e....then...e...Sleeping until 5 pm then I took a bath and I’m study hard..e...at 6 pm.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. and then I took a bath. At 7 a.m. I went to school and I went home at 2 p.m. I slept
until 5 p.m. and then I took a bath. At 6 p.m. I studied hard.
Pronunciation : 1 Total : 39
Post-test:
Last Sunday I woke up at 8 a.m. then I’ m took a bath and I’m watching TV and then to play with my
friend and then to Ga leria Mall and then I’m lunch at the restaurant and then I went to home.
Correction:
Last Sunday I woke up at 8 a.m. and then I took a bath. I watched TV and I played with my friend.
Then, I went to Galeria Mall and I had lunch at the restaurant. After that, I went home.
Grammar : 12 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 10 Fluency : 8
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 45
12. Fransisca Romana M Pre-test:
I got up at 6am. yesterday, e....then I took a bath and dress up for go...e...went to school laugh
and say:Sampai di sekolah At school I’m studied and join with my friends to chat...yes..e..I went to home at
1 pm and I sleep in afternoon..ehm...next I...I,..I.. watch a TV and I sleep in this night at..ehm.. 9 pm.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. yesterday and then I took a bath and I dressed up. Then I went to school to study.
At school I also had chat with my friends. At 1 p.m. I went home and I slept in the afternoon. Then I
watched TV at night a nd I slept at 9 p.m.
Grammar : 12 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 6
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 39
Post-test:
Last Sunday I got up at 6 a.m. Next, I took a bath until at 6.15 a.m. I went to Balaikota in
Yogyakarta to join a match. At 9.30 a.m. I went to home for relaxing my foot. Next, I slept in the
afternoon. Correction:
Last Sunday I got up at 6 a.m. then I took a bath until at 6.15 a.m. I went to Balaikota in
Grammar : 16 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 8 Fluency : 8
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 47
Yogyakarta to join a match. At 9.30 a.m. I went home then I slept in the afternoon.
14. Iin Marlina Sari Pre-test:
I get up at 6...6...6 am. yesterday, ehm.. then I took a bath. At 7 am to school. I pause: ntar mbak... I
went home... ehm... 1 pm. Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. yesterday then I took a bath. At 7 a.m. I went to school and I went home at p.m.
Grammar : 6 Vocabulary : 9
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 6
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 30
Post-test:
I got up at 6 a.m. and then sweep in the house and then I walking- walking with family to mall by
motorcycle and I’m too happy. I’m housing at 2 p.m. and I’m iron my cloth.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. and I swept the floor. Then, I walked around with my family by motorcycle. We went
to the mall and we were so happy. I went home at 2 p.m. and then I ironed my cloth.
Grammar : 6 Vocabulary : 9
Comprehension : 6 Fluency : 6
Pronunciation : 3 Total : 30
15. Ika Wulandari
Pre-test: I...aduh aku jadi lupa..I got up at 6 am.
yesterday then I took a bath, then I took a breakfast when I to school, when I home... I went home at 2 pm
then I had my lunch then watch TV then I took a bath then I study until 6 pm.
Correction:
I got up at 6 a.m. yesterday and then I took a bath. After that, I had breakfast and I went to school. I
went home at 2 p.m. and I had lunch. After that I watched TV and I took a bath. I studied until 6 p.m.
Grammar : 16 Vocabulary : 12
Comprehension : 8 Fluency : 6
Pronunciation : 2 Total : 44
Post-test:
I got up at 7 a.m. then I took a bath. I helped my parents at 8 a.m. until 10 a.m. I watched TV at 10 a.m.
I slept at 2 p.m. I took a bath at 4 p.m. I watched TV at 5 p.m.
Correction:- Grammar : 20
Vocabulary : 12 Comprehension : 10
Fluency : 10 Pronunciation : 4
