Fair Fair Poor Fair Good Fair Fair Fair Poor

analysis of the students writing tests and the result of the analysis of the students writing based on the five writing aspects are presented in the following sub- chapter. 4.3.1 The Result of the Analysis of the Students Descriptive Paragraph Writing The students writing test was scored by two scorers. The purpose of applying two scorers was to get the reliable data relating the students ability in writing a descriptive paragraph. The first scorer was the researcher and the second scorer was the English teacher of seventh grade students of SMP Negeri 10 Jember. Both the first and the second scorer scored the students descriptive paragraph writing based on the aspects of grammar, vocabulary, content, mechanic, and organization. The analysis of the students scores in writing descriptive paragraph was done by using the analytical scoring method. Then, the obtained scores were analyzed to know the students ability in writing descriptive paragraph of each aspect. The students writing scores which were given by the first scorer and the second scorer was described in Table 4.3. Table 4.3 The Students Writing Scores Given by Two Scorers No. G V M C O Score G V M C O Score Total Score Category 1. 19 19 17 18 14 87 20 18 17 17 15 88 87 Excellent 2. 17 10 12 13 12 64 18 12 10 12 13 65

64.5 Fair

3. 16 12 11 14 12 65 15 12 9 12 12 60 62.5 Fair 4. 20 19 16 20 14 88 22 18 17 17 13 88 88 Excellent 5. 17 11 12 11 12 63 16 12 11 12 11 62

62.5 Fair

6. 14 11 10 13 10 58 15 11 11 14 10 61

59.5 Poor

7. 18 18 14 10 13 73 17 17 15 10 12 71 72 Good 8. 16 14 9 12 12 63 17 16 10 13 10 66 64.5 Fair 9. 17 17 10 13 10 67 17 16 11 12 11 69 68 Fair 10. 16 11 9 11 12 59 18 10 10 12 12 62

60.5 Fair

11. 20 17 14 15 12 78 19 16 12 16 14 77

77.5 Good

12. 16 15 10 12 11 64 18 14 11 14 12 69

66.5 Fair

13. 14 10 8 11 8 52 15 9 10 11 7 52 52 Poor 14. 17 12 12 11 10 62 16 12 11 15 10 64 63 Fair Scorer 1 Scorer 2 No. G V M C O Score G V M C O Score Total Score Category 15. 16 9 10 12 10 57 14 10 12 13 8 57 57 Poor 16. 18 10 11 12 12 63 16 11 10 12 11 60 62 Fair 17. 17 12 12 11 10 62 18 10 12 11 10 61 61.5 Fair 18. 16 7 6 14 9 52 14 8 7 13 8 50 51 Poor 19. 18 16 15 17 14 80 19 15 14 18 12 78 79 Good 20. 17 12 12 13 12 66 19 10 11 12 11 63 64.5 Fair 21. 16 16 8 14 12 66 17 18 9 13 12 69

67.5 Fair

22. 18 9 8 12 8 55 16 8 8 12 9 53 54 Poor 23. 17 17 11 12 12 69 16 17 10 11 12 66

67.5 Fair

24. 15 15 14 15 12 71 17 14 15 13 14 73 72 Good 25. 17 12 12 14 10 65 18 12 12 15 12 69 67 Fair 26. 17 12 10 12 10 61 16 10 11 11 10 58

59.5 Poor

27. 14 10 9 14 8 55 15 10 10 14 10 59 57 Poor 28. 15 14 11 13 11 64 16 13 12 14 11 66 65 Fair 29. 17 12 10 14 11 64 16 11 11 12 12 62 63 Fair 30. 20 18 18 17 14 87 20 18 16 17 15 86

86.5 Excellent