List of Errors in Using Conjunction Encountered in Students' Composition
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APPENDICES
1.Table of List of Cohesive Devices Encountered in Students' Compositions 2. Table of List of Errors in Using Conjunction Encountered in Students' Composition 3. Table of List of Errors in Using Reference Encountered in Students'
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16 Sentence38:*When we want to go to *movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
Sentence24:and My parents also take a nap.
13 Sentence28:*I always prepare or get dressed before I go out.
1 Sentence28:so always prepare or get dressed before I go out.
14 Sentence29:I always make over my face; *hopefully I will look more beautiful.
1 Sentence29:I always make over my face; and hopefully I will look more beautiful.
15 Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall,
because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
1 Sentence36:but We seldom go to *mall,
because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
1 Sentence38:if we want to go to *movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
1 Sentence22:andI enjoy to read them all.
17 Sentence40:*It isn’t too crowded.
1 Sentence40:and It isn’t too crowded.
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3 Sentence3:After that, I take a bath, get dressed and have breakfast.
1 Sentence3:After that, I take a bath, get dressed and have breakfast.
19 Sentence9:*
It’s name “Lisa Boutique”
1 Sentence9:and
It’s name “Lisa Boutique” S
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Sentence24:*My parents also take a nap.
11 Sentence22:*I enjoy to read them all.
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5 Sentence33:*I continue doing my hobbies until the dinnertime.
1 Sentene18:I usually study from 10:00 am to
11:00 am
1 Sentene18:I usually study from 10:00 am
until 11:00 am
2 Sentence28:I usually spend 30 minutes taking a bath.
1 Sentence28:I usually spend for 30 minutes taking a bath.
3 Sentence29:*No one disturb me while taking a bath.
1 Sentence29:and No one disturb me while taking a bath.
4 Sentence32:*I always feel hungry in the evening.
1 Sentence32:because always feel hungry in the evening.
1 Sentence33:then I continue doing my hobbies until the dinnertime.
1 Sentence19:and Her’s cooking are delicious.
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2 Sentence3:*My mother always wake me up.
1 Sentence3:and My mother always wake me up.
7 Sentence6:*I usually watch *television first.
1 Sentence6:but I usually watch *television first.
8 Sentence9:*It starts from 09:00 am until 10:00 am.
1 Sentence9:and It starts from 09:00 am until 10:00 am.
9 Sentence16:*It lasts from 11:00 am and ends at 11:45 am.
1 Sentence16:and lasts from 11:00 am and ends at 11:45 am.
10 Sentence19:*Her’s cooking are delicious.
N o N o SENTENCE Enumerative Additive Illustrative Contrastive
20 Sentence11:I usually have soto ayam, bakwan
1 Sentence11:because In the morning, almost
1 Sentence6:After that, I take a bath, and it
takes about 10 – 15 minutes then I brush my teeth.
30 Sentence7:*It do not take along time; it takes about one or two minutes.
1 Sentence7:but It do not take along time; it takes about one or two minutes.
31 Sentence10:*On Saturdays, the program on television are not too interesting.
1 Sentence10:anyway On Saturdays, the program on television are not too interesting.
32 Sentence11:*In the morning, almost all
channel show gossip news and almost the gossip in all channel show the same news.
all channel show gossip news and almost the gossip in all channel show the same news.
29 Sentence6:After that, I take a bath, *it takes about 10 – 15 minutes and I brush my teeth.
33 Sentence14:Usually I watch television in a
long time but if the program are not too interesting, I will change and change all the time until I get one which is interesting to me.
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1 Sentence14:Usually I watch television for a
long time if the program are not too interesting, I will change and change all the time until I get one which is interesting to me.
34 Sentence15:Usually if the programs is not too
interesting I just watch television in 5 or 10 minutes.
1 Sentence14:Usually if the programs is not too
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1 Sentence4:and I can do everything I want to on Saturday.
kapasari, * fried chicken at “Tip Top” or pangsit mie kiauw for lunch.
24 Sentence26:*I usually have fried chicken,
1 Sentence11:I usually have soto ayam, bakwan
kapasari, or fried chicken at “Tip Top” or pangsit mie kiauw for lunch.
21 Sentence12:*Those is my favorite foods in pasar atom.
1 Sentence12:because Those is my favorite foods in pasar atom.
22 Sentence14:*It takes 10 or 15 minutes.
1 Sentence14:andIt takes 10 or 15 minutes.
23 Sentence21:*It is our favorite plaza in Surabaya.
1 Sentence21:because It is our favorite plaza in Surabaya.
black pepper meat, fried rice, or kungpao chicken for dinner.
