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THE EFFECTIVENESS OF PWIM TO TEACH WRITING VIEWED FROM
STUDENTS’ CREATIVITY
(An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade Students of SMP Negeri 3
Delanggu in the Academic Year of 2013/2014)
Abdusalam Ali Mousa 1, Ngadiso 2, Abdul Asib2
Magister Program of English Education of Post Graduate UNS, Surakarta
Abdu_asslam@hotmail.com
Abstract
Background: Students usually get difficulty in how to start writing sentences if the teacher
does not give the list of verbs they should use in their sentences. Their sentences do not have
correct punctuation: they use commas and full stop without any good reason or there is no
punctuation where there should be some. Their writing ideas have not been presented in an
order that easily makes sense to the reader. The word selection is not appropriate with the
context. The purposes of the study are: (1) to reveal whether PWIM is more effective than
Guided Writing in teaching writing for the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu;
(2) to reveal whether the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu who have high
creativity have better writing skill than those having low creativity; (3) to reveal whether
there i s a n interaction between teaching methods and students’ creativity to teach writing
for the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu.
Subjects and Methods: The experimental research was conducted at SMP Negeri 3
Delanggu, from November to December 2013. The sample of the research was two classes;
those were V D which was treated as experimental class taught by using PWIM and V B
which was treated as control class taught by using Guided Writing. Each of them consisted of
22 students. The data were in the form of quantitative data that were taken from writing
test and creativity test. The data of writing test were used to know the students’ writing skill.
The data of creativity test were used to know the students’ level of creativity. The data of
writing test were the scores of students’ writing test that was administered after having nine
times treatments for each class. The researcher analyzed the data using ANOVA and Tukey
Test.
Result: PWIM is an effective method to teach writing for the students at the eighth grade
students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu.
Conclusion: The use of PWIM in teaching writing is effective.
Keywords: PWIM, Guided Writing, creativity
Introduction
Mastering writing skill is very important
mastered by the students at school is
because writing is the way to express our
writing skill because it is very important in
ideas, feelings, and thoughts. Besides, one
everyone daily life. Moreover, in this social
of the language skills that should be
media era, people prefer communicating
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through social media rather than the old
However
mastering
writing
skill
in
communication lifestyle, so the emergence
native language is not an easy task for the
of writing will be seen.
students. Moreover, they should master
Writing
is
a
deliberate,
conscious
English
writing
skill,
writing
using
a
be
foreign language. Students’ writing in the
planned and organized (Coe and Rycroft,
foreign language has social and cognitive
2005: 1). According to Nunan (2003: 88)
challenges related to foreign language
writing is the process of thinking to invent
acquisition.
ideas, thinking about how to express into
believe that writing in a foreign language
good writing, and arranging the ideas into
may prove too frustrating and difficult for
statement and paragraph clearly. Byrne
students.
(1997: 1) defines writing as the act of
Bowles (1996: 4) that many instructors
forming letters or combination of letters:
believe that students of a foreign language
making marks on flat surface of some kind.
have such a limited vocabulary in the
It is more than production of graphic
second language that writing is not only a
symbols, just as speech is more than the
difficult but also an extremely frustrating
production of sounds. The symbols have to
experience.
be
interview with the English teacher at SMP
process,
which
arranged
can
and
according
should
to
certain
Foreign
language
teachers
It is stated by Bridwell and
Based
on
the
researcher’s
conventions to form words, and words are
Negeri
arranged to form sentences. Ghaith (2002:
students
1) mentions that writing is a complex
conducting writing activities. They usually
process that allows the writer to explore
get difficulty in how to start writing
thoughts, and ideas, and make them visible
sentences if the teacher does not give the
and concrete. It means that writing needs
list of verbs they should use in their
some
vocabularies,
sentences. Their sentences do not have
generating ideas, using tenses or grammar
correct punctuation: they use commas and
and punctuation. In conclusion, writing is
full stop without any good reason or there
the act of forming letters and more than
is no punctuation where there should be
putting spoken language into written
some. Their writing ideas have not been
form; it is a complex process and activity
presented in an order that easily makes
to arrange and produce written form in
sense to the reader. The word selection is
which the writer uses certain convention
not appropriate with the context.
skills
as
using
3
Delanggu,
usually
the
get
eighth
grade
problems
in
of linguistic aspects (such as vocabulary,
According to Peha (2003: 3), there are
content, grammar, and punctuation) to
some criteria of a good writing. The First is
express the thoughts and ideas.
the
ideas
that
are
interesting
and
3
important. Ideas are what it’s all about.
model
The second is organization that is logical
organizing, and communicating what the
and effective. Organization refers to the
students have learned. Pictures are used to
order of the ideas and the way the writer
draw out words from students’ current
moves from one idea to the next. The third
vocabularies and transfer them to their
is
writing. The words can then be used to
word
choice
that
is
specific
and
which
allows
for
generating,
memorable. Good writing uses just the
form
right words to say just the right things.
Calhoun (1999: 21) states that PWIM is an
The third is sentence fluency that is
inquiry-oriented
smooth and expressive. Fluent sentences
that
are easy to understand and fun to read
objects and actions as a concrete referents
with expression. The forth is conventions
to lead students into inquiring about
that
are
correct
sentences
uses
and
even
language
pictures
paragraphs.
arts
strategy
containing
familiar
and
communicative.
words and ideas, learning of phrases and
the
ways
use
sentences
punctuation, spelling, grammar, and other
grammar,
mechanics,
things that make writing consistent and
standard
English
easy to read.
discovery and analysis in their study of
Conventions
The
are
classroom
to
by
discovering
and
then
spelling,
usage
using
of
their
activities/practices
writing. Meanwhile, Woetsman (2009: 157)
depend on the method used by the
defines PWIM as a literacy program that
teachers
the
uses image analysis to enggage children in
designer of the instructional program. That
vocabulary acquisition, inductive reasoning
is why the teachers are demanded to use
activities, and writing. Joyce, et al. (2011:
the method which is appropriate with the
vii) argue that PWIM is inductive teaching
students’ need to achieve the good criteria
using pictures as a base of teaching-
of writing. One method that has good
learning that
criteria for teaching writing is The Picture
sight vocabularies as a basis for their
Word Inductive Model (PWIM). In this study,
writing, to inquire the structure of words
the researcher focuses on the two teaching
and sentences, and to write sentences and
methods, PWIM and Guided Writing.
paragraphs. According to Bowes (2013: 2),
because
the
teacher
is
enables learner to develop
A student needs a broad vocabulary to
PWIM is an instructional strategy to help
communicate in writing what he knows.
