4. Editing
Check for style and accuracy, and prepare a final copy.
Reflection
Do we have ever written our biographical narrative writing? Now is your time to try.  Please try to write our biographical narrative writing,
or biographical narrative one of your family.
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Module 5 Students Practice Narrative Writing
Induction
Lecturer   gives   some   examples   of   narrative   writing   to   the   students. Students read individually for about ten minutes. After this activity, the
students discuss the examples in order to understand the examples. Lecturer asks to the student about 1 what is the title of the writing,
2 what kinds forms of writing, 3 how many paragraph in the text of writing, 4 find out the topic sentence in every paragraph, etc.
Example
Henry’s Big Break
My great-grandfather, Henry A. Benson, is the most famous person in our family. He rose from delivering newspapers in his small hometown
of Cross Plains, Texas, to becoming   the editor  in chief  of one of  the biggest papers  in the
state.   He   tells   many   stories   about   his   days   as   a   reporter,   but   his favorite one takes place on a late spring afternoon in 1941. That’s the
day Great-granddad got his big break. Inside the offices of the
Center State Chronicle, 15-year-old Henry took a deep breath. The warm air of
the print room filled his lungs, and the smell of hot ink lingered in his nose. He stuffed his hands into the pockets of his worn-out jeans so the
paper’s editor, Mr. Walsh, wouldn’t see how nervous he felt.
“Mr.  Walsh,”  Henry   said, “I’ve  delivered  your  paper  for  three  years now. I’ve never missed one day. If you make me a reporter, I won’t let
you   down.”   “Henry,”   Mr.   Walsh   replied,   “there’s   a   big   difference between being a delivery boy and being a reporter. Maybe after you’ve
finished school.” Trying not to let his disappointment show, Henry left the newspaper office. What was he going to do? The paper route just
didn’t earn him enough money to help his mom. He got his battered bicycle  and  pedaled  across  town  toward  home.  Near  an old   bridge,
Henry saw skid marks on the pavement. Tire tracks showed where a car   had   recently   left   the   road.   Henry   spotted   a   sedan   lying   at   the
bottom of the ravine. Henry flagged down a passing car to fetch an ambulance. Then he scrambled down the ravine. The car’s right front
tire was shredded, which must have been why the car ran off the road. The driver lay slumped over the steering wheel. He was a middle-aged
man wearing a rumpled brown suit. A dark bruise marked the driver’s forehead.
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“Are you all right?” Henry asked the man. “ . . . Can’t move my right arm,” the driver mumbled. Henry opened the car door and took a look.
He tried not to let the man see how scared he felt. “It looks broken,” Henry said. “I’ll do what I can to help until the ambulance gets here.”
Henry tried to talk to the injured man to keep him awake, but the man passed out anyway. Henry understood the seriousness of the situation
and stayed with the man until an ambulance came. Only when the man was safely on his way to the hospital did it occur to Henry that the
accident was newsworthy. Maybe this was the story that could make him a real reporter
He   raced   home   and   typed   up   an   account   of   the   accident.   Then   he pedaled as fast as he could back to the
Chronicle offices. Editor Walsh ran the story and began to realize that Henry had the right stuff to
become a reporter. In the years that followed, my great-grandfather learned   to   be   a   great   reporter.   Later,   he   became   one   of   the   most
respected   newspaper   editors   in   Texas.   No   matter   how   famous   he became, though, he always loved to tell about the day he got his big
break. His story still inspires me whenever I think about what kind of job I would really love.
Students write a narrative writing
Form of writing Title
Classmates who gives respond
Draft
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Reflection
This   is   the   end   of   our   narrative   writing   practice.     Enjoy   of   your practice. Please practice and practice, and we will success al last.
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Module 6 Expository Writing
Induction
In  this  module,  we  are  going  to  write  there  examples  of  expository writing:   1   comparison-contrast   essays,   2   how-to-essays,   and   3
informative essays. It is very important if every student can write one individual writing product for each example.
Comparison-contrast essays
Comparison-contrast   essays   show   the   similarities   and   differences between two subjects. This section includes step-by-step directions to
help guide your students as they create a comparison-contrast essay.
This  sample comparison-contrast essay  will help students understand the form.
You can print out these pages to share them with your students or direct them to the  Comparison-contrast Essay  section on the student
site.
1. Prewriting