28 Sentence4:*I can do everything I want to on Saturday.
1 Sentence26:and I usually have fried chicken,
black pepper meat, fried rice, or kungpao chicken for dinner.
25 Sentence32:*Every one game, it is need two coins.
1 Sentence32:and Every one game, it is need two coins.
26 Sentence37:*At 09:35 pm, I arrive home.
1 Sentence37:and At 09:35 pm, I arrive home.
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4 Sentence3:*I does not go to the school.
1 Sentence3:because I does not go to the school.
interesting I just watch television for 5 or 10 minutes.
35 Sentence17:*I have some collection of VCD
48 Sentence14:*Sometimes, my mother wants
5 Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go to the campus.
1 Sentence2:because On that day, I do not go to the campus.
45 Sentence9:First, I pray and make a bed.
1 Sentence9:First, I pray and then make a bed.
46 Sentence11:In the morning, I always reads a newspaper and I do not have breakfast.
1 Sentence11:In the morning, I always reads a newspaper but I do not have breakfast.
47 Sentence12:At 09:00 am, I took a bath for 15 minutes and I get dressed.
1 Sentence12:At 09:00 am, I took a bath for 15 minutes andthen I get dressed.
me to accompany her to go somewhere, and I always accompany her because I do not have many activities.
1 Sentence39: if I watch television or watch film, I go to bed at 12 or 1 am.
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1 Sentence14:but Sometimes, my mother wants
me to accompany her to go somewhere, so I always accompany her because I do not have many activities.
49 Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate,
spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
1 Sentence16:Then, I always wash the plate,
and spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
1 Sentence17:in the other words, we always do house works alone.
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43 Sentence39:But if I watch television or watch film, I go to bed at 12 or 1 am.
and if I want to watch DVD, I can rent it near my house.
1 Sentence22:and I can find many things there.
1 Sentence17:because I have some collection of
VCD and if I want to watch DVD, I can rent it near my house.
36 Sentence19:*Usually I watch television and
film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
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1 Sentence19:and Usually I watch television
and film alone because my sister and my brother go to work and my little brother go to school.
37 Sentence22:*I can find many things there.
38 Sentence23:*I likes window shopping and shopping.
1 Sentence35:then We go home at 8:30 pm.
1 Sentence23:because I likes window shopping and shopping.
39 Sentence24:Sometimes I go with my boyfriend, *sometimes I go with my friends.
1 Sentence24:Sometimes I go with my boyfriend, or sometimes I go with my friends.
40 Sentence28:*The name of the church is Aloysius Gonzaga.
1 Sentence28:and The name of the church is Aloysius Gonzaga.
41 Sentence30:The mass starts from 6 pm to 7:30 pm.
1 Sentence30:The mass starts from 6 pm until 7:30 pm.
42 Sentence35:*We go home at 8:30 pm.
50 Sentence17:So, we always do house works alone.
51 Sentence18:After have lunch, I usually
63 Sentence24:*Usually we have dinner together and make some jokes or watching television.
usually clean my own room such as sweep the floor, etc.
61 Sentence18:*Sometimes we made some jokes too.
1 Sentence18:and Sometimes we made some jokes too.
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television in my own room and eating some snacks, but sometimes I just listening to the music or radio in my own room.
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television in my own room while eating some snacks, but sometimes I just listening to the music or radio in my own room.
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usually clean my own room such as sweep the floor, etc.
1 Sentence24:and Usually we have dinner
togetherwhile make some jokes or watching television.
64 Sentence25:*At 09:00 pm, I brush my teeth
and clean my hand and my legs for about fifteen minutes.
1 Sentence25:then At 09:00 pm, I brush my
teeth and clean my hand and my legs for about fifteen minutes.
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7 Sentence7:*I usually watch cooking program because I like cooking.
1 Sentence10:From 09:05 am until 10:00 am, I
60 Sentence10:From 09:05 am to 10:00 am, I
telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
55 Sentence28:When we arrive, my older brother park the car in the yard.
1 Sentence18:After have lunch, I usually
telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms while I usually watch TV for one hour.
52 Sentence19:*At 01:30 am, I always take a nap for 2 hours.
1 Sentence19:then At 01:30 am, I always take a nap for 2 hours.
53 Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to go to the church.
1 Sentence20:then At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to go to the church.
54 Sentence26:After from the church, we usually go out for dinner in a restaurant or café.
1 Sentence26: from the church, we usually go out for dinner in a restaurant or café.
1 Sentence28:When we arrive, my older brother park the car in the yard.
1 Sentence8:and I have breakfast for about twenty minutes.
56 Sentence32:*At 10:00 pm, I go to bed.
1 Sentence32:then At 10:00 pm, I go to bed.
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6 Sentence2:*Saturdays is, my first holiday in a week.
