s A n
I i l c p h a n t sU n i v c r s i t r ' .
2 . S o .t h c v d o n ' t d c t h a t n c r v
\ \ ' l i v sa s s o o na s p o s s i b l c .
, 1 .A l t h o u g hr s r r c k r r o u . a r r
i n\ , c nt i v c t l ri nk i n g i s i r n
L r s c l itrhl i n k i n tu n di r l r a s
tlnrrr adr intlccs li'rr
o . . . . a g o o d\ \ , a ) ,. . . .
7 . . . . . t h c l ' u t u r cg c n c r a t i o n ,
l.
'l
h c r ci s a u n i v c r s i t ) ,
nlnrcdlilcphants
l J ni v c r s i t ; , .
2 . l ) c l c t ct hi s
Iicphlasc: \\/c ktlltv lhat
I l ri ' i n g t r ni n r c n t i r c
l i r i r L i n r i s u s c i i r lu n d h u s
I ri i n \ l t d ! l l l l t l l g c s l ( ) f
l i r t L n cl i l c .
l L r t L r r cl i l - c l l s l l \ o L l n l l
6 . . . . a g o o d r v a ; ,. . .
7 . . . . I u t u r cg c n e r a t i o n ,
'l'hcrc
is a univcrsitl.,
n a n t c dA n [ i l c p ha n t s
(Jnivcrsitr'.
l.
2 . I ) c l c t ct h i s
I L c p h r a s c\ :\ / c k n o r vt h l r t
h uv i n g a n i nv c n ti v c
t h i n k i n si s u s c l i rllr r d h l s
n r a n \ a d Y a n t t g c sl i ) [
l u l i r r cl i l t .
rcnctatiolt.
N o un s
P ar a g r a p h i n g
l) r c posit io n s
Punctrration
Scntencc
Vcrbs
l . . . . a sa m a t c r i l l .
I . . . . \ \ ' c a ra n c a tc l o t l t c s. . .
and a sltocs.
1 . . . . a g c n e r a t i o rl lb r l i l t u f c
l i { c . S o t h c . v. . . .
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l . T h c l c c t u r c ru s r r a l l ri n
liont of ...
i . . . . a s a l e a d c ro l ' t h c m .
l . . . . d o n ' t k n o u , a n dr c a l i s c
t l t a t. . .
5 . . . . r v h i c hb e t t c r. . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r et o o l a t c .
l . . . . a r e i n t c r c s t i n gt i t . . .
2 . . . . l . i l l t c a c h. . .
i . . . . h i s s t u d c n rlsc l i b c h i n d
I . . . . l ' o rt h c n r t c r i a l
I . . . . r v c a rn c a tc l o t h c s. . .
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2 . . . . [ c n c r a t i o n .s o t h c r ,.
l. ... lbrthcnrrtclirrl.
l . . . . r r c a Tn c l t c l o t h c s. . .
andslrocs.
2 . . . . g c n c r a t i o ns. o t h e 1 ,.
I . . . . b u tn o t u n i l i r r n t .s. .
l . . . . . b u ln. o r u n i l b r n t s. . .
2
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h c l c c l u r e rr r s u a I l vr v a I k s
i n l l o n to f . . .
. . . t h el c a d e r .
4 . . . . d o n ' tk n o w a n d d o n ' t
r c a l i z et h a t. . .
5 . . . . u h i c hi s b c t t c r . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r ei t i s t o o l r t e .
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2. ... tcaclrcs....
. . i .. . . h i s s t u d c n r st o b c l c l i
bclrirJ.
l . . . . 1 0t h i n ko l ' c l c r r t h i n g
2 . l - h c l c c { u r c ru s L nl l v r v a l k s
in liont ol' ...
3 . . . . t h el c a d c r .
4 . . . . d o n ' t k n o r va n dd o n ' t
r c a l i z . ct h a t . . .
5 . . . . r v h i c hi s b c r t c r . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r ei t i s t o o l a t e .
o ,.,
l . . . . a r c i n t e r r e s t c( d
2 . . . . t c r c h e s. . . .
3 . . . . h i s s t u d c n t rso b e l c l l
bchind.
. 1 .. . . t o t h i n ko l ' e r c n , t h i n g
5 . . . . a n dn n . n n ' l , n d. .
i . . . . a n db c o p c nn r i n d c d. . .
5 . . . . a n d b c o p c nm i n d e d. .
l . . . . t t rt c a c h i n er n c t l r o i l s .
l . . . . . al i c c c l o t h c sa n i il o t
l i k c a u ni l b r n r. . ,
l . . . . t o r n a k cl n i n v c n t i o n .
. . 1... . l i - o ma l l i s n r a t c r i r l s .
j . . . . s o n r cg o o d \ \ ' i l )s l ( ) . . .
6 . . . . h a sb c c a L r s. .c.
7 . . . . t o g e t s u c c c c d. . .
l i . . . . c a nm o r e u n d c r s t a n d .
l . . . . . i nl c r c h i n g .
l . . . . . h i rnt o t u n i l i t r n t s . . .
l . . . . . i r rt c e c i r i r r g .
? . . . . . b u tn o t u n i l b r r n s. . .
l . . . . t o i n v c n tt h i n g s .
{ . I ) c l c r ct hi s .
5 . . . . s o n r cu s c l l l r l e v st o . . .
o . . . . . u s c sb c c a u s .c. , ,
7 . . . . t o g c t s u c c c s s. . .
8 . . . . c a nu n d c r s t a n d
nrore.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
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\ \ / or d c hoic c
and r v or d o rrl cr
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can morc Lrndcrstand
9 . D c l c t ct h i s
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u n i v e r s i t v. . .
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l l Li s : rr c l n i c c . . .
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2 . l t l s : r l c r l n l c c. . .
i . . . . b c c o n t cl u n t o u s
n r o n k csr . .
L . . . a r c a b c s tl i i c n d .
2 . . . . l b r a n a r r i n r a. l. .
. 1 .. . . a n a n i m l l r n o d c l s
. 1 .. . . b e c a u s co l ' h i s
cutcncss.
L . . . a r c b c s tl i i e n d s .
l . . . . l b r l r r i n r a l s. . .
1 . . . . m o d c l s. . .
- 1 .. . . b c c i r u s co f t h c i r
cLltcncss.
1 . . . . a r c b c s tl i i c n d s .
2 . . . . l b r a n i n r a ln r o d c l s
J . . . . n r o d c l .s. .
4 . . . . b c c a u s co l ' t h c i r
cutcness.
l . . .. at thc forest.
2 . . . . h a v ek n o r v r tr o c a c h . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gt o c a c ho t h c r
| . ... in the lbrest.
2 . . . . h a rc k n o s ' n c a c h . . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gc a c ho t h c r .
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2 . . . . h a v ck n o u n c a c h. . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gc a c ho t l r c r.
4 . . . . t h c y e m b r r c ct 0 c a c h
othcr.
5 . . . . a t t h e f o r c s t. . .
6 . . . . a n a n i m a ln r o d c l so n
. 1 .. . . . t h c l ' c n r b r a c ec a c l r
4 . . . . , t h e ) ,c n r b r a c ec a c l r
o U r cr .
5 . . . . i n t h e f o r c s t. , .
6 . . . , m o d el s l b r . . .
P ar agr aphin g
Prepositions
Il cr'isio n
l l l c i n l c r e s t cidn . . .
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l ' h c i r r o u n db l r c k o c s .
b r o r v np l un ta r c . p : r J e
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sn)llc.
oIhcr.
5 , . . . i n t h e { b r c s t. . .
6 . . . . n r o d c l sf o r . . .
I I c i s i n t c r c s t cidn . . .
I r r a q n r c n lt : h c i r r o u n d
b l l c k c r c s . l t r t t un l u r . .
pl1lg
1 1 l l p r l c c t l ts h o r l c d
u l t c r rl h c r sn ti l c .
l . l l c i s i n t e r c s t cidn . . .
2 . ' l h c i r r o u n db l a c kc v c sa r e
v c r l c u t c .t h c i r b r o r v nI ' u r
l u r c\ c r \ s o l t . t n d p a l c
\ c l l o \ \ ,t c c l h s h o r y c du h c r r
t h s s n ri l c .
l . . . . r r c n c i ' l hb o l s .
l . , , . l b r a n i n t a l tso b c c o n t c
I ri s n r l c l z i n c ' s c o r c r .
l . . . . a r cn c i g h b o u r h o o d s .
2 . . . . l b r a n i m r l n r o d c l sl b r
h i s c o v c r ' sn r a g a z i n c .
. 1 .. . . . b r o r r nl i r r . . . . .
3 . . . . . b r o r v nl l r . . . . .
V c r b. s
L o n j r r n c ti o n
W or t l c ho ic c
r nd \ \ ' or d o r (l c r
c r r or
l . . . . a r c n c i g hb o ul i n l .
l. ... lbr anlninrrl to
b c c o n t ch i s c o r c l o l ' l h c
n r tq a z i n c ,
l . . .. . b r o * n p l u l t i t g c . . . .
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2.1
S t u t l c n t3
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Kinds of crrors
l\Iistakcs
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Rcvision
A g r c c m c n(
r\ rticlcs arrtl
D c t c r n r i r rc r s
C o m p ar i s ons
Contcnt
Nourrs
l'lragrapl;ing
Plcpositions
Punctuation
Scntcncc
Verbs
Conjunction
l . . . . h i s r r l r i l cI z o ds h i l t.
l . l ) c l c t c t l r i s( I l c p c t i t i o o
nf
l i n c I a n d2 )
l . . , . h l v c o p i ni o n
l . . . . h l r rc o n c o p i n i o n
| . . . . h i s \ \ , h i t cs l r i r t.
2 . I ) a s t o rI ) a u li s v c r l l a t i t
c a n b c s c c nl i o m h i s
phlsicrl pcllirlntance.
I . . , . h r r c o n co p i n i o n
| . . . . r ' c r yn r o d c srtv i l h
l. ... \ cr\ nlodcst o
l . . , . r c l l n r o d c s t\ \ ' i t l 1
l . I l c c a u sh
ee l i k ct o p r a r
l r n dt h u tc l n p l o r c i l ' h c i s
i r l \ \ ' a v cs l o s c l vt o G o d .
l.
2 . I ) l s l o l I ' a u l i s v c r ' ; l l t rt
c r n b c s c c nl l o m h i s
l cllirrnr:rncc.
1i r v s i c a p
1. . . . n r a lb c h r r c .
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-l'hrt
i s h c - c a L rhs c l i k e ' st o
l|il\.
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t h l l h c i s a l r ra r s c l o s ct o
( lotl.
l.,..
n l i t \ l r : l\ c
2. [.iscI'ast
l . . . . p r a l . a n d i t c a np r o v e
l . ' l - h r ti s b c c l r r s ch c l i k c st o
p | a r u n d c a n p r o v ct h a l
h c i s a l r v a r . cs l o s ct o C o d .
1,.,. nrarhlrc
2. Usc I).rsl.
l . , . p r a _a" "n d c a r rp r o v c .
\\/o rd ch o icc
and r v or d o rd c r
crror
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i \ g r c e m c r it
1 . . . . .t h cl u n c t i o ni ss
I
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l . . . . a n dr o u n ds n r a l nl o s c .
l . . . . h r s h o l c. . .
i , . , . t h c r ci s s n r a l "l . 1 ". . .
4 . . . . h a st h el l i p . . .
1 . . . . a r o r r n sd r n l l ln o s c
l . . . . h r s a h o l c. . .
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- l . l i r c r ci s a s n r a l "l . 1 . .
4 . . . . h a sa l 1 i p. . .
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J.
F o r t h c t h i n gi t i s
s ) n t h e t i cr n d n r c l a n r i n .
.1.I n s i d ct h c b o x i t h a sb c c n
N o un s
p r o v i d c dl b u r h o l c sl ' o r . . .
l . . . . s u c ha s b r r . r s h .
2 . . . . t h eb r u s h .
t l r cl u n c l i o n sarc
Il.cr'isio n
l l t c l u n c t i o n sa l c
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s
2 . . . . h a sa h o l c. . .
3 . T h c l ci s a s n r r l l " . l " .
4 . . . . h a sa l ) i p . . .
I . . . . a l i r n n r a n d c u t c r a b b i t l . . . . a I u n n l ' a n da r o u n d
on it.
s m a l ln o s e .
2 . l t h a si t s c a r s .s i r t ' h i s k c r s 2 . D c l c t ct h i s
l un d a r o u n ds n t r l l n o s c .
3. andnot ccsil) brokcn
a n d n o t c a s i l vb r o k e n
h c c a u s ct h c t h i n g i s n t t d e
b c c a u s ct h c t h i n g i s m a d e
o l ' s \ n t h c li c a r r dn r c l l n r i n .
o l s v n t h c t i ca n d n t c l a n t i n .
. 1 .I n s i d ct h c b o x . l b u r h o l c s
I n s i d ct h c b o x . l b u r h o l c s
l r c p r o v i d c dl b r . . .
a r c p r o v i d c dl b r . . .
l.
s u c ha s b r u s h c s
l . . . . s u c ha s b l u s h c s .
'l
lhc brushcs.
2. ... thcbrushcs.
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P r c posit ir 'l rs
l . . . . r l i r n n \ a n dc u t cr L r b b i t
abovc.
2 . . . . i n t h e1 1 i p .
l . . . . s n r a l lb u x i o i r r p u l - t c , l
2 . U c s i d ct h a t [ h c l ' u n c t i o n s
l . . . . a l i r n n l a n d c u t er a l . r L r i t L . . . a l i r n n va n d
around
on it.
s J l l :t n 0 s c .
2 . . . . o n t h el l i n
2. ... on thcf1ip.
r . , . . s n t t l tb o x .l t s c o l o u r. . . l. ... smatl
tr,r*.lGlnlirl
2 , I l c s i d c s[ h a t .t h c I u n c t i o n s 2 . i l c s i d c st h c
I ' u n c r i o n.s, .
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l . . . . s m a l lU n r c o ' l p o r o : . r t
p r l c l , c l l o l ' a n d g r c o ri s h
y c I I o r vc o l o u r .
