Analysis Based on Paraphrase Theory 1 Approximation

CHAPTER IV ANALYSIS AND FINDINGS

In the chapter four in analysis and findings, the writer uses the table that consists of three columns. They are number No, strategy errors, and reconstruction. In the first column number column, No refers to the sequences of number of each topic that is in the appendix. In the second column strategy error, in this column contains the sentences that are considered by the writer as the strategy errors that is taken from appendix. And the last column is reconstruction, in this column the writer gives the correction of the strategy errors that are made by the students.

4.5 Analysis Based on Paraphrase Theory 1 Approximation

The topic of first data is Face Book. The writer finds Approximation, such as: No Strategy errors Reconstruction 4 4 6 16 But I not use Face book enough Indeed we can share our opinion to each other and then for the opinion, and then make spend much money, I think. Face book is very amused me They put is so long But I not use Face book fully Include we can share our opinion to each other and then for the opinion, and then make spend much money, I think. Face book is very me interest They share is so long Universitas Sumatera Utara 24 24 36 40 40 58 59 60 61 61 He want to say for their self Because the face book to forbidden come to Indonesia because may be it will be make some bad effect Under the age 17, for example

15, 14, 16, is not be able to have

an face book I think that they can get the face book But you say is don’t Whether the people. the people, I mean whether a man all they see what in their like What are you reason to connect down the face book, why? So, to purpose submit to me connect with.. With my friend, so what ever they are. They can get information from, from the other or the other organization I think if we can manage our time, so face book is very He want to say for himself Because the face book to forbidden come to Indonesia because may be it will be give some bad effect Under the age 17, for example 15, 14,

