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4. ANALYSIS Data 1.WHEN I DIE
When I die 1 Let me lie 2
For a time in my bed.3 My body may be died,4
But my spirit is alive 5 Time enough when one is ready 6
To let go,7 When one will know 8
The short journey out 9 Will be tomorrow or so 10
So take comfort, heart of mine, 11 Our spirits cannot be parted, 12
For each is a part of the divined 13
The result of the analysis lyrics of this poem, the style of language is found in data 1 line 1-3,4-5, and 11-12. In line 1-3 is used a Redudancy
pleonasme style,Redundancy refers to the use of language that can be eliminated without incurring a loss of meaning. Redundancy or tautology is the adding of
words or phrases that add nothing to the overall meaning because their senses have already been expressed.Because in line 1,2 and 3 “when i die, let me lie, for
a time in my bed” it means when she die, let she lie for a time in her bed, that explain the meaning of the second word by the first word and showed a demand.
In line 4-5 that used style of language is a paradox, the term Paradox is from the Greek word “paradoxon” that means contrary to expectations, existing
belief or perceived opinion. It is a statement that appears to be self-contradictory or silly but may include a latent truth. It is also used to illustrate an opinion or
statement contrary to accepted traditional ideas. A paradox is often used to make a
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reader think over an idea in innovative way. Because in line 4-5 “My body maybe died, but my spirit is alive”it means she died, but her spirit not, itshows a conflict
and contrast. In line 11-12 ”So take comfort, heart of mine, our spirits cannot be parted”is used a Polisidenton style, because in line 11-12 showed effortto delivery
something by using conjunctions repeatedly . Based on sentence structure, line 1-5 is used a climax style, Climax is a structural
part of a plot and is at times referred to as a crisis. It is a decisive moment or a turning point in a storyline at which the rising action turns around into a falling
action. Thus, a climax is the point at which a conflict or crisis reaches its peak that calls for a resolution or denouement conclusion. Because in line 1,2,3,4, and 5
“when I die, let me lie, for a time in my bed, my body maybe died, but my spirit is alive” that showsomething that sequence increasingly peaked.
Data 2. FROM MY BED
How beautiful you are,1 How exquisite,2
How divine 3 You are single,4
Unattached 5 And, what is more,6
You are mine 7 Your scent is beyond parfume, 8
It makes my sense reel, 9 Your touch like velvet, 10
Your colour passionate, 11 Yet serene you stand in cool clear water, 12
Crystal supports your pose: 13 And this is how it should be 14
For the most perfect, perfect rose 15
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The result of the analysis lyrics of this poem, the style of language is useddata 2in line 1-3,5-7,8-9,10 and 13. In line 1-3 is used a Repetition style,
Repetition is a literary device that repeats the same words or phrases a few times to make an idea clearer. There are several types of repetitions commonly used in
both prose and poetry. As a rhetorical device, it could be a word, a phrase or a full sentence or a poetical line repeated to emphasize its significance in the entire text.
Repetition is not distinguished solely as a figure of speech but more as a rhetorical device. Because in line 1,2 and 3 “how beautiful, how exquisite, how divine” it
used a repetition of words “how”. In line 5,6 and 7 “unattached, and, what is more, you are mine” it shows a contradiction,that is means line 5,6 and 7 used
Apofasis style, because in line 5,6 and 7 “Unttached, and what is more, you are mine” it showsthe writer wanted taunt but actually praised.
In line 8-9 “Your scent is beyond parfume, It makes my sense reel” it means his beyond parfume make her sense reel, it is used a Sarcasm style,Sarcasm
is derived from French word sarcasm and also from a Greek word sarkazein that means “tear flesh” or “grind the teeth”. Somehow, in simple words it means to
speak bitterly. Generally, the literal meaning is different than what the speaker intends to say through sarcasm. Sarcasm is a literary and rhetorical device that is
meant to mock with often satirical or ironic remarks with a purpose to amuse and hurt someone or some section of society simultaneously.Because in line 8-9 there
is show a mockery, affront “parfume make sense reel”. In line 10 “Your touch like velvet” is used a Simile style, Simile is a figure
of speech that makes a comparison, showing similarities between two different
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things. Unlike a metaphor, a simile draws resemblance with the help of the words “like” or “as”. Therefore, it is a direct comparison.Because it is marked with the
word “like”, it shows a parable “like velvet” it means his touch like velvet. In line 13 “Crystal supports your pose” is used a Methapor, because “Crystal” is a figure
of speech, this sentence means something expensive or something that sparkle is supports your pose or your move.