V c r lls
Conjunction
| . . . . i s c o n r p l c t cbd)
I. llcsidc that ttrc ir.,ncC,ux
r . . . . s n r a b o x . l t s c o l o u fi s
c o n r p o s c do l -p a l c a n d
s r c c n i s hv e l l o r ' .
t . . . . r sc r ) n t n l c t c\ d! i t h . , .
l . I l c s i d c st h a t .t h c l l n c t i o r r s
Punctuation
^.
-. ... pllltlllE
W or d c ho ic e
and r v or t l o rd c r
crro r
{lnd lls')
k c c p i n g. . .
I . . . . p l l c 1 ' e l l o r va n d
t t r c c n i s hy c l l o r v c o l o L r r . .
l . . . . a l i t t l cn t o u s t : l c h. c. .
l . . . . h l s h o l c l i r r t l r cn u i l
l , r l \ \c c n b o i l t c a f s .
L A r t l r c n r i d d l cp a r t o l t h c
b o d y t h c r ei s s n r a l L' ' . 1' o n
t h c b cl l 1 , .
5 . l ' h c r c i s l c t t c r s\ \ . r i t t c n
J o l d a ni n b l u c . . .
6 . . . . p u r t i n gb r u s ha n d a l s o
k c c p i n gth eb ru s h .
z.)
2 . . . . p u u i n ga n dk c c p i n g. . .
2 . . . . p u t t i n ga n d k c c p i r r g .
l . . . . p r l ca n d l r c c ni s h
l . ' l ' h c r ci s a s n r r l l" . l " o r rr h c
bclll .
l . . . . p a l ea n dg r c c n i s h
) crio\\,.
L D c l c t ct hi s
l . . . . h a sI l t r t l cr e v c r . s c
b c l \ ! c c nl r 0 t hc a r sl o r l h c
narl.
- 1 .- l ' h c r ci s a s n t a l l. . . l "o n t h e
bclll,
'l'hcrc
5.
i s a l o r . d" . l o r d a n "
u r i t t c ni n b l u e . . .
6 - . . . p u f t i n ga n d k c c p i n gt h e
b r us h e s .
5. l'hcrc is r u ord '.Jordan,'
$ , r i t t c ni n b l u e . . .
6 . . . . p u r t i n ga n d k c e p i n gt h c
b r us he s .
) c llo\\'.
2 . . . s i x r r l t i s k c r . .s.
- 1 . . . h l s a l t o l cb c t r v c c n
b o l hc r r s l o r t h c n u i l
A s s i q n n t e n3t
Kindsof crrors
i\grcc rnent
A r t i c l c sa n d
Dc t cr nrin c r s
l\Iistakes
L N l , r , r o o md o c s n ' th a v cA C
1 . . . . a n db a t h l o o r l .
2 . . . . r r i t h c o r c r b c d h a ri n _ e
I 0 I l)alnratiansirrcluding
i t s p i l l o s ,a n d b o l s t c r .
3. ... s bluefior stccp.
. 1 .. . . a n t in r i n ic a r . p c t . . .
5 . . . . l i k cn r i n i c r r p c. r. .
6 . . . . r l i c s s i n tgu b l c, . .
7....snttlltablc...
i i . . . . L r r i t l u lc: r r l pr u b l c .
9 . . . . l l nr n d . . .
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l, ... snralb
l o x .i t s c o l o u ii s
c o n rp o s c do f p a l c a n d
c r c e n i s hI c l l o r r
-.--t . . . . r sc o n r p l c t crdr . i t h. . .
l . I l c s i d c st h c l u n c t i o n .-s .
l.
'l'lrc
llrstthirrr_
I sr c c r h c
n 1 0 s t1h i n g i n n - r . r o o n ti s
Correction
l . N l l r o o n ti s n ' ta n a i r
c o n d i { i o n c. r. .
I . . .. andthcbarhr.ooni
2 . . . . r v i t h a l r c dc o v c r . a
p i l l o l , a n da b o l s t e .r . .
i . . . . a b l L r el i ) o ts l c c p. . . ,
4 . . . a n da n r i n ci a r p c t . . .
5 . . . . I i k c t l t c n ' t i nci r r p c r. . .
6 . . . . a c J l c s s i nr rsl r l c . . .
7 . . . . u s n r a ltlr b l c . . .
i i . . . l r L r n i r l Ll rucl t p t l h l c . . .
9 . . - . I i l n l r r r . . l. .
l ( l . l l c r h o L r s c. .
Rcvision
L D cl c t cr hi s
| . . . . a n L lt h c b : r r h r o o r n .
2 . . . . r v i t hb c d c o v c r sl 0 l
l ) r l m a t i a n si n c l u d i ns i t s
p i l l o r va nc l b o l s t c r .
1 . . . . b l uc l i ) o ls r c c p .
. 1 .. . . a n dn t i n ic a r p c t . . .
5 . . . . l i k cn t v c a r p c t . . .
6 . . . . d r c s s i n !tli i t r l c. . .
7 . . . . a s r l r l lt r b l c . .
l i . . . , u n i q L rlca n r pt a b l c. . .
9 . . . . a l u nl l d . . .
l ( ) .. . . c \ h o L r s. c. .
L l r r r n t l s r i n r 1 , r c . ,c. ,tihr i r r u l . ' l h c l i r s r .
r h i n rt h cm o s t
I s c c l l l s t l r i n n r r r o o n ti s
i rnprcssi
c ,,
tl ri ng
2 . . . . \ v i t h c o v c r b c d h a ri n g
: . . . . * i t f ra b c r i c o v c r . a
l 0 I D a l m a t i a ni sn c l u d i r r o
i l l o r va n d a b o l s t c ru , h i c h
I scci n
nty rootlt ls .,.
2. ... rrith bcd covcrs l0l
D a l m a t i a n si r r cl u d i nc i t s
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i t s p r L l o r r , o nbdr t l s t c rS. o
t h c t ; : c o r a t i o nl o o k s
h l r n o ni o u s .
I . S o t l r c d e c o r a t i o rl ro o k s . . .
r l l 0 l l h c l l rp i c r u f cl 0 l
[ ) r l r n r r i a n ss.o i t ] o o k s
h a l n r o ni o u s .
l . . . . D l l n r a t i a r r s o. i t l o o k s
p i l i o r r a n d b o l s r c r s. o t h c
d c c o r a t i o nI o o k s
h a r no
r ni o u s . .
1 . . . . D a l m a t i a n s .o i t l o o k s
f . O n r n el l i x r r s . . .
i . . . . r L n dh l r i r r r r i l c k s .
l . O n t h c l l o o r .. . .
l . . . . a n dl t a r cr c l a x i n q . . .
2.On thclloors. ..
l . . . . a r r dh a v cr i l c x .
I )r c posit io ns
l . . . . 1 . )r n ch a r , i n c. . . .
2 . . . . c o n tl b r t a b l eo l ' i t .
I'unctua(ion
l . On t ltc llorrls thcrr.-urc
| . . . . l i r rn r ch a v i n g . . .
2 . . . . c o m l b r t a b l icn i t .
l . . , . O n t h c l l o o r . t h c r ea r c
l . . . . t o n r ch a v i n g
2 . D c l c t c t hi s
l . O n t h c l l o o r t h c r . ca r c
2 . . . . c 0 n t c n t p l a l icn. t a g i n e
t hi n l . ]a. n d . . . . .
l . Nlv ,..,irrdorr is acrually,
v c r \ a r t i s t i c. . .
2 . . . . b L ri t h a sa n c r h o u s c
and :t lirn.
l . l v l l r o o n ti s l i t c u t c d
bct\\ccn..,
2 . . . . a n d h a v cr c l a x i n gt i n t c
t hcf c .
l. ...corrplcted
\irh ...
l . . . . r d : r l t t c td0 . . .
5 . I c l n d i r c c t l rl t L r r. :. .
( r .. . . l r o n t r a r c l i t g. . .
7 . . . . I ' n r u s c dt o s p c n d i n e
it
2 . D c l c t ct h i s
I . . .s ol c a n . . .
. . . c o n t c n ] p l a t ci .n l t g i n c
t h i n g .a n d . . . . .
. . . r r i r i l cs i t t i n e. , .
J
l. ... rhcbcda bluelbor
s t c c pi s p r o v i d c d .
2 . . . . v a r i o u sb c a u t yk i t a n d
cosrnc(ic.
1 . . , .s o I c l n . . .
2 . D c l c t ct l ri s
3 . . . c u r t l i n c o m p o s c do f
pink...
. 1 .. . . a n da u n i q u cl a m p
t a b l c. . . .
5 . . . . i t ' s c n o u g h. , .
6. ... to cool oll'nrv roonr.
7 . . . . t h co n l l p l l c c . , .
6 . . . . g ok l . . .
9 . . . . b c dc o r . c r .
i . . . . c u r t a i on f p i n k. . .
Nouns
I'lraqraplring
2 . ...c o n tc n tp l aatc
nd
i n r a r : i nt hci n ga n d . ..
Scntcnce
l . M v i v i n d o r vi t i s a c t u a l l r
v c r r a r ( i s t i c. . .
2 . . . . b u ta n c x h o r r s a
cnd
litn.
l . M l r ' o o nlri c sb c t r v c c n . .
Vcrbs
2. ... ald har,ing
lilcks.
3 . . . . c o n r p l c t cbdv . . .
. 1 .. . . r i ! i i i p t c d
\\ ith ...
5 . l ' r n t r t t l ct o c l i r c c t l r ' l t L r g
( ) . . . . l o l t ' t r a i v c .l . .
7 . . . . I L r s c tdo s p c n di t . . .
Colrjuncticin
W or d c hoic e
x nd N' or d o rd c r
crro r
2.4
I
. . s l r t l ' t a tI c e n . . .
. . c ( ) n t e r n P l aat cn d
i n rr r g i n et hi n g a n d
J
. . r r h i t cs i t t i n g. . .
l . . . . t h e b c d i t i s p r o v i d c ds
bluc lbot srccp.
2 . . . . r ' a r i o u st o o l sa n d
c q ui p n e n t l b r m a k i n g u p
nrv l)ooy.
3 . . . . c L r r t a i cno n r p a r c do l '
p i n k. . .
4 . . . . a n do n t h c t a b l e .
u ni qu e l a n r pt a b l e . . .
5 . . . . i r ' sq u i t ce n o u g h. . .
6 . . . . l o l r c c z cn r ) r o o n r .
7 . . . . t i r co n l l o n c . . .
8 . . . . r i s i t. . .
9 . . . . c o v c rb c d .
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2
l . N 1 y* ' i r r d o u , a c t u a l l yv c r v
a f l i s t i c. . .
2 . D c l c t ct h i s
lvl; roonr lics bctrvccn
. . . l n d h a v er i l c x .
3 . , . . c o n rp ) c t c db r ' . . .
. 1 . . . . : r d a p r crdr i t h . . .
5 . . . . I c r n d i r c c r l lh u g . .
6 . . . , l i o n t t l a y c l i n q. . .
7 . . . . I u s c ctio s p c n di t . .
3 . . , . t t h i l cs i t t i n c
I . ... thc bcdi s provi dcd
bluc fod sl.ccp,
2. ... vari ousbcauti que
and
cosl l tctl c.
4 . . . . a n du n i q u sc m a ltl a b l c
) . . . . r l .s q u r t Lc-n o u g h. . .
6 . . . . t o c o o l o l 1 ' n r yr o o m .
7 . D el c t ct hi s
8,...goto ...
9. ... bcd covcrs.
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t
l i i n d s o f cr r or s
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A r t i c l c sa n d
f ) c t er nr inc rs
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l h c fo rn tacl l o th c s
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lirrntal clothcs
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2 . . . . t h c l b l n r l c l o t h c s.
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l . . . . t h c o l i l c sarn dr h c
3 . l i c l a t i o n s h iips n o t . . .
l . . . t h co l d r l d t h cb i g t c s r
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L r , r a i t u stch c L e l i r l r lh c r c
( OntCnl
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tlkcs rolcasthc pfolcssor
2 . 1h c p i c t u r cs h o \ \ st l r i r t .
t l r c s ct h r c cc l c p h l n t s : l f c
g o i n gh l n d i n h ; r n dl o
c l o s cb c c l u s cr h c l c l r j c r
lrcfc tukcs folc iis thc
l ) f ol c s s o f .
I 2 . , r r g a i n scra c ho t l t c r
( l l c t \ \ c c n n o . I p o i n t3 a n d
n p 2 l i n c I ) I ) c l c t ct l r i s
I l r v c l r n i t c a r l c n r i ca c t i r i t t ' ,
l . I l c p c r i r i oont r r o I p o i n t2 :
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t
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l. Not in a pirragrrph
Prcpos
itions
2 . l i c l a t i o n s h iips n o t
Punctuation
l. ... sonrcthin.l.
I . . . . c l c p h a n tt.h c t l ' o
c r c n n a n t s, . .
Scntence
Vcrbs
I l . . . . l o l l o r vr h L ' i .r. .
C o ni u n c t i on
W or d c hoic c
and n, or d ord e r
er r o r
I . . . . t h c v a r eg o i n v c n t
s o n tc t h i n g .
2 . . , . t h e r c s te l e p h a n t a
s r.c
z.)
scntc!tcc.
3 . ' l h c v a r cg o i n g
s o n t c rhr c r c i n r t r c l c tro
r c s u l ls u l ] t c l l r i n E .
rnJ thcoldcrtclcphrnr
r l r l k i n g i n l l o r r tr l s o
b r i n g st h c p h o t o g r a p h s
r v h i l ct h c r c s t c l c p h a n t s
a r c a c l u a l l yt h e s t u d c n t
r v h o . j o i nl l r c p f ol t s s o r
h l i v i ne a r c s u l t .
P r r agr aph in
I ' r ( . r ( l : r l : , , ni :l l: t ) . , - ! ]
L l r ct h r c c c l c i r h u n l s i s n o l
|
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{ r r - oc l c : r r . c o n r ) c c t i o n
f
causc-cl'lcct.)
i . . . . r t r c l r t i t ' n s h iios . . .
L . . . t h c n ' t o sot l d a n dt l r c
l . , , \n l o ne .t h c t h r c c
clcphrrna
t st r c l a t i osnh i pi s
n o t c I ( ) s cb c c a u s et h c
l c a d c rh c r c t a k c sr o l c a s
t h c p r ol c s s o r .
2 . ' l h c p i c t L r r sc h o \ \ ' st h a t
t h c s ct hf c c c l c p h a n t sa r c
g o i n gl r i r n di n h a n dl o
l l r v c a n a c a d c n t i ca c t i v i t y .
