Error Analysis for Writing 2
ERROR ANALYSIS A
Paragraph 1
Studying English is interesting. We can study English not only from books but also
the other media. We can develop our skill of English language by listening to musics,
watching movies, playing vocabulary games in computer, etc. There is no pressure because of
studying English. We don’t really need the complicated formulas like science, there are no
“numbers” like Math, and there aren’t many theories we have to remember like social study.
Language is not all about how you learn it, but all about how you use it. So, if we capable to
use it well, that is good point. Moreover, if we master to use the language, the point will be
the “four thumbs”. And, of course, studying English won’t make you blade whose the science
professors. Just kidding. Therefore, studying English language is possible to make we “blade’
because we don’t have any creative strategies. I have told you about listening music and
watching movie. Both of them are two of many creative strategies. They are interesting ways
to studying English because we can studying while we enjoy the music or movie. Basically,
we just find our fun to studying English, than we realize that studying English is absolutely
interesting.
Paragraph 2
I think studying English is interesting. As we know English language is the major in getting
job. That’s why I choose the English program in my study. I feel enjoy with my study
because I like English so much. In English program we are able to know more and detail
about the language, how and when it used. It contains several things, like linguistics,
structure, writing, listening, Reading, etc. Followed by that maybe we can master it well.
Paragraph 3
Being a university student isn’t easy. First, before we entered to the university we should
followed the test from the university. It is not an easy test. Sometimes we didn’t pass the test
from the university. After we can received to the university, we had difficulty to adaptation
with the campus or our new friend. It can makes down our spirit to study. Not only it, also we
had problems from our lecture’s duty. Some lecturers always give a lot of tasks that can make
the students don’t come to the campus because of the tasks. So, if we want to get success in
our university, we should study hard everyday.
ERROR ANALYSIS B
Paragraph 1
I love English language so much, there are some reasons so I like it. For me, English is an
interesting language. In this globalitation era, English becomes a world language so all of
people in the world should learn it. When I started to study English in the elementary school,
I thought that I must can speak English well. Now, I am studying English in Yogyakarta State
University. I choose English programe, because I want to be English teacher. The other
reason is English is a one of requirement of looking for a job. If we can speak English well, I
think there are many opportunities to get a job. In Indonesia, the students in every school
have studied English language, it is a good way in order to the people in Indonesia can follow
the advantages of this world.
Paragraph 2
Ketep located at the North of Sleman. I just go there when I and my friends have a picnic to
Ketep. It’s the first moment we have a picnic together. We also bring some food to eat at
Ketep. The road is tracking so we can’t to speed. Before we until Ketep the air are so cool
and clean, and when until Ketep the situation become breezy. It’s so exciting. At there, we
can see the scenery of Merapi volcano and Merbabu volcano. Unfortunately we can’t see the
peak of Merapi because fog are around the volcano. There was a diorama that we can to
know about Merapi activities. It’s so spooky. After take a look we go to the upstair and take
lunch together some of my friends buy cornburn at Ketep. Many tree’s like pinus, out there.
Before we go home we take some picture because we will never know are we can to Ketep
anymore. So it’s for our documentation. Ketep the place that I’ll never forget.
Having Small Family Guarantee Happy Life
Everyone must be having family, neither it’s small family nor big family. Actually,
they have their own thought on having small family or the big one could guarantee
happy life. Some people realize that having a small family is better than having a
big family. First, one of the most important things to get happiness is love and
affection. Children who live in small family receive more love and affection from
their parents because it is easier for parents can look after their children after leaving
from work. Therefore, parents and children don’t feel ignored. Second, having small
family has lower stress level because there are less conflicts and rivalry. Third, money
is not everything in life but money is important for our life. Small family will have
more money than the big one. The living cost for a small family is much lesser
than the living cost for a big one. Imagine, if you have many children, it’s not easy
to manage financial.
In the other hand, there are some people tend to have a big family because they think
that is a good thing to be having big family. First, you will never feel lonely since
there are someone such as brothers, sisters, and other relatives who accompanying you
to hang around, to play or do something, and a lot of things to share together and
learn some good values about sharing and being patient. Second, you have a joyful
and social life. Being together and spent lots of joyful moments, that are such a
special moment which is able to look back as you get older and think of all good
times you had with your siblings and parents as well. Family is one source of happiness
in life.
