4. Verbs and Expressions with Prepositions
Example 38: Source text
Target text
I cursed under my breath. page 32 Aku menggerutu. page 41
Verb ‟curse‟ collocates with preposition ‟under‟ in English. As written
above, „cursed under my breath‟ was simply translated to „menggerutu‟. Literally,
„curse‟ means „a prayer that harm will come to someone‟ or „disrespectful or indecent word or expression
‟ and „under‟ means „in a lower position than something‟. The translator translated the collocation in the different form verb +
preposition were translated to verb. Instead of translating the sentence to „Aku
mengutuk dibawah napasku‟, the translator expressed the idea of the original
message by choosing other word that represents the message of the original text.
Example 39: Source text
Target text Then dinner came, and all the campers
lined up by cabin and marched into the
dining pavilion. page 34 Lalu waktu makan malam pun tiba, dan
semua pekemah berbaris di dekat
pondok dan berderap masuk ke
paviliun makan. page 43
Verb ‟march‟ collocates with preposition ‟into‟ in English. As written
above, „marched into‟ was translated to „berderap masuk ke‟. Literally, „march‟
means „to walk with stiff regular steps like a soldier‟ while „into‟ is a preposition usually follows a verb to indicate direction which means „ke dalam‟ or „masuk
ke ‟. The translator translated the collocation in the different form verb +
preposition were translated to verb + verb + preposition. The translator rather
used dynamic translation to translate the collocation and reproduce translation with the closest meaning and message of the source text. Lit
erally, „march into‟ is translated to „berbaris masuk ke‟. But the translator chose „berderap‟ to replace
the word „march‟ rather than „berbaris‟. In English, „berderap‟ means „to move forward at a speed that is faster than a walk and slower than a canter‟. The
collocation translated so in order to make an appropriate translation based on the context and the message that is brought. Word „berbaris‟ and „berderap‟ are
different in meaning. However „march‟ in the context of the sentence is closer to „berderap‟ and they are equal although different. This is called dynamic
equivalence.
Example 40: Source text
Target text
“I‟ll deal with the school,” I promised,
anxious to change the subject. page 17
Aku akan membereskan soal
sekolah, janjiku, tak sabar untuk mengubah topik. page 20
Verb „deal‟ collocates with preposition „with‟ in English. Literally, „deal with‟ is translated to „berurusan dengan‟ but as written above it was translated to
„membereskan soal‟ verb + preposition was translated to verb + noun. Word „soal‟ is singly a noun, but in the sentence „membereskan soal sekolah‟ it
functions as a preposition which means „about‟. The translator rather used the
dynamic translation to translate the collocation. However, „deal with‟ and
„membereskan soal‟ are dynamically equal based on the context of the story.
Example 41: Source text
Target text
He pressed me hard, …
page 37
Dia betul-betul mendesakku , …
page 46 Verb „press‟ collocates with preposition „hard‟ in English. Literally,
„press hard‟ is translated to „mendesak dengan keras‟ but as written above it was translated to „betul-betul mendesak‟ verb + adverb was translated to adjective +
verb. The translator rather used the dynamic translation to translate the collocation to make the more
natural translation. However, „press me hard‟ and „betul-betul mendesakku‟ are dynamically equal based on the context of the story
5. Verbs and Adverbs