Argument 2: No, over-regulation in the financial sector causes reduced
Appendix 4 Writing Assessment Rubric
1
Participant :
Topic
: abcd
Date:
Aspect Score
Scale
Criteria Score
Conte n
t
30-27 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: knowledgeable • substantive • thorough development of
thesis • relevant to assign topic 26-22
GOOD TO AVERAGE: some knowledge of subject • adequate range • limited development of
thesis • mostly relevant to topic, but lacks detail 21-17
FAIR TO POOR: limited knowledge of subject • little substance • inadequate development of topic
15-13 VERY POOR:
does not show knowledge of subject • non substantive • non pertinent • OR not enough to evaluate
Organi zat
ion
20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: fluent expression • ideas clearly statedsupported • succinct •
well- organized • logical sequencing • cohesive
17-14 GOOD TO AVERAGE: somewhat choppy • loosely organized but main ideas stand out,
•limited support • logical but incomplete sequencing 13-10
FAIR TO POOR: non- fluent • ideas confused or disconnected • lacks logical sequencing and
development 9-7
VERY POOR: does not communicate • no organization • OR not enough to evaluate
Voc ab
u lary
20-18 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: sophisticated range • effective wordidiom choice and usage,
word form mastery, appropriate register 17-14
GOOD TO AVERAGE: adequate range • occasional errors of wordidiom form, word choice, usage, but meaning not obscured
13-10 FAIR TO POOR: limited range • frequent errors of wordidiom form, choice, usage •meaning
confused or obscured 9-7
VERY POOR: essentially translation • little knowledge of English vocabulary, idioms, word
form • OR not enough to evaluate
U sage
25-22 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: effective complex construction • few errors of agreement,
tense, number, word orderfunction, articles, pronouns, preposition 21-18
GOOD TO AVERAGE: Effective but simple constructions • minor problems in complex construction • several errors of agreement, tense, number, word orderfunction, articles,
pronouns, prepositions but meaning seldom obscured 17-11
FAIR TO POOR: major problems in simplecomplex constructions • frequent errors of negation, agreement, tense, number, word orderfunction, articles, pronouns, prepositions andor
fragments, run- ons, deletions • meaning confused or obscured
10-5 VE
RY POOR: virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules • dominated by errors • does not communicate • OR not enough to evaluate
M ec
h an
ics
5 EXCELLENT TO VERY GOOD: demonstrates mastery of conventions • few errors of spelling,
punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing 4
GOOD TO AVERAGE: occasional errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing, but meaning not obscured
3 FAIR TO POOR: frequent errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing • poor
handwriting • meaning confused or obscured 2
VERY POOR: no mastery of conventions • dominated by errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing • handwriting illegible • OR not enough to evaluate
Total Score Comment:
Rater, ………………
Circle one of the letters in accordance with the topic chosen by the participant.
1
This is an analytic scoring developed by Jacob et. al, quoted in Sara Cushing Weigle, Assessing Writing
, New York: Cambridge University Press, 2002, p. 116.
1 2
4 5
9 10
12 13
14 15
16 17
18 19
20 21
22 23
26 27
28 29
30 32
33 35
36 37
39 41
45 46
49 50
51 52
53
1 S106
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 25
7.485 56.02
2 S102
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
28 10.48
109.9 3
S114 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
23 5.485
30.08 4
S124 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 24
6.485 42.05
5 S113
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
24 6.485
42.05 6
S112 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
23 5.485
30.08 7
S111 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 22
4.485 20.11
8 S103
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 21
3.485 12.14
9 S097
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 19
1.485 2.205
10 S121
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
18 0.485
0.235 11
S089 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 18
0.485 0.235
12 S122
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 17
-0.515 0.265
13 S101
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
18 0.485
0.235 14
S023 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
19 1.485
2.205 15
S108 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
17 -0.515
0.265 16
S104 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 18
0.485 0.235
17 S110
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 17
-0.515 0.265
18 S116
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 19
1.485 2.205
19 S105
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
14 -3.515
12.36 20
S093 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 18
0.485 0.235
21 S119
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 17
-0.515 0.265
22 S109
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
16 -1.515
2.296 23
S120 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 16
-1.515 2.296
24 S128
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 15
-2.515 6.326
25 S094
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
16 -1.515
2.296 26
S079 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 16
-1.515 2.296
27 S115
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
14 -3.515
12.36 28
S096 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
13 -4.515
20.39 29
S092 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 14
-3.515 12.36
30 S091
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
12 -5.515
30.42 31
S129 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
9 -8.515
72.51 32
S095 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
9 -8.515
72.51 33
S107 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
1 1
9 -8.515
72.51 8
10 4
24 7
16 12
13 15
15 15
8 22
16 13
17 18
24 12
19 19
15 16
26 17
14 11
10 19
17 11
17 15
18 20
21 24
578 -1E-14
672.2 0.242 0.303 0.121 0.727 0.212 0.485
0.364 0.394 0.455 0.455 0.455 0.242
0.667 0.485 0.394 0.515
0.545 0.727 0.364 0.576 0.576
0.45 0.485 0.788 0.515 0.424 0.333 0.303 0.576
0.515 0.333 0.515 0.455 0.545 0.606
0.636 0.727 0.758 0.697 0.879 0.273 0.788 0.515
0.636 0.606 0.545 0.545 0.545 0.758
0.333 0.515 0.606 0.485
0.455 0.273 0.636 0.424 0.424
0.55 0.515 0.212 0.485 0.576 0.667 0.697 0.424
0.485 0.667 0.485 0.545 0.455 0.394
0.364 0.273 0.184 0.211 0.107 0.198 0.167
0.25 0.231
0.239 0.248 0.248 0.248 0.184 0.222
0.25 0.239 0.25
0.248 0.198 0.231 0.244 0.244
0.25 0.25 0.167
0.25 0.244 0.222 0.211 0.244
0.25 0.222
0.25 0.248 0.248 0.239 0.231 0.198
8.364 17.52
Notes:
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p: the proportion of participants who choose the right answer S2: variance score
20.37
q: the proportion of participants who choose the wrong answer q=1-p Dev: deviation score from mean score
0.601
Ʃpq: the total of multiplication between p and q Dev2: deviation score from square mean score
k: the total of items r11: the instrument realibility using KR-20 r11=kk-1S2-
ƩpqS2 M: the mean score of the right answer
only the items which were accepted or not deleted after instrument try outitem analysis see also Appendix: item analysis and instrument validity
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Instrument Reliability of Critical Thinking Test Using KR-20 Equation Appendix 6
Dev Dev2
Item no. Participants
No.
Total p
q pq
Total
M k
S2 r
11
Ʃpq