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Paragraph 1
Studying English is interesting. We can study English not only from books but also
the other media. We can develop our skill of English language by listening to musics,
watching movies, playing vocabulary games in computer, etc. There is no pressure because of
studying English. We don’t really need the complicated formulas like science, there are no
“numbers” like Math, and there aren’t many theories we have to remember like social study.
Language is not all about how you learn it, but all about how you use it. So, if we capable to
use it well, that is good point. Moreover, if we master to use the language, the point will be
the “four thumbs”. And, of course, studying English won’t make you blade whose the science
professors. Just kidding. Therefore, studying English language is possible to make we “blade’
because we don’t have any creative strategies. I have told you about listening music and
watching movie. Both of them are two of many creative strategies. They are interesting ways
to studying English because we can studying while we enjoy the music or movie. Basically,
we just find our fun to studying English, than we realize that studying English is absolutely
interesting.
Paragraph 2
I think studying English is interesting. As we know English language is the major in getting
job. That’s why I choose the English program in my study. I feel enjoy with my study
because I like English so much. In English program we are able to know more and detail
about the language, how and when it used. It contains several things, like linguistics,
structure, writing, listening, Reading, etc. Followed by that maybe we can master it well.
Paragraph 3
Being a university student isn’t easy. First, before we entered to the university we should
followed the test from the university. It is not an easy test. Sometimes we didn’t pass the test
from the university. After we can received to the university, we had difficulty to adaptation
with the campus or our new friend. It can makes down our spirit to study. Not only it, also we
had problems from our lecture’s duty. Some lecturers always give a lot of tasks that can make
the students don’t come to the campus because of the tasks. So, if we want to get success in
our university, we should study hard everyday.
ERROR ANALYSIS B
Paragraph 1
I love English language so much, there are some reasons so I like it. For me, English is an
interesting language. In this globalitation era, English becomes a world language so all of
people in the world should learn it. When I started to study English in the elementary school,
I thought that I must can speak English well. Now, I am studying English in Yogyakarta State
University. I choose English programe, because I want to be English teacher. The other
reason is English is a one of requirement of looking for a job. If we can speak English well, I
think there are many opportunities to get a job. In Indonesia, the students in every school
have studied English language, it is a good way in order to the people in Indonesia can follow
the advantages of this world.
Paragraph 2
Ketep located at the North of Sleman. I just go there when I and my friends have a picnic to
Ketep. It’s the first moment we have a picnic together. We also bring some food to eat at
Ketep. The road is tracking so we can’t to speed. Before we until Ketep the air are so cool
and clean, and when until Ketep the situation become breezy. It’s so exciting. At there, we
can see the scenery of Merapi volcano and Merbabu volcano. Unfortunately we can’t see the
peak of Merapi because fog are around the volcano. There was a diorama that we can to
know about Merapi activities. It’s so spooky. After take a look we go to the upstair and take
lunch together some of my friends buy cornburn at Ketep. Many tree’s like pinus, out there.
Before we go home we take some picture because we will never know are we can to Ketep
anymore. So it’s for our documentation. Ketep the place that I’ll never forget.
Having Small Family Guarantee Happy Life
Everyone must be having family, neither it’s small family nor big family. Actually,
they have their own thought on having small family or the big one could guarantee
happy life. Some people realize that having a small family is better than having a
big family. First, one of the most important things to get happiness is love and
affection. Children who live in small family receive more love and affection from
their parents because it is easier for parents can look after their children after leaving
from work. Therefore, parents and children don’t feel ignored. Second, having small
family has lower stress level because there are less conflicts and rivalry. Third, money
is not everything in life but money is important for our life. Small family will have
more money than the big one. The living cost for a small family is much lesser
than the living cost for a big one. Imagine, if you have many children, it’s not easy
to manage financial.
In the other hand, there are some people tend to have a big family because they think
that is a good thing to be having big family. First, you will never feel lonely since
there are someone such as brothers, sisters, and other relatives who accompanying you
to hang around, to play or do something, and a lot of things to share together and
learn some good values about sharing and being patient. Second, you have a joyful
and social life. Being together and spent lots of joyful moments, that are such a
special moment which is able to look back as you get older and think of all good
times you had with your siblings and parents as well. Family is one source of happiness
in life.
.