1 Sentence2:because Saturdays is, my first holiday in a week.
58 Sentence6:*At 08:00 am, I have breakfast.
1 Sentence6:then At 08:00 am, I have breakfast.
59 Sentence8:*I have breakfast for about twenty minutes.
1 Sentence7:and I usually watch cooking program because I like cooking.
66 Sentence9:*I a singer in the church, so I have to practice regularly every Saturdays.
1 Sentence35:and There is a lot of modification motorcycles.
1 Sentence29:then We go around the mall and
when we feel hungry, we go to the food centre to looking for a dinner
77 Sentence31:*That’s my favorite menu.
1 Sentence31:because That’s my favorite menu.
78 Sentence32:*We sit and eat.
1 Sentence32:then We sit and eat.
79 Sentence35:*There is a lot of modification motorcycles.
80 Sentence37:*I arrive at home at 11:00 o’clock.
76 Sentence29:*We go around the mall and
1 Sentence37:and I arrive at home at 11:00 o’clock.
81 Sentence38:*I change my dress and go to sleep.
1 Sentence38:then I change my dress and go to sleep.
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8 Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free, so I do not go to the campus.
1 Sentence3:On Saturdays, I’m free,because I do not go to the campus.
83 Sentence5:And after that, I just moving
around my little town gresik with a motorcycle.
when we feel hungry, we go to the food centre to looking for a dinner
1 Sentence28:and He don’t like if I wear a bad clothes at the campus.
1 Sentence9:because I a singer in the church,
70 Sentence16:*It on jalan kupang jaya.
so I have to practice regularly every Saturdays.
67 Sentence11:After I arrive at the church, I go upstairs; *my friends are wait for me.
1 Sentence11:After I arrive at the church, I go upstairs; and my friends are wait for me.
68 Sentence13:*I finish practice at 01:30 pm.
1 Sentence13:after I finish practice at 01:30 pm.
69 Sentence14:*I look for some lunch before I go home.
1 Sentence14:then I look for some lunch before I go home.
1 Sentence16:and it on jalan kupang jaya.
75 Sentence28:*He don’t like if I wear a bad clothes at the campus.
71 Sentence18:*We go home at 03:00 pm.
1 Sentence18:and We go home at 03:00 pm.
72 Sentence21:15 minutes later, I finish and get dressed in my room.
1 Sentence21:15 minutes later, I finish and get dressed in my room.
73 Sentence22:*I make up my face because I will go for a date with my boyfriend.
1 Sentence22:then I make up my face because I will go for a date with my boyfriend.
74 Sentence27:*He knows that I need more clothes to go to the campus.
1 Sentence27:because He knows that I need more clothes to go to the campus.
1 Sentence5:after that, I just moving around my little town gresik with a motorcycle.
84 Sentence8: *in the town square, there are
to return home and I go to sleep but before that I pray to God.
1 Sentence26:and We often go for the dinner or just shopping in the mall.
92 Sentence27:I usually go for dinner at 19:30 pm and we back home at 21:30 pm.
1 Sentence27:I usually go for dinner at 19:30 pm and we back home at 21:30 pm.
93 Sentence29:*Usually, I just play guitar and
sometimes I just sing a song and my boyfriend will play the guitar.
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1 Sentence29:so Usually, I just play guitar or
sometimes I just sing a song and my boyfriend will play the guitar.
94 Sentence30:*At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have
1 Sentence30:At 23:00 pm, my boyfriend have
just go to the some cyber or internet rental open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
to return home and I go to sleep but I pray to God before that.
95 Sentence31:I really enjoy my Saturday, *I feel so relax after my activities on weekdays.
1 Sentence31:I really enjoy my Saturday, and I feel so relax after my activities on weekdays.
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9 Sentence8:*I always do some hair or body treatment on Saturdays.
1 Sentence8:because I always do some hair or body treatment on Saturdays.
98 SentenceI 9:*always have hair cream bath or
facial treatment
1 Sentence 9:and I always have hair cream bath
91 Sentence26:*We often go for the dinner or just shopping in the mall.
1 Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I
many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
Saturday, I usually learn a lot of recipient from my mom.
1 Sentence8: *in the town square, there are
many people do sport such as jogging or badminton.
85 Sentence10:On these days, my parents also
free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market and buy something for our lunch.
1 Sentence10:On these days, my parents also
free from their works, so usually my mom and my dad go to the market buy something for our lunch.
