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The Grammatical Errors on Facebook Posts
by Second Language Acquisition Students
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements for the Degree of
Sarjana Pendidikan

Yuani Paradita Ratri
112012070

ENGLISH LANGUAGE EDUCATION PROGRAM
FACULTY OF LANGUAGE AND ARTS
SATYA WACANA CHRISTIAN UNIVERSITY
SALATIGA
2016

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The Grammatical Errors on Facebook Posts
by Second Language Acquisition Students
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements for the Degree of
SarjanaPendidikan

Yuani Paradita Ratri
112012070

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Gita Hastuti, S.Pd., M.A.

Vica Ananta Kusuma, S.Pd., M.A.


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Yuani Paradita Ratri

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Table of Contents
Cover Page. .............................................................................................

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Approval Page. ........................................................................................

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Copyright Statement................................................................................

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Table of Contents. ...................................................................................

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List of Table. ...........................................................................................

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Abstract. .................................................................................................

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Introduction. ..........................................................................................

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Literature Review..................................................................................

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A. Facebook Post. ...............................................................................

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B. Essays. ...........................................................................................

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C. Definition of Peer Feedback. ....................................................... .

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D. Advantages of Peer Feedback. ......................................................

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E. Definition of Errors. ......................................................................

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F. Types of Grammatical Errors. .......................................................

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G. Error Analysis. ...............................................................................

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H. Previous Studies. ...........................................................................

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I. Social Media Use. ..........................................................................

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The Study. ..............................................................................................

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A. Research Question. .......................................................................

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B. Types of Research. .......................................................................

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C. Context of The Study. ...................................................................

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D. Participants. ..................................................................................

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E. Data Collection Procedure. ...........................................................

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F. Data Analysis Procedure. .............................................................

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Discussion. ..............................................................................................

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A. Students‟ Grammatical Errors. .....................................................

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B. Advantages of Peer Comments.....................................................

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Conclusion. .............................................................................................

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Acknowledgement. ................................................................................

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References. .............................................................................................

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Appendices. ............................................................................................

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List of Table
Table 1. Identification of Grammatical Errors.........................................

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The Grammatical Errors on Facebook Posts
by Second Language Acquisition Students

Yuani Paradita Ratri
Abstract
Making errors cannot be avoided while learning English as a foreign language
because it is an integral part of the learning process. This study concerns about the
grammatical errors made by the students of Second Language Acquisition class at
the English Language Education Program of the Faculty of Language and Arts in
Universitas Kristen Satya Wacana. The aims of this study are to know the types
ofgrammatical errors that Second Language Acquisition students mostly made in
their Facebook group posts and the advantages of peer feedbackon the respective
posts. To do so, the data were gathered and analyzed qualitatively. From 18
participants in this study, the types of errors that they made in the Facebook posts
were in this order: omission, misinformation, addition, blend and misordering.
Moreover, the peer feedback was considered very helpful for the participants to
correct their errors and to be aware of the patterns if they make similar
expressions in the future.Some recommendations for future practice are provided
at the end of the discussion.

Keywords: Grammatical Errors, Facebook posts, peer feedback

Introduction

Language is a tool for communication. According to Hornby (2003, as
cited in Puspasari & Romadon, 2011), people all over the world communicate in
oral and written forms using language. Puspasari & Romadon (2011) added that
one of the languages that are commonly used to communicate internationally is

