Layout Results of The Development

Table 4.3: The Revision of The first Draft Criteria Comments and suggestions Revision COVER The background color of the cover was not match with the cover’s picture. It should be changed into another color. The background color of the cover had been changed into “Blue”. FONT Font Use different font size and type for the procedure and the classroom English. Two different fonts Baskerville Old Face and Rockwell and size had been added. WORKSHEET Worksheet The worksheet was not interesting. Interesting worksheet had been made. SHAPE TITLE Add interesting shape and fill the colour for the title and sub-title Interesting shape and colour had been made. UNIT 1 Learning objective The shape of learning objective was not interesting. The sub-title The sub-title “warming- up” was not appropriate with another sub-title. Learning objective had been added interesting shape and color. The sub- title “warming-up” had been changed into “Let’s Start”. Activity 1 The picture in Activity 1was not appropriate with the kindergarten children. The picture in Activity had been change into appropriate picture. Activity 2 The procedures were not clear. The procedures had been revised. Activity 4 The sub- title “Let’ Exercise” was not appropriate. The sub- title “Let’ Exercise” had been changed into “Let’s Do It”. continued continued UNIT 1 Activity 5 The procedures of playing the game should be clear and well organized The procedures of playing the game had been revised and the methodological was clear. Activity 6 The procedures should be added more classroom English. The procedures had been added classroom English. UNIT 2 Activity 1 The procedures were not complete. The procedures had been added the instructions. Activity 5 The procedures were making the children confuse. The procedures had been revised. Activity 6 The procedures were not clear. It should be added good game’s rules The procedures had been revised and the methodological clear enough. Activity 7 It should be added classroom English. The classroom English had been added. UNIT 3 Activity 1,2,3,4,5,6, The procedures were not clear enough. The procedures had been revised and added clear instructions. Activity 4 Avoid asking the children write. The activity had been change into “Paste and Say”. Activity 5 The last song’s lyric “ Run A Way” was confusing. The lyric had been omitted. Activity 6 The procedures of playing the game should change. The procedures had been revised and added good explanation of the rules of the game. In conclusion, in order to avoid confusion for the teacher, more classroom English should be added to the book. The aim is to make children