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Session Explanation
11 A. Study the follow ing text and its schematic structure.
Schematic Structure How a Spider’s Web Forms A spider web looks delicate but it is very
General strong. I t can hold 4000 times a spider’s
Statement w eight. But how does it form First the spider spins a thread of silk. The thread gets blown over to a branch by the w ind. Then she makes another tw o
Explanation: threads and makes a Y shape. Next she
Show s the makes more threads and they look like processes spokes off a wheel. Then the spider goes in a spiral, out and back in, sits in the middle and w aits for food.
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B. Study the follow ing text and its linguistic features. How a Spider’s Web Forms Generalized non-human
A spider w eb looks delicate but it participant is very strong. I t can hold 4000 times a spider’s weight. But how
Present Tense does it form?
Action verb First the spider spins a thread of
Conjunctive silk. The thread gets blown over to relation a branch by the wind. Then she
Action verb makes another tw o threads and
Conjunctive makes a Y shape. Next she makes relation more threads and they look like
Conjunctive relation spokes off a wheel. Then the spider goes in a spiral, out and
Simple Present/ Action back in, sits in the middle and
Verb waits for food. Passive voice This is how a web is formed. w ww.tki.org.nz/ r/ assessment/ ex emplars/ eng Session Discussion
12 A. Study the follow ing text and its schematic structure.
Schematic
Boxing
Structure
By Kerry Williams
There was a lot of discussion about whether I ssue boxing should be banned.
The people who agree with this idea, such as Sarah, claim that if they do carry on boxing they should wear something to protect their heads. They
Argument also argue that people who do boxing could have against brain damage and get seriously hurt. A further point they make is that most of the people that have died did have families.
However, there are also strong arguments against this point of view. Another group of people believe that boxing should not be banned. They say
Argument that why they invent it if it is a dangerous sport. for They say that boxing is a good sport, people enjoy it. A furthermore reason is if they ban boxing it will ruin people’s careers.
After looking at the different points of view and the evidence for them I think boxing should be
Conclusion
banned because five hundred people have died in boxing since 1884.
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B. Study the follow ing text and its linguistic features. Linguistic Features
Boxing
Generic
By Kerry Williams
humanThere was a lot of discussion about whether participant boxing should be banned.
The people who agree with this idea, such as Generic non-human
Sarah, claim that if they do carry on boxing they participant should wear something to protect their heads. They also argue that people who do boxing could have modality brain damage and get seriously hurt. A further point they make is that most of the people that
Being verb have died did have families.
However, there are also strong arguments Conjunctive against this point of view. Another group of people relation believe that boxing should not be banned. They say that why they invent it if it is a dangerous sport.
Mental verb They say that boxing is a good sport, people enjoy it. A furthermore reason is if they ban boxing it will ruin people’s careers.
Saying verb After looking at the different points of view and the evidence for them I think boxing should be
Conjunctive banned because five hundred people have died in relation boxing since 1884. modality Mental verb
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Review
13 A. Study the follow ing text and its schematic structure.
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets
By J.K. Row ling
Orientation: I ntroduces Review ed by Emily Kremer the w ork
The book takes place in modern times, in England. The elements. main character is Harry Potter. Harry Potter is a w izard. He goes to a school for w itches and w izards, called Hogwart s. I t is Harry’s second year at Hogw arts and he and his tw o best friends, Hermione Granger and Ron Weasley are having a great time learning magic. There is a new professor, Gilderoy
I nterpretati
Lockhart w ho all the w itches are crazy about! Professor
ve Recount:
Lockhart keeps nagging Harry, because the professor thinks
Sets plot
that Harry tries to get attention to be famous! While all the
of the
w itches at school love the new professor, all of the w izards
story:
1. Opening
think he is a big joke!
2. Climax
After a month of school at Hogw arts, st range att acks begin to happen. First, the caret aker’s cat, Mrs. Norris, has been found, not dead, but petrified! Not only w as Filch’s cat att acked, but some of the Muggle- born students at Hogwart s have been found petrified, also. Naturally, all of the students are frightened at this, but they become even more scared w hen the
Resolution: The w riter
next victim to be found petrified is the Gryffindor ghost, Nearly
draw s a
Headless Nick!
questioning
What kind of monster is pow erful enough to kill someone
of the st ory
w ho is already dead? Who will be the next victim of the monst er ending. at Hogw art s? Will the victims ever be revived? To find out you must read Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secret s! I have to say that the story w as bright, fast- paced, intriguing, and
Evaluative ultimat ely satisfying. Summation:
I like this book because it kept me wanting to read next
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t he w rit er page, and the next, and so on. The book is definitely a page-
‘s opinionsturner! I recommend this book to nine years old and over.
or criticism.
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B. Study the follow ing text and its linguistic features. Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets By J.K. Row ling
Specific
Review ed by Emily Kremer
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