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English. However, we understand that using a language is not as simple as it
looks. Language has its rule called grammar. Wilcox (2004) stated that when we
talk about grammar we talk about a system that consists of rules to guide the
language users to create meaningful expressions in the respective language.
According to Richards (2012), grammatical competence is “the knowledge of
grammar, lexis, morphology, syntax, semantics and morphology”. It is believed
that people with good grammatical competence tend to be able to deliver their
meaning or feeling better than those with bad grammatical competence.
Error happens unconsiously, so people need others to be awareof it.
According to Lui and Carless (2006, as cited in Blair & McGinty, 2010), in peer
feedback learners engage in dialogues about the respective performance. Mory
(2003, as cited in Bijami, Kashef, & Nejad 2013) disscused four perspectives on
how feedback supports learning.
First, feedback can be considered as an incentive for increasing respond
rate and/or accuracy. Second, feedback can be regarded as a reinforcer that
automatically connects responses to prior stimully (focused on correct
reponses). Third, feedback can be considered as information that learners
can use to validate or change previous response (focused on erroneous
responses). Finally, feedback can be regarded as the revision of scafolds to
help students construct internal schemata and analysis their learning
process (p. 92).
In short, feedback points out the errors made by the learners so that they could be
aware of the errors and perform better in the future by learning from the errors.
In order to use language properly, people cannot avoid errors because it is
possible to occur in the learning process. However, after people correct the errors,
they can be more aware of not repeating their mistakes. Griffiths and Zhou (2008,

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as cited in Sönmez & Griffiths, 2015) supported this opinion that correcting
grammatical errors is important to avoid making the same mistakes. Russel and
Spada (2006) stressed that error correction is beneficial for second language
learning. Students can build new knowledge after realizing and learning fromthe
errors too. Gorichanaz (2006) believed that in acquiring grammar, people will
become more critical in reading and better in speaking.
Nowadays, many people use social media to communicate with others
from across the world. Boyd and Ellison (2007) stated that people connect to each
other using social networking sites like Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace. In this
era, college students may become the large proportion of users on social media
networks.
According to Stelter (2008), Facebook is the most widely known social
media that we can use to post information and chat with other people. Yunus
(2010, as cited in Widiyanti, 2014) found that 18.9 million people use Facebook
in Indonesia, and that is the highest number of users ever recorded. Hence, it is
possible to use Facebook in the teaching and learning process.
Realizing the potential of Facebook to learn a language, and the tendency
of people making errors in their learning process, this study tries to investigate the
grammatical errors made by students of the Second Language Acquisition course
in the English Language Education Program of the Faculty of Language and Arts,
Universitas Kristen Satya Wacana. This study is guided by the following research
questions:

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1. What errors mostly appear on the Facebook posts of the Second
Language Acquisition students at the English Language Education
Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
2. What are the advantages of the peer comments on the Facebook posts
of the Second Language Acquisition students at the English Language
Education Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
This research is useful for the lecturers because by knowing the students‟
grammatical errors, they can give extra attention to the errors. Also, it is useful for
the students because from the results of the study, students can be aware of their
errors, and they may have a chance to learn from the errors.

Literature Review
Facebook Post
Terantino and Graf (2011) stated that Mark Zuckeberg established
Facebook in 2004, and it has more than 600 million users. He also reported that
Facebook can promote social interaction between students and teachers through
discussions, negotiations, comments, questions and status updates. That means
through Facebook people can share everything that they want, like lesson, music,
and interest. People also feel free to give comments below others‟ posts.
Facebook post is one of the features provided by Facebook. As cited in
Scripted, Facebook post ismessage in a special delivery cyber-bottle. It is a

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comment, picture or other media that is posted on the user‟s Facebook page or
“wall”.
Essay
An essay describes or gives opinion about one topic in brief (Gallaudet
University, n.d). There are many different kinds of essays according to that article,
among others are:
The first one is descriptive essay. It is a writing about how people see,
hear, touch, or sense something. The second one is definition essay. The essay
examines how to interpret particular word or expain the complexcity of ideas. The
third one is compare/contrast essay. This essay discusses how two things, people,
scheme, or places are different or similar. The fourth is cause/effect essay. The
essay examines series of phenomenon including the reasons, events and
consequences of something. Next is narrative essay, which tells us about stories.
Then, the sixth one, process essay, describes how something is done. The seventh
one is argumentative essay. This essay aims to convince the readers with the
writer's perception.The eighth is critical essay, which critically analyzes someone
else‟s work in terms of how well the author conveys the message through such
work as stories, books, poems, movies, or work of art.
According to “Four types of essay: expository, persuasive, analytical &
argumrntative” (2008), there are four types of essay as the following: The first one
is expository essay, which gives explanation about some issues, themes, or ideas.
The second one is persuasive essay. In this essay, the writer wants the reader to