support students’ vocabulary acquisition,
PWIM builds sight vocabulary as a basis for
word connections and classifications, and
writing. PWIM fits within the inductive
then eventually supports students as they
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begin to write sentences and continue on
which the learners imitate the model texts
to
1)
given by the teacher. Hill (1999: 45) states
adds that PWIM is a multidimensional
that guided writing involves individuals or
approach that addresses several aspects of
small groups of students writing a range
literacy simultaneously. Based on those
of text types. The teacher may provide
definitions, it can be concluded that PWIM
short
is an inductive teaching method that uses
particular aspect of text type, grammar,
pictures containing familiar objects and
punctuation or spelling. Guided writing is
actions as a concrete referents to lead
linked to reading and various text types
students into inquiring about words and
are
ideas, learning of phrases and sentences by
Broughton
discovering spelling, grammar, mechanics,
composition which the teacher provides
and usage of standard English then using
helps the class to prepare the written work,
their discovery and analysis in their study
either written or oral assistance is a guided
of writing.
composition. Tyner (2004: 8) adds that
paragraphs. Rothenberger
(2011:
Compared with PWIM, Guided Writing
mini-lessons
used
as
to
demonstrate
models.
(2002:
According
118),
a
to
guided
guided writing is an instructional writing
is more teacher-centered. Teacher guides
context
the students’ brainstorming by reading the
process through modeling, support, and
text given. Teacher teaches the features of
practice. Based on those definitions, it can
the
the
be concluded that guided writing is a
purpose, and the organization of the text.
strategy in which the teacher demonstrates
Students are passive learners who listen to
for the students the process of writing a
text,
the
language
features,
teaching
the
writing
Teacher
sentence or a paragraph using proper
provides help in the process of generating
English conventions such as a particular
the ideas. Teacher maintains his help in
aspect of text type, grammar, punctuation
group
writing.
or spelling, provides the model texts, and
According to Simpson (1998: 1), guided
helps them to prepare the written work,
writing is a strategy in which the teacher
either through written or oral assistance.
demonstrates the process of writing a
Students are then given opportunities to
sentence or a paragraph using proper
apply
English conventions. Students are then
writing.
the
teacher’s
writing
explanation.
chiefly
and
guided
given opportunities to show that they can
the
Besides
skills
the
through
methods
independent
used
by
the
use these strategies and conventions on
teachers, creativity is another important
their own work. Meanwhile, Hyland (2003:
factor that influences the students’ writing
4) defines guided writing as a strategy in
skill. Creative students are independent
5
and unconventional, they can generate a
combinations from something original by
large number of ideas, able to play with
using
ideas,
the
playfulness, and imagination which is
problems in writing, eager to take risks,
useful to solve problem or environment,
display
communicate with others, and entertain
enjoy
a
creating,
good
can
deal
solve
of
intellectual
playfulness (fantasizing, daydreaming or
imagining), and have sensitivity to beauty
which
plays
an
important
role
data,
information,
experiences,
ourselves and others.
The objective of the study is to find out
in
whether or not (1) PWIM is more effective
producing a good writing. Franken (1994:
than Guided Writing to teach writing; (2)
396) states that creativity is tendency to
students having high creativity have better
generate or recognize ideas, alternatives,
writing
or possibilities that may be useful in
creativity; and (3) there is an interaction
solving
between
problems, communicating with
skill
than
teaching
those
having
methods
and
low
the
others, and entertaining ourselves and
students’ creativity in teaching writing.
other. Innovative teachers (2001) mention
Research Methodology
that creativity is the creation of something
The method used in this study was
original and often linked with imagination,
experimental research. Elliot, et al. (2000:
playfulness,
587)
and
originality.
Suharman
state
that
experimental
research
(2011: 7) defines creativity as a thinking
involves the active manipulation of an
process to create a new ideas, approaches,
independent variable to observe changes
products
in the dependent variable. In experimental
that
are
problem
useful
and
Csikszentmihaly
for
solving
environment.
(1996:
28)
mentions
research,
the
independent
variable
is
frequently manipulated in a condition
creativity as any act, idea, or product that
called
changes
that
condition. Gall, et al. (2003: 366) state that
transforms an existing domain into a new
the experiment is the most powerful
one.
that
quantitative
new
establishing cause-and-effect relationships
an
existing
Munandar
creativity
is
(2004:
ability
domain
46)
to
or
adds
create
combinations based on data, information,
or elements that exist. Based on the
the
experimental
research
or
treatment
method
for
between two or more variables.
This
study
involves
two
kinds
of
definition above, it can be concluded that
variables. The first is independent variable;
creativity is the ability to generate and
it is experimental and moderate variable.
create new perspectives, ideas, things, or
The experimental variable is the teaching
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methods (X), and the moderate variable is
The technique of collecting data was
creativity. The second variable is writing
test technique. The data were in the form
skill as dependent variable (Y). The writer
of quantitative data. To get the data, the
supposes that the relationship between X
writer used writing test and creativity test.
and Y is changed by the level of a third
Both tests were in the form of essay test.
factor Z, or creativity.
Before administering both tests to the
The population of this research was the
students, the researcher, firstly, checked
eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3
the readability of the writing and creativity
Delanggu in the academic year of 2013-
test. Meanwhile, to analyze the data,
2014. There are 4 classes all together. The
Multifactor Analysis of Variance (ANOVA)
number of the students is 88 students.
test of 2x2 and Tukey test were used.
The sample of this research was class VB
Before
and VD SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the
normality
2013/2014 academic year, each of which
conducted.
consists of 22 students. This research
The Result of the Study
needed two classes. One class was used as
After Analysis of Variance is conducted, it
the experimental group (VD) who were
can be drawn a result that:
taught using PWIM and the other one (VB)
1. Fo between columns (5.4375) is higher
as the control group who were taught
than Ft at the level of significance α=
using Guided Writing. In this research, the
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and the
researcher used In this research, the
difference
researcher used Cluster Random Sampling
significant. Because the mean of A1
to
population.
(74.86) is higher than that of A2 (71.36),
According to Fraenkel and Wallen (1993:
it can be concluded that PWIM is more
84), cluster sampling is similar to simple
effective than Guided Writing to teach
random
writing.
get
rather
sample
from
sampling
than
the
except
individuals
that
are
groups
conducting
and
the
ANOVA
homogeneity
between
columns
test,
were
is
randomly
2. Fo between rows (57.7780) is higher
selected. Then, cluster random sampling is
than Ft at the level of significance α=
selecting sample of clusters randomly. In
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and the
this case, a classroom is a cluster because
difference between rows is significant.
it consists of individuals (students). The
It can be concluded that the writing skill
researcher determined two classes used as
of students who have high and those
experimental and control class by doing
who have low creativity are significantly
lottery.
different.