86 Sentence12:*I spend about 3 hour to play the games.
1 Sentence12:and I spend about 3 hour to play the games.
87 Sentence15:*If I had a leisure time on
1 Sentence15:and If I had a leisure time on
just go to the some cyber or internet rental and open the internet just for browsing or chatting.
Saturday, I usually learn a lot of recipient from my mom.
88 Sentence16:And sometimes when I try to
cook, the taste become terrible, but I always try.
1 Sentence16:but sometimes when I try to cook, the taste become terrible, but I always try.
89 Sentence17:On Saturdays, I like only to stay
home, because on weekdays, I never stay longer in my home because of my activities.
1 Sentence17:On Saturdays, I like only to stay
home on weekdays, I never stay longer in my home because of my activities.
90 Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a nap, I
or facial treatment
99 Sentence10:*I seldom do manicure or pedicure treatment.
1 Sentence46: sometimes my friends asked me
activities, our plane, or our story while we have dinner.
111
Sentence44:First, I plans to visit one of my friends’ house.
1 Sentence44:I plans to visit one of my
friends’ house.
112
Sentence46:Second, sometimes my friends asked me to join them to visit some place, like shopping area, café, or we just walk around city.
to join them to visit some place, like shopping area, café, or we just walk around city.
1 Sentence37:and I always finish clean my house at 05:00 pm. 110
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Sentence47:Third, I go with my family to have dinner outside, visit some of my parent’s friend’s house, or we go shopping or look for books in the bookstore.
1 Sentence47:I go with my family to have
dinner outside, visit some of my parent’s frien d’s house, or we go shopping or look for books in the bookstore.
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Sentence48:Fourth, my friends and I go to some events, like music festival, art festival, movie festival, or go to a friend’s birthday party.
1 Sentence48: my friends and I go to some
events, like music festival, art festival, movie festival, or go to a friend’s birthday party.
Sentence41:We always talk about our daily activities, our plane, or our story when we have dinner.
Sentence37:*I always finish clean my house at 05:00 pm.
1 Sentence10:but I seldom do manicure or pedicure treatment. 100
Sentence18:*Sometimes she finishes cook at 11:00 am.
Sentence12:*Usually, I finish take a bath at 09:00 am.
1 Sentence12:and Usually, I finish take a bath at 09:00 am. 101
Sentence17:*Sometimes she cooks spaghetti, beef teriyaki, roasted chicken, salad, *etc.
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1 Sentence17:so Sometimes she cooks
spaghetti, beef teriyaki, roasted chicken, salad, or etc.
102
1 Sentence18:and Sometimes she finishes cook at 11:00 am. 103
1 Sentence36:then At 04:00 pm, I clean my house. 109
Sentence25:*I don’t really like watch TV for a long time.
1 Sentence25:but I don’t really like watch TV for a long time. 104 Sentence28:*I like read books, not textbooks.
1 Sentence28:and I like read books, not textbooks. 105 Sentence30:*I can read a book fast.
1 Sentence30:and I can read a book fast. 106
Sentence31:*Sometimes I can read a 200 pages book in 1, 5 hours.
1 Sentence31:therefore Sometimes I can read a 200 pages book in 1, 5 hours. 107
Sentence33:Especially, if I read an interesting book.
1 Sentence33:moreover, if I read an interesting book. 108 Sentence36:*At 04:00 pm, I clean my house.
1 Sentence41:We always talk about our daily
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1 Sentence49:There we can so crazy; and we can dance, sing and laugh loudly.
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Sentence50:Well, I love hang out with my friends or if I feel so tired to go outside, I just stay home and enjoy watch TV with my family.
friends or if I feel so tired to go outside, I just stay home and enjoy watch TV with my family.
Sentence49:There we can so crazy; *we can dance, sing and laugh loudly.
1 Sentence50:Well, I love hang out with my
1 Sentence52:in other words, On Saturdays, I usually sleep at midnight. 118
Sentence54:*I ’m very busy on weekdays and I try to enjoy my Saturdays as well as possible.
117
Sentence3:*At 10:00 am, I take a bath, sometimes I take a bath until I hours.
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before I take a bath, I eat breakfast and I read newspaper.
Sentence2:I always wake up at 08:30 am* before I take a bath, I eat breakfast and I read newspaper.
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Saturdays,so I try to enjoy my lovely Saturday.
1 Sentence56:since I have a long time on
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Sentence56:*I have a long time on Saturdays, and I try to enjoy my lovely Saturday.
Sentence52:*On Saturdays, I usually sleep at midnight.
’m very busy on weekdays so I try to enjoy my Saturdays as well as possible.
