ERROR ANALYSIS ON THE USE OF NOUN PHRASE IN STUDENTS’ WRITING AT SMA MUHAMMADIYAH 7 YOGYAKARTA
49
Appendices
Appendix 1. List of Errors
Type 1. Quantifiers
Text
1
20
22
Error identification
29. Later, Timun Mas threw
some chili.
28. Later, Timun Mas took
and threw the second magic
stuff which is some chili.
6. He said if the cucumber
seeds was planted it will
grow to be some cucumber.
Correction
29. Later, Timun Mas threw
some chilies.
28. Later, Timun Mas took
and threw the second magic
stuff which is some chilies.
6. He said if the cucumber
seeds was planted it will grow
to be some cucumbers.
Type 1. Articles
Text
2
4
6
8
9
11
Error identification
3. He lived alone and
worked as farmer to
support himself.
15. The lake is now called a
lake Toba.
1. In one day, there is
fisherman fishing in the
river and then he get a
goldfish.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named the
lake Toba.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it the
island Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo gave her
cucumber seed.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island Samosir.
13. They were very suprised
Correction
3. He lived alone and worked
as a farmer to support
himself.
15. The lake is now called
Toba lake.
1. In one day, there is a
fisherman fishing in the river
and then he get a goldfish.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named Toba
lake.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it island
Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo gave her a
cucumber seed.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
Samosir island.
13. They were very suprised
50
12
15
17
19
20
21
22
23
27
to see beautiful girl inside
the cucumber.
5. He said if the cucumber
seed was planted it will
grow to be big cucumber.
4. The Professor of Fitting
has adopted son named Joko
Tole.
10. Young man agreed
terms.
6. Suddenly, giant heard
they pray when a giant
passed their house.
27. It became sea.
1. Once upon a time, there
lived husband and wife.
37. It was shrimp paste,
called terasi.
13. But there is condition at
her age of 17 years.
20. Couple was sad because
the time of Timun Mas‟
departure is coming.
22. Giant waiting long time.
26. Giant run chase
immediately Timun Mas.
40. Giant again almost
catch her.
1. Long time ago in small
village lived an old woman,
who named mbok Rondo.
3. She very wanted to have
child.
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in
named the lake Toba.
13. In the middle of the
lake, there is an island
called it the island
Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo will give her
child if Mbok Rondho
to see a beautiful girl inside
the cucumber.
5. He said if the cucumber
seed was planted it will grow
to be a big cucumber.
4. The Professor of Fitting
has adopted a son named
Joko Tole.
10. The young man agreed
the terms.
6. Suddenly, a giant heard
they pray when a giant passed
their house.
27. It became a sea.
1. Once upon a time, there
lived a husband and a wife.
37. It was a shrimp paste,
called terasi.
13. But there is a condition at
her age of 17 years.
20. The couple was sad
because the time of Timun
Mas‟ departure is coming.
22. The giant waiting long
time.
26. The giant run chase
immediately Timun Mas.
40. The giant again almost
catch her.
1. Long time ago in a small
village lived an old woman,
who named mbok Rondo.
3. She very wanted to have a
child.
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in named
Toba lake.
13. In the middle of the lake,
there is an island called it
Samosir island.
5. Buto Ijo will give her a
child if Mbok Rondho agreed
51
28
agreed with the requirement.
8. Mbok Rondho was
confused why Buto Ijo give
her cucumber seed.
24. That rain made the
ground got flooded and
became lake.
25. She turned into a fish
again and man became the
island of Samosir.
with the requirement.
8. Mbok Rondho was
confused why Buto Ijo give
her a cucumber seed.
24. That rain made the
ground got flooded and
became a lake.
25. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island of Samosir.
Type 1. Pronouns
Text
3
5
6
9
13
26
28
Error identification
11. The son ran home and
asked her mother.
9. One day his daughter was
so hungry and she ate his
father’s lunch.
6. Her mom asked Samosir
to run the hills.
13. The daughter ran home
and asked his mother.
43. Timun Mas and his
family lived happily
together.
3. Candra Kirana was a very
beautiful and kind girl but
his sister was an evil.
5.This engagement made
Dewi Galuh envi to his
sister.
16. Unfortunately, her father
saw that her daughter ate
all the food.
Correction
11. The son ran home and
asked his mother.
