An Error Analysis In Writing Narrative Text Made By The Eleventh Grade Students Of SMK Teladan Sumatera Utara 1 Helvetia
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Write your experience during your holiday consists of 200 words
Experience During Holiday
Hi everybody… my name is selly Tobing I’m from eleventh grade
accounting. I wanted to tell you about my experience during holidays.
When holidays, I and my family went on to Batu merah beach. my heart
very happy. because this years. I get to hang out with my family to one of the most
beauty place at north sumatera. When arrived at Batu Merah, my mom looked very
tiring and nouse. We finally took the decision to rest and we all had lunch when we
arrived in my aunt house. I think, many people felt happy when holiday because they
can have fun with family, friends.
After we spent long time to rest, we continued our trip. While on the way, I
looked around and feel fresh with a weather and after 30 minutes we are hungry
again, so we stopped briefly to buy something such as gorengan, kue, kerupuk, etc.
after we finished shop, we continued our journey again. I was really interest to get
there and finally we arriv at Batu Merah beach, I love it.
at beach we are very happy and giggling until my stomach huet, but,
different with my mom also my sister. They was terrified because when we are on
boat the wave is high, so my mom and my sister is afraid to come the Batu Merah
again. In the afternoon. we came home and bring some sovenirs from Batu Merah
Beach.
well, that’s the first day of holiday, next day I and my friends go to merdeka
walk. We saw the festival and actually we fell happy to spent time there. Ok, by the
way it’s my experience during holiday, and I can’t wait to holiday again.
Thank you…
Experience During Holiday
Hello friends, Let me write my experience during my holidays school.
When holiday I was very happy, because I can visited many places. The moment that
I can’t forget is in the last holiday, I visitied my brother that stayed in bandung. I
always visited him when holiday come. His home was in Lembagei which was not
far from Bandung city. When I arrived there, I ask him to visit the famous places in
Bandung. My brother recommended so many interested places, so I make a list
where I had to visit.
The first place I visited was curug Dago. It was one of the waterfalls in
Bandung. My brother and I rode motorcycle to go to there. The waterfall was don’t
high, it was only 10 meters but it looked very beautiful that many people know about
that waterfall and the condition around the waterfall seemed natural.
After visiting curug Dago, I choosed Trans Studio Bandung as the second
destination. I was surprised when I knew the entrance price. It was 250.000 rupiah. I
spent a lot of money just for visiting that place. but, the English proverb “The price
doesn’t lie” was right. I rode many interesting and fun game there. There are about
twenty games in Trans Studio. I also went to the mall to buy some souvenirs for my
mother.
Then I went to the third place. the place was ciater thermal baths. My
brother and I took a bath there. i was so relax and felt the hot water in the tube. After
taking a bath, I tried to find some meals for dinner then went to a cottage for
sleeping. On the next day, i remembered my mom’s order. She asked me to buy her a
wallet and I was bought a beautiful red wallet for my mom.
That’s all my story friends, I hope you like my experience during my
holiday. Thank you friends.
Experience My Holiday
During holiday I just stay at home because I was sick for one week. so, I
couldn’t celebrate Christmas day with happy. At home, I help my mother to clean
the house and also help her to make cakes during two day. we didn’t make just for
my family, but also helped my aunt to made their cakes.
When new year came, I, my mother and my sister went to the church
together to pray. I very sad because all of my brother didn’t back to house to
celebrate the new year party. Although my family didn’t gather but I still felt happy
and said thanks to God I can gather with my parents.
At 2nd January 2015 I, my sister and my parents go to Sawit Sebrang, we
wanted to see my brother because he was sick. When we arrived there, I want cry
saw my brother’s face, he was pale and his body was thin. My holiday was really
sad, because I was sick, my brother also sick and my another brother didn’t came
back to house. So, I just celebrated the new year with my parents, my sister and also
my nephew at home. That’s my sad story during holiday, thank you.
My Holiday
Hello, my name Fernando, I’m grade XI- AK in SMK Teladan Sumut 1. I
wanted to tell you about my experience when holiday. Holiday was come, and I
really happy to get a vacation.
In the first week holiday, I just stayed at home because I am sick. But, it was
not a problem for me, I still can enjoy my holiday. When I was bored in the home, I
listen to the music from my computer and play game. No pleasant experience in the
first week holiday.
In the las holiday, me, and my family spend our spare time or our holiday
time in our village. exactly at my mother’s village in pangasean, kec.suamopolong
desa Bonondolok kota Doloksanggul. I’m so happy in there, I Have met with All my
family in there with my uncle, Brother, sister and others. It’s so fun.