1 Sentence54:since I
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1 Sentence2:I always wake up at 08:30 am but
1 Sentence3:then At 10:00 am, I take a bath, sometimes I take a bath until I hours.
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122
1 Sentence7:and This time I always share with
my mom about anything, such as my friends, my boyfriend, and my other problems.
1 Sentence24:so sometimes, we go to prime steak or pro steak.
Sentence24:*Sometimes, we go to prime steak or pro steak.
1 Sentence17:because Sometimes, at 5:30 pm, my boyfriend comes to my house. 130
Sentence17:*Sometimes, at 5:30 pm, my boyfriend comes to my house.
parents bedroom because in the afternoon in my bedroom is so noisy.
Sentence9:*We always eat lunch at 02:00 pm but my father doesn’t eat lunch with us.
1 Sentence13:and I like take a nap in my
Sentence13:*I like take a nap in my parents bedroom because in the afternoon in my bedroom is so noisy.
1 Sentence12:because I don’t like take a nap too long. 127
1 Sentence11:Next, I take a nap for 30 minutes. 126 Sentence12:*I don’t like take a nap too long.
Sentence11:Next, I take a nap until 30 minutes.
1 Sentence10:and My mother like cooks many vegetables and chicken or meat for eat lunch. 125
Sentence10:*My mother like cooks many vegetables and chicken or meat for eat lunch.
1 Sentence9:and We always eat lunch at 02:00 pm but my father doesn’t eat lunch with us. 124
Sentence7:*This time I always share with my mom about anything, such as my friends, my boyfriend, and my other problems.
131
Sentence25:*He doesn’t like eat Japanese food.
1 Sentence25:moreover He doesn’t like eat Japanese food. 132
Sentence32:*I am very enjoy and relax on Saturdays.
1 Sentence32:so I am very enjoy and relax on Saturdays. 133 11
Sentence2:*I don’t get up early in the morning.
1 Sentence2:because I don’t get up early in the morning. 134 Sentence3:*I usually get up at 9:00 am.
1 Sentence13:and I usually get up at 9:00 am. 135
Sentence12:*Sometimes after we finish study, we go to Tunjungan Plaza (TP).
1 Sentence12:and Sometimes after we finish study, we go to Tunjungan Plaza (TP). 136 Sentence13:*Her house is near to TP.
1 Sentence13:because Her house is near to TP. 137 Sentence17:*We are like twins sister.
1 Sentence17:so We are like twins sister. 138
Sentence28:Usually in the family room, I read newspaper, talk to my parents, watch TV together, karaoke together,* etc.
read newspaper, talk to my parents, watch TV together, karaoke together,or etc.
1 Sentence28:Usually in the family room, I
Sentence33:*I play badminton from 7:30 pm to 9:00 pm.
1 Sentence7:Next, I watching television at 10:00 am. 146
1 Sentence16:and My mother and I usually go to “ Tunjungan Plaza”.
Sentence16:*My mother and I usually go to “ Tunjungan Plaza”.
1 Sentence14:because I have the same hobby with my mom. 149
Sentence14:*I have the same hobby with my mom.
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go to my grandmother’s house or go to Mall with my mom.
1 Sentence10:because At 12:00 pm, I usually
Sentence10:*At 12:00 pm, I usually go to my grandmother’s house or go to Mall with my mom.
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cartoons like sincan, Galzor inuyasa or usually I reading novels while having my breakfast.
1 Sentence8:and I watching my favorite
Sentence8:*I watching my favorite cartoons like sincan, Galzor inuyasa or usually I reading novels while having my breakfast.
Sentence7:Next, I watching television at 10:00 am.
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usually cooks “ Opor Ayam”.
1 Sentence6:and We
1 Sentence2:so I don’t gets up early. 144 Sentence6:*We usually cooks “ Opor Ayam”.
1 Sentence40:Sometimes I fall a sleep while listening to the radio. 143 12 Sentence2:*I don’t gets up early.
Sentence40:Sometimes I fall a sleep when I listening to the radio.
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141 Sentence39:*Usually I listen to radio.
don’t play badminton.
1 Sentence35: if I feel tired, I
Sentence35:But if I feel tired, I don’t play badminton.
1 Sentence33:and I play badminton from 7:30 pm until 9:00 pm. 140
1 Sentence39:then Usually I listen to radio. 142
1 Sentence18:and Sometimes we order
1 Sentence25:Before I go to sleep, I usually
TV until I feel tired and usually I take a nap for on 02:00 pm until 04:30 pm.
1
Sentence16:After lunch, I continue to watch TV until I feel tired but usually I take a nap
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will turn off the computer andthen I watch TV or DVD until in the afternoon.
Sentence13:If I feel bored with the game,I will turn off the computer and I watch TV or DVD until in the afternoon.
