From  the  result  above,  we  could  see  the  result  of  the  test  was  very  poor. 3,2  of  students  were  categorized  in  poor.  71  were  categorizedin  poor  tofair.
25,8  of  them  were  categorized  as  fair  to  good.  The  highest  score  was  70.  The means of the test was 57.58. The lowest score was 50. It was far from satisfying.
The detail of the grade category and frequency of students‟ pre-test could be seen in Appendix 20, page 133.
4.2.2 Formative Test Result
3
71 26
Poor Poor to Average
Average to Good Good to Excellent
After doing the first cycle and treatments,  the formative test was conducted. The students  were  asked
to  write  a  descriptive  text  about  “My  Best  Friend”.  They followed the instructions to write a descriptive text. Here is the result of the test:
Table 4.3 Result of Formative Test
Students‟ Code
Components Total
Score Grammar  Content
Vocabulary   Spelling G-01
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-02 2
4 4
3 13
65 G-03
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-04 3
4 4
3 14
70 G-05
3 4
4 4
15 75
G-06 3
4 4
3 14
70 G-07
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-08 3
4 3
3 13
65 G-09
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-10 3
4 3
3 13
65 G-11
3 4
4 4
15 75
G-12 3
4 4
3 14
70 G-13
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-14 3
4 4
3 14
70 G-15
3 3
3 4
13 65
G-16 3
4 4
4 15
75 G-17
3 4
3 3
13 65
G-18 2
4 3
3 12
60 G-19
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-20 3
4 3
3 13
65 G-21
3 4
3 3
14 70
G-22 3
3 3
3 12
60 G-23
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-24 3
3 3
3 12
60 G-25
3 4
4 3
14 70
G-26 3
4 3
4 14
70 G-27
3 3
4 4
14 70
G-28 2
4 4
4 14
70 G-29
3 3
4 3
13 65
G-30 3
4 4
4 15
75 G-31
3 3
4 3
13 65
Total 90
118 114
101 424
2120 Mean
2.9 3.81
3.68 3.26
13.68  68.39 The average score of cycle 1 was 68.39. It increased from the pre-test with
the margin of 8.07. It showed the improvement in every aspect of students‟ skill in
writing  descriptive  text.  However  they  got  low  score  in  grammar  and  spelling. Their grammar
didn‟t develop well. They still used the same structure and could not write the sentence well because they did  grammar mistakes. It  could be seen
that  there  was  a  little  improvement  in  the  formative  test.  The  students  could  not reach the target score of test that was 70 and it could
be seen from the students‟ grade category. There were still 9.7 students whose score categorized in poor to
average  and  90.3 of  students‟  score  categorized  in  average  to  good  but  the
highest score was 75. None of students got label good to excellent score.The detail of  the  grade  category  and  frequency  of  students‟  pre-test  could  be  seen  in
Appendix 20, page 133.
Chart 4.2 The Precentage of the Grade Category of Students’ Formative Test
4.2.3 Post Test Result