Then,
because
the
mean
between B1 (78.82) is higher than B2
7
(67.41), it can be concluded that the
PWIM
students having high creativity have
writing
better writing skill than those having
students
low creativity.
Because the mean of A1B1 (82.45) is
differs
significantly
from
Guided
who
have
to
Writing
high
teach
for
creativity.
3. Fo columns by rows (6.318) is higher
higher than A2B1 (75.18), it can be
than Ft at the level of significance α=
concluded that PWIM is more effective
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and there is an
than Guided Writing to teach writing for
interaction between teaching methods
students who have high creativity.
and students’ creativity. Thus, it can be
4. Because qo between cells A1B2 and A2B2
concluded that the effectiveness of
(0.18) is lower than qt at the level of
teaching methods depend on the level
significance () = 0.05 (3.11), using
of students’ creativity.
PWIM does not differ significantly from
Based on the result of tukey test, it can
Guided Writing for students who have
be concluded that:
low creativity. It can be concluded that
students with low creativity will end up
1. qo between columns (A1-A2) (3.30) is
higher
than
qt
at
the
level
with “almost” the same result when
of
significance α= 0.05 (2.95), PWIM differs
they taught using both methods.
significantly from Guided Writing for
The Discussion of the Result of the Study
teaching writing. Because the mean of
The discussions of the finding are as
A1 (74.86) is higher than A2 (71.36), it
follows:
can be concluded that PWIM is more
1.
effective than Guided Writing.
2. qo between rows (10.75) is higher than
PWIM is more effective than Guided
Writing to teach writing.
The Picture Word Inductive Model is a
qt at the level of significance () = 0.05
teacher-facilitated
(2.95), the difference between rows is
teacher
significant. Because the mean of B1
environment that engage students to
(78.82) is higher than B2 (67.41), it can
be
be concluded that the students having
students are active in a fun and
high creativity have better writing skill
productive way.
than those having low creativity.
facilitates
active
PWIM
process.
in
is
the
cognitive
classroom.
effective
The
for
The
teaching
3. Because qo between A1B1 and A2B1 (4.84)
writing due to some reasons. First,
is higher than qt at the level of
PWIM is motivating because it uses
significance () = 0.05 (3.11), using
pictures. Pictures have many effective
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functions in teaching. They are: (1)
the students’ ability to think. PWIM
Pictures play a significant role in
does not want to view the students as
children’s
development
empty vessels to pour knowledge into.
because the images and illustrations
PWIM wants to give the students the
not only lead children to encounter a
tools to access knowledge and use it in
different genre of literature but also
a meaningful way. Feng (2011: 45)
prepare them for literacy (Whitehead,
states that if students are taught
2004: 139); (2) Pictures can provide a
regularly to think inductively, they will
topic or visual focus to prompt writing.
be able to use many sources of data
When children are exposed to pictures,
and examine the information from all
they
and
different aspects. Further, Feng (2011:
interpret the illustrations by using
46) states that training children to
their
think
literacy
become
active
imaginations.
readers
They
have
to
inductively
can
help
them
search for clues from the pictures to
discover the essence of concepts by
identify the characters and the themes.
themselves,
Students predict the events implied in
intellectual
the images in order to create a vivid
approach not only fosters children’s
story (Feng, 2011: 43); (3) Pictures are
attention to logical thinking but also
one way to elicit words and help
raises their awareness of the nature of
students
enlarge
language and knowledge.
Pictures
provide
their
vocabulary.
students
with
thus
growth.
promoting
The
their
inductive
On the other hand, Guided Writing
concrete referents for learning new
is
words, phrases and sentences (Feng,
does not promote the students to be
2011: 40). Second, PWIM is effective
independent learners. Students are not
because it activates and promotes
engaged in
students responsibility in learning.
learning because many of the steps are
PWIM is an inductive teaching strategy
teacher’s explanation and guidance of
(inquiry teaching/discovery teaching)
the
which is based on the claim that
students’ brainstorming by reading the
knowledge is built primarily from a
text given. Teacher teaches language
learners’ experiences and interactions
features,
with phenomena. It begins with what
organization of the text. Students are
the
passive learners who listen to the
learners
already
know
and
more
teacher-centered.
productive
concept.
respects their ability to think. Calhoun
teacher’s
(1999: 25) states that PWIM respects
provides
the
Teacher
purpose,
explanation.
help
in
the
Teacher
process
guides
and
of
the
the
Teacher
process
of
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generating
the
Teacher
and develop new, original, and fresh
maintains his help in group writing
ideas in their writing. They have good
and
are
confidence in their writing. They enjoy
of
creating, able to solve the problems in
guided
working
2.
writing.
alone
independent
ideas.
in
Students
the
writing
only.
step
Ontario
writing,
display
a
good
deal
of
(2005: 5.4) says that guided writing
intellectual
makes students less active in doing
daydreaming or imagining), and have
the writing because they only follow
sensitivity to beauty which play an
the
It
important role in producing a good
emphasizes on modeling so that it
writing. As stated by Ruggiero (1984:
inhibits students in exploring ideas
92), the characteristics of a creative
and creating meaning and authentic
person are as follows: (1) They are
texts on their own. Therefore, PWIM is
dynamic. Unlike most people, creative
more effective than Guided Writing to
people do not allow their minds to
teach writing.
become passive, easy to accept ideas;
The students having high creativity
(2) They are daring. They are willing to
have better writing skill than those
face
having low creativity.
their curiosity and learning, and learn
High creative students do their best in
from their experiences. As a result,
writing. They are independent and
they are less likely to repeat their
unconventional. They love what they
failure;
are doing. They have high motivation
Resourcefulness refers to ability to cut
to finish their writing until it has been
effectively
completed.