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agree with the writer‟s point of view. The third one is analytical essay, which
gives analysis about drawings, poems, book, film, drama, and any works of
arts.The last is argumentative essay, which is used to prove that your idea, study
and belief of a problemis true. The essays that are referred to in this thesis were
expository in nature as the students explained their reasons of learning English as
a foreign language.
Definition of Peer Feedback
Peer feedback can be delivered as written or spoken. Liu and Hansen
(2000 as cited in Bijami, Kashef & Nejad 2013) stated that peer feedback is done
by the learners to give comments or criticism on each other‟s draft in writing
process. According to Spiller (2009), peer feedback can help students to work
collaboratively to do an assignment better.
Advantages of Peer Feedback
Peer feedback has a lot of benefits. Hyland (2000, in Bejami, Kashef,
&Nejad 2013) stated that benefits of peer feedback is to make students more
active in class.
More on this, according to Falchikov (2007 as cited in Spiller, 2009)
through peer feedback students may improve their knowledge. Whereas, Spiller
(2009) believed that peer feedback has some benefits, such as among others
helping students improve their understanding of their own learning process,
developing students‟ writing skills, improving students‟ critical judgment and

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ability to make choices, and enhancing formative learning through the practice of
giving and receiving peer feedback.
Definition of Error

Mourtaga (2004, as cited in Abushihab, 2014) pointed out that there are
differences between mistakes and errors. According to him, “an error cannot be
self-corrected and is caused by a learner‟s inadequate knowledge of the target
language whereas a mistake can be self-corrected” (p.214). In line with this, Gas
and Selinker (2001, as cited in Abushihab, 2014) added that “a mistake can be
self-centered, but an error is systematic” (p.214). Abushihab (2014) explained
further that a learner may realize that he/she makes a mistake, but not his/her
errors. He/she needs other people‟s help to recognize the errors.
Types of Grammatical Errors
Ellis and Barkhuizen (2005, as cited in Taher, 2011, p.8), proposed five
categories of grammatical errors.
The first category is addition. Addition happens if an unnecessary word or
an ending is added to an utterance or a sentence which makes it ungrammatical.
Example: *”I have eated”.
The second one is omission. Ommision is omitting a word which should
be put in a grammatical sentence. Example: *”My sister happy”.

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The third one is misinformation or subtitution. Misinformation is using
incorrect morphemes or structure. Example: *”It was the hardest time in my life”.
The fourth is misordering. Misordering is indicated by placing morphemes
in incorrect order. Example: *”She fights all the time her brother”.
The last is blends. Blends is indicated by the use of two different words
with similar meaning because the learner is not sure of which one to use.
Example: *”The only one thing I want”.
Error Analysis
Corder (1981as cited in Vazquez, 2008) suggested five steps to do an error
analysis.
The first step is collecting a sample from the learners. Researchers should
first of all collect a sample of learners‟ language that is relevant to the research
objectives.
The second step is identifying errors. Researchers need to locate the parts
of sentences/utterances that contain errors. They also need to identify which error
the learners made; whether grammatical or pragmatic. However, this study
focuses of grammatical errors.
The next step is describing errors. It is done by describing and
categorizing the errors. Two descriptive taxonomies of errors include linguistic
categories and surface strategy. However, this study investigates the surface
strategy, which is categorized into four operations: omissions, additions,

