d. Unit 3
1. In Activity 1,2,3,4,5,6, the procedures were not clear enough. It should be
revised. 2.
In Activity 4, avoid asking the children to write. The activity should be revised
3. In Activity 5, the last song’s lyric “Run A Way” was confusing. It should
be omitted. 4.
In Activity 6, the procedures of playing the game should be changed. Make the game’s rules into better sequence.
All the comments and suggestions by the expert above were used to make the revision of the book. This revision was used as an evaluation for the
developed book. The valuable comments and suggestions will be added to make the book more appropriate for the children and the teacher. The revision can be
seen in the table below.
Table 4.3: The Revision of The first Draft Criteria
Comments and
suggestions Revision
COVER The background color of
the cover was not match with the cover’s picture.
It should be changed into another color.
The background color of the cover had been changed into
“Blue”.
FONT Font
Use different font size and
type for
the procedure
and the
classroom English. Two
different fonts
Baskerville Old Face and Rockwell and size had been
added.
WORKSHEET Worksheet
The worksheet was not interesting.
Interesting worksheet
had been made.
SHAPE TITLE Add interesting shape
and fill the colour for the title and sub-title
Interesting shape and colour had been made.
UNIT 1 Learning objective
The shape of learning objective
was not
interesting. The sub-title
The sub-title “warming-
up” was not appropriate with another sub-title.
Learning objective had been added interesting shape and
color. The sub-
title “warming-up” had been changed into “Let’s
Start”. Activity 1
The picture in Activity 1was
not appropriate
with the kindergarten children.
The picture in Activity had been change into appropriate
picture.
Activity 2 The procedures were not
clear. The procedures had been
revised.
Activity 4 The
sub- title
“Let’ Exercise”
was not
appropriate. The sub-
title “Let’ Exercise” had been
changed into “Let’s Do It”.
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