-l
3. hcr arc goinu
s o n r c r r , h c ri n
c i t r d c rt o
r c s u l ts o n r c t hi n g .
,1.l hat's rihi, the biggest
a n dt h c o l d c s tc l e p h a n t
r v a l ki n g i n l i o n t a l s o
b r i n g st h c p h o t o g r a p h s
r v h i l et h c r c s t c l c p h a n t s
a r c a c t u cl l Y t h e s t u d c n t
rvho.joirrthe prol'cssor.
l . S h o u l db c i n I p a r . a g r l p h
L i thke i Li nr,rl pcrl rrrph.
l . . . . \ \ a l k i n gt o . . .
2 . l - h c r c l a t i o ns hi p a n ' t o n g
t h r c cc l c l l l t a n t s . . . .
1 . . . . i n s o n r c tihn
I . . . . c l c p h a n t t; h e t r v o
l . . . . r v al k i n ga t . . . .
2. Among thc thrce
clcphants....
' l ' l rcy
L
arc* ' al ki ngto ...
2. Thcrcl ati onsh
i p among
t h c t h r c cc l c p h : r n t s. . . .
I . . . . a r c l o l l o l ' i n gt h c i r . . .
I . I l c p c t i t i o nn u n t b c r2 l i n e 2
. . . t h c t a r eg o i n g
sonrc\\'hcrcin order t0
r c s u l ti n s o m c t h i n g .
C h o o s co n c
2 . . . . t h c r c s ta [ c . . .
l . . . e l c p h a n tt.h e t \ v o
l. Walking
to...
2. A nrongthethrce
c i e D h a n t. s. .
I . . . . l b l l o r v i n gt h c i r. . .
l . t ) c l c t er h i s
2 . . . . t h c r c s t c l c p h a n t sa r e
A s s i g rrrnc n t 5
Kinds of crrors
N'listrrkcs
Co rrccl ion
Rcvision
agrccntcnt
Articlcs a nd
Det c r m inc r s
C o m p ar i s on s
I . . . . o l - ab i g
I . . . . o l ' r h cb i g
1 . . . .o l ' b i g.
Cont ent
. . . l i t t l em o n k c l , s. . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n {at l o t t h N ti t
c l o s e si t s c v c s .
. . . l i l t l c t \ v o n t o n k c Y s. . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n gs o r v i d c / s o
happih thrt his ocs arc
closcd.
I t ' s t h r t b i g s m i l cr h i c h
di fcctl\, sho\\'stltc tcctll
t h l t b c c o n r c sa s i g n o l '
I i i c n d l i n c s sa n d o p c n n c s s .
l i c p c t i t i o no l ' l i n c , : la n d 5 :
l ) c l c t ct h i s
It's big smilc anddir.cctlr
s h o \ \ ' i n gt c c t ha r c s i g n so l '
l i i c n d l i n c s sa n d o p c n n ri n d c da t t ; t u d c .
I r r o r l t h c i r c l o s c n c s si .l
c a n b c c o n cl u d c dr v h c t h c r
t h e va r c r c r l l l l i i c n d sa n d
k t t o r rc a c l to l l t c l v c r v
u cll.
'I
h c i rs i r r p l cs n r i l cc l n
e n i c r l l t i lnl r 0 s cr i h 0 l o 0 k
l tI l i r c r .
l l c c . t s rt o i r r t n l r l n n c l
f c l i r \ c (.ili l l l r ct i | l r c
| l f l i c u l l Ul \ l i r rt l t cb l t d
lllDcs.
Nouns
1 . . . .a l a r t n c o
r l litllc
nronkcy,s.
2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l ca n db r i r : h t
l11cc,
P ar agr aphin g
Prepositions
Punctua(ion
S c nt c nc c
\/c rbs
Conjuncti,,n
\ \ / or d c ho ice
lnd n' or d ord e r
crror
III.
3.1
| . . . . a b i g a n d g r c c nt r c e .
2 . . . . o t h c rs i n c ci t i s s c c n
I . With a pair ol'cy,cs,they
s l r o * 't h c i r h r n i l i a r i t r , .
l . . . . s e e mt o r c a l l v.
2 . . . . a r ec l o s c dt o . . .
I . . . . a b i g a n r lg r c c nt r c c .
I
h a n di n h a n d .
2
conr,cn
icnl \ itlr
s i n c ci t i s s c c n
l. . . pilrlltcfs.
I i t t l em o n k e y s . . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n gt h a ti t ' s
c l o s c si t s c y c s .
It's big sntilesa
. nd
d i r c c t l ys h o r v st h c i r t c e t ha
s i g n o f l r i c n d l i n c s sa n d
o p c n c sn- ri n d c d a t t i t u d e .
F r o r l t h c i r c l o s c n c s si .t
c:rn bc concludcdrvhethcr
t h c r , a r cr c l l l v l i i c n d sa n d
k n o r r ,c a c ho t h c rr c r y w e l l .
T h c i r si n rp l c s r n i l c st .h e v
c a n c n l c r t a i nt h o s cr v h o
lookat thcnt.
6.n s cils\-going
n t c na n d
rc a\cd ail the nton.tcnts
p a r t i c u l a r llrb r r h c b a d
I i n'rcs.
| . . .. aspartncrs.
2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l casn db r i g h t 2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l casn db r i g h t
llrccs.
i . I h c b l b i c so l ' n t o n k c l s. .
4 . . . . i n r p r c s sci ra n d
llshionablc.
litcc.
L ' l h c b a b vo l ' n r o n k c y .s. . .
4 . . . . i m p l c s s i v ca n d
lascirraLion.
1 . . . thc big. grccn trce.
2 . . . o t h c r .l t c a n b c s c e n .
I . ... bi g.grccnrrcc.
2 . . . . o t h c rI.[ i s s e c n
l . Thcyshorvthci rpai rof
eycsfami l i ari ry.
I.
'l-hcir
pairs of'cl es slrorv
t h c i r t h n ri l i a r i r \ , .
l . . . . s c c n tt o b c r c a l l y
2 . . . . a r c c l o s ct o . . .
1 . . . . t h c b i g .g f c c nt r c c
l . . . . s i d cb l , s i d c .
2 . . . . r c l a xr v i t h. . .
i . . . . . l t c : l l tb c s c c n. . .
. 1 .I c a t c h0 n c n l c s s a g c
l. ... secnb
r ercally
2 . . . . a r cc l o s et o . . .
l . . . . b i g , g r c c nt r c c .
| . ... sidcb;,sidc.
2 , . . . c o n v c n i e n crcr i t h .
3 . . . . . l t i s s c c n. . .
4 . I g c t o n c n t e s s a g c. . .
S t u d c rir , i
A s s i q n r r c nI t
Kindsof'crrors
I\{istl kr:s
Agrccmcnf
A r t i c l e sa n d
Dc t er nr ir rc r s
Conrparisons
Corrcction
....
_- _--,l . ;| |s c_\'c\
3fc ...
L . . . h a sa c u r l r n d b l a c k
hlir ...
l . . . . h a sa b l a c ka n dd r r k
skrn...
2 . . . . h c a l s o\ \ c i t f s. . .
L , . . h a sb l a c kc u r . l 1 . h a i r
2 . . . . h a sa d l r k s k i n .
Rcr,ision
L I I i s e v c sa r c . .
2 . . . . h s a l s or v c a r.
l . . . . h a sc u r i a n d b l a c kh a i r
2 . . . . h a sb l a c ka n dd a r k
skin.
Cont ent
N o un s
Parasranhin
it ions
P un c t u a t i o n
S c nt enc e
'l
hc tcnsc is not consistcrt
(l'rcscnt rnd l'ast):
l.
l ) l s t 0 r I ) a u li s a . . .
I l c c o n ' r c so u t l r o l r l . . .
I'lstor l)aul \\ ts \ r)tlng.,
. . . l b c l l l r r l t s. . .
. . . l ) c ! l l s o\ \ o f c . . .
2 . I l c c o n r c so l l t l r 0 i r 1. . .
l. I)list:
l. I)rescnt:
l ) a s t o r l ) a r , rsl a s r . . .
l l c c l r n r cl l o n t . . .
I ) a s t o rl ) a u li s a . . .
I I c c o n r c so u t l i o n r . . .
I ' o s t o rI ) a u li s 1 ' o u n g . .
. . . a b c l l yi s . . .
. , . h c t l s o \ \ ' c i l r. . .
2 . I I c c o r n c so u l l i o n r . . ,
i . . . . i s v c r v i i r ta n d l o o k s
YCrYCUte.
l ) a s t o ll ) a L r\l\ ' a s\ o u n g . . .
... u bcllr rilis...
. . . n c l l t s o\ \ ( r [ c . . .
2. l lc cunrc lltrrr .. .
- 1 .. . . i s v c n ' l ' a t r n d l c r y
Ittnnr.
C o ni u n c ti o n
W or d c hoic e
and r v or d ord c r
crror
).r
1 . . , . h a sa c u r l a n db l a c k
lrtrr...
2 . . , . h a sa b h c k a n dd r r k
s k i n. . .
I . . . . h a sb l a c k c u r l ) h a i r .
I . ... hascurlandbl ackhai r.
2 . . . . h l s d a r kc o l n p l c r i o r r .
2 . . . . h a sb l a c ka n dd a r k
skin.
A s s i g n r n e n2t
l\1ista kcs
Kinds of crrors
Corrcction
Il,evision
A gr c c m ent
"
l . l ' h c r a b b i th a , e
2 . l t a l s oh a v c. . .
l . ]-hcrabbi hrs
t
2 . I t a l s oh r s . . .
A r t ic lc s and
Dc t er m inc rs
l . . . . i s s r n a lbl o x. . .
2.... isllip.
l . O n t h et o po f -. . .
4 . . . . i s b i gr a b b i t .
r, d s mrl l
5 . ..., n l o u tl 'rn
l ]o s c .
(r.... n ro L rs ta cal n
rcdb i c
b rl l r ' .
7 .O n t h ct o po l . . .
S . . . .s n r : rhl lo l c . . .
l . . . . i s a s r n a l bl o x . . .
2 . , . .i sa I l r p .
3 . O n t o po f . . .
4 . . .. i s a b i g r a b b i t .
5 . . . . . a n t o u t h a. n da s m a l l
t'tosc.
6 . . . . s i x r r h i s k c r sa. n da b i g
i r cl l \ .
7 . O r rt o po 1 . . .
S
l r s n r : r Il 'l L r l c . . .
L Thc rabbi thavc..
l . I t a l s oh a d. . .
1 . . . .i s s r r a lbl o x. . .
2 . . . .i s l i i p .
l.Ontopof...
4 . . . . i s b i gr a b b i t .
andsrnal l
5. ..., n' routh.
nosc.
6. .. . nroustachc
andbi g
bclll.
T.Ontopol'...
8 . . . . sn r rl l h o J c . . .
I
l
l ut c l i r u l h o l c s . . .
( ) r r rt ( ) o t l t b f L l S h c-S
I
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slrort lccs too,
J
C on r p ar i s o ns
Content
Nouns
I
I
l
l u c l o L rl r o l c . . .
O t r Il o o t h b | u s l r
shorl lce |'00.
P ar a g r a D h i n g
Prcpositions
Punctuation
Scntcncc
Vcrbs
L . .. ir'rthc l]olton]
2 . . . . t o k c c po r r r. . .
'l'he
l.
f ) i pu a s. . .
I T h cl l i p i s . ..
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2.
ra b b i rr,a
t
2 Thcrabbi ti s ...
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i.
rabbitrYaslooked. . .
Thc rabbi ltooks...
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I
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l l c l i r u rh o l c s. . .
0 u r t o o l l l l ) f u s h c,s
s l t o r tl c i t st o o ,
. at tlrc bott0nr .
. lbr kccpour ...
l . 1 ' h el l i p i s . . .
2. Thc rabbi its . ..
i . Thc rabbi ti s l ookcd....
4. ... ntadcl i onrhardpl astic
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C o ni u n c ti o n
W or d c hoic c
and wor d or d c r
er r o r
3.3
5 . . . . n r a d cl l o n rh r r d p l u s t i c 5 . . . . r r u r l co l ' h u r dp l a s t i c
) . . . . n r a d cl i u n r h l r d
| . ... moustache
andbig
ballY.
l . . . m o u s t a c h ca n d b i g
bcllv.
| . . . . s i x r v h i s k c r sa n d a b i g
bcllt.
plastic
Assignnrent
3
Kinds of crrors
Agrcemcnt
A r t ic lc s and
Dc t er m iner s
Co r nD: r is on s
Contcnt
I\Iistakcs
I . . . . a s i n g l eb c d . . .
2. . .. a bluebcdcovcr ...
3 . . . . a n da c h a i r . . .
. 1 .. . . l i s t c nt o n t u s i c. . .
, 5 .. . . I b i q n r i tr o r .
6 . . . . a b i gl ' u n . . .
7 . . . . a b i g r v a r d r o b ,c. .
l i . . . . a n r la t r l ' l c l a n r n
l . . . . a s i n g l eb e d . . .
2 . . . . a b l u eb e d c o v e r.
3 . . . . a n dc h a i r. . .
. 1 .. . . h c a rn t u s i c. . .
5. ... a bigmirror.
6 . . . . a b i g l ' a n. . .
7 . . . . a b i g c u p b o a r d. .
l l . l ) c l c t c t hi s
L . . . a n dl l r cc o l o ri s u l t i t c .
L . . . a n d t h c c ( ) l o ro l ' t i r c
r r u l l si s r t h i t c .
l. ... innrroun housc....
. 1 . I l r el o o n t h l s a r r o o d c r ' r
, - l o r ,ar n d b c s i d ct h c d o o r . . .
L . . . a n d t h c c o l o ro l ' t l r c
r l l l l i s r r l ti t c .
1 . . . . i n n r r o r v nh o u s e . . , .
l . l l c l i r r c I c nt c r n r r ,
bcdroont. I c:in scc a door
t h a t i s u t e d co l ' r v o o d .
I l c s i d et h c d o o r . . .
. 1 .I ) c l c t c r hi s
. 1 .. . . t h c s n t i l l o n c .t h c b l r
o n ea n 0 . . .
p u t c ur t a l n
I . ... b c l o rvth crv i n d o u
2 . I n t h cl c l i . . .