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misinformations and misorderings. Ellis and Barkhuizen (2005, as cited in Taher,
2011, p.8) then added one more operation, which is blends.
The fourth step is explainingerrors. In this step, the researchers need to
analyze the source of why the errors are made, whether it is a result of rule
transfer from L1 to L2 or overgeneralization of the L2 rules.
The last step is evaluating errors. As the final step of the error analysis, the
researchers should evaluate and conclude which errors should get more attention
to help improve the learners‟ grammar competence.
This study follows only the first three steps mentioned above.
Previous Studies on Grammatical Error Analysis
Learners of a second or a foreign language are never free of errors as
making errors is part of the learning process. This phenomenon encouraged many
researchers to do research on this topic. Ting, Mahadhir and Chang (2010) for
instance, examined the grammatical accuracy in spoken English in conversation
between the students in a Malaysian tertiary institution who‟s unskillful. The
findings show that the participants mostly made the errors that involved
misinformation and omission.
Abbasi and Karimnia (2011) investigated grammatical errors among
Iranian translation students according to Keshavrz‟s (1994) model. Their findings
revealed that 98 percent of the students had grammatical problems. Furthermore,

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most errors were regarded as interlingual errors, indicating the influence of the
mother language.
Giri (2010) did the research about errors in the use of English grammar.
He conducted a systematic and comprehensive study of errors made by the Nepali
learners of English in all major areas of English grammar. This study followed the
conventional procedure of error data analysis, identification of errors,
description/classifications of errors, explanation of errors, and evaluation of
errors. The finding was the bachelor level students in Nepal made all sorts of
grammatical errors in the use of the English language.
Abushihab (2014) did the investigation and classification of grammatical
errors in writing made by twenty second-year students at the Department of
English Language learning English as a foreign language in Gazi University of
Turkey. The students came from the writing course in the first semester of the
academic year 2011 – 2012. They were asked to write about the difficulties they
faced while learning English. The errors committed by the subjects are classified
under five categories. They are errors in tenses, in the use of prepositions, in the
use of articles, in the use of active and passive, and morphological errors.
Mabuan (2015) investigated grammatical errors of 58 blog posts written
by weblogs. The results show that most errors that appear in 58 blogs is the use of
tenses, subject-verb agreement, prepositions, morphology, articles, verbs, and
pronouns.

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Faisal, Kirana, & Syamsul (2015) did the research onerrors in EFL writing
toward junior high school students in Indonesia. The results show that all particles
of grammar were missing. The generalones are articles, non-finite verbs, verb
tenses, plurality and preposition.
Social Media Use
Social media comprise four formats to share information online (Chu &
Kim, 2011). The first one, the social networking sites, covers

Facebook,

MySpace and Friendster. The second format is the sites for sharing creativity,
such as YouTube and Flickr. The third one, the collaborative sites, enables
collaborative work, like Wikipedia. The last one is microblogging sites, like
Twitter.
Lenhart, Purcell, Smith and Zickuhr (2010) found that 72% of all college
students have a social media profile with 45% of college students using a social
media communication at least once a day. In other words, most college students
have at least one social media account, and social media have become quite
important in their life.

The Study
Research Questions
To be able to correct the grammatical errors, people need others‟ help. So,
peer comments are needed to improve students‟ grammar in writing in the future.

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The writer did the study to investigate the grammatical errors that mostly appear
on the students‟ essay and the advantages of peer comments. Therefore, the writer
comes up with these two research questions.
1. What errors mostly appear on the Facebook posts of the Second
Language Acquisition students at the English Language Education
Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
2. What are the advantages of the peer comments on the Facebook posts
of the Second Language Acquisition students at the English Language
Education Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
Type of Research
The writer did descriptive qualitative research. To answer the first research
question, the writer gave a question to the participants to be answered in an
essayand to be posted on the Facebook group‟s wall. Then the writer did the three
steps of the error analysis to analyze the participants‟ grammatical errors.To
answer the second research question, the writer interviewed the participants to
find out the advantages of peer comments.
Context of the Study
The writer did the study in the Second Language Acquisition class at the
English Language Education Program of the Faculty of Language and Arts in
Universitas Kristen Satya Wacana in Salatiga.The course was offered on the third
trimester of the 2015/2016 academic year as an elective course.