16, is not be allow have an face book

I think that they can have the face book But you say is not Whether the people. the people, I mean whether people see what in their like What are you reason to relate the face book, why? So, to purpose convey to me connect with... with my friend, so what ever they are. They can get information from, from the other or the other group I think if we can manage our time, so face book is very useful Universitas Sumatera Utara 84 107 113 120 129 134 137 141 170 171 benefit for us Yes, I love know new people And I think, I think she have friend is not like, not like.., not like.. apa? ummm, not like her O….you have use it well word and unpolite word and I ever lie it If photo if impolite, I think I disagree him, o…I keep I think is very disturb, because e….very many E…I want to ask in face book there wall to wall, chat and wall post, what do you love Some I love chatting, sometimes I like wall to wall; What do you love? You love.. You have many friends but you don’t know them and or you have a little friend. O.. if us can make conclusion about face book begin you and each of us Yes, I like know new people And I think, I think she have friend is hate, not like.., not like.. apa? ummm, not like her O….you have use it polite sentence and unpolite word and I ever lie it If photo if impolite, I think I disagree him, o…I delete I think is very disturb, because e…. so many E…I want to ask in face book there wall to wall, chat and wall post, what do you like Some I like chatting, sometimes I like wall to wall; What do you like? You like.. You have many friends but you don’t know them and or you have a little friend. O.. if we can make conclusion about face book begin you and each of us Universitas Sumatera Utara 177 177 181 181 181 Ok, for the conclusion face book is very useful human being and communicate with other. Face book is very use I can see my special friend E…I love face book, because I can share, share with foreign people And I love it so much Ok, for the conclusion face book is very useful people and communicate with other. Face book is very useful I can find my special friend E…I like face book, because I can share, share with foreign people And I like it so much The topic of second data is National Examination. The writer finds Approximation, such as: No Strategy errors Reconstruction 2 2 2 5 15 37 National examination is not must They will not be successful for exam Because of very varying education We have school for three years No, I mean not just UN the signature of our school in three years I can a…the students always National examination is not important They will not be pass for exam Because of very different education We have study for three years No, I mean not just UN the determine of our school in three years I can a…the students always cheating in Universitas Sumatera Utara 46 47 cheating in the test Is need to make every.. Every student e.. will be a leader in the future every part in Indonesia The education Indonesia is very bad and to avoid this situation, I think is better for us to uncreated the national examination the exam Is need to produce every.. Every student e.. will be a leader in the future every region in Indonesia The education Indonesia is very bad and to avoid this condition , I think is better for us to uncreated the national examination The topic of third data is Indonesian Movie. The writer finds Approximation, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 1 2 2 5 6 is it usually have general, like horror, comedy, and sex a lot after in the morning, after I open up the television around nine o’clock all about the music after in the morning, after I open up the television around nine o’clock all about the music if you usually bring the violent not a lot in Indonesian movies and I my self don’t like watch horror movie is it usually have kinds, like horror, comedy, and sex a lot early in the morning, after I open up the television around nine o’clock all about the music after in the morning, after I open up the television about nine o’clock all about the music if you usually show the violent all of in Indonesian movies and I my self don’t like watch horror movie Universitas Sumatera Utara 17 22 27 61 So, there if there make, make the job with we.. with us in Medan you from the other area with an artist producer to mixed that film in our region so in that feel that I mean our emotion thank you for your watching So, there if there make, business with we.. with us in Medan you from the other region with an artist producer to combine that film in our region so in that feel that I mean our emotion thank you for your attention The topic of fourth data is Beggar. The writer finds Approximation such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 1 4 11 13 13 So, if you know about Beggar you can present and give your opinion That they can not doing by their self May be if he has said he still have family, his family can provide his need Behind of the government have d su…minimized our beggar, what is that? It will make building or house for beggar but why beggar don’t So, if you know about Beggar you can tell and give your opinion. That they can not doing by themselves May be if he has said he still have family, his family can finance his need Beside of the government have d su…minimized our beggar, what is that? It will make place or house for beggar but why beggar don’t want to stay that, Universitas Sumatera Utara 18 24 26 want to stay that, stay it, stay in the house Especially to fact beggar, we said the beggar is it negative Don’t be beggar, don’t be hopeless, we have power The children from the other country and then cheat him or cheat her stay it, stay in the house Especially to true beggar we said the beggar is it negative Don’t be beggar, don’t be hopeless, we have skill The children from the other city and then cheat him or cheat her The topic of fifth data is Horror Film. The writer finds approximation such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 51 82 83 107 112 He….I went there, went there at the midnight Nation? No, I think they have a different concept of ghost with Indonesian people in Japanese or in chine’s like vampire, some one that coming from the grave Chinese have a same concept with Indonesian horror film, because it He….I arrived there, went there at the midnight People? No, I think they have a different think of ghost with Indonesian people in Japanese or in chine’s like vampire, some one that appear from the grave Chinese have a same concept with Indonesian horror film because it Universitas Sumatera Utara include the culture, the..apa namanya depends on’, the..apa namanya? 