3 . ...n 1 b o o k si n th c re .
4 . . . . i n t h cr i g h t. . .
5 . I n t h cr i g h t. . .
6 . I n t h cl c l i . . ,
/ . l n U ) cf l l ] h l . _ .
8. ... all oimr
Irunctuatiorr
Scntence
\ / er bs
C r i n j t tn c l i r , n
\ V or d c ho icc
and \ r , or d ord c r
crror
Ilcvision
l . . . . s i n g l eb c d . . .
2 . . . . b l u e b a dc o v c r
l . . . . a n dc h l i r '. . .
4 . . . . h c a rt h c n r u s l c
5 . . . . b i g n ri r r o r .
6 . . .. b i g l e n . . .
7 . . . . b i g c L r l b o u r .d
8 . . . . a n cliu n r n. . .
2. ,..in nrrhousc....
i . l ' h c r ci s u d o o r i s n r a d co l '
r r o o c ib c s i d ct h c ( l o o r . . .
Nouns
P ar agr aphin g
P r epos it ion s
Corrcction
clorhcs.
l . . . . t h e s n r a lol n e .t h c b i g
o n ca n d . ..
L . . . c a r ru s c l i r r s l L r d r
| , l l ' I c n l c rn r l b c d l o o r nI.
c a nl l n c . . .
l . . . . L r s cl i , r s' t r r r . i r .
l . . , . s r ' ti t o l l n t r s c l l .
2 . . . . t o c l o s ct h t l \ \ i n ( l o \ \ s .
l . . . . I c a nl l n c . . .
4 . . . . h ! - a rt h c t l t u s i c. . .
5 . , . . n r rb c d l i x r n . . .
- 1 .. . . t h c s n r a l al n db i g o n c s
o n t h c c e i l i n ca n d . . .
l . . . . p u tc u r t a l i r l s
I ... oltlt.
O n t h cl c l i . . .
J
. . . m v b o o k st h c r e .
4 . .. on the right ...
5 O n t h er i g h t. . .
6 O n t h el c l i . . .
7 O n t h cr i t h t . . .
. . . a l l m Vc l o t h c s .
| . . . . t h c s m a l la n db i g o n c s
0 n t h cc c i l i n i a
t n d- . .
2
u s cl b r s t u d v i n c .
\ \ ' h c n I c n t c rn t y
l r c d r c r t r l .I c a n s e c . . .
. . . L r s c\ \ h c n s t u d ) , i n g .
l . . . . d c c r t r a lict n t v s e L l ' .
l . . . . t o c o r c r t h a t\ \ i n d o \ \ ' s
i . . . , I c a ns c c. . .
- 1 .. . . l i s t c nt o n t u s i c. . .
5 . . . . n t r b c d. . .
I. ... put cuftil;ns
I . Dcletethis
2. On thel cl i . . .
3. ... rnybooksi n there.
4 . . . . o n t h cr i g h t. . .
5 . O n t h cr i g h t. . .
6 . O n t h cl c l t . . .
7 . I n t h er i g h t. . .
8. . .. my cl othcs.
l . D c l e t ct h i s
c a n uscl b r s t L r d l , i n g .
l . \\/hcn I cntcr nry
b c d r o o r l .I c a n s c c
2. D c l c t c t h i s
I . . . . d c c o r a ri ct b v m l s c l l .
l . . , . t o c o v c r t h a tr r i n d o r v s .
i . . . . l c a ns c c. . .
4 . . . . h c a rn r u s i c. . .
5. ,.. nry bedroom.
6 . . . . a s m a l l t a p cr c c o r d c r .
7 . . . . . y s n r l l l t a p er c c o r c l c r
8 . . . . t h a tc a n u s c t o l i c c p . . .
9 . I n t h e l e f r o l ' d o o r .t h e r ci s
a mirror.
I 0 . . . . t h a tc t n u s c k ) k c c p .. .
I l . I n r h er i g h ro l ' r h c
b o o k c a s ct h c r c i s b i g
cupboardlltat ciin usc to
k c c pa l l o l ' n r v c l o t h c s .
1 2 . . . . t h a tc a n u s c l b r s t u d r . .
. . . a s n t a l lc a s s e t t e
plaver.
. . . n 'Y
t sntallctssctte
plavsl...
. . . t o k c c p. . .
Nlo\ c it bct\\'censen(ence
on linc 4 and5:
I p u t c u r t a i n. . . r v i n d o r v s .
l l l c n t c r n t 1 . b c d r o o n t. . .
1 0 .. . . r o k c c p. . . .
I I . N l o v c i t b c t r rc e n
s c n t c n coc n l i n c 9 a n d l 0 :
I l u t a l l . . . t h c r c ,I l c l i r r c I
s l c c p. . . r c c o r d c r .
1 2 .. . . t h a tI u s ct h c n
s t L l uv l n
6.... a smalltlpc.
7 . . . . r ) , s m r l l t a p e. . . .
8 . . . . t o k e c p. . .
9 . l ) o e s n ' tm o v c i t .
1 0 . . . .t o k c c p. . .
I l . N l o v ci t
1 2 .D e l c r ct hi s
A s si g n n t e n4t
K i n d so f c r r o r s
Agrcenlcnt
l \ t i st r l i c s
Corrcclion
l. I'hcbiggcsL
anli*,,l liia. j r. r t,..f,1g,
DATA ANALYSIS OF THE STUDENTS2
COMPOSITIONSERRORS
Frcqucnt Errors N{adeby ESL Studcrrts
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subjcct anclVerbdo not agrcc
n r o n o u nr r r . l r e f c | e n td , \ n ( , 1i t t r . \ ' c
A I I T I C L E S A N I ) D E T E R I \ II N E R S
PUNCTUATION
Onrission
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colon:
scnricolon;
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ot llsf
ctc
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LlsC///c .tar/f.,o.t
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use ntore than __
use /r? e.r/
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o t l t c f s ( ( l a s l t -p l r f c n l i r c s i s .c t c )
s f_l ' r' ti \ c t_
l n c o n lI l c l c s c n l c n c c
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u s cp l a i n f o r m
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i n c o r r c c ti n l b r m a t i o n
arvku,ard:nccdsrcrvording
c a n ' t u n d c | s t a n d1 , o u rn t e a n i n g
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NOUNS
shouldbe singular
_
s h o u l db epIu ra l
inrproperli'rrn
-n ra s n
s o u n(s h o u l db c s i n g u l a r)
_
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scqucnce
of tenscs
CONJUNCTION
coordl nati ng
conj uncti ons:
and,but,
_
both. ..and,or, etc
subol di nal i ngconj uncti ons:that,
_
although.\\ficn. ctc
P,\IlACRAPIIINC
bcgin ncrv puragraph
_
llo ncl, palltlaph
_
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n t c a ni n g i n c o r r c c t
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\ ' o r d ( s ) u n s ui t a b l c
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t d i c c t i v cr r ' o r do r d c r
o b s c r v cS V O I ) l a c cl ' i n t c u ' o r d o r d c r
r n c o f r c c qt u e s t i o n\ \ ' o r do f d c r
i n c o r r c c t i n cl u d c d - q L r c s t i o n\ r o r d
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DATA AN;\LYSIS OF THE STUDENTS' COMPOSITONS E,RRORS
I.
Ll
S t u d c n t2
A s s i e n n r c nI t
Kinds of crrors
A gr c em ent
A r t ic lc s and
Det c r m incrs
Nlistakcs
t.
2.
Conr par is o n s
Contcnt
rvcaringa glasscs
a n d a g l a s s c s... .
Corrcction
I . . . . n ' e a r i n gg l a s s c s
2 . . . . a n d g l a s s c s ., . .
r v e a r i n gg l a s s c s
a n d g l a s s c s.,. .
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s ( ' f h i s i s a
s u bj c c t i v ep a r a g r a p hc) . g .
I l c r v l s a r , \ i g c r i a nn t a n .
2 . D c l e t et h i s ( T h i s i s a
s L r b i c c t i vpea r a g r a p hc) . g .
I I c c a n r cf i o n t a c h u r c hi n
I l c n u cS t a t c .
3 . . . . , e s p c c i a l hr r h c nh c
l , a s s n ri l i n g .
4 . . . . a n dn o t l t .
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s ( 1 h i s i s a
s L rjbc c t i v ep a r a g r a p h )
. 1 .l l c r v a s n ' tl ' a tb e c a u s ch c
didn't like to catntuclr.
5 . I I c h a du h i t c s k i n .
l . . . . a n d w i t h o u t\ \ ' e a r i n ga
, r - l a s s e.s. ..
l . I l c d i d n ' t r v e r rg h s s e s .
l . . . . a n dh e d i d n ' t r v e a r
qlasscs....
| . . . . b u t h e . i u s tl i k e d $ h i t e
l . . . . b u th e . l u sl itk c dw h i t e
c o l o u .r. .
2. ... becausc
hi sski nw as
al sorvhi tc.
Conjunc t io n
W or d c hoic e
and $' or d o rd c r
crro r
1.2
t.
2.
l. Uc s'rs harclirot.c..)ntct{)
n r c a n d r v c s h a k c do u r
LIlnos.
2 . I I e l o o k c dv o u n g r l i t h h i s
i , r o r v ns k i n . . . .
Nou r r s
P ar a g r a p h i n g
P r c pos it io ns
Punctuation
S enlenc e
Vcrbs
Revision
2. lvlovc the sentence"lle
h a d r v h i t es k i n . " A f t e r t h e
s c n t c n c e" [ I i s h a i r \ \ ' c l c n ' t
... nalr.
A qc iorr rr. .nf
K i n r l so f c r r o r s
D c l c t c t hi s
2. IIe uolc tirht bcigc
h i g h l l t c r t l o u s c r sa n d h c
d i dn ' t r r c a r g l a s s c ss. o h c
lookcd vou ng rilh ,/iis
brovn skitt.
l . D c l c t cr l r i s
. 1 .I l c r v a s n ' tl a t b c c a u s eh e
d i d n ' tI i k e r o c a t m u c h .
5 . . . . b u t h e . j u s tl i k c d r v h i t e
colour because his skin
vos also rlhite.
)
NIist:rkcs
Corrcction
R c vi si o n
Aglrcnrcnt
A r t i c l c sa n d
Dc t c r nt ine rs
I . . . h a sb u t k r no r I l i p .
. . . r o u n ds n r a l ln o s c ..
I t a l s oh a s s n t a l l" . 1 " . .
2
I . . . , h a sa b u t t o no r l l i p .
2 , . . . . a s n r a l lr o u n d n o s c .
i . l t a l s oh a sa s m a l l" J " . .
4 . . . . s t i s k c r s .. . .
l . . . . h a sa b u l r o no r l l i p .
2 . . . . . s m c l lr o u n dn o s e ,. .
i . I t a l s o h a sa s m a l l. , J " . .
. 1 . . . . a l h i s k c r s ,. . .
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Cor npar is on s
Contcnl
Nouns
l. l'hc l)ip is u ith ".lordln".
i1's
i n b l u cc o l o L r r
"r'rittcn
l.
. the tccthl.rrush
box is
L ' l ' h c I ) i p h a sl " . l o r d u n "
s r i t t c ni n b l L r c .
t . - t h c l o o t h b r u s hb c i xi s
I . ... thc tcctltbrushbox is
2.
2 . . our toothbrushcs.
J . . . . O L r rD f t r S h c s .
I . . . . a n dc a n b c h u n g
l . . . . m a d eo l h a r d p l a s t i c .
u n b r c a k a b l c... .
| . . . . a n d i t c a nb e h u n g .
. o u r b r u s h.
l . - f h c1 1 i ips r | i t h" J o r d a n " .
i t s r r l i t t c ni n b l u cc o l o u r
Pardqraphing
Prcpositions
Punctuation
Sentcnce
\/crbs
l.
Conj u nc tion
| . ... r ra b b i rr
t h o n r.
2 . . . .. c a nb c o p c n c d .
l . . . . a r a b b irtr h i c h. . .
2 . . . . .a n dc a nb c o p c n c d .
W or d c hoic e
and l' or d ord c r
crror
l . . . . a m o u s t a c h c. . .
2 . . . . r o u n ds n r a l nl o s c . . .
3 . . . . . i t ' s u r i t t c r irn b l u c
c oi o ur .
, 1 .. . . t o h a n g . . . . t o p u t a n d
to kcep...
1 . . . .r v h i s k c r s . . . .
f . . . . . a s r n e l rl o u n dn o s c .
3 . . . . . i t i s r v r i t t c ni n b l u c .
t.
I.-)
n r a d eb v h a r dp l a s t i c .
r10t e a s i l ) b r c a k a b l c. . .
. 1 .. . . t o h a n ga n d t o k c c p
| . . . . n r a d co l ' h a r d p l a s t i c .
l ' r o tc a s i l ) ,b r c a k a b l c. . .
l.
a rabbit rr,hont
'l
canbc opcncd.
l . . . . a u ' h i s k c r s. . .
2 . , . . . s n r a l rl o u n dn o s c . .
l . . . . . i t ' s u , r i t t c ni n b l u c
coIour.
J . . . . t o h a r r qa n dt o k c c p
cnt3
Assignnr
K i n d s o f c r r or s
Nlistakcs
A gr ec m c nt
A r t ic les and
Dc t c r m ine rs
C o r n p ar i s on s
Content
Correction
lLcvision
I . ... thcrci s a ci rcl el anrp.
I . ... thcrearea ci rcl cl amp ,
2 . ... a res tu d ;' i n sgq u are
...
3. A crossanda fan is on ...
l . , . , r s a s q u a r.c. .
3. A crossanda fan areon
2 . . . . i s a s q u a r .c. ,
J. A crossanda lan areon
4 . ..., th e rei s a l s os o n remy
p h o to.. .
l. l-he shapeis a square.
2 . . . . h a sb l u cc u r t a i .n..
J . l v l u s i cfro n r...
4 . ... s o n g s .
5 . ... s tu d ifn e s q u rreta b l c
4. .... thcreareal sosomeof
nly prlotos.
l . T h e s h a p ei s s q u a r e .
2 . . . . h a sa b l u ec u r t a i n. . .
J.l'he nusic from ...
4. ... thc songs.
5 . . . . a s q u a r es t u d , vt a b l c . .