They commit time and
approach that solves the problem; (4)
energy. They like to take intellectual
They are hardworking. They are not
and emotional risks. Since writing
afraid of making the failure; and (5)
involves some risk-taking, they often
They are independent. They are not
take risks by elaborating ideas and
afraid to have new ideas different
concepts. Creative students are able to
from others. Semiawan (1984: 10)
think beyond what they feel, see, read,
states that creative person has some
and
with
characteristics. They are: (1) having
surprising ideas. They can generate a
strong imagination; (2) having high
large number of ideas. They overflow
initiative; (3) having large interest; (4)
outline
listen
already
and
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provided.
come
up
playfulness (fantasizing,
unpleasant
(3)
They
and
experience,
are
apply
resourceful.
conceptualize
the
having
high
something;
curiosity
(5)
in
being
knowing
flexible
and
Chan
(1999:
185)
state
that
in
students who have low creativity are
thinking; (6) being self-confident; (7)
usually conventional, timid, lack of
being open to new experience; (8)
confidence,
being energetic; (9) being brave in
According to Munandar (1995: 46)
taking risks; and (10) being brave in
person in a low creativity are those
expressing ideas. In addition, Renzulli
who do not have the ability to create
and Hartman (in Wilson, 2005: 2) state
something new and to share new ideas
that highly creative individuals may
implemented in problem solving. They
display a good deal of intellectual
don’t have the ability to solve the
playfulness; may frequently be caught
difficulties,
fantasizing, daydreaming or imagining.
information, and missing elements.
They exhibit
Munandar
heightened emotional
and
conforming.
problems,
(1999:
25)
gaps
adds
in
that
sensitivity. They may be very sensitive
different levels of creativity affect the
to
ways
beauty
and
visibly
moved
by
aesthetic experiences.
of
thinking,
behavior,
and
competences in any aspects. Therefore,
On the other hand, low creative
the students having high creativity
students are lack of motivation. They
have better writing skill than those
have no passion for what they are
having low creativity.
doing as the consequences they don't
3.
There
is
an
interaction
enjoy their writing activity. They easily
teaching
give up in facing the difficulties in
intelligence.
writing.
their
PWIM involves the activation of prior
writing before finishing it. They are
knowledge and life experiences to
less independent. They depend much
interpret the picture into the form of
on their teacher’s instructions. Their
words. PWIM respects the students’
creative mind stays idle as it has
ability to think. Furthermore, PWIM
nothing to play with. They are unable
requires higher-order thinking skills,
to come up with new and fresh ideas.
problem-solving,
They
in
reasoning abilities which encourage
expressing their thought. They lack of
the students to be active in every
confidence in their writing. They are
teaching step given. Calhoun (1999:
afraid in taking risks because they are
21) states that PWIM is designed to
afraid to be wrong. Those will make
capitalize on children’s ability to think
them easily give up in writing. Chan
inductively. The PWIM enables the
They
often
often
find
dismiss
difficulty
methods
and
between
and
students’
inductive
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students to build generalizations of a
well.
concept and it respects their ability to
high creative students enjoy using
think.
PWIM. They are able to identify the
Having
those
characteristics,
The high creative students of the
picture easily and quickly. They can
experimental group to whom the
identify objects, actions, and any
PWIM
and
other stuff/abstract feeling from the
enthusiastic in joining the activities.
picture, they actively interpret what
High creative students do their best in
they see in the picture into the form
writing. They are independent and
of words/phrases. They can create
unconventional. They love what they
sentences using the words they gain
are doing. They have high motivation
from the picture and combine their
to finish their writing until it has been
sentences into paragraph. They can
completed.
They commit time and
make generalization of some concepts
energy. They like to take intellectual
of descriptive text. They generalize
and emotional risks. Since writing
the
involves some risk-taking, they often
identification and description of the
take risks by elaborating ideas and
text. That is why PWIM is more
concepts. Creative students are able
effective to teach writing for the
to think beyond what they feel, see,
students having high creativity.
is
applied,
are
active
sentence
pattern
and
the
read, and listen and come up with
On the other hand, low creative
surprising ideas. They can generate a
students are lack of motivation. They
large number of ideas. They overflow
have no passion for what they are
and develop new, original, and fresh
doing as the consequences they don't
ideas in their writing. They have good
enjoy their writing activity. They easily
confidence
give up in facing the difficulties in
in
their
writing.
They
enjoy creating and able to solve the
writing.
problems in writing. According to
writing before finishing it. They are
Renzulli and Hartman (in Wilson,
less independent. They depend much
2005:
is
on their teacher’s instructions. Their
overflown with ideas, plays with ideas
creative mind stays idle as it has
and
creating,
nothing to play with. They are unable
improvises, is an inventor and idea
to come up with new and fresh ideas.
generator, creates and brainstorms
They cannot generate a large number
2),
a
concepts,
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creative
enjoys
thinker
They
often
dismiss
their
of ideas. They often find difficulty in
the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3
expressing their thought. They lack of
Delanggu
confidence in their writing. They are
2013/2014 having high creativity is better
afraid in taking risks because they are
than those having low creativity; (3) There
afraid to be wrong. And, they don’t
is
enjoy creating. Chan and Chan (1999:
methods
185) state that students who have low
teaching writing for the eighth grade
creativity are usually conventional,
students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the
timid,
academic year of 2013/2014.
lack
of
conforming.
confidence,
the
academic
interaction
and
year
between
students’
of
teaching
creativity
in
those
Based on the research findings, it can
characteristics, low creative students
be concluded that PWIM is an effective
are
learning
method for teaching writing at the eighth
writing and in achieving good result in
grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu
writing.
in the academic year of 2013/2014.
facing
Having
and
an
in
difficulties
Their
in
low
creative
characteristics are barriers to master
good
writing
whatever
skill.
methods
That
is
why
used
by
the
Some suggestions can be listed as
follows:
1. For teachers
teachers are not effective for them. As
a. It is recommended for the teacher
stated by Munandar (1999: 25) that
to use the PWIM because it is fun
different levels of creativity affect the
and productive;
ways
of
thinking,
behavior,
and
b. Teachers are suggested to use the
competences in any aspects. Wang
teaching
(2011)
appropriate to the students’ need.
observes
that
cognitive
creativity and academic achievement
methods
which
are
2. For Students
are positively related to each other. So,
a. The students should be active and
it can be concluded that using PWIM
involved thoroughly in the teaching
and Guided Writing are less effective
and learning process in order to
for the students having low creativity.
improve their writing skill;
Conclusion and Suggestion
b. The
students
who
develop
low
Based on the descriptions of the data
creativity
analysis, the findings are: (1) PWIM is more
writing through many exercises.
effective than Guided writing to teach
should
have
their
3. For Other Researchers
writing for the eighth grade students of
The result of this research can be used
SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the academic
as a starting point of conducting further
year of 2013/2014; (2) The writing skill of
researches by extending it to other
13
levels and subjects. The research can
instructional method and strengthen
give additional contribution to develop
the similar theory.
