Observation in the Third Cycle
How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to do my writing assignment, check comments given by my friends, and
discuss in the group with other students from different country. Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? Yes, I used
Edmodo to improve my writing because I can check my writing before posting in on Edmodo. I can also have my friend give
comments on my writing so I can write such a good paragraph because my paragraph checked by other students. The best part
of using Edmodo for writing activity was that we can have such a role playing activity with other students. It helps me a lot to
improve my writing and help me know new vocabularies. Do you find it difficult? Why? Yes, the problem is about the
internet connection which is too slow in the school, so some students get difficult to acces Edmodo.
What can we do to make Edmodo easier for you? We can bring our own modem so we can access Edmodo easily.
Have you accessed the Edmodo outside of class? How often? Yes, of course. I accessed it Very often. I always check edmodo on my
mobile phone. And I checked Edmodo when I was at home as well.
Collaboration When you publish your work how do you feel?I felt so excited
because I can share my thought to other friends, and can get my writing checked by other students.
Has the audience changed your attitude to your work? Yes, I took part in the group discussion so I can have conversation with my
friends and I know what I have to do to with other assignments. Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I checked my
classmates’ assignment. I checked it to know whether or not I had done the good writing.
Have you commented on other peoples work? Why not? Yes, I give comment related to the topic given. I also give suggestion to
my friends to correct their grammar mistakes. What kind of comments have you left? Text, sentence, word,
other focus? I gave comments related to the topic, and sometimes I check grammar mistake.
How did you feel about commenting on other peoples work? I think it is a good idea because we can learn different opinion
from other students, and of course it makes my paragraph better than before.
Has anyone left comments on your work? Yes. What kind of comments? What areas of your work did they focus
on? They gave comments related to the grammar mistakes I wrote in my paragraph. They also gave comments related to the
composition on my paragraph. How did you feel? Were these comments useful? I felt so happy
because I can learn from my mistakes. And those comments are really useful.
Did you edit your text according to the comments made? Yes, of course.
Do you think this process will help you to improve your writing? How? Yes, I think so because I can see the different between my
paragraphs to others so it makes me learn how to compose such a good paragraph by editing my paragraph based on the comments
given by other students. Concluding remarks
. What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for
writing? I think using Edmodo for writing is fun and challenging because we are challenged to compose good paragraph to be
checked and seen by other students. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way?
I think Edmodo can be used for other activities such as reading or even speaking. But for speaking activity, I prefer using skype
mister, hehe.
Name : Aisyah Gender : Female
Class : X-2 Questions
Technology How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to do my
writing assignment, ask about the homework and have conversation with Mrs. Dale students, hehe.
Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? Yes, of course.