1 Word Coinage The topic of first data is Face Book. The writer finds word coinage such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 3 10 39 45 137 157 164 I spend my time to long So low man, So, what do think about old people has face book too, like my father Ok there are so many people indeed need on face book, what you think about that, are you… If I want communicate with my friend with my college friend like you, I usually use I don’t know, because I can make new related with them, with..with new friend. Aaa…I mean should face book is get pretend I waste time. So mad man So, what do think about old person has face book too, like my father Ok there are so many people addicted on face book, what do you think about that, are you… If I want communicate with my friend with my class mate like you, I usually use I don’t know, because I can make relationship with them, with..with new friend Aaa…I mean should face book is get protect Universitas Sumatera Utara The topic of second data is National Examination. The writer finds word coinage, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 20 23 23 44 47 you mean that National examination not the one all if they don’t pass in their exam they will be angry education standard in Indonesia is not so good We must..we have develop area So, it means that every part also the teacher is not the same level in the teach you mean that National examination not the everything if they don’t pass in their exam they will disappointed education standard in Indonesia is not qualified We must..we have forward country So, it means that every region also the teacher is not the same level in the teach The topic of third data is Indonesian movie. The writer finds word coinage, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 47 50 The visual effect is a from the, So,I think is very cool movie and is look like Hollywood movie The influence is a from the, .. So, I think is very strain and is look like Hollywood movie There is no word coinage in the fourth data. The topic of fifth data is Horror Film. The writer finds word coinage, such as: Universitas Sumatera Utara No Strategy error Reconstruction 114 Like a..mal praktek to the sample that can make monster like a zombie Like a..mal practice to the sample that can make monster like a zombie 2 Circumlocution The topic of first data is Face Book. The writer finds Circumlocution, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 16 24 And, and about their status, I think that all of my friend to be with, with like, they share in one hour, one status. How that they see, they feel like.. my get, to boring and type the new sweet of with something or something like that and how to bad they put it, and I think is not to.. They put is so long I think they are..he want to say for their self, if he say can not go up in that to face book is show up himself.. Other self. So, now is is therefore Indonesian especially that face book is forbidden in Indonesia, because aa…if I am not say of not false I am say I am not wrong, because the face book to forbidden come to Indonesia because may be it will be make Just tells about update status just want tells about bad effect of face book Universitas Sumatera Utara 61 103 119 123 142 some bad effect. So, what do you think about.. thinking about that? O... you know face book is very useful and they can get information from the other or face book become their hobby and they can get information from from the other or the other organization. So, I think if we can get information from the other or the other..so, I think if we can manage our time so, face book is very benefit for us Ya..who is girl a..she has face book and e..her face book, what? E..apa namanya? E…tag other people have as you use photo and you like make her hand and for example you have those photo and some one use it and who don’t know who is she or he, and take your photo to give you or her, what do you think about that? What do you think about that?, What? About the polite or impolite photo, I think.. I think impolite photo.., Polite or impolite?, Impolite, And I when I open my face book and I see so many people joint with me, and then I see my best friend I will use chose chat, why? just want tell about face book is useful just want to say status tells about tag photo just want to argue about photo tells about chat Universitas Sumatera Utara Because sometimes where I still never meet some body with o..I met some body, I will write in her wall, e…may be I also sent message to him or to her for e.. chat with me, e.. joint face book also and like that e…only that and you..? The topic of second data is National Examination. The writer finds Circumlocution, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 29 Aa….I comment see that government do not pay attention to aaa..to manage national examination, but we still had the minister education that had responsible to manage, special for education in Indonesia, care, focus and responsible, so the education is up in Indonesia and aa…however, when we are arguing something we learn aa….in process of learning, in the end a process learning we need an examination to be aa.. as Just want tells about national examination Universitas Sumatera Utara 49 our assessment, so what we got whether we failed or not it depends on the students. If they got it, means that, if they will pass means that they, aa…they got what they learn, but if they failed, they have to redo, redo again, restudy again about what they should be do, and there is a aaa….standardization like what Mr. RB told us that we need to know it, whether to grid our ability about standardization. So, later the standardization a.. The ability, later the standardization will be use to fix our education A..a..I think, akkkk its not fair, a…national examination because I believe it for glo a.. bak…our students, but a..may be some body of students who failed in their national examination is stupid. A..they are some student which get a..something bad. tells about national examination is not fair Universitas Sumatera Utara When she or he a..will go to her school to…to do examination e…like…e…a..He He or She when some come late, because some reason e…they get before go to their school. She, she just have half of her time to..to..do their examination, and..and…I think is not fair for him who get something bad, a…and you? The topic of first data is Indonesian movie. The writer finds Circumlocution, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 17 Local channel,, local channel they we.. must like artist and actor from Medan too, like make some film, so there if, there make ..make the job with we, with us in Medan, not just Jakarta. As we know e.. artist in Indonesia just say Jakarta, Jakarta, Jakarta, but if we the best, the get local channel we she just want to tell about casting Universitas Sumatera Utara can be like artist, not just like.. if you want to be artist go to Jakarta is like casting The topic of fourth data is Beggar. The writer finds Circumlocution, such as: No Strategy error Reconstruction 24 Um…to be the beggar they doesn’t get a.. Vacancy is unreasonable, because of what e.. we can produce, produce our vacancy but ourselves. So, we didn’t to get work from, work from other people. We didn’t do it. E….what other person we have skill, we have knowledge, we have to teach, we must think, we have brain get a. get, a…make our brain to think and that why don’t be a beggar as if we are, we are hopeless. We need people’s help. We are not like that, we are human, we are human is the perfect creatures, tat God create, create in the world, and that why we have to a..be awar, be aware that we are human that we have brain and we must do, what we should be do. Don’t be beggar, don’t be hopeless, we have power tells about don’t be beggar Universitas Sumatera Utara There is no circumlocution in fifth data.

4.6 Analysis Based on Falling Back Theory 1 Translation from the L1