Latar Belakang Isi CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS

Table 4.2 The Descriptive Statistics of the Respondents’ Opinion on the First Survey Research. Frequencies No Statements N 1 2 3 4 5 1. Writing in English is very important to support the career. 75 5 6.6 5 6.6 6 8 22 29.3 37 49.3 2. The importance of model of the composition can assist in writing a composition 75 0 4 5.3 6 8 26 34.6 39 52 3. Before writing activity started, it is better preceded with the analysis model of composition 75 0 3 4 5 6.6 23 30.6 44 58.6 4. Good composition is a composition which having structure 75 3 4 5 6.6 7 9.3 24 32 36 48 5. We can ask the comment or input from others as proofread 75 4 5.3 4 5.3 12 16 37 49.3 18 24 6. Peer-editing and peer- assessment are very needed 75 2 2.6 6 8 26 34.6 24 32 19 25.3 7. Grammar represents the second difficulty in writing English. 75 5 6.6 10 13.3 8 10.6 22 29.3 30 40 8. Vocabulary represents the third difficulty after grammar 75 3 4 7 9.3 9 12 26 34.6 30 40 9. The most difficulty in writing is finding the idea. 75 5 6.6 8 10.6 9 12 20 26.6 33 44 10. Activity type like pair work and group work in writing English are very assertive 75 1 1.3 6 8 14 18.6 25 33.3 29 38.6 11. Other types of activity in writing like writing an article, report, and paper also support in writing progress. 75 2 2.6 4 5.3 9 12 23 30.6 37 49.3 12. Topics like films, music, and current issue are interesting to be written. 75 0 5 6.6 15 20 26 34.6 29 38.6 13. Free writing is the one of solution if getting stuck with idea. 75 0 8 10.6 19 25.3 21 28 27 36 14. Practice writing that will be given better is started from essay, for example writing about personal experience. 75 1 1.3 5 6.6 10 13.3 22 29.3 37 49.3 15. Worksheet has function as guidance to write 75 0 4 5.3 6 8 26 34.6 9 12 16. Writing activities needed are essay writing, summary, paraphrasing. 75 0 10 13.3 23 30.6 52 69.3 Table. 4.4 Sub-Categorized Errors No. Statement Errors Frequency Percentage 1. Incorrect use of word caused by transfer or awkward expression and words. 325 28 2. Subject verb agreement 193 16.7 3. Incorrect selection of word 184 16 4. Incorrect use of tense 120 10.4 5. Incorrect use or deletion of preposition 80 6.9 6. Incorrect use of verb be 68 5.9 7. Incorrect use of auxiliary 55 4.75 8. Incorrect use of gerund 53 4.6 9. Incorrect use of noun 47 4 10. Redundant use of words 37 3.2 11 Incorrect use of voice 34 2.9 12. Incorrect or omission use of article 33 2.8 13. Incorrect or omission of pronoun 28 2.4 14. Incorrect plural 23 2 Total 1150