9. One day his daughter was
so hungry and she ate her
father’s lunch.
6. His mom asked Samosir to
run the hills.
13. The daughter ran home
and asked her mother.
43. Timun Mas and her
family lived happily together.
3. Candra Kirana was a very
beautiful and kind girl but
her sister was an evil.
5.This engagement made
Dewi Galuh envi to her
sister.
16. Unfortunately, her father
saw that his daughter ate all
the food.
52
Type 1. Cardinal Number
Text
26
Error identification
2. He had two daughter
named Dewi Galuh and
Candra Kirana.
Correction
2. He had two daughters
named Dewi Galuh and
Candra Kirana.
Type 2. Adjectives
Text
4
6
7
9
10
15
16
17
18
23
Error identification
3. One day he fished a fish
so beautiful.
15. The lake is now called a
lake Toba.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named the
lake Toba.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it the
island Samosir.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a young orphan
farmer in the north of the
island of Sumatra.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island Samosir.
21. It means lake Bagendit.
16. Finally the gate of a
beautiful and magnificent
finished in one night.
3. A very blacksmith
famous named Professor of
fittings.
5. When he was holding it,
the fish turned into a
princess so lovely.
15. “Go away you old lazy
woman! Go out my house.”
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in
named the lake Toba.
Correction
3. One day he fished a
beautiful fish.
15. The lake is now called
Toba lake.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named Toba
lake.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it
Samosir island.
1. A long time ago, there
lived an orphan young
farmer in the north of the
island of Sumatra.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
Samosir island.
21. It means Bagendit lake.
16. Finally a beautiful and
magnificent gate finished in
one night.
3. A very famous
blacksmith named Professor
of fittings.
5. When he was holding it,
the fish turned into a lovely
princess.
15. “Go away you a lazy old
woman! Go out my house.”
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in named
Toba lake.
53
24
25
28
13. In the middle of the
lake, there is an island
called it the island
Samosir.
7. It was the most big fish
which he ever had in his
life.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a young poor farmer
in the north of the island of
Sumatra.
22. Suddenly, there was
clouds very dark in the
sky.
13. In the middle of the lake,
there is an island called it
Samosir island.
7. It was the biggest fish
which he ever had in his life.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a poor young farmer
in the north of the island of
Sumatra.
22. Suddenly, there was very
dark clouds in the sky.
Type 6. Plural Noun
Text
1
Error identification
35. She threw them and
become cucumber field.
Correction
35. She threw them and
become cucumber fields.
Type 6. Nouns
Text
10
21
Error identification
6. One day, an old beggar
woman came to Nyai
Bagendit‟s house and asked
for some money and some
food.
9. Giant then provide them
with seeds cucumber.
21. But they are not willing
if their child became food
giant.
Correction
6. One day, an old woman
beggar came to Nyai
Bagendit‟s house and asked
for some money and some
food.
9. Giant then provide them
with cucumber seeds.
21. But they are not willing if
their child became the giant
food.
36. At one the tree bracken 36. At one the bracken tree
and sharp thorns hurt the
and sharp thorns hurt the
giant, giant cried in pain.
giant, giant cried in pain.
54
Appendix 2. Total on The Use of Noun Phrases
Text
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
Total
Sentences
in a Text
41
21
16
15
13
8
23
25
19
21
40
22
43
20
17
18
20
34
38
40
40
27
13
21
20
22
31
25
693
Sentences
consist of NP
37
18
15
15
13
10
20
18
19
18
35
16
38
18
13
15
20
27
34
37
33
20
15
18
20
18
21
23
604
Sentences consist of
Correct NP
Incorrect NP
35
2
17
1
14
1
12
3
12
1
4
6
19
1
17
1
16
3
16
2
34
1
15
1
37
1
18
0
11
2
14
1
18
2
26
1
32
2
34
3
25
8
17
3
11
4
17
1
19
1
15
3
19
2
19
4
543
61
55
Appendix 3. Percentage of Errors on The Use of Noun Phrase
No
Types of Errors
Total errors
1.
Quantifier „some‟
3
2.
Articles
28
3.
Pronouns
8
4.
Cardinal numbers
1
Percentage
„two‟
5.
Adjectives
16
6.
Plural nouns
1
7.