The view is so wonderful and beautiful. Many mountain anywhere, there is
a river too in there. We depart from my house at 31th December 2014 at 03.00 pm.
but I was sad, because my family and my uncle’s family were celebrated the New
Year night on the way and finally we arrive in our village at 02.00 am. My family in
village still waiting for us until we arrive at village to do jurisdiction togeter. The
next morning we all go to the church.
While we spend our spare time in village, I’m so happy and happy until we
depart from village at 3rd morning and arrive at home in 4th morning. I think only that
my story about experience during my holiday… thank you.
My Experience During Holiday
During the holiday I was just stayed at home to help my parents clean
hause. There is no special thing with my holiday. I am very sad because I didn’t do
anything and I fell very sad because I got rank eleven in my raport. I promised my
parents to got top ten rank, but I cannot.
Later, I get news that my brother had accident, I can not say anything and
my family look very sad when knew the condition my brother. I only pray to God
that my brother healthy again, my tears were felt down and I hope tomorrow no more
tears because my birthday is tomorrow. In my birthday, I don’t get a gift from my
family even my mother and my father forget to say happy birthday to me.
The next day when new year come, we are hanging out with all families.
On the other hand, my father and my mother quarreled because she wanted to return
to her village but the father did not allow. Although my holiday is not very good, but
I felt happy can gather with the whole families. Finally, the holiday is over and I was
ready to go to school on monday.
That’s all my experience story of my holiday, thank you.
Experience During Holiday
I wanted to tell you about the story of my experience during holiday. When
holiday, I couldn’t go anywhere because I am sick. In 4 days I just stay at home until
my health good again. I fell boring at home, nothing activity I can doing when I am
sick but I felt happy because my friends came to my house to saw me. They bring
many foods also don’t forget to bring the guitar and we are singing all day in my
house.
The next day when I felt good, my mother and I went to my sister’s house
because my mother promised to make cakes with my sister. I was happy because I
could meet my nephew there, I really miss them very much. In the afternoon we are
playing fireworks together, we were all feeling happy and laughed loudly. After
finish playing fireworks, we go to the church at the night to pray until the new year
come.
The last day, I went to my uncle’s house to celebrate the new year. All of
my family came to my uncle’s house, we were feeling happy because this moment
only one in a year. So that was my story and unforgettable moments during holiday,
although I was sick in the first holiday, but I fell happy in the last holiday.
Write your experience during your holiday consists of 200 words
Experience During Holiday
Hi everybody… my name is selly Tobing I’m from eleventh grade
accounting. I wanted to tell you about my experience during holidays.
When holidays, I and my family went on to Batu merah beach. my heart
very happy. because this years. I get to hang out with my family to one of the most
beauty place at north sumatera. When arrived at Batu Merah, my mom looked very
tiring and nouse. We finally took the decision to rest and we all had lunch when we
arrived in my aunt house. I think, many people felt happy when holiday because they
can have fun with family, friends.
After we spent long time to rest, we continued our trip. While on the way, I
looked around and feel fresh with a weather and after 30 minutes we are hungry
again, so we stopped briefly to buy something such as gorengan, kue, kerupuk, etc.
after we finished shop, we continued our journey again. I was really interest to get
there and finally we arriv at Batu Merah beach, I love it.
at beach we are very happy and giggling until my stomach huet, but,
different with my mom also my sister. They was terrified because when we are on
boat the wave is high, so my mom and my sister is afraid to come the Batu Merah
again. In the afternoon. we came home and bring some sovenirs from Batu Merah
Beach.
well, that’s the first day of holiday, next day I and my friends go to merdeka
walk. We saw the festival and actually we fell happy to spent time there. Ok, by the
way it’s my experience during holiday, and I can’t wait to holiday again.
Thank you…
Experience During Holiday
Hello friends, Let me write my experience during my holidays school.
When holiday I was very happy, because I can visited many places. The moment that
I can’t forget is in the last holiday, I visitied my brother that stayed in bandung. I
always visited him when holiday come. His home was in Lembagei which was not
far from Bandung city. When I arrived there, I ask him to visit the famous places in
Bandung. My brother recommended so many interested places, so I make a list
where I had to visit.
The first place I visited was curug Dago. It was one of the waterfalls in
Bandung. My brother and I rode motorcycle to go to there. The waterfall was don’t
high, it was only 10 meters but it looked very beautiful that many people know about
that waterfall and the condition around the waterfall seemed natural.