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THE EFFECTIVENESS OF PWIM TO TEACH WRITING VIEWED FROM
STUDENTS’ CREATIVITY
(An Experimental Research at the Eighth Grade Students of SMP Negeri 3
Delanggu in the Academic Year of 2013/2014)
Abdusalam Ali Mousa 1, Ngadiso 2, Abdul Asib2
Magister Program of English Education of Post Graduate UNS, Surakarta
Abdu_asslam@hotmail.com
Abstract
Background: Students usually get difficulty in how to start writing sentences if the teacher
does not give the list of verbs they should use in their sentences. Their sentences do not have
correct punctuation: they use commas and full stop without any good reason or there is no
punctuation where there should be some. Their writing ideas have not been presented in an
order that easily makes sense to the reader. The word selection is not appropriate with the
context. The purposes of the study are: (1) to reveal whether PWIM is more effective than
Guided Writing in teaching writing for the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu;
(2) to reveal whether the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu who have high
creativity have better writing skill than those having low creativity; (3) to reveal whether
there i s a n interaction between teaching methods and students’ creativity to teach writing
for the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu.
Subjects and Methods: The experimental research was conducted at SMP Negeri 3
Delanggu, from November to December 2013. The sample of the research was two classes;
those were V D which was treated as experimental class taught by using PWIM and V B
which was treated as control class taught by using Guided Writing. Each of them consisted of
22 students. The data were in the form of quantitative data that were taken from writing
test and creativity test. The data of writing test were used to know the students’ writing skill.
The data of creativity test were used to know the students’ level of creativity. The data of
writing test were the scores of students’ writing test that was administered after having nine
times treatments for each class. The researcher analyzed the data using ANOVA and Tukey
Test.
Result: PWIM is an effective method to teach writing for the students at the eighth grade
students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu.
Conclusion: The use of PWIM in teaching writing is effective.
Keywords: PWIM, Guided Writing, creativity
Introduction
Mastering writing skill is very important
mastered by the students at school is
because writing is the way to express our
writing skill because it is very important in
ideas, feelings, and thoughts. Besides, one
everyone daily life. Moreover, in this social
of the language skills that should be
media era, people prefer communicating
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through social media rather than the old
However
mastering
writing
skill
in
communication lifestyle, so the emergence
native language is not an easy task for the
of writing will be seen.
students. Moreover, they should master
Writing
is
a
deliberate,
conscious
English
writing
skill,
writing
using
a
be
foreign language. Students’ writing in the
planned and organized (Coe and Rycroft,
foreign language has social and cognitive
2005: 1). According to Nunan (2003: 88)
challenges related to foreign language
writing is the process of thinking to invent
acquisition.
ideas, thinking about how to express into
believe that writing in a foreign language
good writing, and arranging the ideas into
may prove too frustrating and difficult for
statement and paragraph clearly. Byrne
students.
(1997: 1) defines writing as the act of
Bowles (1996: 4) that many instructors
forming letters or combination of letters:
believe that students of a foreign language
making marks on flat surface of some kind.
have such a limited vocabulary in the
It is more than production of graphic
second language that writing is not only a
symbols, just as speech is more than the
difficult but also an extremely frustrating
production of sounds. The symbols have to
experience.
be
interview with the English teacher at SMP
process,
which
arranged
can
and
according
should
to
certain
Foreign
language
teachers
It is stated by Bridwell and
Based
on
the
researcher’s
conventions to form words, and words are
Negeri
arranged to form sentences. Ghaith (2002:
students
1) mentions that writing is a complex
conducting writing activities. They usually
process that allows the writer to explore
get difficulty in how to start writing
thoughts, and ideas, and make them visible
sentences if the teacher does not give the
and concrete. It means that writing needs
list of verbs they should use in their
some
vocabularies,
sentences. Their sentences do not have
generating ideas, using tenses or grammar
correct punctuation: they use commas and
and punctuation. In conclusion, writing is
full stop without any good reason or there
the act of forming letters and more than
is no punctuation where there should be
putting spoken language into written
some. Their writing ideas have not been
form; it is a complex process and activity
presented in an order that easily makes
to arrange and produce written form in
sense to the reader. The word selection is
which the writer uses certain convention
not appropriate with the context.
skills
as
using
3
Delanggu,
usually
the
get
eighth
grade
problems
in
of linguistic aspects (such as vocabulary,
According to Peha (2003: 3), there are
content, grammar, and punctuation) to
some criteria of a good writing. The First is
express the thoughts and ideas.
the
ideas
that
are
interesting
and
3
important. Ideas are what it’s all about.
model
The second is organization that is logical
organizing, and communicating what the
and effective. Organization refers to the
students have learned. Pictures are used to
order of the ideas and the way the writer
draw out words from students’ current
moves from one idea to the next. The third
vocabularies and transfer them to their
is
writing. The words can then be used to
word
choice
that
is
specific
and
which
allows
for
generating,
memorable. Good writing uses just the
form
right words to say just the right things.
Calhoun (1999: 21) states that PWIM is an
The third is sentence fluency that is
inquiry-oriented
smooth and expressive. Fluent sentences
that
are easy to understand and fun to read
objects and actions as a concrete referents
with expression. The forth is conventions
to lead students into inquiring about
that
are
correct
sentences
uses
and
even
language
pictures
paragraphs.
arts
strategy
containing
familiar
and
communicative.
words and ideas, learning of phrases and
the
ways
use
sentences
punctuation, spelling, grammar, and other
grammar,
mechanics,
things that make writing consistent and
standard
English
easy to read.
discovery and analysis in their study of
Conventions
The
are
classroom
to
by
discovering
and
then
spelling,
usage
using
of
their
activities/practices
writing. Meanwhile, Woetsman (2009: 157)
depend on the method used by the
defines PWIM as a literacy program that
teachers
the
uses image analysis to enggage children in
designer of the instructional program. That
vocabulary acquisition, inductive reasoning
is why the teachers are demanded to use
activities, and writing. Joyce, et al. (2011:
the method which is appropriate with the
vii) argue that PWIM is inductive teaching
students’ need to achieve the good criteria
using pictures as a base of teaching-
of writing. One method that has good
learning that
criteria for teaching writing is The Picture
sight vocabularies as a basis for their
Word Inductive Model (PWIM). In this study,
writing, to inquire the structure of words
the researcher focuses on the two teaching
and sentences, and to write sentences and
methods, PWIM and Guided Writing.
paragraphs. According to Bowes (2013: 2),
because
the
teacher
is
enables learner to develop
A student needs a broad vocabulary to
PWIM is an instructional strategy to help
communicate in writing what he knows.