4. ..., I hangup my photos
studiofranle.
l . 1' heshapei s square.
2 . . . . h a sa b l u ec u r t a i .n. .
3. A nrusi cfronr...
4 . . . .a s o n g .
5. ... a squrrestudl ' tabl e.
6 . ... b i g b ro rrn rv o o d
cuirboard...
6 . . . . a b i g b r o s , nr v o o d c n
cupr)oafd..,
6. ... bi g bros' n* ,ood
cr,rpboard
.. .
| . . . . i s p l a c cl o ( l o n r a n \
l i r i n g sd c a l i n gr l i t h a l l . . .
2 . . . . i s i n l l r ci l f s l p l r t r n d
t , r l c l l s i d eo l n t v h o u s c .
l . . . , h a s a c i r c l cl r n r p .n r v
l i r l r tb l L r cr r n l l .a n i l\ \ ' o n
I il n p i c t u r c s. .. .
l . . . . t o r ' t 1 t knct c c l s i c f t ( )
l r i r ds o nc s .
i . . . . a b o r c n r \ f o ( ) n rd o ( ) rt { )
r i v e a c o o l r v i n db c c l L r s c
t l r i t c n l p c f i l t L l ri cs n l t o 0
l
i n r v h i c hI d o a l l
2 . . . . .i s i n t h c l c l i l l o n tp a r r
ol nrr bousc.
1 . . . .t h c i ci s a c i l c l cl u r r p r r r vl i l l r t b l u cl r l l s r r i t l t
\ \ ' o n I ] i n p i c t u l c s... .
' 1 . . . t o r n a k ci t r l i s i c l l i r r
r r r ct o l i n d t h c s o n [ s .
.l
5 . . . . u b , r rc t h c i i o o r . h c
l a n q i v c sc o o l
tcnrpcfrlturc.
i n r v h i c hI d o r l l
l . . . . i s o n t h c l c l i l i ' o n tp a r t
o l n r . ,h o u s c .
l . . . . t l r c r cr r c a c i r c l el a n r p .
n r v l i g h t b l u cr i a l l sl , i t h
\ \ ' o n I l i n p i c t u l c s... .
l . . . 1 o | 1 ' I r k ci t c : i s i c rl b r n t c
i 0 I r nd a s o n c ,
5 . . . . l l n r c n r l l o o r l .T h c
lrn qi\cs cool tcntpcrature.
colJ andnot too hot.
6. A blthroonr is orr thc llrst
pa in my roorn and it has
a shower.
7 . l ' h c l l o o r sa r e l i g h t \ \ h i t e
and it is madc liom
ccrtmlcs,
l . . . . . n r y l i g h tb l u c u ' a l l .
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x . . .
3. . .. big brorvn rvood
cupt.nard.. .
4. ... a broun rrrxrd
d l c s s i n gt a b l c. . .
5 . . . . s o r l c n t \ ' l i h o t o. . .
Nouns
I ' : rr agr aph in g
I ' r c posit ions
I'unctuation
S,cntcncc
\/erbs
Conjunction
\ V or d c hoic c
nnd \Yord ordcr
crror
1.4
5....shich ...
6 - . s o n r cn r ) l r l ro r o
l . . . . r n v f c e l i n rl i c c
\ \ l t c L l t c .r. .
1 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x h c s i d cn r r
f u dr o t : ] p c. . . .
L . . . l ' m s t i l ll r i n g o n .
2 . . . . . n r a d cl i o n r . . .
1 . . . . a n dW o n l l i n p i c t u r c s
l . . . . , . ) , l i g h tb l u er v a l l s
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x e s . . .
3. ... a big brol,n loodcn
c u p b o a r d. . .
4 . . . . a b r o r v nu o o d c n
d r c s s i n tt l b l e .
5 . . . . s o n r co l n r v p h o t o s .
l . . . . . n r v l i g h tb l u er v a l l s
2 . . . . p l a s t i cb o x .. .
3 . . . . b i g b r o r r , nu ' o o d
c u p b o a r d. . .
. 1 .. , . a b r o r v nr v o < l d e n
d r c s s i n tt a t r l c .
5....nrr'l)hotos...
I . . . . n r o v c dt o . . .
2 . . . . i n t h c s a n r c. . .
l. ... inlhich ...
. 1 .. . . i n t h c l l r s t . . .
5 . . . . o n , , rl r i c h. . .
( , . . . . s o n r co l n ] \ p h o t o s .
1 . . . .n r r l c c l i n
I licc
1 , . . . n r o v c dt o . , .
2. .., in the strlc ,
3 . . . . i n r r h i c h. . .
- 1 . . . .o n L l r cl l s t .
5. ... on rlhich...
o.... nl\ Irnolos..
I s t i l ll i c o n
nrlt,.Je
ttl' . ..
I . . . . r v i t hW o n l l i n p i c t u l c s
1 . . . . n r r i c c l i n gl i c c .
r r l r c t h er ' . . .
l . . . . p l r r s t i cb o x i s b c s i d c
r r \ r i t . ii ) l u ) c . . .
l . . . . 1 ' r ns t i l ll i c o r r
l . . . . n l i l co i - . .
1 . . . . \ \ i t i r \ \ ' ( J nI l i n p i c t u r c s ,
| . ... liont my slccp.
2. ... t'wo nrediunrsquare
bro"vnwindorvs...
3 . . . .s o m e t h i n g . . .
4 . . . . s t u d y i n gs q u a r et a b l e
I . D cl ctcrhi s
2. ... tn'o nrediunrbrou,rr
squarc
$ i ndo\\' s...
3 . . . .a n ; t h i n g
...
4. ... a square
studytabl e.
I . D c l c t ct h i s
2. ... t\\o rlcdiunrsquarc
r v i n d o ls . . .
3 . . . . a n l r h i n g. . .
4 . . . . a s q u a r cs t u d yt a b l c . .
) . . .. I n s r d e
ol ...
6 . . . . s t u d i of r a n t e s .
7 . . . . a b o v en r v r o o m d o o r .
8. I'"lyroorn ...
9 . l v l y l h v o r i t cr o o r n . . .
5 . . . . a t t a c h et od . . .
6. D cl ctcthi s
7. ... abovctl redoor.
8. lvlybcdroom.. .
9. N IYl rr,ori tcbcdroont
.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
\\ ltcLncf ...
L . . . p l r s t i c l t c r x c sl i l c b c s i i l c
n r \ l 1 ] d l ot a n c . . .
I
. . . a t t a c h c tdo . . .
. . . s t u d i ol i a n r c .
. . . a t r o v cn t \ ' t ' o o l l ,
N ' l l b c d r o o n t. . .
l r 4 1l r v o r i t c b c d r o o n r
A s s i q n r e n t4
Iiinds of crrors
Agrccnrrnt
. \ r t i c l c sa n d
l) c t cr nr in c rs
| . . . . n t o v c da t . . .
2 . . . . a t t h e s a n ] c. , .
i.... rlhich..,
6 . & T . l h a v ea p r i v a t e
6 , & 7 . I a l s oh a v c a p r i v a t c
bathroorl insidc nrv
b a t h r o o r li n s i d cn r y
bcdroonr.lt has a shou'cr
bcdroonr.It has a shorver
and thc tloor is covcrcd
and thc flools arc covcrcd
r v i t hl i g h t \ \ h i t c c e r a m i c s .
r v i t h l i g h t r v hi t e c c r a m i c s .
I\list:rkcs
. . . . \ \ ' c a r sa l r c a lc l 0 t h c s .i i
s h o c s a. g l a s s c sl.n d . . .
. , . \ \ ' e a ra n c a tc l a l t l ' t c.s. .
ano a snocs.
. . . a h i g hs p i r i t. . .
l ... rn inventivc
r r a rs .
5 . . . h a v ea e o o dq u a l i t i c s
C or r c c t i o n
L . . . . \ \c l i f s n c l l l c l o t l t c s .
s h o c sl.l l s s c s .a n d . . .
2 . . . . r v c a rn c a tc l o t l t c s. .
a r 1 0s n o c s .
3 . . . . h i g hs p i r i t , . .
4 . . . . . a n i n l c n t i v cu a r ' .
5 . . . . h a v et o o d q u r l i t i c s
ilcvision
. . . .\ \ c i lr s l l c l l tc l o t h c s .
s h o c s . , : l l s s clsn.i l . , .
. . , \ \ c u r n c l t lc l o t h c s. .
andshocs.
J . . . h i g hs p i r i L
...
4 . . . . r n i nv cn t i v c\ v a v .
5 . .. hu e goodqua)itics
6 . . . . a g o o dr v a 1 , .s. .
7 . . . . a g c n c r a t i o nl ' ( ) rl u t u l c
life.
Conr p: r is ons
ontcn
I . l h c r c i s a u n i v c r s i t ay t
o n e p l a c e .T h a t i s A n
I i l c p h a n t sU n i v c r s i t r ' .
2 . S o .t h c v d o n ' t d c t h a t n c r v
\ \ ' l i v sa s s o o na s p o s s i b l c .
, 1 .A l t h o u g hr s r r c k r r o u . a r r
i n\ , c nt i v c t l ri nk i n g i s i r n
L r s c l itrhl i n k i n tu n di r l r a s
tlnrrr adr intlccs li'rr
o . . . . a g o o d\ \ , a ) ,. . . .
7 . . . . . t h c l ' u t u r cg c n c r a t i o n ,
l.
'l
h c r ci s a u n i v c r s i t ) ,
nlnrcdlilcphants
l J ni v c r s i t ; , .
2 . l ) c l c t ct hi s
Iicphlasc: \\/c ktlltv lhat
I l ri ' i n g t r ni n r c n t i r c
l i r i r L i n r i s u s c i i r lu n d h u s
I ri i n \ l t d ! l l l l t l l g c s l ( ) f
l i r t L n cl i l c .
l L r t L r r cl i l - c l l s l l \ o L l n l l
6 . . . . a g o o d r v a ; ,. . .
7 . . . . I u t u r cg c n e r a t i o n ,
'l'hcrc
is a univcrsitl.,
n a n t c dA n [ i l c p ha n t s
(Jnivcrsitr'.
l.
2 . I ) c l c t ct h i s
I L c p h r a s c\ :\ / c k n o r vt h l r t
h uv i n g a n i nv c n ti v c
t h i n k i n si s u s c l i rllr r d h l s
n r a n \ a d Y a n t t g c sl i ) [
l u l i r r cl i l t .
rcnctatiolt.
N o un s
P ar a g r a p h i n g
l) r c posit io n s
Punctrration
Scntencc
Vcrbs
l . . . . a sa m a t c r i l l .
I . . . . \ \ ' c a ra n c a tc l o t l t c s. . .
and a sltocs.
1 . . . . a g c n e r a t i o rl lb r l i l t u f c
l i { c . S o t h c . v. . . .
I . . . . . a l i e e c l o t h c sa n d n o t
I i k ea u n i f o r m. . .
l . T h c l c c t u r c ru s r r a l l ri n
liont of ...
i . . . . a s a l e a d c ro l ' t h c m .
l . . . . d o n ' t k n o u , a n dr c a l i s c
t l t a t. . .
5 . . . . r v h i c hb e t t c r. . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r et o o l a t c .
l . . . . a r e i n t c r c s t i n gt i t . . .
2 . . . . l . i l l t c a c h. . .
i . . . . h i s s t u d c n rlsc l i b c h i n d
I . . . . l ' o rt h c n r t c r i a l
I . . . . r v c a rn c a tc l o t h c s. . .
itit0 sl10cs.
2 . . . . [ c n c r a t i o n .s o t h c r ,.
l. ... lbrthcnrrtclirrl.
l . . . . r r c a Tn c l t c l o t h c s. . .
andslrocs.
2 . . . . g c n c r a t i o ns. o t h e 1 ,.
I . . . . b u tn o t u n i l i r r n t .s. .
l . . . . . b u ln. o r u n i l b r n t s. . .
2
-l
- 1 .. . . t o t h i n kc r c n t h i n r .
h c l c c l u r e rr r s u a I l vr v a I k s
i n l l o n to f . . .
. . . t h el c a d e r .
4 . . . . d o n ' tk n o w a n d d o n ' t
r c a l i z et h a t. . .
5 . . . . u h i c hi s b c t t c r . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r ei t i s t o o l r t e .
I . . . . are intcrestedto .. .
2. ... tcaclrcs....
. . i .. . . h i s s t u d c n r st o b c l c l i
bclrirJ.
l . . . . 1 0t h i n ko l ' c l c r r t h i n g
2 . l - h c l c c { u r c ru s L nl l v r v a l k s
in liont ol' ...
3 . . . . t h el c a d c r .
4 . . . . d o n ' t k n o r va n dd o n ' t
r c a l i z . ct h a t . . .
5 . . . . r v h i c hi s b c r t c r . . .
6 . . . . b c f o r ei t i s t o o l a t e .
o ,.,
l . . . . a r c i n t e r r e s t c( d
2 . . . . t c r c h e s. . . .
3 . . . . h i s s t u d c n t rso b e l c l l
bchind.
. 1 .. . . t o t h i n ko l ' e r c n , t h i n g
5 . . . . a n dn n . n n ' l , n d. .
i . . . . a n db c o p c nn r i n d c d. . .
5 . . . . a n d b c o p c nm i n d e d. .
l . . . . t t rt c a c h i n er n c t l r o i l s .
l . . . . . al i c c c l o t h c sa n i il o t
l i k c a u ni l b r n r. . ,
l . . . . t o r n a k cl n i n v c n t i o n .
. . 1... . l i - o ma l l i s n r a t c r i r l s .
j . . . . s o n r cg o o d \ \ ' i l )s l ( ) . . .
6 . . . . h a sb c c a L r s. .c.
7 . . . . t o g e t s u c c c c d. . .
l i . . . . c a nm o r e u n d c r s t a n d .
l . . . . . i nl c r c h i n g .
l . . . . . h i rnt o t u n i l i t r n t s . . .
l . . . . . i r rt c e c i r i r r g .
? . . . . . b u tn o t u n i l b r r n s. . .
l . . . . t o i n v c n tt h i n g s .
{ . I ) c l c r ct hi s .
5 . . . . s o n r cu s c l l l r l e v st o . . .
o . . . . . u s c sb c c a u s .c. , ,
7 . . . . t o g c t s u c c c s s. . .