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Participants
The participants were 18 Second Language Acquisition students who
passed the course in the third trisemester 2015/2016. Furthermore, those
participants had been studying about the process of second language acquisition
and the writer‟s question is about learning a second language. Therefore, these
studensts were suitable to become the participants of this study. There were two
classes in Second Language Acquisition class, but the writer only chose 1 class to
be the participants for the feasibility reason.
Data CollectionInstruments
The instruments to collect the required data in this study incude the
participants‟ 4-6-sentence-essay answering the given question: “What is your
motivation in learning a second language?” to gather the data to identify and
describe the errors made by students, and two interview questions to be asked to
three students whose work got a peer comment. The two interview questions are:



How do the comments help you recognize your grammar errors?
Do you agree with her/his comment? Why / not?
The first instrument was used to gather the data to identify and describe

the errors made by students. The next instrument is used to know the advantages
of peer comments feedback.

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Data Collection Procedure
First of all, for this study the writer made a Facebook group and named it
“Second Language Acquisition UKSW FBS”at the end of the trimester with a
permission fromthe lecturer. On July 15th 2016, the writer posted a question to be
answered in a 4-6 sentence essay by the participants. The question was:“What‟s
your motivation in learning a second language? Please explain in 4-6 sentences.”
The participants should answer the question within ten days. Then, the writer
asked the SLA students to give comments of their peer posted in that Facebook
group in a month. A day after the comments were collected, the writer did the
interview with 3 students.
Data Analysis Procedure
To do the error analysis, the writer used the first three steps of the error
analysis procedure proposed by Corder (1981, as cited in Vazquez, 2008) and
described the errors using Ellis and Barkhuizen (2005, as cited in Taher, 2011,p.8)
categories. For the answer to the second research question, the writer studied the
peer comments and analyzed the results of the interview. The findings and
discussion of this study was divided into 2 sub topics: the category of grammatical
errors and the advantages after correcting the errors.

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Discussion
This section presents the findings and discussion to answer the research
questions:
1. What errors mostly appear on the Facebook posts of the Second
Language Acquisition students at the English Language Education
Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
2. What are the advantages of the peer comments on the Facebook posts
of the Second Language Acquisition students at the English Language
Education Program in the third trimester of 2015/2016?
The discussion is divided into two parts. The first part focuses on the
grammatical errors made by the participants, and the second part focuses on the
benefits of the peer comments.
Students’ Grammatical Errors
As explained earlier, the participants were asked to write an essay of 4-6
sentences about the reason why learning a second language. From the
participants‟ Facebook posts, the researcher identified the grammatical errors and
classified them according to the categories proposed by Ellis and Barkhuizen
(2005): Addition, omission, misinformation, misordering, and blends.
Table 1 shows the identification of grammar errors based on the types of
errors, frequency and percentage of error made by the Second Language

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Acquisition students in their essay answering the question, “What‟s your
motivation in learning a second language?”
Table 1
Identification of Grammatical Errors

Type of Errors

Frequency

Percentage

1.

Omission

6

35.3

2.

Misinformation

6

35.3

3.

Addition

3

17.6

4.

Blend

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5.9

5.

Misordering

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5.9

The data revealed that out of 17 errors made by the students, there were 6
omission errors, 6 misinformation errors, 3 addition errors, 1 blend errors and 1
misordering error.
As can be seen, the most problematic area was in the omission errors
(35.3%). In this study, the omission errors that the students made most were the
errors where the learners are forget to put particular point, as the following
example:
Example 1:
As we know that English is global langugae, wherever I go English
will be tool for communicating.(Participant B)

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The correct sentence should be “As we know that English is global langugae,
wherever I go English will be the tool for communicating.”
In that example, Participant B omitted the article “the”. According to
Cambrige dictionary, “the” before noun is used “to refer to things or people
when only one exists at any one time” (the fourth definition). To convey the
intended message, i.e. the only tool, Participant B should add the definite
article „the‟ before the word „tool‟.
Example 2:
Then I realized the benefits of learning English are not only for my
speaking. (Participant F)
It should be “Then I realized the benefits of learning English are not only for my
speaking but also for my writing and listening.”
According to Cambridge dictionary, after the word “not only” should be
followed by phrase “but also” in the formal contexts and to add emphasis.
Therefore, to send a complete message, Participant F should add a phrase that
starts with „but also‟, like „but also for my writing and listening‟.
Example 3:
I really want to be a good English speaker because I consider that it would
be beneficial for me to get a job such as become an English teacher which
my father‟s want. (Participant K)
It should be I really want to be a good English speaker because I consider that it
would be beneficial for me to get a job such as become an English teacher which
is my father‟s want. (Participant K).