support students’ vocabulary acquisition,
PWIM builds sight vocabulary as a basis for
word connections and classifications, and
writing. PWIM fits within the inductive
then eventually supports students as they
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begin to write sentences and continue on
which the learners imitate the model texts
to
1)
given by the teacher. Hill (1999: 45) states
adds that PWIM is a multidimensional
that guided writing involves individuals or
approach that addresses several aspects of
small groups of students writing a range
literacy simultaneously. Based on those
of text types. The teacher may provide
definitions, it can be concluded that PWIM
short
is an inductive teaching method that uses
particular aspect of text type, grammar,
pictures containing familiar objects and
punctuation or spelling. Guided writing is
actions as a concrete referents to lead
linked to reading and various text types
students into inquiring about words and
are
ideas, learning of phrases and sentences by
Broughton
discovering spelling, grammar, mechanics,
composition which the teacher provides
and usage of standard English then using
helps the class to prepare the written work,
their discovery and analysis in their study
either written or oral assistance is a guided
of writing.
composition. Tyner (2004: 8) adds that
paragraphs. Rothenberger
(2011:
Compared with PWIM, Guided Writing
mini-lessons
used
as
to
demonstrate
models.
(2002:
According
118),
a
to
guided
guided writing is an instructional writing
is more teacher-centered. Teacher guides
context
the students’ brainstorming by reading the
process through modeling, support, and
text given. Teacher teaches the features of
practice. Based on those definitions, it can
the
the
be concluded that guided writing is a
purpose, and the organization of the text.
strategy in which the teacher demonstrates
Students are passive learners who listen to
for the students the process of writing a
text,
the
language
features,
teaching
the
writing
Teacher
sentence or a paragraph using proper
provides help in the process of generating
English conventions such as a particular
the ideas. Teacher maintains his help in
aspect of text type, grammar, punctuation
group
writing.
or spelling, provides the model texts, and
According to Simpson (1998: 1), guided
helps them to prepare the written work,
writing is a strategy in which the teacher
either through written or oral assistance.
demonstrates the process of writing a
Students are then given opportunities to
sentence or a paragraph using proper
apply
English conventions. Students are then
writing.
the
teacher’s
writing
explanation.
chiefly
and
guided
given opportunities to show that they can
the
Besides
skills
the
through
methods
independent
used
by
the
use these strategies and conventions on
teachers, creativity is another important
their own work. Meanwhile, Hyland (2003:
factor that influences the students’ writing
4) defines guided writing as a strategy in
skill. Creative students are independent
5
and unconventional, they can generate a
combinations from something original by
large number of ideas, able to play with
using
ideas,
the
playfulness, and imagination which is
problems in writing, eager to take risks,
useful to solve problem or environment,
display
communicate with others, and entertain
enjoy
a
creating,
good
can
deal
solve
of
intellectual
playfulness (fantasizing, daydreaming or
imagining), and have sensitivity to beauty
which
plays
an
important
role
data,
information,
experiences,
ourselves and others.
The objective of the study is to find out
in
whether or not (1) PWIM is more effective
producing a good writing. Franken (1994:
than Guided Writing to teach writing; (2)
396) states that creativity is tendency to
students having high creativity have better
generate or recognize ideas, alternatives,
writing
or possibilities that may be useful in
creativity; and (3) there is an interaction
solving
between
problems, communicating with
skill
than
teaching
those
having
methods
and
low
the
others, and entertaining ourselves and
students’ creativity in teaching writing.
other. Innovative teachers (2001) mention
Research Methodology
that creativity is the creation of something
The method used in this study was
original and often linked with imagination,
experimental research. Elliot, et al. (2000:
playfulness,
587)
and
originality.
Suharman
state
that
experimental
research
(2011: 7) defines creativity as a thinking
involves the active manipulation of an
process to create a new ideas, approaches,
independent variable to observe changes
products
in the dependent variable. In experimental
that
are
problem
useful
and
Csikszentmihaly
for
solving
environment.
(1996:
28)
mentions
research,
the
independent
variable
is
frequently manipulated in a condition
creativity as any act, idea, or product that
called
changes
that
condition. Gall, et al. (2003: 366) state that
transforms an existing domain into a new
the experiment is the most powerful
one.
that
quantitative
new
establishing cause-and-effect relationships
an
existing
Munandar
creativity
is
(2004:
ability
domain
46)
to
or
adds
create
combinations based on data, information,
or elements that exist. Based on the
the
experimental
research
or
treatment
method
for
between two or more variables.
This
study
involves
two
kinds
of
definition above, it can be concluded that
variables. The first is independent variable;
creativity is the ability to generate and
it is experimental and moderate variable.
create new perspectives, ideas, things, or
The experimental variable is the teaching
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methods (X), and the moderate variable is
The technique of collecting data was
creativity. The second variable is writing
test technique. The data were in the form
skill as dependent variable (Y). The writer
of quantitative data. To get the data, the
supposes that the relationship between X
writer used writing test and creativity test.
and Y is changed by the level of a third
Both tests were in the form of essay test.
factor Z, or creativity.
Before administering both tests to the
The population of this research was the
students, the researcher, firstly, checked
eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3
the readability of the writing and creativity
Delanggu in the academic year of 2013-
test. Meanwhile, to analyze the data,
2014. There are 4 classes all together. The
Multifactor Analysis of Variance (ANOVA)
number of the students is 88 students.
test of 2x2 and Tukey test were used.
The sample of this research was class VB
Before
and VD SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the
normality
2013/2014 academic year, each of which
conducted.
consists of 22 students. This research
The Result of the Study
needed two classes. One class was used as
After Analysis of Variance is conducted, it
the experimental group (VD) who were
can be drawn a result that:
taught using PWIM and the other one (VB)
1. Fo between columns (5.4375) is higher
as the control group who were taught
than Ft at the level of significance α=
using Guided Writing. In this research, the
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and the
researcher used In this research, the
difference
researcher used Cluster Random Sampling
significant. Because the mean of A1
to
population.
(74.86) is higher than that of A2 (71.36),
According to Fraenkel and Wallen (1993:
it can be concluded that PWIM is more
84), cluster sampling is similar to simple
effective than Guided Writing to teach
random
writing.
get
rather
sample
from
sampling
than
the
except
individuals
that
are
groups
conducting
and
the
ANOVA
homogeneity
between
columns
test,
were
is
randomly
2. Fo between rows (57.7780) is higher
selected. Then, cluster random sampling is
than Ft at the level of significance α=
selecting sample of clusters randomly. In
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and the
this case, a classroom is a cluster because
difference between rows is significant.
it consists of individuals (students). The
It can be concluded that the writing skill
researcher determined two classes used as
of students who have high and those
experimental and control class by doing
who have low creativity are significantly
lottery.
different.
