Observation in the Fourth Cycle
from other students, and of course it makes my paragraph better than before.
Has anyone left comments on your work? Yes. What kind of comments? What areas of your work did they focus
on? They gave comments related to the grammar mistakes I wrote in my paragraph. They also gave comments related to the
composition on my paragraph. How did you feel? Were these comments useful? I felt so happy
because I can learn from my mistakes. And those comments are really useful.
Did you edit your text according to the comments made? Yes, of course.
Do you think this process will help you to improve your writing? How? Yes, I think so because I can see the different between my
paragraphs to others so it makes me learn how to compose such a good paragraph by editing my paragraph based on the comments
given by other students. Concluding remarks
. What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for
writing? I think using Edmodo for writing is fun and challenging because we are challenged to compose good paragraph to be
checked and seen by other students. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way?
I think Edmodo can be used for other activities such as reading or even speaking. But for speaking activity, I prefer using skype
mister, hehe.
Name : Aisyah Gender : Female
Class : X-2 Questions
Technology How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to do my
writing assignment, ask about the homework and have conversation with Mrs. Dale students, hehe.
Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? Yes, of course.
Do you find it difficult? Why? Yes, I can’t change my font and
the internet connection makes me lazy to access Edmodo. What can we do to make Edmodo easier for you? I think we can
use our own modem to access Edmodo. Have you accessed the Edmodo outside of class? How often? Yes,
of course. I accessed it very often because I want to know whether my paragraph is commented or not.
Collaboration When you publish your work how do you feel? I felt so happy
because I can share my thought and my writing can be seen by other students.
Has the audience changed your attitude to your work? Yes, they gave comments on my writing if I made mistakes.
Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I checked their writing. I usually checked my classmates writing because I
want to checked their work, hehe. Have you commented on other peoples work? Why not? Yes, of
course. What kind of comments have you left? Text, sentence, word,
other focus? I gave comments related to the typo hehe. How did you feel about commenting on other peoples work? I
felt so fun because I can share something useful to my friends. Has anyone left comments on your work? Yes.
What kind of comments? What areas of your work did they focus on? They focus on my writing composition such as the main idea,
and conclusion. How did you feel? Were these comments useful? I think it was
fun, because I could know my mistakes by reading comments and of course after that I revise my paragraph. .
Did you edit your text according to the comments made? Yes, of course.
Do you think this process will help you to improve your writing? How? Yes, I think Edmodo is really helpful to practice how to
write a good paragraph because our paragraph can be checked and commented by other students or even the teachers.
Concluding remarks
. What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for
writing? I think it is fun and also exciting to practice my writing
with this kind of media. Because I can share my writing to others and I am no longer think that writing is difficult since I use
Edmodo. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way?
Edmodo and facebook is almost the same, and I think we can also learn other skills like reading or speaking.
Name : Rai Pratama
Gender : Male
Class : X-6
Questions Technology
How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to do my writing assignment. But unfortunately Edmodo can’t be used to
play online games, Mister. Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? No, I think
Edmodo just ok to be used for reading, mister. Do you find it difficult? Why?
Yes, I can’t change my font and I can’t chat directly to my friends. Because we can only chat by
sending comments and can’t chat with my friends who are on- line.
What can we do to make Edmodo easier for you? I think Edmodo should be added the new feature that is on-line chat feature,
mister. Have you accessed the Edmodo outside of class? How often? Yes,
of course. I accessed it when I am on-line. Usually before I played online games, I checked Edmodo first, hehe.
Collaboration When you publish your work how do you feel? I felt confused
because I didn’t know who are online on Edmodo, so I can’t ask them to correct my writing directly.
Has the audience changed your attitude to your work? Yes, they help me to correct my writing.
Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I checked their writing. I usually checked my classmates writing because I
really want to know the way they share they thought, hehe.