Table 4.6 The Classification of the Students’ Writing Achievement in Cycle 2 No. The Students’
Name in Initials
Score Interval in Its Classification
Excellent 85-100
Good 75-84
Fair 60-74
Poor 40-59
Failed 0-39
1. ASH
78 2.
ARDP 86
3. AGP
84 4.
BSD 86
5. CDR
86 6.
DRK 84
7. DA
86 8.
EYP 90
9. GRA
82 10. HYK
88 11. MRD
82 12. ML
84 13. MR
64 14. MES
76 15. MIS
88 16. MMS
78 17. NUP
86 18. NEN
88 19. RI
76 20. RPP
66 21. SHR
76 22. SM
82 23. SR
56 24. UH
- -
- -
- 25
YNR 80
Frequency 9
12 2
1 Percentage
37.5 50
8.3 4.16
Based on table 4.6 above, the result showed that there were only 9 students or 37.5 of 24 students who got scores in the range 85-100 which were classified
as excellent. Then, there were 12 students or 50 of 24 students who got scores in the range of 75-84 which were classified as good. Next, there were 2 students or
8.3 of 24 students who got scores in the range of 60-74 who were classified as fair. Then, there was 1 student or 4.16 of 24 students who got scores in the
range of 40-59 who were classified as poor. Finally, there were 0 students or 0 of 24 students who got scores in the range of 0-39 who were classified as failed.
Based on the data above, there were 21 students or 87.5 of the total students who got scores 75 or more. It means that the results of writing test
achieved the standard percentage requirement of the research that was 75 of total students got score 75 or more. In addition, the mean score of cycle 2 was
80.5. 4.2.3
The Result of Reflection in Cycle 2
The reflection was done after getting the results of observation and writing test in Cycle 2. The result of reflection in this cycle showed the improvement of
the students’ active participation in the writing class by using individual pictures. In the first meeting, there were 20 students or 83.33 of 24 students who were
actively participated in teaching learning process of writing by using individual pictures. In the second meeting, there were 22 students or 91.66 of 24 students
who were actively participated in the writing class. So, in general their active participation in cycle 2 was 87.49. It means that the target requirement of the
students’ participation in the teaching learning process of writing descriptive text by using individual pictures was achieved in the second cycle.
Then, the results of the writing test in Cycle 2 showed that there were 21 students or 87.5 of the students who got scores ≥ 75. The results achieved the
standard score requirement that was 75 of the total students got scores 75 or more. In addition, the mean score of the writing test was 80.5.
Based on the result of observation and the writing achievement test in Cycle 2, it could be concluded that teaching writing by using individual pictures
could improve the students’ active participation and achievement in writing descriptive text. The students were easier to make descriptive text because they
could see and observe the object directly, so they did not need to imagine the object. Besides, the students’ writing achievement reached the standard score
requirement since the results of the students’ writing achievement had achieved the standard score requirement. In other words, the actions in Cycle 2 successfully
improved the students’ active participation and their writing achievement. That is why, the actions were stopped.
4.3 Discussion