8 . . . . c a nu n d c r s t a n d
nrore.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
UonJlrnction
\ \ / or d c hoic c
and r v or d o rrl cr
crror
... to invcntins.
D c l e t ct hi s
. . . s o n r cg r c a l\.\ ' a ) , st o . .
. . . u s c sb c c a u s .c. .
. . . t o g c t s u c c c s .s. .
D e l c t e :a n d t h c s t u d e n t s
can morc Lrndcrstand
9 . D c l c t ct h i s
9 . . . . o r n r a n yk i n d so { '
9 . D c l c t er h i s
problenrs.
10 . . . . a g e n c r a t i o nl b r I u t u r c l 0
the luturc gcl'rcration. 1 0 . . . . f u t u r cg c n c r a t i o n.,. .
litb.
ll....oncol'...
1 2 .. . . . b c c a u s nc t o s lo l ' a l l
urrivcrsitl'
I i . . . . . ,n l o s to l ' a n o t h c r
u n i v e r s i t v. . .
1.5
I l . I ) c l c t ct hi s
1 2 .. . . b c c a u sncr o s l
unr!crsit\'....
1 3 .. . . . n r o s tu n i v c r s i t y
I L D c l c t ct h i s
1 2 . . , . b c c . l u snct o s t
unr\rerslt\'.,..
1 3 . . . . . .m o s tu r ri v c r s i t v
A s s i u r r r cr r t5
Iiin ds of crrors
,.\grcc||rcnl
. \ r t i c l e s I r rd
I)ctcrnrincrs
N ' Ii s ta l i c s
1 . . . . a n a n i n n l r r r o d lcs
l. ll is vcrl nicc...
- 1 .. . . b c c t t n r c l r l i r n r o r r s
nrottkcvs...
C o m n l r i s on s
Contcnt
Nouns
Corrcction
I . . n l l r l el s . . .
l l Li s : rr c l n i c c . . .
. lrccontc lltnttrrrs
rt()ltkc\s...
Itunc{uation
Scntcncc
I . . . . n r o d c l .s. .
2 . l t l s : r l c r l n l c c. . .
i . . . . b c c o n t cl u n t o u s
n r o n k csr . .
L . . . a r c a b c s tl i i c n d .
2 . . . . l b r a n a r r i n r a. l. .
. 1 .. . . a n a n i m l l r n o d c l s
. 1 .. . . b e c a u s co l ' h i s
cutcncss.
L . . . a r c b c s tl i i e n d s .
l . . . . l b r l r r i n r a l s. . .
1 . . . . m o d c l s. . .
- 1 .. . . b c c i r u s co f t h c i r
cLltcncss.
1 . . . . a r c b c s tl i i c n d s .
2 . . . . l b r a n i n r a ln r o d c l s
J . . . . n r o d c l .s. .
4 . . . . b c c a u s co l ' t h c i r
cutcness.
l . . .. at thc forest.
2 . . . . h a v ek n o r v r tr o c a c h . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gt o c a c ho t h c r
| . ... in the lbrest.
2 . . . . h a rc k n o s ' n c a c h . . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gc a c ho t h c r .
I . ... in the forcst.
2 . . . . h a v ck n o u n c a c h. . .
3 . . . . c h a s i n gc a c ho t l r c r.
4 . . . . t h c y e m b r r c ct 0 c a c h
othcr.
5 . . . . a t t h e f o r c s t. . .
6 . . . . a n a n i m a ln r o d c l so n
. 1 .. . . . t h c l ' c n r b r a c ec a c l r
4 . . . . , t h e ) ,c n r b r a c ec a c l r
o U r cr .
5 . . . . i n t h e f o r c s t. , .
6 . . . , m o d el s l b r . . .
P ar agr aphin g
Prepositions
Il cr'isio n
l l l c i n l c r e s t cidn . . .
-)
l ' h c i r r o u n db l r c k o c s .
b r o r v np l un ta r c . p : r J e
\ c l l o \ \ t c c t hr ) | t l t c l f
sn)llc.
oIhcr.
5 , . . . i n t h e { b r c s t. . .
6 . . . . n r o d c l sf o r . . .
I I c i s i n t c r c s t cidn . . .
I r r a q n r c n lt : h c i r r o u n d
b l l c k c r c s . l t r t t un l u r . .
pl1lg
1 1 l l p r l c c t l ts h o r l c d
u l t c r rl h c r sn ti l c .
l . l l c i s i n t e r c s t cidn . . .
2 . ' l h c i r r o u n db l a c kc v c sa r e
v c r l c u t c .t h c i r b r o r v nI ' u r
l u r c\ c r \ s o l t . t n d p a l c
\ c l l o \ \ ,t c c l h s h o r y c du h c r r
t h s s n ri l c .
l . . . . r r c n c i ' l hb o l s .
l . , , . l b r a n i n t a l tso b c c o n t c
I ri s n r l c l z i n c ' s c o r c r .
l . . . . a r cn c i g h b o u r h o o d s .
2 . . . . l b r a n i m r l n r o d c l sl b r
h i s c o v c r ' sn r a g a z i n c .
. 1 .. . . . b r o r r nl i r r . . . . .
3 . . . . . b r o r v nl l r . . . . .
V c r b. s
L o n j r r n c ti o n
W or t l c ho ic c
r nd \ \ ' or d o r (l c r
c r r or
l . . . . a r c n c i g hb o ul i n l .
l. ... lbr anlninrrl to
b c c o n t ch i s c o r c l o l ' l h c
n r tq a z i n c ,
l . . .. . b r o * n p l u l t i t g c . . . .
II.
2.1
S t u t l c n t3
A s s i s n r n c nIt
Kinds of crrors
l\Iistakcs
Corrcction
Rcvision
A g r c c m c n(
r\ rticlcs arrtl
D c t c r n r i r rc r s
C o m p ar i s ons
Contcnt
Nourrs
l'lragrapl;ing
Plcpositions
Punctuation
Scntcncc
Verbs
Conjunction
l . . . . h i s r r l r i l cI z o ds h i l t.
l . l ) c l c t c t l r i s( I l c p c t i t i o o
nf
l i n c I a n d2 )
l . . , . h l v c o p i ni o n
l . . . . h l r rc o n c o p i n i o n
| . . . . h i s \ \ , h i t cs l r i r t.
2 . I ) a s t o rI ) a u li s v c r l l a t i t
c a n b c s c c nl i o m h i s
phlsicrl pcllirlntance.
I . . , . h r r c o n co p i n i o n
| . . . . r ' c r yn r o d c srtv i l h
l. ... \ cr\ nlodcst o
l . . , . r c l l n r o d c s t\ \ ' i t l 1
l . I l c c a u sh
ee l i k ct o p r a r
l r n dt h u tc l n p l o r c i l ' h c i s
i r l \ \ ' a v cs l o s c l vt o G o d .
l.
2 . I ) l s l o l I ' a u l i s v c r ' ; l l t rt
c r n b c s c c nl l o m h i s
l cllirrnr:rncc.
1i r v s i c a p
1. . . . n r a lb c h r r c .
2. UsePrescnt
I . . . . p r r l ' a n d t h c tc r n p r o \c
-l'hrt
i s h c - c a L rhs c l i k e ' st o
l|il\.
Nnil rl Cl t |f0\ c
t h l l h c i s a l r ra r s c l o s ct o
( lotl.
l.,..
n l i t \ l r : l\ c
2. [.iscI'ast
l . . . . p r a l . a n d i t c a np r o v e
l . ' l - h r ti s b c c l r r s ch c l i k c st o
p | a r u n d c a n p r o v ct h a l
h c i s a l r v a r . cs l o s ct o C o d .
1,.,. nrarhlrc
2. Usc I).rsl.
l . , . p r a _a" "n d c a r rp r o v c .
\\/o rd ch o icc
and r v or d o rd c r
crror
2.2
A s s i g n n r e2n t
K i n d s o f r : r r or s
N{istlkcs
Corrcction
i \ g r c e m c r it
1 . . . . .t h cl u n c t i o ni ss
I
A l t i c l c sr i r d
Dctcrnrintrs
l . . . . a n dr o u n ds n r a l nl o s c .
l . . . . h r s h o l c. . .
i , . , . t h c r ci s s n r a l "l . 1 ". . .
4 . . . . h a st h el l i p . . .
1 . . . . a r o r r n sd r n l l ln o s c
l . . . . h r s a h o l c. . .
'
- l . l i r c r ci s a s n r a l "l . 1 . .
4 . . . . h a sa l 1 i p. . .
Conrparisons
Contcnt
J.
F o r t h c t h i n gi t i s
s ) n t h e t i cr n d n r c l a n r i n .
.1.I n s i d ct h c b o x i t h a sb c c n
N o un s
p r o v i d c dl b u r h o l c sl ' o r . . .
l . . . . s u c ha s b r r . r s h .
2 . . . . t h eb r u s h .
t l r cl u n c l i o n sarc
Il.cr'isio n
l l t c l u n c t i o n sa l c
l . I ) c l c t ct h i s
2 . . . . h a sa h o l c. . .
3 . T h c l ci s a s n r r l l " . l " .
4 . . . . h a sa l ) i p . . .
I . . . . a l i r n n r a n d c u t c r a b b i t l . . . . a I u n n l ' a n da r o u n d
on it.
s m a l ln o s e .
2 . l t h a si t s c a r s .s i r t ' h i s k c r s 2 . D c l c t ct h i s
l un d a r o u n ds n t r l l n o s c .
3. andnot ccsil) brokcn
a n d n o t c a s i l vb r o k e n
h c c a u s ct h c t h i n g i s n t t d e
b c c a u s ct h c t h i n g i s m a d e
o l ' s \ n t h c li c a r r dn r c l l n r i n .
o l s v n t h c t i ca n d n t c l a n t i n .
. 1 .I n s i d ct h c b o x . l b u r h o l c s
I n s i d ct h c b o x . l b u r h o l c s
l r c p r o v i d c dl b r . . .
a r c p r o v i d c dl b r . . .
l.
s u c ha s b r u s h c s
l . . . . s u c ha s b l u s h c s .
'l
lhc brushcs.
2. ... thcbrushcs.
T a r agr ap lri n g
P r c posit ir 'l rs
l . . . . r l i r n n \ a n dc u t cr L r b b i t
abovc.
2 . . . . i n t h e1 1 i p .
l . . . . s n r a l lb u x i o i r r p u l - t c , l
2 . U c s i d ct h a t [ h c l ' u n c t i o n s
l . . . . a l i r n n l a n d c u t er a l . r L r i t L . . . a l i r n n va n d
around
on it.
s J l l :t n 0 s c .
2 . . . . o n t h el l i n
2. ... on thcf1ip.
r . , . . s n t t l tb o x .l t s c o l o u r. . . l. ... smatl
tr,r*.lGlnlirl
2 , I l c s i d c s[ h a t .t h c I u n c t i o n s 2 . i l c s i d c st h c
I ' u n c r i o n.s, .
S c nt c nc e
l . . . . s m a l lU n r c o ' l p o r o : . r t
p r l c l , c l l o l ' a n d g r c o ri s h
y c I I o r vc o l o u r .
V c r lls
Conjunction
| . . . . i s c o n r p l c t cbd)
I. llcsidc that ttrc ir.,ncC,ux
r . . . . s n r a b o x . l t s c o l o u fi s
c o n r p o s c do l -p a l c a n d
s r c c n i s hv e l l o r ' .
t . . . . r sc r ) n t n l c t c\ d! i t h . , .
l . I l c s i d c st h a t .t h c l l n c t i o r r s
Punctuation
^.
-. ... pllltlllE
W or d c ho ic e
and r v or t l o rd c r
crro r
{lnd lls')
k c c p i n g. . .
I . . . . p l l c 1 ' e l l o r va n d
t t r c c n i s hy c l l o r v c o l o L r r . .
l . . . . a l i t t l cn t o u s t : l c h. c. .
l . . . . h l s h o l c l i r r t l r cn u i l
l , r l \ \c c n b o i l t c a f s .
L A r t l r c n r i d d l cp a r t o l t h c
b o d y t h c r ei s s n r a l L' ' . 1' o n
t h c b cl l 1 , .
5 . l ' h c r c i s l c t t c r s\ \ . r i t t c n
J o l d a ni n b l u c . . .
6 . . . . p u r t i n gb r u s ha n d a l s o
k c c p i n gth eb ru s h .
z.)
2 . . . . p u u i n ga n dk c c p i n g. . .
2 . . . . p u t t i n ga n d k c c p i r r g .
l . . . . p r l ca n d l r c c ni s h
l . ' l ' h c r ci s a s n r r l l" . l " o r rr h c
bclll .
l . . . . p a l ea n dg r c c n i s h
) crio\\,.
L D c l c t ct hi s
l . . . . h a sI l t r t l cr e v c r . s c
b c l \ ! c c nl r 0 t hc a r sl o r l h c
narl.
- 1 .- l ' h c r ci s a s n t a l l. . . l "o n t h e
bclll,
'l'hcrc
5.
i s a l o r . d" . l o r d a n "
u r i t t c ni n b l u e . . .
6 - . . . p u f t i n ga n d k c c p i n gt h e
b r us h e s .
5. l'hcrc is r u ord '.Jordan,'
$ , r i t t c ni n b l u e . . .
6 . . . . p u r t i n ga n d k c e p i n gt h c
b r us he s .
) c llo\\'.
2 . . . s i x r r l t i s k c r . .s.
- 1 . . . h l s a l t o l cb c t r v c c n
b o l hc r r s l o r t h c n u i l
A s s i q n n t e n3t
Kindsof crrors
i\grcc rnent
A r t i c l c sa n d
Dc t cr nrin c r s
l\Iistakes
L N l , r , r o o md o c s n ' th a v cA C
1 . . . . a n db a t h l o o r l .
2 . . . . r r i t h c o r c r b c d h a ri n _ e
I 0 I l)alnratiansirrcluding
i t s p i l l o s ,a n d b o l s t c r .
3. ... s bluefior stccp.
. 1 .. . . a n t in r i n ic a r . p c t . . .
5 . . . . l i k cn r i n i c r r p c. r. .
6 . . . . r l i c s s i n tgu b l c, . .
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i i . . . . L r r i t l u lc: r r l pr u b l c .
9 . . . . l l nr n d . . .