Nouns
4
Total
61
100%
Appendices
Appendix 1. List of Errors
Type 1. Quantifiers
Text
1
20
22
Error identification
29. Later, Timun Mas threw
some chili.
28. Later, Timun Mas took
and threw the second magic
stuff which is some chili.
6. He said if the cucumber
seeds was planted it will
grow to be some cucumber.
Correction
29. Later, Timun Mas threw
some chilies.
28. Later, Timun Mas took
and threw the second magic
stuff which is some chilies.
6. He said if the cucumber
seeds was planted it will grow
to be some cucumbers.
Type 1. Articles
Text
2
4
6
8
9
11
Error identification
3. He lived alone and
worked as farmer to
support himself.
15. The lake is now called a
lake Toba.
1. In one day, there is
fisherman fishing in the
river and then he get a
goldfish.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named the
lake Toba.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it the
island Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo gave her
cucumber seed.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island Samosir.
13. They were very suprised
Correction
3. He lived alone and worked
as a farmer to support
himself.
15. The lake is now called
Toba lake.
1. In one day, there is a
fisherman fishing in the river
and then he get a goldfish.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named Toba
lake.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it island
Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo gave her a
cucumber seed.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
Samosir island.
13. They were very suprised
50
12
15
17
19
20
21
22
23
27
to see beautiful girl inside
the cucumber.
5. He said if the cucumber
seed was planted it will
grow to be big cucumber.
4. The Professor of Fitting
has adopted son named Joko
Tole.
10. Young man agreed
terms.
6. Suddenly, giant heard
they pray when a giant
passed their house.
27. It became sea.
1. Once upon a time, there
lived husband and wife.
37. It was shrimp paste,
called terasi.
13. But there is condition at
her age of 17 years.
20. Couple was sad because
the time of Timun Mas‟
departure is coming.
22. Giant waiting long time.
26. Giant run chase
immediately Timun Mas.
40. Giant again almost
catch her.
1. Long time ago in small
village lived an old woman,
who named mbok Rondo.
3. She very wanted to have
child.
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in
named the lake Toba.
13. In the middle of the
lake, there is an island
called it the island
Samosir.
5. Buto Ijo will give her
child if Mbok Rondho
to see a beautiful girl inside
the cucumber.
5. He said if the cucumber
seed was planted it will grow
to be a big cucumber.
4. The Professor of Fitting
has adopted a son named
Joko Tole.
10. The young man agreed
the terms.
6. Suddenly, a giant heard
they pray when a giant passed
their house.
27. It became a sea.
1. Once upon a time, there
lived a husband and a wife.
37. It was a shrimp paste,
called terasi.
13. But there is a condition at
her age of 17 years.
20. The couple was sad
because the time of Timun
Mas‟ departure is coming.
22. The giant waiting long
time.
26. The giant run chase
immediately Timun Mas.
40. The giant again almost
catch her.
1. Long time ago in a small
village lived an old woman,
who named mbok Rondo.
3. She very wanted to have a
child.
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in named
Toba lake.
13. In the middle of the lake,
there is an island called it
Samosir island.
5. Buto Ijo will give her a
child if Mbok Rondho agreed
51
28
agreed with the requirement.
8. Mbok Rondho was
confused why Buto Ijo give
her cucumber seed.
24. That rain made the
ground got flooded and
became lake.
25. She turned into a fish
again and man became the
island of Samosir.
with the requirement.
8. Mbok Rondho was
confused why Buto Ijo give
her a cucumber seed.
24. That rain made the
ground got flooded and
became a lake.
25. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island of Samosir.
Type 1. Pronouns
Text
3
5
6
9
13
26
28
Error identification
11. The son ran home and
asked her mother.
9. One day his daughter was
so hungry and she ate his
father’s lunch.
6. Her mom asked Samosir
to run the hills.
13. The daughter ran home
and asked his mother.
43. Timun Mas and his
family lived happily
together.
3. Candra Kirana was a very
beautiful and kind girl but
his sister was an evil.
5.This engagement made
Dewi Galuh envi to his
sister.
16. Unfortunately, her father
saw that her daughter ate
all the food.
Correction
11. The son ran home and
asked his mother.
9. One day his daughter was
so hungry and she ate her
father’s lunch.
6. His mom asked Samosir to
run the hills.
13. The daughter ran home
and asked her mother.