1 Sentence12:in other words, I use the computer for about 2 until 3 hours. 160
Sentence12:*I use the computer for about 2 until 3 hours.
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150
2 Sentence10:I like to play a card and ball
Sentence10:I like to play a card and ball games in computer with turn on the music that I have on my computer.
1 Sentence6:and I eat for about 15 minutes. 158
games in computer while turn on the music that I have on my computer.
Sentence30:*I prefer to spend my time with my family.
1 Sentence28:and always sleep at 10:00 pm. 156
Sentence18:*Sometimes we order “Dcrepes”, “McDonald”, “Hot Plate” or “Doner Kebab”.
“Dcrepes”, “McDonald”, “Hot Plate” or “Doner Kebab”.
151 Sentence19:*They our favorite foods.
1 Sentence19:because They our favorite foods. 152
Sentence22:*it is not a big dinner, we just cooking a simple food like fried rice and fried chicken, that is my favorite foods.
1 Sentence22:since it is not a big dinner, we
just cooking a simple food like fried rice and fried chicken, that is my favorite foods.
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Sentence25:Before I go to sleep, I usually prepare my books for Monday and do my homeworks which are has to collect for next week.
prepare my books for Monday and do my homeworks which are has to collect next week.
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Sentence26:*I always have homeworks from my lectures.
1 Sentence26:becauseI always have homeworks from my lectures. 155 Sentence28:*I always sleep at 10:00 pm.
1 Sentence30:and I prefer to spend my time with my family. 157 13 Sentence6:*I eat for about 15 minutes.
1 Sentence13:If I feel bored with the game,I
1 Sentence16:After lunch, I continue to watch
- on 02:00 pm until 04:30 pm.
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Sentence22:When we arrive home, my father and my mom change their clothes and say good night to me because they feel tired and then they go to sleep.
and my mom change their clothes and say good night to me because they feel tired and then they go to sleep.
about 15 minutes and then get dress and I ’m waiting for my family come back.
1 Sentence17:After I get up, I take a bath for
Sentence17:After I get up, I take a bath for about 15 minutes and then get dress and I ’m waiting* my family come back.
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1 Sentence22:after we arrive home, my father
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Sentence23:*I can’t sleep earlier on Saturday because there are many exciting programs on Television so after I change my clothes, I turn on my air conditioner of my room and after that I go out from my room.
can’t sleep earlier on Saturday because there are many exciting programs on Television so after I change my clothes, I turn on my air conditioner of my room and after that I go out from my room.
1 Sentence23:but I
Sentence24:*I headed for my family room and turn on my television and fan and then I watch TV alone.
1 Sentence23:then I always wash my face, my hands and my feet before I go to the bed. 177
1 Sentence17:because I play drum with my church’s team. 174
Sentence21:*We feels so happy because we can relax our body and mind after we working hard *a week.
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1 Sentence21:and We feels so happy because
we can relax our body and mind after we working hard for a week.
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Sentence23:*I always wash my face, my hands and my feet before I go to the bed.
Sentence26:Usually I go with my friends * at 11:00 pm until 3:00 o’clock in the morning.
1 Sentence15:I go to the church at 4:30 pm until 7:00 pm. 173
1 Sentence26:Usually I go with my friends
from at 11:00 pm until 3:00 o’clock in the morning.
178
Sentence27:We go to tretes and eat corn, meatballs and “ronde”, but I don’t do the same thing every Saturdays.
1 Sentence27:We go to tretes and eat corn,
meatballs or “ronde”, but I don’t do the same thing every Saturdays.
179 Sentence31:*I love it.
1 Sentence31:and I love it.
Sentence17:*I play drum with my church’s team.
Sentence15:I go to the church *at 4:30 pm until 7:00 pm.
1 Sentence24:then I headed for my family room
14 Sentence2:*I’m free for having to do many
and turn on my television and fan and then I watch TV alone.
166
Sentence27:Before I sleep I always pray to thank’s for his blessing, *can I go to sleep.
1 Sentence27:Before I sleep I always pray to
thank’s for his blessing,then can I go to sleep.
167
Sentence29:*I don’t have many school activities on Saturdays.
1 Sentence29:and I don’t have many school activities on Saturdays.
thing
1 Sentence11:and That shop is selling many kinds of watches. 172
1 Sentence2:So I’m free for having to do many
thing Sentence3:Nothing hurry, *nothing classes and nothing wake early.
1 Sentence3:Nothing hurry, Because nothing classes and nothing wake early.
Sentence5:*I am wake up at 10:00 am.