Then,
because
the
mean
between B1 (78.82) is higher than B2
7
(67.41), it can be concluded that the
PWIM
students having high creativity have
writing
better writing skill than those having
students
low creativity.
Because the mean of A1B1 (82.45) is
differs
significantly
from
Guided
who
have
to
Writing
high
teach
for
creativity.
3. Fo columns by rows (6.318) is higher
higher than A2B1 (75.18), it can be
than Ft at the level of significance α=
concluded that PWIM is more effective
0.05 (4.08), Ho is rejected and there is an
than Guided Writing to teach writing for
interaction between teaching methods
students who have high creativity.
and students’ creativity. Thus, it can be
4. Because qo between cells A1B2 and A2B2
concluded that the effectiveness of
(0.18) is lower than qt at the level of
teaching methods depend on the level
significance () = 0.05 (3.11), using
of students’ creativity.
PWIM does not differ significantly from
Based on the result of tukey test, it can
Guided Writing for students who have
be concluded that:
low creativity. It can be concluded that
students with low creativity will end up
1. qo between columns (A1-A2) (3.30) is
higher
than
qt
at
the
level
with “almost” the same result when
of
significance α= 0.05 (2.95), PWIM differs
they taught using both methods.
significantly from Guided Writing for
The Discussion of the Result of the Study
teaching writing. Because the mean of
The discussions of the finding are as
A1 (74.86) is higher than A2 (71.36), it
follows:
can be concluded that PWIM is more
1.
effective than Guided Writing.
2. qo between rows (10.75) is higher than
PWIM is more effective than Guided
Writing to teach writing.
The Picture Word Inductive Model is a
qt at the level of significance () = 0.05
teacher-facilitated
(2.95), the difference between rows is
teacher
significant. Because the mean of B1
environment that engage students to
(78.82) is higher than B2 (67.41), it can
be
be concluded that the students having
students are active in a fun and
high creativity have better writing skill
productive way.
than those having low creativity.
facilitates
active
PWIM
process.
in
is
the
cognitive
classroom.
effective
The
for
The
teaching
3. Because qo between A1B1 and A2B1 (4.84)
writing due to some reasons. First,
is higher than qt at the level of
PWIM is motivating because it uses
significance () = 0.05 (3.11), using
pictures. Pictures have many effective
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functions in teaching. They are: (1)
the students’ ability to think. PWIM
Pictures play a significant role in
does not want to view the students as
children’s
development
empty vessels to pour knowledge into.
because the images and illustrations
PWIM wants to give the students the
not only lead children to encounter a
tools to access knowledge and use it in
different genre of literature but also
a meaningful way. Feng (2011: 45)
prepare them for literacy (Whitehead,
states that if students are taught
2004: 139); (2) Pictures can provide a
regularly to think inductively, they will
topic or visual focus to prompt writing.
be able to use many sources of data
When children are exposed to pictures,
and examine the information from all
they
and
different aspects. Further, Feng (2011:
interpret the illustrations by using
46) states that training children to
their
think
literacy
become
active
imaginations.
readers
They
have
to
inductively
can
help
them
search for clues from the pictures to
discover the essence of concepts by
identify the characters and the themes.
themselves,
Students predict the events implied in
intellectual
the images in order to create a vivid
approach not only fosters children’s
story (Feng, 2011: 43); (3) Pictures are
attention to logical thinking but also
one way to elicit words and help
raises their awareness of the nature of
students
enlarge
language and knowledge.
Pictures
provide
their
vocabulary.
students
with
thus
growth.
promoting
The
their
inductive
On the other hand, Guided Writing
concrete referents for learning new
is
words, phrases and sentences (Feng,
does not promote the students to be
2011: 40). Second, PWIM is effective
independent learners. Students are not
because it activates and promotes
engaged in
students responsibility in learning.
learning because many of the steps are
PWIM is an inductive teaching strategy
teacher’s explanation and guidance of
(inquiry teaching/discovery teaching)
the
which is based on the claim that
students’ brainstorming by reading the
knowledge is built primarily from a
text given. Teacher teaches language
learners’ experiences and interactions
features,
with phenomena. It begins with what
organization of the text. Students are
the
passive learners who listen to the
learners
already
know
and
more
teacher-centered.
productive
concept.
respects their ability to think. Calhoun
teacher’s
(1999: 25) states that PWIM respects
provides
the
Teacher
purpose,
explanation.
help
in
the
Teacher
process
guides
and
of
the
the
Teacher
process
of
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generating
the
Teacher
and develop new, original, and fresh
maintains his help in group writing
ideas in their writing. They have good
and
are
confidence in their writing. They enjoy
of
creating, able to solve the problems in
guided
working
2.
writing.
alone
independent
ideas.
in
Students
the
writing
only.
step
Ontario
writing,
display
a
good
deal
of
(2005: 5.4) says that guided writing
intellectual
makes students less active in doing
daydreaming or imagining), and have
the writing because they only follow
sensitivity to beauty which play an
the
It
important role in producing a good
emphasizes on modeling so that it
writing. As stated by Ruggiero (1984:
inhibits students in exploring ideas
92), the characteristics of a creative
and creating meaning and authentic
person are as follows: (1) They are
texts on their own. Therefore, PWIM is
dynamic. Unlike most people, creative
more effective than Guided Writing to
people do not allow their minds to
teach writing.
become passive, easy to accept ideas;
The students having high creativity
(2) They are daring. They are willing to
have better writing skill than those
face
having low creativity.
their curiosity and learning, and learn
High creative students do their best in
from their experiences. As a result,
writing. They are independent and
they are less likely to repeat their
unconventional. They love what they
failure;
are doing. They have high motivation
Resourcefulness refers to ability to cut
to finish their writing until it has been
effectively
completed.