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In “Action verbs and linking verbs”(n.d.), the linking verb „is‟ is used to
link the subject with the information about the subject. In this context, „my
father‟s want‟ carries information about the subject „becoming an English
teacher‟.
Example 4:
Since I was kid, I was told that being a multilingual person will give you
benefits for your future, so since then I am always interested in exploring
my linguistic repertoires. (Participant D)
It should be “Since I was a kid, I was told that being a multilingual person will
give you benefits for your future, so since then I am always interested in exploring
my linguistic repertoires.”
Participant D is wrong because according to Azhar (2003), the article a/an
must appear before singular count noun, and that means one. The word „kid‟ is a
singular count noun, so before the word „kid‟we should put the article „a‟.
Example 5:
At that time I saw my friends brave to speak with foreigner but I listened
only, since that time I want to speak English fluently. (Participant F).
It should be “At that time I saw that my friendswere brave to speak with
foreigner but I listened only, since that time I want to speak English fluently.
According to Cambridge (n.d), the word „that‟ in grammar can start a
clause called „that-clause‟, which is located after a verb, an adjective, and a
noun.Reporting verbs (say, tell, admit, etc.) and mental process verbs (believe,
think, know, hope , etc.) are the verbs normally followed by „that-clause‟.

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Meanwhile, a clause should typically consist of at least one subject and one verb.
In the above case, Participant F used the reporting verb „saw‟, so it should
be followed by a „that-clause‟ as a modification of a noun phrase that commonly
follow the verb „saw‟ as in “I saw something”. Therefore, the complete clause
should be “At that time I saw that my friends were brave to speak with foreigner,
the word „were‟ functions as a verb to make the „that-clause‟ complete.
Example 6:
In other words, my motivation is learning second langugage is I will be
easy to look job in the future because English is global language.
(Participant B)
It should be “In other words, my motivation is learning second langugage is I will
be easy to look for a job in the future because English is global language.
According to Cambridge (n.d), if there is an object, “look” which means
search should be added with “for”. Furthermore, Merriam-Webster (n.d) stated
that look for means to search for. It is considered as a phrasal verb. According to
Azar (2003) „look for‟is categorized as separable phrasal verbs. In the sentence
made by Participant B, if he wanted to mean “search for”, he needed to add the
word „for‟ to make the phrasal verb „look for‟.
The second highest number of errors was misinformation errors (35.3%).
Six students write incorrect morphemes or arrangementin the Facebook posts, for
example:

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Example 1:
I also realized one day I would went abroad by myself, so I needed to
learn English since in elementary school. (Participant C)
It should be “I also realized one day I would go abroad by myself, so I needed to
learn English since in elementary school.”
Example 2:
However, I realized I needed to learn more so I could understood the
materials I read more. (Participant C)
It should be “However, I realized I needed to learn more so I could understand
the materials I read more.”
The word „go‟ and „understand‟, the infinitive form, should be used
following a modal auxiliary, instead of „went‟ and „understood‟ (the past
verb)because the grammar rulestates that „would‟and „could‟should befollowed by
a bare infinitive. As Quirk et al (1985 as cited in Ojea, 2008) stated that the
infinitive form of the word should be used after auxiliary.„Would‟ and „could‟ are
categorized as auxiliary verbs. Thus, we need to put a bare verb after the auxiliary
verbs „would‟ and „could‟.
Example 3:
Why I choose English as my second language to be learnt is because one
of my friends whom I think she is good enough in English have influenced
me. (Participant K)