10...crlrorrcc
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Contcnt
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l, ... snralb
l o x .i t s c o l o u ii s
c o n rp o s c do f p a l c a n d
c r c e n i s hI c l l o r r
-.--t . . . . r sc o n r p l c t crdr . i t h. . .
l . I l c s i d c st h c l u n c t i o n .-s .
l.
'l'lrc
llrstthirrr_
I sr c c r h c
n 1 0 s t1h i n g i n n - r . r o o n ti s
Correction
l . N l l r o o n ti s n ' ta n a i r
c o n d i { i o n c. r. .
I . . .. andthcbarhr.ooni
2 . . . . r v i t h a l r c dc o v c r . a
p i l l o l , a n da b o l s t e .r . .
i . . . . a b l L r el i ) o ts l c c p. . . ,
4 . . . a n da n r i n ci a r p c t . . .
5 . . . . I i k c t l t c n ' t i nci r r p c r. . .
6 . . . . a c J l c s s i nr rsl r l c . . .
7 . . . . u s n r a ltlr b l c . . .
i i . . . l r L r n i r l Ll rucl t p t l h l c . . .
9 . . - . I i l n l r r r . . l. .
l ( l . l l c r h o L r s c. .
Rcvision
L D cl c t cr hi s
| . . . . a n L lt h c b : r r h r o o r n .
2 . . . . r v i t hb c d c o v c r sl 0 l
l ) r l m a t i a n si n c l u d i ns i t s
p i l l o r va nc l b o l s t c r .
1 . . . . b l uc l i ) o ls r c c p .
. 1 .. . . a n dn t i n ic a r p c t . . .
5 . . . . l i k cn t v c a r p c t . . .
6 . . . . d r c s s i n !tli i t r l c. . .
7 . . . . a s r l r l lt r b l c . .
l i . . . , u n i q L rlca n r pt a b l c. . .
9 . . . . a l u nl l d . . .
l ( ) .. . . c \ h o L r s. c. .
L l r r r n t l s r i n r 1 , r c . ,c. ,tihr i r r u l . ' l h c l i r s r .
r h i n rt h cm o s t
I s c c l l l s t l r i n n r r r o o n ti s
i rnprcssi
c ,,
tl ri ng
2 . . . . \ v i t h c o v c r b c d h a ri n g
: . . . . * i t f ra b c r i c o v c r . a
l 0 I D a l m a t i a ni sn c l u d i r r o
i l l o r va n d a b o l s t c ru , h i c h
I scci n
nty rootlt ls .,.
2. ... rrith bcd covcrs l0l
D a l m a t i a n si r r cl u d i nc i t s
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i t s p r L l o r r , o nbdr t l s t c rS. o
t h c t ; : c o r a t i o nl o o k s
h l r n o ni o u s .
I . S o t l r c d e c o r a t i o rl ro o k s . . .
r l l 0 l l h c l l rp i c r u f cl 0 l
[ ) r l r n r r i a n ss.o i t ] o o k s
h a l n r o ni o u s .
l . . . . D l l n r a t i a r r s o. i t l o o k s
p i l i o r r a n d b o l s r c r s. o t h c
d c c o r a t i o nI o o k s
h a r no
r ni o u s . .
1 . . . . D a l m a t i a n s .o i t l o o k s
f . O n r n el l i x r r s . . .
i . . . . r L n dh l r i r r r r i l c k s .
l . O n t h c l l o o r .. . .
l . . . . a n dl t a r cr c l a x i n q . . .
2.On thclloors. ..
l . . . . a r r dh a v cr i l c x .
I )r c posit io ns
l . . . . 1 . )r n ch a r , i n c. . . .
2 . . . . c o n tl b r t a b l eo l ' i t .
I'unctua(ion
l . On t ltc llorrls thcrr.-urc
| . . . . l i r rn r ch a v i n g . . .
2 . . . . c o m l b r t a b l icn i t .
l . . , . O n t h c l l o o r . t h c r ea r c
l . . . . t o n r ch a v i n g
2 . D c l c t c t hi s
l . O n t h c l l o o r t h c r . ca r c
2 . . . . c 0 n t c n t p l a l icn. t a g i n e
t hi n l . ]a. n d . . . . .
l . Nlv ,..,irrdorr is acrually,
v c r \ a r t i s t i c. . .
2 . . . . b L ri t h a sa n c r h o u s c
and :t lirn.
l . l v l l r o o n ti s l i t c u t c d
bct\\ccn..,
2 . . . . a n d h a v cr c l a x i n gt i n t c
t hcf c .
l. ...corrplcted
\irh ...
l . . . . r d : r l t t c td0 . . .
5 . I c l n d i r c c t l rl t L r r. :. .
( r .. . . l r o n t r a r c l i t g. . .
7 . . . . I ' n r u s c dt o s p c n d i n e
it
2 . D c l c t ct h i s
I . . .s ol c a n . . .
. . . c o n t c n ] p l a t ci .n l t g i n c
t h i n g .a n d . . . . .
. . . r r i r i l cs i t t i n e. , .
J
l. ... rhcbcda bluelbor
s t c c pi s p r o v i d c d .
2 . . . . v a r i o u sb c a u t yk i t a n d
cosrnc(ic.
1 . . , .s o I c l n . . .
2 . D c l c t ct l ri s
3 . . . c u r t l i n c o m p o s c do f
pink...
. 1 .. . . a n da u n i q u cl a m p
t a b l c. . . .
5 . . . . i t ' s c n o u g h. , .
6. ... to cool oll'nrv roonr.
7 . . . . t h co n l l p l l c c . , .
6 . . . . g ok l . . .
9 . . . . b c dc o r . c r .
i . . . . c u r t a i on f p i n k. . .
Nouns
I'lraqraplring
2 . ...c o n tc n tp l aatc
nd
i n r a r : i nt hci n ga n d . ..
Scntcnce
l . M v i v i n d o r vi t i s a c t u a l l r
v c r r a r ( i s t i c. . .
2 . . . . b u ta n c x h o r r s a
cnd
litn.
l . M l r ' o o nlri c sb c t r v c c n . .
Vcrbs
2. ... ald har,ing
lilcks.
3 . . . . c o n r p l c t cbdv . . .
. 1 .. . . r i ! i i i p t c d
\\ ith ...
5 . l ' r n t r t t l ct o c l i r c c t l r ' l t L r g
( ) . . . . l o l t ' t r a i v c .l . .
7 . . . . I L r s c tdo s p c n di t . . .
Colrjuncticin
W or d c hoic e
x nd N' or d o rd c r
crro r
2.4
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. . c ( ) n t e r n P l aat cn d
i n rr r g i n et hi n g a n d
J
. . r r h i t cs i t t i n g. . .
l . . . . t h e b c d i t i s p r o v i d c ds
bluc lbot srccp.
2 . . . . r ' a r i o u st o o l sa n d
c q ui p n e n t l b r m a k i n g u p
nrv l)ooy.
3 . . . . c L r r t a i cno n r p a r c do l '
p i n k. . .
4 . . . . a n do n t h c t a b l e .
u ni qu e l a n r pt a b l e . . .
5 . . . . i r ' sq u i t ce n o u g h. . .
6 . . . . l o l r c c z cn r ) r o o n r .
7 . . . . t i r co n l l o n c . . .
8 . . . . r i s i t. . .
9 . . . . c o v c rb c d .
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l . N 1 y* ' i r r d o u , a c t u a l l yv c r v
a f l i s t i c. . .
2 . D c l c t ct h i s
lvl; roonr lics bctrvccn
. . . l n d h a v er i l c x .
3 . , . . c o n rp ) c t c db r ' . . .
. 1 . . . . : r d a p r crdr i t h . . .
5 . . . . I c r n d i r c c r l lh u g . .
6 . . . , l i o n t t l a y c l i n q. . .
7 . . . . I u s c ctio s p c n di t . .
3 . . , . t t h i l cs i t t i n c
I . ... thc bcdi s provi dcd
bluc fod sl.ccp,
2. ... vari ousbcauti que
and
cosl l tctl c.
4 . . . . a n du n i q u sc m a ltl a b l c
) . . . . r l .s q u r t Lc-n o u g h. . .
6 . . . . t o c o o l o l 1 ' n r yr o o m .
7 . D el c t ct hi s
8,...goto ...
9. ... bcd covcrs.
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t l r c s ct h r c cc l c p h l n t s : l f c
g o i n gh l n d i n h ; r n dl o
c l o s cb c c l u s cr h c l c l r j c r
lrcfc tukcs folc iis thc
l ) f ol c s s o f .
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( l l c t \ \ c c n n o . I p o i n t3 a n d
n p 2 l i n c I ) I ) c l c t ct l r i s
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Punctuation
l. ... sonrcthin.l.
I . . . . c l c p h a n tt.h c t l ' o
c r c n n a n t s, . .
Scntence
Vcrbs
I l . . . . l o l l o r vr h L ' i .r. .
C o ni u n c t i on
W or d c hoic c
and n, or d ord e r
er r o r
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s o n tc t h i n g .
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3 . ' l h c v a r cg o i n g
s o n t c rhr c r c i n r t r c l c tro
r c s u l ls u l ] t c l l r i n E .
rnJ thcoldcrtclcphrnr
r l r l k i n g i n l l o r r tr l s o
b r i n g st h c p h o t o g r a p h s
r v h i l ct h c r c s t c l c p h a n t s
a r c a c l u a l l yt h e s t u d c n t
r v h o . j o i nl l r c p f ol t s s o r
h l i v i ne a r c s u l t .
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i . . . . r t r c l r t i t ' n s h iios . . .
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l . , , \n l o ne .t h c t h r c c
clcphrrna
t st r c l a t i osnh i pi s
n o t c I ( ) s cb c c a u s et h c
l c a d c rh c r c t a k c sr o l c a s
t h c p r ol c s s o r .
2 . ' l h c p i c t L r r sc h o \ \ ' st h a t
t h c s ct hf c c c l c p h a n t sa r c
g o i n gl r i r n di n h a n dl o
l l r v c a n a c a d c n t i ca c t i v i t y .
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s o n r c r r , h c ri n
c i t r d c rt o
r c s u l ts o n r c t hi n g .
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a n dt h c o l d c s tc l e p h a n t
r v a l ki n g i n l i o n t a l s o
b r i n g st h c p h o t o g r a p h s
r v h i l et h c r c s t c l c p h a n t s
a r c a c t u cl l Y t h e s t u d c n t
rvho.joirrthe prol'cssor.
l . S h o u l db c i n I p a r . a g r l p h
L i thke i Li nr,rl pcrl rrrph.
l . . . . \ \ a l k i n gt o . . .
2 . l - h c r c l a t i o ns hi p a n ' t o n g
t h r c cc l c l l l t a n t s . . . .
1 . . . . i n s o n r c tihn
I . . . . c l c p h a n t t; h e t r v o
l . . . . r v al k i n ga t . . . .
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i p among
t h c t h r c cc l c p h : r n t s. . . .
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I . I l c p c t i t i o nn u n t b c r2 l i n e 2
. . . t h c t a r eg o i n g
sonrc\\'hcrcin order t0
r c s u l ti n s o m c t h i n g .
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2 . . . . t h c r c s ta [ c . . .
l . . . e l c p h a n tt.h e t \ v o
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to...
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c i e D h a n t. s. .
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l . t ) c l c t er h i s
2 . . . . t h c r c s t c l c p h a n t sa r e
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N'listrrkcs
Co rrccl ion
Rcvision
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C o m p ar i s on s
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. . . l i t t l em o n k c l , s. . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n {at l o t t h N ti t
c l o s e si t s c v c s .
. . . l i l t l c t \ v o n t o n k c Y s. . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n gs o r v i d c / s o
happih thrt his ocs arc
closcd.
I t ' s t h r t b i g s m i l cr h i c h
di fcctl\, sho\\'stltc tcctll
t h l t b c c o n r c sa s i g n o l '
I i i c n d l i n c s sa n d o p c n n c s s .
l i c p c t i t i o no l ' l i n c , : la n d 5 :
l ) c l c t ct h i s
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s h o \ \ ' i n gt c c t ha r c s i g n so l '
l i i c n d l i n c s sa n d o p c n n ri n d c da t t ; t u d c .
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c a n b c c o n cl u d c dr v h c t h c r
t h e va r c r c r l l l l i i c n d sa n d
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f c l i r \ c (.ili l l l r ct i | l r c
| l f l i c u l l Ul \ l i r rt l t cb l t d
lllDcs.
Nouns
1 . . . .a l a r t n c o
r l litllc
nronkcy,s.
2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l ca n db r i r : h t
l11cc,
P ar agr aphin g
Prepositions
Punctua(ion
S c nt c nc c
\/c rbs
Conjuncti,,n
\ \ / or d c ho ice
lnd n' or d ord e r
crror
III.
3.1
| . . . . a b i g a n d g r c c nt r c e .
2 . . . . o t h c rs i n c ci t i s s c c n
I . With a pair ol'cy,cs,they
s l r o * 't h c i r h r n i l i a r i t r , .
l . . . . s e e mt o r c a l l v.
2 . . . . a r ec l o s c dt o . . .
I . . . . a b i g a n r lg r c c nt r c c .
I
h a n di n h a n d .
2
conr,cn
icnl \ itlr
s i n c ci t i s s c c n
l. . . pilrlltcfs.
I i t t l em o n k e y s . . .
. . . i s s n t i l i n gt h a ti t ' s
c l o s c si t s c y c s .
It's big sntilesa
. nd
d i r c c t l ys h o r v st h c i r t c e t ha
s i g n o f l r i c n d l i n c s sa n d
o p c n c sn- ri n d c d a t t i t u d e .
F r o r l t h c i r c l o s c n c s si .t
c:rn bc concludcdrvhethcr
t h c r , a r cr c l l l v l i i c n d sa n d
k n o r r ,c a c ho t h c rr c r y w e l l .
T h c i r si n rp l c s r n i l c st .h e v
c a n c n l c r t a i nt h o s cr v h o
lookat thcnt.
6.n s cils\-going
n t c na n d
rc a\cd ail the nton.tcnts
p a r t i c u l a r llrb r r h c b a d
I i n'rcs.
| . . .. aspartncrs.
2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l casn db r i g h t 2 . . . . t h c i rs n r i l casn db r i g h t
llrccs.
i . I h c b l b i c so l ' n t o n k c l s. .
4 . . . . i n r p r c s sci ra n d
llshionablc.
litcc.