After visiting curug Dago, I choosed Trans Studio Bandung as the second
destination. I was surprised when I knew the entrance price. It was 250.000 rupiah. I
spent a lot of money just for visiting that place. but, the English proverb “The price
doesn’t lie” was right. I rode many interesting and fun game there. There are about
twenty games in Trans Studio. I also went to the mall to buy some souvenirs for my
mother.
Then I went to the third place. the place was ciater thermal baths. My
brother and I took a bath there. i was so relax and felt the hot water in the tube. After
taking a bath, I tried to find some meals for dinner then went to a cottage for
sleeping. On the next day, i remembered my mom’s order. She asked me to buy her a
wallet and I was bought a beautiful red wallet for my mom.
That’s all my story friends, I hope you like my experience during my
holiday. Thank you friends.
Experience My Holiday
During holiday I just stay at home because I was sick for one week. so, I
couldn’t celebrate Christmas day with happy. At home, I help my mother to clean
the house and also help her to make cakes during two day. we didn’t make just for
my family, but also helped my aunt to made their cakes.
When new year came, I, my mother and my sister went to the church
together to pray. I very sad because all of my brother didn’t back to house to
celebrate the new year party. Although my family didn’t gather but I still felt happy
and said thanks to God I can gather with my parents.
At 2nd January 2015 I, my sister and my parents go to Sawit Sebrang, we
wanted to see my brother because he was sick. When we arrived there, I want cry
saw my brother’s face, he was pale and his body was thin. My holiday was really
sad, because I was sick, my brother also sick and my another brother didn’t came
back to house. So, I just celebrated the new year with my parents, my sister and also
my nephew at home. That’s my sad story during holiday, thank you.
My Holiday
Hello, my name Fernando, I’m grade XI- AK in SMK Teladan Sumut 1. I
wanted to tell you about my experience when holiday. Holiday was come, and I
really happy to get a vacation.
In the first week holiday, I just stayed at home because I am sick. But, it was
not a problem for me, I still can enjoy my holiday. When I was bored in the home, I
listen to the music from my computer and play game. No pleasant experience in the
first week holiday.
In the las holiday, me, and my family spend our spare time or our holiday
time in our village. exactly at my mother’s village in pangasean, kec.suamopolong
desa Bonondolok kota Doloksanggul. I’m so happy in there, I Have met with All my
family in there with my uncle, Brother, sister and others. It’s so fun.
The view is so wonderful and beautiful. Many mountain anywhere, there is
a river too in there. We depart from my house at 31th December 2014 at 03.00 pm.
but I was sad, because my family and my uncle’s family were celebrated the New
Year night on the way and finally we arrive in our village at 02.00 am. My family in
village still waiting for us until we arrive at village to do jurisdiction togeter. The
next morning we all go to the church.
While we spend our spare time in village, I’m so happy and happy until we
depart from village at 3rd morning and arrive at home in 4th morning. I think only that
my story about experience during my holiday… thank you.
My Experience During Holiday
During the holiday I was just stayed at home to help my parents clean
hause. There is no special thing with my holiday. I am very sad because I didn’t do
anything and I fell very sad because I got rank eleven in my raport. I promised my
parents to got top ten rank, but I cannot.
Later, I get news that my brother had accident, I can not say anything and
my family look very sad when knew the condition my brother. I only pray to God
that my brother healthy again, my tears were felt down and I hope tomorrow no more
tears because my birthday is tomorrow. In my birthday, I don’t get a gift from my
family even my mother and my father forget to say happy birthday to me.
The next day when new year come, we are hanging out with all families.
On the other hand, my father and my mother quarreled because she wanted to return
to her village but the father did not allow. Although my holiday is not very good, but
I felt happy can gather with the whole families. Finally, the holiday is over and I was
ready to go to school on monday.
That’s all my experience story of my holiday, thank you.
Experience During Holiday
I wanted to tell you about the story of my experience during holiday. When
holiday, I couldn’t go anywhere because I am sick. In 4 days I just stay at home until
my health good again. I fell boring at home, nothing activity I can doing when I am
sick but I felt happy because my friends came to my house to saw me. They bring
many foods also don’t forget to bring the guitar and we are singing all day in my
house.
The next day when I felt good, my mother and I went to my sister’s house
because my mother promised to make cakes with my sister. I was happy because I
could meet my nephew there, I really miss them very much. In the afternoon we are
playing fireworks together, we were all feeling happy and laughed loudly. After
finish playing fireworks, we go to the church at the night to pray until the new year
come.
The last day, I went to my uncle’s house to celebrate the new year. All of
my family came to my uncle’s house, we were feeling happy because this moment
only one in a year. So that was my story and unforgettable moments during holiday,
although I was sick in the first holiday, but I fell happy in the last holiday.