1 Sentence5:So I am wake up at 10:00 am. 170
Sentence8:If it is about 11:00 am or 12:00 pm, I always go to the Pasar atum.
1 Sentence8: it is about 11:00 am or 12:00 pm, I always go to the Pasar atum. 171
165
Sentence11:*That shop is selling many kinds of watches.
180
1 Sentence27:andI like Discovery Channel. 194
190
Sentence20:*I report all sell that day then I sent the report to my father.
1 Sentence20:because I report all sell that day then I sent the report to my father. 191
Sentence23:*At 19:00 pm, I dinner with my brother.
1 Sentence23:then At 19:00 pm, I dinner with my brother. 192
Sentence26:After dinner, I washes and dishes, then I watch TV.
1 Sentence26:After dinner, I washes dishes, then I watch TV. 193 Sentence27:*I like Discovery Channel.
Sentence29:When I finish, I go to bed at 23:00 pm.
1 Sentence18:I wake up at 16:00 pm, it ’s
1 Sentence29:after I finish, I go to bed at 23:00 pm. 195
Sentence30:I am not hurry go to bed besides that weekend days.
1 Sentence30:I am not hurry go to bed because weekend days. 196 16 Sentence2:*I usually wake up at 09:00 am.
1 Sentence2:and I usually wake up at 09:00 am. 197
Sentence3:After that, I watching “Dragon Ball” in Indosiar until 10:00 am and at 10,0 I watching “Crayon Shincan” in RCTI.
1 Sentence3:After that, I watching “Dragon
Ball” in Indosiar until 10:00 am then at 10,0 I watching “Crayon Shincan” in RCTI.
199 Sentence6:*I having breakfast at 11:15 am.
enough sleep for three hour because if I sleep more, I can’t sleep well at night, then I pray.
Sentence18:I wake up at 16:00 pm, it ’s enough sleep *three hour because if I sleep more, I can’t sleep well at night, then I pray.
Sentence32:*Saturdays is my favorite days
the morning because on Saturdays I get up at 05:00 am.
1 Sentence32:So Saturdays is my favorite days 181 15
Sentence1:On Saturday, I don’t hurry from morning until night, *it’s *free day for me.
1 Sentence1:On Saturday, I
don’t hurry from morning until night, *it’s *free day for me.
182
Sentence2:Usually, I get up at 04:00 am in the morning because on Saturdays I get up at 05:00 am.
1 Sentence2: Usually, I get up at 04:00 am in
184
1 Sentence14:We play for our hour. 189
Sentence7:After that, I go first to ITS to join my friend to playing soccer together.
1 Sentence7:After that, I go to ITS to join my friend to playing soccer together first. 185
Sentence8:We play only *one hour, then I back to my house.
1 Sentence8:We play only for one hour, then I back to my house. 186
Sentence9:When I finish clean my house, I have breakfast.
1 Sentence9:after I finish clean my house, I have breakfast. 187
Sentence11:After that, I washes and dishes, then I read newspaper.
1 Sentence11:After that, I washes dishes, then I read newspaper. 188 Sentence14:We play *four hour.
1 Sentence6:After I having breakfast at 11:15 am.
200
Sentence11:We arrives in *mall at 03:00 pm and we having lunch together.
1 Sentence11:We arrives in *mall at 03:00 pm andthen we having lunch together.
201
Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by car; *we go to *Algonz on jalan satelit.
1 Sentence19:At 05:30 pm, we go to church by car; and we go to *Algonz on jalan satelit.
202
Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her to say I have arrive at home and I take a bath and get dressed.
to say I have arrive at home and then I take a bath and get dressed.
1 Sentence25:After I arrive at home, I call her
5
2
2 3 14 12
3
44
9
2
1
211
5 31 11
Total
67
List of Errors in Using Reference Encountered in Students' Compositions
N o S SENTENCE Personal Demonstrative Comparative13 Sentence 43: My parents are not
10 Sentence35: We usually have dinner and go to *movie theatre.
1 We usually have dinner and go to the movie theatre.
11 Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall,
because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
1 Sentence36:*We seldom go to *mall,
because there are too crowded, so we don’t get parking car.
12 Sentence38:When we want to go to
1 Sentence38:When we want to go to
the movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
angry with us because they know that on *street are crowded.
9 Sentence22: *I enjoy to read them all.
1 My parents are not angry with us
because they know that on the street are crowded.
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3 Sentence8:Lisa have a boutique on *third floor.
1 Sentence8:Lisa have a boutique on the third floor.
15 Sentence9:* It’s name “Lisa
Boutique”
1 Sentence9:*Its name “Lisa Boutique”
Sentence33:After *finish play in G- Sentence33:After I finish play in G- Correction
1 *I enjoy to read all the magazines.