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It should be “Why I choose English as my second language to be learnt is because
one of my friends whom I think she is good enough in English hasinfluenced
me.”
According to Azar (2002) a singular verb should follow a singular noun as
the subject in a sentence. In this case, Participant K should use the singular verb
„has‟ instead of the plural verb „have‟ because the participant used a singular
count noun „one of my friends‟ as the subject of the sentence.
Example 4:
I want to speak English fluently, writing English in a correct form, I want
to master English (Participant A).
It should be “I want to speak English fluently, write English correctly and
masterEnglish.”
According to Driscoll (2013) we should use parallel structure in a
sentence. It means that we are not allowed to mix different structures in a
sentence. Participant A used „to speak‟ in the sentence above, which is an
infinitive clause, so the other structures that followed should be infinitive clauses
too.
Example 5:
My motivation in learning second language is because I‟m interested in it.
(Participant G)

It should be “My motivation in learning second language isthatI‟m interested in
it.”

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Example 6:
Why I choose English as my second language to be learntisbecause one of
my friends whom I think she is good enough in English have influenced
me. (Participant K).
It should be“Why I choose English as my second language to be learnt is that one
of my friends whom I think she is good enough in English have influenced me.”
According to Get it Write (2003), the word „is‟ in such sentences above is
a linking verb that links a subject to a phrase or a clause that either describes it
(i.e. an adjective phrase/clause) or renames it (i.e. a noun phrase/clause). Those
adjective phrases/clauses and noun phrases/clauses function as the subject
complements because they complement the subject.
Participant G and Participant K should use the word „that‟ instead of
„because‟ because the clause that follows the word „is‟ should be an adjective or a
noun clause to complement the subject „My motivation in learning second
language‟ and „Why I choose English as my second language to be learnt‟. Using
the word „that‟ to begin the clause that follows „is‟ will make a noun clause to
complement the subject.
The third highest number was Addition (17.6%), as the following
example:
Example 1:
My motivation in learning second language acquisition is that I‟m
interested in learning English because by learned it. (Participant I)

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It should be:”My motivation in learning second language acquisition is that I‟m
interested in learning English.”
In the sentence there is a phrase „by learned it‟.The phrase „because by
learned it‟ is not needed in the above context because the message is already
complete without that phrase. The addition of that phrase will only make the
complete message ungrammatical.
Example 3:
However, then I get another motivation in my process in learning English.
(Participant J)
It should be “Then, I get another motivation in my process in learning English.”
According to Oxford dictionary, „however‟ is an adverb used to introduce an idea
in contrast to the previous stated idea. The word „however‟ in the above context
isnotcorrect because this sentence talks about another motivation why Participant
J wants to learn English, in addition to the motivation stated before, not to
introduce a contrasting idea. Therefore, the word „however‟ should be omitted,
and the sentence should start with the word „then‟ to introduce additional
information.
The last two types of errors (blends and mis-ordering) got the same
percentage, that is 5.9%. Blends happen when the learners are confused of which
of the two words should be used, and thus they use both words in one sentence, as
in the following example:

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It also benefits me when I have my future job later.(Participant M)
It should be: “It also benefits me when I have my future job”.
According to Cambridge, the word „future‟ meansbe going to, and „later‟
means at a time in the future. Both words carry the same meaning. Thus, only one
of them is necessary to be used in one sentence. To refer to the future, Participant
M should use only one of them.
Mis-ordering (5.9%) may happenwhen morphemes are combined in
incorrect order, as illustrated in Example 1.
Example 1
At that time I saw my friends brave to speak with foreigner but I listened
only, since that time I want to speak English fluently. (Participant F).
It should be “At that time I saw my friends brave to speak with foreigner but I
only listened, since that time I want to speak English fluently.”
According to Cambridge, the word „only‟ here functions as an adverb that
explains a verb. The normal position is between the subject and the verb. To make
the sentence grammatical, Participant F should position the word „only‟ between
„I‟ as the subject and „listened‟ as the verb.