They commit time and
approach that solves the problem; (4)
energy. They like to take intellectual
They are hardworking. They are not
and emotional risks. Since writing
afraid of making the failure; and (5)
involves some risk-taking, they often
They are independent. They are not
take risks by elaborating ideas and
afraid to have new ideas different
concepts. Creative students are able to
from others. Semiawan (1984: 10)
think beyond what they feel, see, read,
states that creative person has some
and
with
characteristics. They are: (1) having
surprising ideas. They can generate a
strong imagination; (2) having high
large number of ideas. They overflow
initiative; (3) having large interest; (4)
outline
listen
already
and
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provided.
come
up
playfulness (fantasizing,
unpleasant
(3)
They
and
experience,
are
apply
resourceful.
conceptualize
the
having
high
something;
curiosity
(5)
in
being
knowing
flexible
and
Chan
(1999:
185)
state
that
in
students who have low creativity are
thinking; (6) being self-confident; (7)
usually conventional, timid, lack of
being open to new experience; (8)
confidence,
being energetic; (9) being brave in
According to Munandar (1995: 46)
taking risks; and (10) being brave in
person in a low creativity are those
expressing ideas. In addition, Renzulli
who do not have the ability to create
and Hartman (in Wilson, 2005: 2) state
something new and to share new ideas
that highly creative individuals may
implemented in problem solving. They
display a good deal of intellectual
don’t have the ability to solve the
playfulness; may frequently be caught
difficulties,
fantasizing, daydreaming or imagining.
information, and missing elements.
They exhibit
Munandar
heightened emotional
and
conforming.
problems,
(1999:
25)
gaps
adds
in
that
sensitivity. They may be very sensitive
different levels of creativity affect the
to
ways
beauty
and
visibly
moved
by
aesthetic experiences.
of
thinking,
behavior,
and
competences in any aspects. Therefore,
On the other hand, low creative
the students having high creativity
students are lack of motivation. They
have better writing skill than those
have no passion for what they are
having low creativity.
doing as the consequences they don't
3.
There
is
an
interaction
enjoy their writing activity. They easily
teaching
give up in facing the difficulties in
intelligence.
writing.
their
PWIM involves the activation of prior
writing before finishing it. They are
knowledge and life experiences to
less independent. They depend much
interpret the picture into the form of
on their teacher’s instructions. Their
words. PWIM respects the students’
creative mind stays idle as it has
ability to think. Furthermore, PWIM
nothing to play with. They are unable
requires higher-order thinking skills,
to come up with new and fresh ideas.
problem-solving,
They
in
reasoning abilities which encourage
expressing their thought. They lack of
the students to be active in every
confidence in their writing. They are
teaching step given. Calhoun (1999:
afraid in taking risks because they are
21) states that PWIM is designed to
afraid to be wrong. Those will make
capitalize on children’s ability to think
them easily give up in writing. Chan
inductively. The PWIM enables the
They
often
often
find
dismiss
difficulty
methods
and
between
and
students’
inductive
11
students to build generalizations of a
well.
concept and it respects their ability to
high creative students enjoy using
think.
PWIM. They are able to identify the
Having
those
characteristics,
The high creative students of the
picture easily and quickly. They can
experimental group to whom the
identify objects, actions, and any
PWIM
and
other stuff/abstract feeling from the
enthusiastic in joining the activities.
picture, they actively interpret what
High creative students do their best in
they see in the picture into the form
writing. They are independent and
of words/phrases. They can create
unconventional. They love what they
sentences using the words they gain
are doing. They have high motivation
from the picture and combine their
to finish their writing until it has been
sentences into paragraph. They can
completed.
They commit time and
make generalization of some concepts
energy. They like to take intellectual
of descriptive text. They generalize
and emotional risks. Since writing
the
involves some risk-taking, they often
identification and description of the
take risks by elaborating ideas and
text. That is why PWIM is more
concepts. Creative students are able
effective to teach writing for the
to think beyond what they feel, see,
students having high creativity.
is
applied,
are
active
sentence
pattern
and
the
read, and listen and come up with
On the other hand, low creative
surprising ideas. They can generate a
students are lack of motivation. They
large number of ideas. They overflow
have no passion for what they are
and develop new, original, and fresh
doing as the consequences they don't
ideas in their writing. They have good
enjoy their writing activity. They easily
confidence
give up in facing the difficulties in
in
their
writing.
They
enjoy creating and able to solve the
writing.
problems in writing. According to
writing before finishing it. They are
Renzulli and Hartman (in Wilson,
less independent. They depend much
2005:
is
on their teacher’s instructions. Their
overflown with ideas, plays with ideas
creative mind stays idle as it has
and
creating,
nothing to play with. They are unable
improvises, is an inventor and idea
to come up with new and fresh ideas.
generator, creates and brainstorms
They cannot generate a large number
2),
a
concepts,
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creative
enjoys
thinker
They
often
dismiss
their
of ideas. They often find difficulty in
the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3
expressing their thought. They lack of
Delanggu
confidence in their writing. They are
2013/2014 having high creativity is better
afraid in taking risks because they are
than those having low creativity; (3) There
afraid to be wrong. And, they don’t
is
enjoy creating. Chan and Chan (1999:
methods
185) state that students who have low
teaching writing for the eighth grade
creativity are usually conventional,
students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the
timid,
academic year of 2013/2014.
lack
of
conforming.
confidence,
the
academic
interaction
and
year
between
students’
of
teaching
creativity
in
those
Based on the research findings, it can
characteristics, low creative students
be concluded that PWIM is an effective
are
learning
method for teaching writing at the eighth
writing and in achieving good result in
grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu
writing.
in the academic year of 2013/2014.
facing
Having
and
an
in
difficulties
Their
in
low
creative
characteristics are barriers to master
good
writing
whatever
skill.
methods
That
is
why
used
by
the
Some suggestions can be listed as
follows:
1. For teachers
teachers are not effective for them. As
a. It is recommended for the teacher
stated by Munandar (1999: 25) that
to use the PWIM because it is fun
different levels of creativity affect the
and productive;
ways
of
thinking,
behavior,
and
b. Teachers are suggested to use the
competences in any aspects. Wang
teaching
(2011)
appropriate to the students’ need.
observes
that
cognitive
creativity and academic achievement
methods
which
are
2. For Students
are positively related to each other. So,
a. The students should be active and
it can be concluded that using PWIM
involved thoroughly in the teaching
and Guided Writing are less effective
and learning process in order to
for the students having low creativity.
improve their writing skill;
Conclusion and Suggestion
b. The
students
who
develop
low
Based on the descriptions of the data
creativity
analysis, the findings are: (1) PWIM is more
writing through many exercises.
effective than Guided writing to teach
should
have
their
3. For Other Researchers
writing for the eighth grade students of
The result of this research can be used
SMP Negeri 3 Delanggu in the academic
as a starting point of conducting further
year of 2013/2014; (2) The writing skill of
researches by extending it to other
13
levels and subjects. The research can
instructional method and strengthen
give additional contribution to develop
the similar theory.
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