Based on sentence structure, line 1-7 is used a Anticlimax style, The definition of Anticlimax is written or verbal communication which starts with a dignified or
meaningful idea, but takes a sudden turn into a commonplace, stupid or ridiculous idea. Because in line 1,2,3,5,4,6 and 7 “how beautiful, how exquisite, how divine,
you are single” it means how beautiful you are, how exquisite you are, how divine you are, BUT you are single, Unttached, and, what is more, you are mine” that
showed loss of quality, from top to bottom.
Data 3. JUST A SAYING
In childhood when the squabbles flare,1 And to the origin of the fight 2
There’s not a clue 3 Except the words 4
I’m not kind with you 5 And in youth, 6
When first love’s pain rips the breast, 7 Your best friend, 8
Who’s without a lad, 9 Tells the world with joy 10
That stems from her jealous core, 11 She’s not kind with him any more 12
The result of the analysis lyrics of this poems, the style of language is used in data 3 line 1, 7, 9-10. In line 1 “In childhood when the squabbles flare” is
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used a Hiperbola style, Hyperboles are exaggerations to create emphasis or effect. As a literary device, hyperbole is often used in poetry, and is frequently
encountered in casual speech.Many times the usage of hyperbole describes something as better or worse than it really is.An example of hyperbole is: The
bag weighed a ton. Hyperbole makes the point that the bag was very heavy, though it probably does not weigh a ton.“flare” it shows something too over,
excessisve, this sentence “when the squabbles FLARE” exaggerated the situation and condition.
In line 7 “When first love’s pain rips the breast” is also used a Hiperbola style, this sentence rips the breast because first loves pain. Same as line 1, “Rips
the breast” it shows something too over because first loves pain, exaggrated state of affairs and condition.
In line 9-10 “Who’s without a lad, Tells the world with joy” is used a Methapor,The definition of a metaphor is a word or phrase used to compare two
unlike objects, ideas, thoughts or feelings to provide a clearer description.This sentence means without a “man” who tells the world with joy, tells the world with
happiness. “ joy” is a figure of speech, to make sentence more poetic, “joy” it means happiness,fun, and pleasure.
Data 4. I Am Young
I am young, I am tall, 1 I am young, I am small, 2
I am young, I am pretty, 3 I am young, I am plain, 4
I am young, I can walk, 5 I am young, I am lame, 6
I am young, I am well, 7 I am young, I am ill, 8
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I am young, I am black, 9 I am young, I am white, 10
I am young, I can see, 11 I am young, I am blind 12
Whichever one of these I am, dear Lord, 13 I pray you, keep me kind 14
The result of the analysis lyrics of this poems, the style of language is used in data 4 in line 1-12. In line 1-12 “I am young, I am tall, I am young, I am small,
I am young, I am pretty, I am young, I am plain, I am young, I can walk, I am young, I am lame, I am young, I am well, I am young, I am ill, I am young, I am
black, I am young, I am white,I am young, I can see,I am young, I am blind” is used a Repetition style, because there is always used “I am” for the first and
middle sentence. Almost every physical type and what human can there is. And in line 13 and 14 “Whichever one of these I am, dear Lord, I pray you, keep me
kind” showed a demand, and gave a message to reader is no matter who we are, keep kind.
The four Catherine Cooksonpoems 1 WHEN I DIE
When I die Let me lie
For a time in my bed My body nay be died,
But my spirit is alive Time enought when one is ready
To let go, When one will know
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The short journey out Will be tomorrow or so
So take comfort, Heart of mine, Our spirits cannot be parted,
For each is a part of the divine
2 FROM MY BED
How beautiful you are, How exquisite,
How divine, You are single
Unattached And, what is more,
You are mine Your scent is beyond perfume,
It makes my sense reel, Your touch is like velvet,
Your colour passionare, Yet serene you stand in cool clear water,
Crystal supports your pose And this is how it should be
For the most perfect, perfect rose
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3 JUST A SAYING In childhood when the squabbles flare,
And to the origin of the fight There’s not a clue
Except the words I’m not kind with you
And in youth, When first loves pain rips the breast,
Your best friend, Who’s without a lad,
Tells stems from her jealous core, She’s not kind with him any more
And in the middle of marriage When hearts are sore
And the tie is about to snap, They say if him
Oh he’s not kind with her, She’s played him dirty
And he’s a decent chap But when in age,
And habits stales, And convertation is rare,
They say no more,
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She’s not kind with him, He’s not kind with her
Their lives, Like the ebb tide, run over the sand
What is left ? Only to be kind to him,
To be kind to her
4 I AM YOUNG
I am young, I am tall I am young, I am small
I am young, I am pretty I am young, I am plain
I am young, I can walk I am young, I am lame
I am young, I am well I am young, I am ill
I am young, I am black I am young, I am white
I am young, I can see I am young, I am blind
Whichever on for these i am, dear lord I pray you, keep me kind
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5. CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS 5.1
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