Advantages of Peer Comments

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The researcher did the interview to find out the advantages of the peer
comments on the 4-6 sentence essays. Two questions were used to elicit the
advantages. The questions are: 1) How do the comments help you recognize your
grammar errors? and 2) Do you agree with her/his comment? Why / not?
As explained earlier, only three participants gave comments on another
participant‟s essay. Therefore, the interview was done only with the three
participants whose essay got a comment. In this discussion, each of the given
comments will be cited, followed by the interview results and the interpretation.
First, Participant A got a comment in her post by Participant G:
It‟s better to rearrange your sentence become I want to speak English
fluently, write English in correct form and want to master it.
When asked the interview questions above, Participant A responded:
Yes, I agree with the comment. I should write it in correct form.
Thanks for your suggestion. The comment helps me to correct my
error by giving the correct answer so, next time I could organize
sentence that I want to write well.
What Participant A said is one of the evidence that the peer comment helped the
participant to correct her error, and helped her be more aware of how to write a
good sentencein the future.
Second,Participant P got a comment in her post by Participant Q:
I think you should re arrange your sentence. For example “because I
can get a better job through speaking English.
When asked the interview questions above, Participant P responded:

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The comment from [Participant Q] was very helpful for me. I could
learn from her how to make a good sentence. And I also agree with her
comment.
In other words, Participant P said that she agreed with the comment and the
comment was useful for her in the future.
Third, Participant I got a comment in her post by Participant Q:
It‟s better if you put punctuation in develop my language skill. It‟s
about other languages especially English.
When asked the interview questions above, Participant I responded:
I think the comments can help me so much in recognizing my
grammatical error so that it can be helpful in giving feedback. Yes, I
do agree with their comments.
Participant I mentioned that she agreed with the comment as it could help her to
recognize her error.
In conclusion, according to the three participants in the interview, the peer
comments were helpful in recognizing and correcting the error so that they could
be more aware in the future if they use similar expressions.

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Conclusion
The aims of this study are to categorize the grammatical errors that Second
Language Acquisition students made in their Facebook group posts and to know
the advantages of peer comments. To reach the aims, the researcher analyzed the
students‟ responses to the question given by the researcher in the Facebook group
posts and did the interview with the students whose post got peer comments.
The findings show that participants did all the errors in Dulay‟s categories
with the following order of frequency Omission errors (35.3%), Misinformation
errors (35.3%), Addition (17.6%), Blends (5.9%) and Misordering (5.9%).
In the second point, it was found that all three participants agreed that the peer
comments were helpful for them to recognize and correct their errors, and to
become more aware of the use of similar expressions in the future.
The study could be helpful for lecturers because through the study
lecturers could take the actions for the future for the weaknesses of the SLA
students, especially in grammatical errors that students frequently made.For the
writing class, it‟s better if peer comment is done after writing drafts to give
suggestion about how to improve grammar.
However, the findings of this study still have some limitations because the
study was conducted in only one institution with the limited participants and for
the interview the writer only got 3 students whose Facebook post got peer
comments. The writer suggests for the other researchers to conduct a further
similar study in the different institution and participants. The second limitation is
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that error analysis as proposed by Corder (1981, as cited in Vazquez, 2008). It is
suggested that further research on error analysis do all the five suggested steps.

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Acknowledgments
I would like to express my gratitude to my first supervisor, Ibu Neny
Isharyanti, S.Pd, M.A. for her guidance and support to finish this thesis. I would
like to thank Ibu Gita Hastuti, S. Pd., M.A. who is willing to be my next
supervisor and guide me to continue my thesis until it is done. Without her I can‟t
finish my thesis. Billion thanks are also delivered to Ibu Vica Ananta, S.Pd., M.A.
as my second reader.
Many thanks are also given to my mother, father, sister and my husband,
who always reminded me when I forgot to do my thesis. Also, I would like to say
thank you to my Macan friends (Fitri, Rintan, and Maureen), my SWCC friends
(Miss Lusi, Anna, and Anes), and for my Teaching Practicum friends who
become angry and that is my motivation to finish this thesis.
The last part is I want to say big thanks to my husband who always
believes that I can go through this thesis writing because of his support, I have the
power to complete this thesis. Thanks for believing me that we always have a
second chance that is called tomorrow.

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