L ' l h c b a b vo l ' n r o n k c y .s. . .
4 . . . . i m p l c s s i v ca n d
lascirraLion.
1 . . . thc big. grccn trce.
2 . . . o t h c r .l t c a n b c s c e n .
I . ... bi g.grccnrrcc.
2 . . . . o t h c rI.[ i s s e c n
l . Thcyshorvthci rpai rof
eycsfami l i ari ry.
I.
'l-hcir
pairs of'cl es slrorv
t h c i r t h n ri l i a r i r \ , .
l . . . . s c c n tt o b c r c a l l y
2 . . . . a r c c l o s ct o . . .
1 . . . . t h c b i g .g f c c nt r c c
l . . . . s i d cb l , s i d c .
2 . . . . r c l a xr v i t h. . .
i . . . . . l t c : l l tb c s c c n. . .
. 1 .I c a t c h0 n c n l c s s a g c
l. ... secnb
r ercally
2 . . . . a r cc l o s et o . . .
l . . . . b i g , g r c c nt r c c .
| . ... sidcb;,sidc.
2 , . . . c o n v c n i e n crcr i t h .
3 . . . . . l t i s s c c n. . .
4 . I g c t o n c n t e s s a g c. . .
S t u d c rir , i
A s s i q n r r c nI t
Kindsof'crrors
I\{istl kr:s
Agrccmcnf
A r t i c l e sa n d
Dc t er nr ir rc r s
Conrparisons
Corrcction
....
_- _--,l . ;| |s c_\'c\
3fc ...
L . . . h a sa c u r l r n d b l a c k
hlir ...
l . . . . h a sa b l a c ka n dd r r k
skrn...
2 . . . . h c a l s o\ \ c i t f s. . .
L , . . h a sb l a c kc u r . l 1 . h a i r
2 . . . . h a sa d l r k s k i n .
Rcr,ision
L I I i s e v c sa r c . .
2 . . . . h s a l s or v c a r.
l . . . . h a sc u r i a n d b l a c kh a i r
2 . . . . h a sb l a c ka n dd a r k
skin.
Cont ent
N o un s
Parasranhin
it ions
P un c t u a t i o n
S c nt enc e
'l
hc tcnsc is not consistcrt
(l'rcscnt rnd l'ast):
l.
l ) l s t 0 r I ) a u li s a . . .
I l c c o n ' r c so u t l r o l r l . . .
I'lstor l)aul \\ ts \ r)tlng.,
. . . l b c l l l r r l t s. . .
. . . l ) c ! l l s o\ \ o f c . . .
2 . I l c c o n r c so l l t l r 0 i r 1. . .
l. I)list:
l. I)rescnt:
l ) a s t o r l ) a r , rsl a s r . . .
l l c c l r n r cl l o n t . . .
I ) a s t o rl ) a u li s a . . .
I I c c o n r c so u t l i o n r . . .
I ' o s t o rI ) a u li s 1 ' o u n g . .
. . . a b c l l yi s . . .
. , . h c t l s o \ \ ' c i l r. . .
2 . I I c c o r n c so u l l i o n r . . ,
i . . . . i s v c r v i i r ta n d l o o k s
YCrYCUte.
l ) a s t o ll ) a L r\l\ ' a s\ o u n g . . .
... u bcllr rilis...
. . . n c l l t s o\ \ ( r [ c . . .
2. l lc cunrc lltrrr .. .
- 1 .. . . i s v c n ' l ' a t r n d l c r y
Ittnnr.
C o ni u n c ti o n
W or d c hoic e
and r v or d ord c r
crror
).r
1 . . , . h a sa c u r l a n db l a c k
lrtrr...
2 . . , . h a sa b h c k a n dd r r k
s k i n. . .
I . . . . h a sb l a c k c u r l ) h a i r .
I . ... hascurlandbl ackhai r.
2 . . . . h l s d a r kc o l n p l c r i o r r .
2 . . . . h a sb l a c ka n dd a r k
skin.
A s s i g n r n e n2t
l\1ista kcs
Kinds of crrors
Corrcction
Il,evision
A gr c c m ent
"
l . l ' h c r a b b i th a , e
2 . l t a l s oh a v c. . .
l . ]-hcrabbi hrs
t
2 . I t a l s oh r s . . .
A r t ic lc s and
Dc t er m inc rs
l . . . . i s s r n a lbl o x. . .
2.... isllip.
l . O n t h et o po f -. . .
4 . . . . i s b i gr a b b i t .
r, d s mrl l
5 . ..., n l o u tl 'rn
l ]o s c .
(r.... n ro L rs ta cal n
rcdb i c
b rl l r ' .
7 .O n t h ct o po l . . .
S . . . .s n r : rhl lo l c . . .
l . . . . i s a s r n a l bl o x . . .
2 . , . .i sa I l r p .
3 . O n t o po f . . .
4 . . .. i s a b i g r a b b i t .
5 . . . . . a n t o u t h a. n da s m a l l
t'tosc.
6 . . . . s i x r r h i s k c r sa. n da b i g
i r cl l \ .
7 . O r rt o po 1 . . .
S
l r s n r : r Il 'l L r l c . . .
L Thc rabbi thavc..
l . I t a l s oh a d. . .
1 . . . .i s s r r a lbl o x. . .
2 . . . .i s l i i p .
l.Ontopof...
4 . . . . i s b i gr a b b i t .
andsrnal l
5. ..., n' routh.
nosc.
6. .. . nroustachc
andbi g
bclll.
T.Ontopol'...
8 . . . . sn r rl l h o J c . . .
I
l
l ut c l i r u l h o l c s . . .
( ) r r rt ( ) o t l t b f L l S h c-S
I
l
slrort lccs too,
J
C on r p ar i s o ns
Content
Nouns
I
I
l
l u c l o L rl r o l c . . .
O t r Il o o t h b | u s l r
shorl lce |'00.
P ar a g r a D h i n g
Prcpositions
Punctuation
Scntcncc
Vcrbs
L . .. ir'rthc l]olton]
2 . . . . t o k c c po r r r. . .
'l'he
l.
f ) i pu a s. . .
I T h cl l i p i s . ..
'l'he
s...
2.
ra b b i rr,a
t
2 Thcrabbi ti s ...
-fhc
i.
rabbitrYaslooked. . .
Thc rabbi ltooks...
.1 .... n ra d cl i o n rh a rdp l asti c J ... madcol 'hardpl l sti c
I
1
l l c l i r u rh o l c s. . .
0 u r t o o l l l l ) f u s h c,s
s l t o r tl c i t st o o ,
. at tlrc bott0nr .
. lbr kccpour ...
l . 1 ' h el l i p i s . . .
2. Thc rabbi its . ..
i . Thc rabbi ti s l ookcd....
4. ... ntadcl i onrhardpl astic
r9
C o ni u n c ti o n
W or d c hoic c
and wor d or d c r
er r o r
3.3
5 . . . . n r a d cl l o n rh r r d p l u s t i c 5 . . . . r r u r l co l ' h u r dp l a s t i c
) . . . . n r a d cl i u n r h l r d
| . ... moustache
andbig
ballY.
l . . . m o u s t a c h ca n d b i g
bcllv.
| . . . . s i x r v h i s k c r sa n d a b i g
bcllt.
plastic
Assignnrent
3
Kinds of crrors
Agrcemcnt
A r t ic lc s and
Dc t er m iner s
Co r nD: r is on s
Contcnt
I\Iistakcs
I . . . . a s i n g l eb c d . . .
2. . .. a bluebcdcovcr ...
3 . . . . a n da c h a i r . . .
. 1 .. . . l i s t c nt o n t u s i c. . .
, 5 .. . . I b i q n r i tr o r .
6 . . . . a b i gl ' u n . . .
7 . . . . a b i g r v a r d r o b ,c. .
l i . . . . a n r la t r l ' l c l a n r n
l . . . . a s i n g l eb e d . . .
2 . . . . a b l u eb e d c o v e r.
3 . . . . a n dc h a i r. . .
. 1 .. . . h c a rn t u s i c. . .
5. ... a bigmirror.
6 . . . . a b i g l ' a n. . .
7 . . . . a b i g c u p b o a r d. .
l l . l ) c l c t c t hi s
L . . . a n dl l r cc o l o ri s u l t i t c .
L . . . a n d t h c c ( ) l o ro l ' t i r c
r r u l l si s r t h i t c .
l. ... innrroun housc....
. 1 . I l r el o o n t h l s a r r o o d c r ' r
, - l o r ,ar n d b c s i d ct h c d o o r . . .
L . . . a n d t h c c o l o ro l ' t l r c
r l l l l i s r r l ti t c .
1 . . . . i n n r r o r v nh o u s e . . , .
l . l l c l i r r c I c nt c r n r r ,
bcdroont. I c:in scc a door
t h a t i s u t e d co l ' r v o o d .
I l c s i d et h c d o o r . . .
. 1 .I ) c l c t c r hi s
. 1 .. . . t h c s n t i l l o n c .t h c b l r
o n ea n 0 . . .
p u t c ur t a l n
I . ... b c l o rvth crv i n d o u
2 . I n t h cl c l i . . .
3 . ...n 1 b o o k si n th c re .
4 . . . . i n t h cr i g h t. . .
5 . I n t h cr i g h t. . .
6 . I n t h cl c l i . . ,
/ . l n U ) cf l l ] h l . _ .
8. ... all oimr
Irunctuatiorr
Scntence
\ / er bs
C r i n j t tn c l i r , n
\ V or d c ho icc
and \ r , or d ord c r
crror
Ilcvision
l . . . . s i n g l eb c d . . .
2 . . . . b l u e b a dc o v c r
l . . . . a n dc h l i r '. . .
4 . . . . h c a rt h c n r u s l c
5 . . . . b i g n ri r r o r .
6 . . .. b i g l e n . . .
7 . . . . b i g c L r l b o u r .d
8 . . . . a n cliu n r n. . .
2. ,..in nrrhousc....
i . l ' h c r ci s u d o o r i s n r a d co l '
r r o o c ib c s i d ct h c ( l o o r . . .
Nouns
P ar agr aphin g
P r epos it ion s
Corrcction
clorhcs.
l . . . . t h e s n r a lol n e .t h c b i g
o n ca n d . ..
L . . . c a r ru s c l i r r s l L r d r
| , l l ' I c n l c rn r l b c d l o o r nI.
c a nl l n c . . .
l . . . . L r s cl i , r s' t r r r . i r .
l . . , . s r ' ti t o l l n t r s c l l .
2 . . . . t o c l o s ct h t l \ \ i n ( l o \ \ s .
l . . . . I c a nl l n c . . .
4 . . . . h ! - a rt h c t l t u s i c. . .
5 . , . . n r rb c d l i x r n . . .
- 1 .. . . t h c s n r a l al n db i g o n c s
o n t h c c e i l i n ca n d . . .
l . . . . p u tc u r t a l i r l s
I ... oltlt.
O n t h cl c l i . . .
J
. . . m v b o o k st h c r e .
4 . .. on the right ...
5 O n t h er i g h t. . .
6 O n t h el c l i . . .
7 O n t h cr i t h t . . .
. . . a l l m Vc l o t h c s .
| . . . . t h c s m a l la n db i g o n c s
0 n t h cc c i l i n i a
t n d- . .
2
u s cl b r s t u d v i n c .
\ \ ' h c n I c n t c rn t y
l r c d r c r t r l .I c a n s e c . . .
. . . L r s c\ \ h c n s t u d ) , i n g .
l . . . . d c c r t r a lict n t v s e L l ' .
l . . . . t o c o r c r t h a t\ \ i n d o \ \ ' s
i . . . , I c a ns c c. . .
- 1 .. . . l i s t c nt o n t u s i c. . .
5 . . . . n t r b c d. . .
I. ... put cuftil;ns
I . Dcletethis
2. On thel cl i . . .
3. ... rnybooksi n there.
4 . . . . o n t h cr i g h t. . .
5 . O n t h cr i g h t. . .
6 . O n t h cl c l t . . .
7 . I n t h er i g h t. . .
8. . .. my cl othcs.
l . D c l e t ct h i s
c a n uscl b r s t L r d l , i n g .
l . \\/hcn I cntcr nry
b c d r o o r l .I c a n s c c
2. D c l c t c t h i s
I . . . . d c c o r a ri ct b v m l s c l l .
l . . , . t o c o v c r t h a tr r i n d o r v s .
i . . . . l c a ns c c. . .
4 . . . . h c a rn r u s i c. . .
5. ,.. nry bedroom.
6 . . . . a s m a l l t a p cr c c o r d c r .
7 . . . . . y s n r l l l t a p er c c o r c l c r
8 . . . . t h a tc a n u s c t o l i c c p . . .
9 . I n t h e l e f r o l ' d o o r .t h e r ci s
a mirror.
I 0 . . . . t h a tc t n u s c k ) k c c p .. .
I l . I n r h er i g h ro l ' r h c
b o o k c a s ct h c r c i s b i g
cupboardlltat ciin usc to
k c c pa l l o l ' n r v c l o t h c s .
1 2 . . . . t h a tc a n u s c l b r s t u d r . .
. . . a s n t a l lc a s s e t t e
plaver.
. . . n 'Y
t sntallctssctte
plavsl...
. . . t o k c c p. . .
Nlo\ c it bct\\'censen(ence
on linc 4 and5:
I p u t c u r t a i n. . . r v i n d o r v s .
l l l c n t c r n t 1 . b c d r o o n t. . .
1 0 .. . . r o k c c p. . . .
I I . N l o v c i t b c t r rc e n
s c n t c n coc n l i n c 9 a n d l 0 :
I l u t a l l . . . t h c r c ,I l c l i r r c I
s l c c p. . . r c c o r d c r .
1 2 .. . . t h a tI u s ct h c n
s t L l uv l n
6.... a smalltlpc.
7 . . . . r ) , s m r l l t a p e. . . .
8 . . . . t o k e c p. . .
9 . l ) o e s n ' tm o v c i t .
1 0 . . . .t o k c c p. . .
I l . N l o v ci t
1 2 .D e l c r ct hi s
A s si g n n t e n4t
K i n d so f c r r o r s
Agrcenlcnt
l \ t i st r l i c s
Corrcclion
l. I'hcbiggcsL
anli*,,l liia. j r. r t,..f,1g,