PART A PART B PART A PART B PART A PART B PART A PART B PART A

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13.1 PART A

1. Evaluator: Clemens Portele, portele at interactive-instruments.de 2. Submission: 08-094 OGC SWE Common Data Model Encoding Standard

13.2 PART B

1. Requirement: General 2. Implementation Specification Section number: General 3. Criticality: Major 4. Commentsjustifications for changes: Not all URNs used in the document have been registered with the OGC NA. 14 Comment

14.1 PART A

1. Evaluator: Simon Cox, JRC 2. Submission: OGC 08-094 - SWE Common Data Model v2.0

14.2 PART B

1. Implementation Specification Section number: Clause 4 2. Criticality: Major 3. Commentsjustifications for changes: Several of the terms refer to definitions from other documents, but have altered the text compared with the original. I can see that in some cases additional clarification is intended, but it is inappropriate to merge this with the quoted definition, which should be preserved intact. Additional information should be clearly labelled as such, for example as a “NOTE: Additional information.” The following resources can be checked as well: http:www.isotc211.orgTerminology.htm Also look at Clause 4 in OM v2.0 10-004r1, which have been reviewed in detail by the terminology police, and provides examples of how to refer to both ISO and other sources. Copyright © 2010 Open Geospatial Consortium, Inc. All Rights Reserved. 7 15 Comment

15.1 PART A

1. Evaluator: Simon Cox, JRC 2. Submission: OGC 08-094 - SWE Common Data Model v2.0

15.2 PART B

1. Implementation Specification Section number: Clause 8.1.1. basic_types.xsd 2. Criticality: Major 3. Commentsjustifications for changes: The schema uses a new abstract base type AbstractSWEType in place of similar GML types. No explanation is provided for why this was necessary. The one significant difference is the extension element. However, this could be appended to the GML content model with no change in functionality. 16 Comment

16.1 PART A

1. Evaluator: Simon Cox, JRC 2. Submission: OGC 08-094 - SWE Common Data Model v2.0

16.2 PART B

1. Implementation Specification Section number: Clause 7.4 Figure 7.29 block_components.xsd 2. Criticality: Minor 3. Commentsjustifications for changes: Matrix|DataArray::elementCount:Count and XML elementCount is type=swe:CountPropertyType. The role of these uses of Count is trivial compared to the qualified and identified values that the Count class was created for. Suggest simplification to xs:nonNegativeInteger or similar? 17 Comment

17.1 PART A

1. Evaluator: Simon Cox, JRC 2. Submission: OGC 08-094 - SWE Common Data Model v2.0 8 Copyright © 2010 Open Geospatial Consortium, Inc. All Rights Reserved.

17.2 PART B