1 At 10:00 am, I go to the bathroom to take a bath and brush my teeth.
ad om sl od ad om sl od ad om sl od
4 Sentence22: I has it at 12:05 pm with my friends.
1
1 Sentence2: I do not have to get up *early as on weekdays.
1 I do not have to get up as early as on weekdays.
2 Sentence6: It takes me about 15 minutes to 20 minutes.
1 It takes about 15 minutes to 20 minutes.
3 Sentence11: I can arrange them only
on Saturdays because I always hurry on weekdays and I do not have time to arrange them.
1 I can arrange the papers and books
only on Saturdays because I always hurry on weekdays and I do not have time to arrange them.
1 I has lunch at 12:05 pm with my friends.
to*bathroom to take a bath and brush my teeth.
5 Sentence26: Although, it is always
hot in the afternoon, I can enjoy doing my hobbies accompanied by my favorite songs.
1 Although, the weather is always hot
in the afternoon, I can enjoy doing my hobbies accompanied by my favorite songs.
6
2 Sentence6: *I usually watch *television first.
1 *I usually watch the television first.
7 Sentence10: It is a funny cartoon, I think.
1 Spongebob's Squarepants is a funny cartoon, I think.
8 Sentence11: At 10:00 am, I go
- movie theatre, we usually go to Vida.
19 Sentence21:I go to the mall.
1 Sentence26:After that, I go back to
29 Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up
and prepare myself to go to the church.
1 Sentence20:*At 03:30 pm, I get up and prepare myself to go to church.
30 Sentence22:Before my family and I
go to the church, we always switch on some of lamps, close all the windows and lock the doors.
1 Sentence22:Before my family and I
go to church, we always switch on some of lamps, close all the windows and lock the doors.
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6 Sentence26:After that, *go back to
my own room and pray for about five minutes, then go to sleep.
my own room and pray for about five minutes, then go to sleep.
1 Sentence18:After I have lunch, I
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ready to go to the church for practice with the church’s band.
1 Sentence8:At 11:00 o’clock, I get
ready to go to church for practice with the church’s band.
33 Sentence10:I go to the church at 11:45 with my boyfriend.
1 Sentence10:I go to church at 11:45 with my boyfriend.
34 Sentence24:I like to go to the mall.
1 Sentence24:I like to go to mall.
35 Sentence27:*He knows that I need more clothes to go to the campus.
1 Sentence27:*He knows that I need more clothes to go to campus.
usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
usually telephone my best friend or sent messages to my friends via sms and I usually watch TV for one hour.
1 Sentence21:I go to mall.
1 Sentence5:I just go to church on Saturday night.
20 Sentence27:Sometimes on Saturdays, I go to the church.
1 Sentence27:Sometimes on Saturdays, I go to church.
21 Sentence32:After the mass finishes,
usually my sister, my boyfriend and I go to the restaurant.
1 Sentence32:After the mass finishes,
usually my sister, my boyfriend and I go to restaurant.
22
5 Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go to the campus.
1 Sentence2:*On that day, I do not go to campus.
23 Sentence5:I just go to the church on Saturday night.
24 Sentence6:I and my family always go to the church every Saturday night.
28 Sentence18:After have lunch, I
1
1 Sentence6: my family and I always go to the church every Saturday night.
25 Sentence9:First, I pray and make a bed.
1 Sentence9:First, I pray and make bed.
26 Sentence16:Then, I always wash the
plate, spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
1 Sentence16:Then, I always wash the
plate, the spoon alone because in my house we do not have servant.
27 Sentence17:So, we always do house works alone.
1 Sentence17:So, we always do the house works alone.
7 Sentence8:At 11:00 o’clock, I get
41 Sentence21:Usually, if I am not take a
9 Sentence45:There I can talk about
55 Sentence20:Every Saturday, we
Sentence17:At 02:00 pm, we go to *food court for having lunch.
1 Sentence17:At 02:00 pm, we go to the food court for having lunch.
53 Sentence29:There are my activities on Saturdays.
1 Sentence29:Those are my activities on Saturdays. 54 13
Sentence1:On Saturday, I wake up late than customarily, because I don’t have anything to do on Saturday.
1 Sentence1:On Saturday, I wake up
later than customarily, because I don’t have anything to do on Saturday.
2 Sentence20:Every Saturday, we
always visit different restaurant because if *choose (visit) one restaurant everyday *feel bored with the foods and the situation.
together, for example go to Galaxi Mall because Galaxi Mall is near from my house.
always visit different restaurant because if we choose (visit) one restaurant everyday we feel bored with the foods and the situation.
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