Unit 2 Results of The Development
continued
UNIT 1 Activity 5
The procedures
of playing the game should
be clear
and well
organized The procedures of playing the
game had been revised and the methodological was clear.
Activity 6 The procedures should be
added more classroom English.
The procedures had been added classroom English.
UNIT 2 Activity 1
The procedures were not complete.
The procedures had been added the instructions.
Activity 5 The
procedures were
making the
children confuse.
The procedures
had been
revised.
Activity 6 The procedures were not
clear. It should be added good game’s rules
The procedures
had been
revised and the methodological clear enough.
Activity 7 It
should be
added classroom English.
The classroom English had been added.
UNIT 3 Activity 1,2,3,4,5,6,
The procedures were not clear enough.
The procedures
had been
revised and
added clear
instructions. Activity 4
Avoid asking the children write.
The activity had been change into “Paste and Say”.
Activity 5 The last song’s lyric “
Run A Way” was confusing.
The lyric had been omitted.
Activity 6 The
procedures of
playing the game should change.
The procedures
had been
revised and
added good
explanation of the rules of the game.
In conclusion, in order to avoid confusion for the teacher, more classroom English should be added to the book. The aim is to make children
familiar with English. Clear instruction also should be written in good procedures. The game’s rules also should be written into good sequence. All of the comments
and suggestions really help to make the good more appropriate. As a result, It can help the teacher as guidance while teaching and learning process.