BAHASA INGGRIS II OPENCOURSEWARE UNIVERSITAS PEMBANGUNAN JAYA 09
MALL or PARK?
Meeting 3
Which one do we need?
This one?
Or this one?
Let’s discuss the homework...
http://en.tempo.co/read/news/2013/09/19/
080514860/No-More-Building-Malls-in-Jakarta
http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2011/
03/21/why-jakarta-needs-more-wellplanned-city-parks.html
Let’s paraphrase the article
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Read the article about “Malls” again 3-2
Mall.doc (see pages 3-4)
Read paragraph 1.
Underline the most important sentence in
paragraph 1.
Paraphrase that sentence in the right margin.
Remember: to paraphrase = to write with your
own words.
Do steps 2-4 for the rest of paragraphs.
A SUMMARY
It
is a short version of a larger writing
(article, chapter, book, etc.)
A summary consists of only the original
author’s opinion, NOT OUR OPINION.
Let’s write a summary
Based
on your notes on the right margin,
write down a short summary (+/- 100
words) about the article titled “No More
Building Malls in Jakarta”.
Remember:
Always refer to your notes,
not the original text to avoid the
tendency to plagiarize.
Let’s paraphrase the other article
1.
2.
Read the article about “Parks” again 3-3 Park.doc
On your notebook, make a table of the positive and
negative effects of malls. Remember to paraphrase.
Positive or negative?
Who says that?
Positive effects:
1.
2.
3.
Positive effects:
1.
2.
3.
Negative effects:
1.
2.
3.
Negative effects:
1.
2.
3.
Discussion time...
Form
small groups of 3 students.
Discuss whether we need (more) MALLS or PARKS.
Use discussion skills. Select the Chairman, Secretary,
and Members.
Present the group’s opinion to the class.
Note: The following slide might be useful.
What we think about “malls & parks”
MALLS
PARKS
Positive:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Positive:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Negative:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Negative:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Essay writing
Definition:
An academic writing that consists of more
than 1 paragraphs.
http://www.arts.uwaterloo.ca/~tjconnol/essaystructu
re.htm
Writing time...
Write
an essay of the following topic: “Do we need
malls or parks?
Write 3 paragraphs:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Paragraph 1: The situation in Jakarta & how you feel
about it.
Paragraph 2: Malls, its positive and negative effects
Paragraph 3: Parks, its positive and negative effects
Paragraph 4: Your decision: Do we need malls or
parks? More malls or more parks?
Peer review & Revision
1.
2.
Exchange your writing with a friend.
Read your friend’s writing. Underline:
Your favorite sentence(s).
A sentence(s) that you do not really understand.
Sentences that need appropriate punctuation marks:
Capital
letter
Fullstops
Commas
etc.
3.
4.
Return the paper to the owner.
Revise your writing when necessary.
Homework
On
your notebook, answer the following questions
about our public transportaion:
1. Do you use public transport?
2. What do you think about our public
transportation?
3. Do you think it is convenience?
4. What problems do we have?
Submit
next meeting.
Meeting 3
Which one do we need?
This one?
Or this one?
Let’s discuss the homework...
http://en.tempo.co/read/news/2013/09/19/
080514860/No-More-Building-Malls-in-Jakarta
http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2011/
03/21/why-jakarta-needs-more-wellplanned-city-parks.html
Let’s paraphrase the article
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Read the article about “Malls” again 3-2
Mall.doc (see pages 3-4)
Read paragraph 1.
Underline the most important sentence in
paragraph 1.
Paraphrase that sentence in the right margin.
Remember: to paraphrase = to write with your
own words.
Do steps 2-4 for the rest of paragraphs.
A SUMMARY
It
is a short version of a larger writing
(article, chapter, book, etc.)
A summary consists of only the original
author’s opinion, NOT OUR OPINION.
Let’s write a summary
Based
on your notes on the right margin,
write down a short summary (+/- 100
words) about the article titled “No More
Building Malls in Jakarta”.
Remember:
Always refer to your notes,
not the original text to avoid the
tendency to plagiarize.
Let’s paraphrase the other article
1.
2.
Read the article about “Parks” again 3-3 Park.doc
On your notebook, make a table of the positive and
negative effects of malls. Remember to paraphrase.
Positive or negative?
Who says that?
Positive effects:
1.
2.
3.
Positive effects:
1.
2.
3.
Negative effects:
1.
2.
3.
Negative effects:
1.
2.
3.
Discussion time...
Form
small groups of 3 students.
Discuss whether we need (more) MALLS or PARKS.
Use discussion skills. Select the Chairman, Secretary,
and Members.
Present the group’s opinion to the class.
Note: The following slide might be useful.
What we think about “malls & parks”
MALLS
PARKS
Positive:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Positive:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Negative:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Negative:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
Essay writing
Definition:
An academic writing that consists of more
than 1 paragraphs.
http://www.arts.uwaterloo.ca/~tjconnol/essaystructu
re.htm
Writing time...
Write
an essay of the following topic: “Do we need
malls or parks?
Write 3 paragraphs:
1.
2.
3.
4.
Paragraph 1: The situation in Jakarta & how you feel
about it.
Paragraph 2: Malls, its positive and negative effects
Paragraph 3: Parks, its positive and negative effects
Paragraph 4: Your decision: Do we need malls or
parks? More malls or more parks?
Peer review & Revision
1.
2.
Exchange your writing with a friend.
Read your friend’s writing. Underline:
Your favorite sentence(s).
A sentence(s) that you do not really understand.
Sentences that need appropriate punctuation marks:
Capital
letter
Fullstops
Commas
etc.
3.
4.
Return the paper to the owner.
Revise your writing when necessary.
Homework
On
your notebook, answer the following questions
about our public transportaion:
1. Do you use public transport?
2. What do you think about our public
transportation?
3. Do you think it is convenience?
4. What problems do we have?
Submit
next meeting.