Keparakan Lor. Then after that I finished from church, my family and I went to home. After that I had
breakfast at 9.40 a.m. After I had breakfast, I watched TV. At 10 p.m. I went to church again and finished it at
2 p.m. After that I had my lunch because I hungry. After I had lunch, at 3 p.m. I went to church with my
friend to exercise for tambourine and keyboard. After that I went to home and took a bath before I study.
After I study, I watched TV and then I sleep. Correction:
I went to church at 6.30 a.m. My church in GKI Keparakan Lor. After that my family and I went home. I
had breakfast at 9.40 a.m. and I watched TV. At 10 p.m. I went back to church and the eucharis finished at
2 p.m. After that I had lunch because I was so hungry. After having lunch, at 3 p.m. I went back to church with
my friend to practice tambourine and keyboard. After that I went home and I took a bath before I studied.
After studying, I watched TV and then I slept.
Comprehension : 10 Fluency : 8
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 49
18. Lina Andriyani Pre-test:
I get up at 6 a.m. yesterday and then I took a bath at 7 a.m. I went to school with my friends and so
I’m go home in my home and watching TV until night and then sleep until morning.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. yesterday and then I took a bath at 7 a.m. I went to school with my friends. After
that I went home and I watched TV lately. Then, I slept until morning.
Grammar : 16 Vocabulary : 9
Comprehension : 4 Fluency : 4
Pronunciation : 2 Total : 35
Post-test:
I got up at 6 a.m. and I’m start to a bath. I went to Balaikota after did I watching TV.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. and I started to take a bath. I went to Balaikota and after that I watched TV.
Grammar : 12 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 8
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 41
19. Lucia Dianingtyas Grammar : 12
Pre-test:
Yesterday I get up at 6 a.m., and so I took a bath and ehm...to dress up and also I breakfast,
ehm...at 7 a.m., I’m going to school, I school, I;m studying and at 1 p.m. I’m going to home,
eh...salah...maksudnya I go to home, in my home I watching TV until night, I’m studying and then I’m
sleep until morning.
Correction:
Yesterday I got up at 6 a.m. and I took a bath. Then, I dressed up and I had breakfast. At 7 a.m. I
went to school to study. At 1 p.m. I went home and I watched TV lately. After that I studied and I slept until
morning. Post-test:
Vocabulary : 9 Comprehension : 6
Fluency : 4 Pronunciation : 1
Total : 32
Last Sunday I got up at 6 a.m. I’m start to take a bath because I will going to march in Balaikota. In
Balaikota I march until 10 a.m. After that I and my friend going to checking on lab. So, I went to hospital
for to keep my grandfather. Correction:
Last Sunday I got up at 6 a.m. I started to take a bath because I joined a march in Balaikota until 10
a.m. After that my friend and checked up in the laboratory . Then, I went to hospital to take care of my
grandfather.
Grammar : 12 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 8
Pronunciation : 4 Total : 42
20. Margareta Bekti Riana Pre-test:
I going to school at 6...6 o’clock, trus...I am....ehm.... I went to home at forty o’clock. I’m... I had
to lunch then I took a sleep, I tool to sleep, ehm... I am played a bulutangkis with my father, trus...I am take a
bath at bathroom trus...the end. Correction:
I went to school at 6 o’clock and then I went home. After that, I had lunch and I took a sleep. Then,
I played badminton with my father and I took a bath in the bathroom.
Grammar : 12 Vocabulary : 10
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 6
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 37
Post-test:
I got up at 6 a.m. then I took a bath. I helped my
Grammar : 16 Vocabulary : 12