43. Timun Mas and her
family lived happily together.
3. Candra Kirana was a very
beautiful and kind girl but
her sister was an evil.
5.This engagement made
Dewi Galuh envi to her
sister.
16. Unfortunately, her father
saw that his daughter ate all
the food.
52
Type 1. Cardinal Number
Text
26
Error identification
2. He had two daughter
named Dewi Galuh and
Candra Kirana.
Correction
2. He had two daughters
named Dewi Galuh and
Candra Kirana.
Type 2. Adjectives
Text
4
6
7
9
10
15
16
17
18
23
Error identification
3. One day he fished a fish
so beautiful.
15. The lake is now called a
lake Toba.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named the
lake Toba.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it the
island Samosir.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a young orphan
farmer in the north of the
island of Sumatra.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
the island Samosir.
21. It means lake Bagendit.
16. Finally the gate of a
beautiful and magnificent
finished in one night.
3. A very blacksmith
famous named Professor of
fittings.
5. When he was holding it,
the fish turned into a
princess so lovely.
15. “Go away you old lazy
woman! Go out my house.”
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in
named the lake Toba.
Correction
3. One day he fished a
beautiful fish.
15. The lake is now called
Toba lake.
7. And around the hills had
become a lake named Toba
lake.
8. In the middle of that, we
have an island called it
Samosir island.
1. A long time ago, there
lived an orphan young
farmer in the north of the
island of Sumatra.
19. She turned into a fish
again and the man became
Samosir island.
21. It means Bagendit lake.
16. Finally a beautiful and
magnificent gate finished in
one night.
3. A very famous
blacksmith named Professor
of fittings.
5. When he was holding it,
the fish turned into a lovely
princess.
15. “Go away you a lazy old
woman! Go out my house.”
12. The ground with full of
water became a lake in named
Toba lake.
53
24
25
28
13. In the middle of the
lake, there is an island
called it the island
Samosir.
7. It was the most big fish
which he ever had in his
life.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a young poor farmer
in the north of the island of
Sumatra.
22. Suddenly, there was
clouds very dark in the
sky.
13. In the middle of the lake,
there is an island called it
Samosir island.
7. It was the biggest fish
which he ever had in his life.
1. A long time ago, there
lived a poor young farmer
in the north of the island of
Sumatra.
22. Suddenly, there was very
dark clouds in the sky.
Type 6. Plural Noun
Text
1
Error identification
35. She threw them and
become cucumber field.
Correction
35. She threw them and
become cucumber fields.
Type 6. Nouns
Text
10
21
Error identification
6. One day, an old beggar
woman came to Nyai
Bagendit‟s house and asked
for some money and some
food.
9. Giant then provide them
with seeds cucumber.
21. But they are not willing
if their child became food
giant.
Correction
6. One day, an old woman
beggar came to Nyai
Bagendit‟s house and asked
for some money and some
food.
9. Giant then provide them
with cucumber seeds.
21. But they are not willing if
their child became the giant
food.
36. At one the tree bracken 36. At one the bracken tree
and sharp thorns hurt the
and sharp thorns hurt the
giant, giant cried in pain.
giant, giant cried in pain.
54
Appendix 2. Total on The Use of Noun Phrases
Text
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
Total
Sentences
in a Text
41
21
16
15
13
8
23
25
19
21
40
22
43
20
17
18
20
34
38
40
40
27
13
21
20
22
31
25
693
Sentences
consist of NP
37
18
15
15
13
10
20
18
19
18
35
16
38
18
13
15
20
27
34
37
33
20
15
18
20
18
21
23
604
Sentences consist of
Correct NP
Incorrect NP
35
2
17
1
14
1
12
3
12
1
4
6
19
1
17
1
16
3
16
2
34
1
15
1
37
1
18
0
11
2
14
1
18
2
26
1
32
2
34
3
25
8
17
3
11
4
17
1
19
1
15
3
19
2
19
4
543
61
55
Appendix 3. Percentage of Errors on The Use of Noun Phrase
No
Types of Errors
Total errors
1.
Quantifier „some‟
3
2.
Articles
28
3.
Pronouns
8
4.
Cardinal numbers
1
Percentage
„two‟
5.
Adjectives
16
6.
Plural nouns
1
7.
Nouns
4
Total
61
100%