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R9 said: •
The chart shows proportions of global popolation and distribution of wealth of eight regions in the world.
PS: The bar chart illustrates the difference in population and distribution of
global wealth in eight regions in the world.
4.1.3.3 Choosing right part of speech
Some students had problems with using right parts of speech, as can be seen in their sentences.
R1 wrote: •
It is also noticeable that both Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific have equally pattern, where about 15 of global population …
PS: It is also noticeable that both Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific have equal
patterns, in which about 15 of global population …
R3 wrote: •
The chart reveals two kind of information that are percentation of global population and disparate of global wealth.
PS: The chart reveals information on percentages of global population and
disparity of global wealth.
R5 wrote: •
In conclution, developing regions have better condition of wealth compared with other regions whole the worlwide.
PS: In conclusion, developed regions have better condition of wealth
compared with other regions in the world.
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4.1.3.4 Using right spelling and punctuation
All students faced difficulty in spelling and punctuation. R1, R2, R3, R4, R5, R6, R7, R8, and R9 mispelled some words.
R1 wrote: •
however, this area has the highest percentages of global wealth at approximately 34.
PS: However, this area has the highest percentages of global wealth at
approximately 34.
R2 wrote: •
The other part of the world, who had a higher percentages population than the percentages of Global Wealth were other Asia Pacific population 16
and just 4 Global wealth, Africa pop. 10 and 2 for global wealth and latin America Caribbean 8 for population and less 5 for Global
wealth.
• And there were two countries with sama situation …
PS: The other part of the world that had higher percentages of population than
that of global wealth were other Asia Pacific with 6 and just 4, Africa with 10 and 2 and Latin America and Caribbean with 8
and less than 5. And there were two countries with the same situation …
R3 wrote: •
Turning to the middle group that have a similar trend in both of measurement, are Europe and latin America Caribbean.
• All in all, The global wealth is still powered by some country in America
and Europe, and only a little that was involved by rich Asia-Facific . PS:
Turning to the middle group that has a similar trend in both of measurement, Europe and Latin America and Caribbean…
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All in all, the global wealth is still powered by some country in America and Europe, and only a little that was held by rich Asia-Pacific.
R4 wrote: •
For global population it can be clearly seen that the higest percentages … •
In addition the chart seem if the percentages is dropp for all countries. •
Meanwhile, In India and Africa with 1. AS:
For global population it can be clearly seen that the highest percentages … In addition, the chart showed that the percentages of … dropped for all
countries. Meanwhile, in India and Africa …. with 1.
R5 wrote: •
The most distinguished feature is Nort America, which is only have 5 of global population, …
• Rich Asia Pacific have better welfare with arround 24 than Europe with
30. •
India is as bad as cindition with China, where arround 17 people compare with only 1 of wealth distribution.
• In conclution, developing regions have better condition of wealth
compared with other regions whole the worlwide. PS:
The most distinguished feature is North America, which only had 5 of global population, …
Rich Asia-Pacific had less welfare with around 24 than Europe with 30.
The condition in India was as bad as in China, having around 17 of global population compared with only 1 of wealth distribution.
In conclusion, developed regions have better condition of wealth compared with other regions in the world.
R6 wrote: •
The graph describs information about number population percentage and evidence of wealth by region.
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• Although amount of people in Europe 15 hyger than USA, percentage
… PS:
The graph describes information on the number of population and the evidence of wealth by regions.
Although the percentage of population in Europe 15 was higher than USA, the percentage of …
R7 wrote: •
… which is about 24 of population of the world, followed by other Asia Pasific, India, and Europe …
PS: … which is about 24 of population of the world, followed by other
Asia Pasific, India, and Europe … R8 wrote:
• … Followed by other Asia-Pasific and India 16, and Europe 15.
• The higher percentage of global wealth than other region is North
America, 34 and than followed by Europe 30, and Rich Asia- Pacific 24.
PS: … Followed by other Asia-Pacific and India 16, and Europe 15.
The region which had higher percentage of global wealth than other regions was North America with 34 and then followed by Europe
with 30, and Rich Asia-Pacific with 24.
R9 wrote: •
The chart shows proportions of global popolation and distribution of wealth of eight regions in the world.
• Generally, the highest distribution of wealth was in North America
with almost 35 although its popolation was only just over 50. •
Than followed by Europe and Rich Asia-Pasific with 30 and just under 25, respectively, and the popolation was 15 and 3,
respectively for popolation percentages. •
China’s distribution of wealth was only 3,5 although its popolation percentage was the highest in the world with almost 25.
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• The highest popolation percentage had the lowest distribution of
wealth and the reverse side. PS:
The chart shows proportions of global population and distribution of wealth of eight regions in the world.
Generally, the highest distribution of wealth was in North America with almost 35, although its population was only just over 50.
Then, it was followed by Europe and Rich Asia-Pasific with 30 and just under 25, respectively, and 15 and 3, respectively for
population percentages. China’s distribution of wealth was only 3,5 although its population
percentage was the highest in the world with almost 25. The highest population percentage had the lowest distribution of
wealth, and vice versa.
4.1.4 In terms of Grammatical Range and Accuracy
