Observation in the Second Cycle
Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I check my classmates writing. I want to see their writing and the mistakes
they made on their writing. Have you commented on other peoples work? Why not? Yes, I
give comment related to the topic or sometimes I tried to give feedback based on the assignment given by the teacher.
What kind of comments have you left? Text, sentence, word, other focus? I gave comments related to the topic, and sometimes
I check grammar mistake. How did you feel about commenting on other peoples work? I felt
so excited because we can learn and give correction each others. Has anyone left comments on your work? Yes.
What kind of comments? What areas of your work did they focus on? They gave comments related to the grammar mistakes I wrote
in my paragraph. How did you feel? Were these comments useful? I felt so happy
because I can learn from my mistakes. And those comments are really useful.
Did you edit your text according to the comments made? Yes, of course.
Do you think this process will help you to improve your writing? How? Yes, I think so because I can learn from my mistakes. And
I can improve my writing by seeing other’s writing. Concluding remarks
. What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for
writing? I think edmodo is such a good tool in learning writing. When I learn how to write better in English, I think the group
discussion made on edmodo really help me. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way?
I think we can use edmodo not only for learning writing, but also we can use it to learn reading or even other skills.
Name : Jeny Amalia Gender : Female
Class : X-1 Questions
Technology
How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to do my writing assignment, check comments given by my friends, and
discuss in the group with other students from different country. Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? Yes, I used
Edmodo to improve my writing because I can check my writing before posting in on Edmodo. I can also have my friend give
comments on my writing so I can write such a good paragraph because my paragraph checked by other students. The best part
of using Edmodo for writing activity was that we can have such a role playing activity with other students. It helps me a lot to
improve my writing and help me know new vocabularies. Do you find it difficult? Why? Yes, the problem is about the
internet connection which is too slow in the school, so some students get difficult to acces Edmodo.
What can we do to make Edmodo easier for you? We can bring our own modem so we can access Edmodo easily.
Have you accessed the Edmodo outside of class? How often? Yes, of course. I accessed it Very often. I always check edmodo on my
mobile phone. And I checked Edmodo when I was at home as well.
Collaboration When you publish your work how do you feel?I felt so excited
because I can share my thought to other friends, and can get my writing checked by other students.
Has the audience changed your attitude to your work? Yes, I took part in the group discussion so I can have conversation with my
friends and I know what I have to do to with other assignments. Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I checked my
classmates’ assignment. I checked it to know whether or not I had done the good writing.
Have you commented on other peoples work? Why not? Yes, I give comment related to the topic given. I also give suggestion to
my friends to correct their grammar mistakes. What kind of comments have you left? Text, sentence, word,
other focus? I gave comments related to the topic, and sometimes I check grammar mistake.
How did you feel about commenting on other peoples work? I think it is a good idea because we can learn different opinion