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The message written by Student 23 above is slightly similar to the previous message. The speaker was specific and focused in conveying hisher
meaning through a long sentence. Heshe was also being indirect by saying, “I’d like to …” which was the characteristic of negative politeness.
Besides the negative politeness which could be seen in the messages, there were two participants who used bald on record in conveying their meaning based
on scenario one.
In the message written by Student 7 above, the speaker directly said hisher intention to the hearer. The speaker only told hisher name to the lecturer
and then went straight to tell hisher intention. The characteristic of bald on record is the speaker may do the act in the most direct, clear and concise way. In that
message, the speaker fulfilled those characteristics. Therefore, that message could be categorized as bald on record.
In the message written by Student 10 above, the speaker uttered hisher meaning directly without even greeting the hearer. Even, the speaker used an
imperative form in telling about hisher intention by saying, “Give …” It could be
Student 23 Good morning Mrs. X, I’m sorry for the inconvenience. I’m name. I’d like to
ask for your time to have consultation relate d to my proposal seminar. I’m
sorry I can’t see you so that I send this message. So, when can I meet you for consulting my proposal seminar.
Student 7 Excuse me Sir. My name … from D class. Do you have a spare time?
Student 10 Good Give the time for meeting
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that message also showed the complete absence of politeness. In the second scenario, most of the participants used the strategy of
negative politeness. There were 16 messages which showed the use of negative politeness.
The message written by Student 2 above shows some characteristics of negative politeness. The speaker used long sentences in conveying hisher
meaning. Instead of directly saying hisher intention, the speaker said, “I would like to …” Moreover, heshe also used indirect form in hisher message.
Student 4 above showed negative politeness by being indirect in conveying hisher meaning. Instead of saying, “I wait for your reply”, the speaker tended to
say, “I’m looking forward for your reply.” That was the characteristic of negative politeness.
On the other hand, there were seven participants who wrote their messages using bald on record strategy when they responded to the second scenario. They
were being clear and direct in uttering their intention. Student 2
Good morning Miss. I am A. I would like to send my draft of final project. If you don’t mind would you check mine so that I can evaluate my work. Thank
you Miss
Student 4 Mr.Ms. This is the draft of my final project. Please kindly check my draft. I’m
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In the message written by Student 9 above, the speaker directly said hisher intention to the hearer. Even if the speaker used “please” in the message, heshe
only said what they needed to say. Heshe did not say less or more than was required.
Based on the message written by Student 7 above, it can be seen clearly that the speaker conveyed hisher meaning in the most direct way. The speaker did
not use long sentence, but heshe only spoke the truth and be relevant to hisher intention.
In scenario 2, there was a participant whose message was different to the other. Except the use of negative politeness and bald on record strategy, the
participant did not show any politeness strategies in the message.
In the message written by Student 10 above, the speaker only gave information about the task, hisher name and student number. There was no
additional message given to the lecturer. It did not mean that the speaker was impolite. It meant that heshe did not show any politeness strategies and only gave
the information needed in the message. Student 9
Sir, this is my draft for final project. Please kindly check it.
Student 7 Good morning Miss. I have send my email.
Student 10 Propsem final task, name, student number
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as the politeness strategy in their messages. There were 21 messages which showed negative politeness.
Student 11 in that message conveyed hisher meaning through a long sentence. Heshe also begged for the hearer‟s forgiveness by saying, “I am sorry
…” The message was specific and focused, as both factors were two of the characteristics of negative politeness.
This example is slightly similar to the previous one. Student 17 told hisher intention in a long sentence. Moreover, heshe also showed the action of
begging forgiveness in a polite way, which is the characteristic of negative politeness.
Besides negative politeness, there were three participants who showed bald on record strategy in their messages. Their messages were stated as bald on
record because the speaker wrote them in the most direct and concise way. Student 11
Miss this is my fix final project. I am sorry because I have sent the file which is not fix before. But this is the fix one. Thank you Miss.
Student 17 Good morning miss. I’m sorry there is a mistake on my previous work, so I
send you my revision. I hope you accept this one. Thank you very much.
Student 8 Miss, this is my final ppt. I decided to revise it. Thank you.
57 In the message written by Student 8 above, the speaker conveyed hisher
meaning in a direct form. Heshe only said what heshe needed to say without giving less or more information than was required.
Student 10 said directly what heshe needed to say in the message above. Heshe did not give any additional information which was not hisher need. The
characteristic of bald on record could be seen in that message; direct form, speak the truth, be relevant and avoid ambiguity.
In the last scenario, all of the participants showed the strategy of negative politeness. All of them fulfilled the characteristics of negative politeness when
writing their messages.
In that message, Student 18 showed that heshe could not come to the consultation with a reason. Then, heshe asked for another time to have
consultation. In conveying the meaning, the speaker was specific and focused.
By looking at the message written by Student 23 above, we can see that the speaker used long sentences in conveying hisher meaning. Heshe was also
Student 10 Excuse me Sir. This is the correct power point. Thankyou.
Student 18 Good morning, Sir. I am very sorry because I could not
come for today’s consultation because I got an accident in … I hope we can reschedule the
consultation when you are available. Thank you, Sir.
Student 23 Good morning. I’m name. I am sorry for not coming this afternoon as what
we’ve planned. I got sick this morning and I cannot come to consult. Would you please give me other chance to have another consultation.
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indirect by saying, “Would you please …” That was one of the characteristics of negative politeness strategy.
The results show that almost all of the participants used politeness strategies, which were proposed by Brown and Levinson 1987, when they wrote
written messages to the lecturers. There was only one participant, in one scenario, who did not show any politeness strategies. Most of the participants showed
negative politeness as the politeness strategies when sending the written messages to the lecturers. Few of them showed the strategy of bald on record in their
messages. The results are slightly similar to the predicted results that the students showed the strategy of negative politeness when sending the messages to the
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