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other students. so it makes me to be more careful before writing and posting it on edmodo. Concluding remarks . What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for writing? I think it is good to be used as a media in learning writing because we can be connected each other so we will write better. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way? I think we can use edmodo as a role play, so we can write something freely without focusing on the particular topic. Name : Abdurrahman Gender : Male Class : X-4 Questions Technology How did you used the Edmodo in class so far? I used it to interact with my friends, to post the assignment and to discuss about the writing assignment. Sometimes I used it to have chat with Mrs. Dale’s students. Do you like using it for writing? Whywhy not? Yes, I can learn new vocabularies. And I think edmodo is almost like facebook so we can practice our writing on edmodo. Do you find it difficult? Why? Yes, when I wrote on edmodo, I can’t change my font. What can we do to make Edmodo easier for you? We can write our writing on Microsoft word first, and then we post it on edmodo. Have you accessed the Edmodo outside of class? How often? Yes, of course. I accessed it Very often. I always check edmodo on my mobile phone. Collaboration When you publish your work how do you feel?I felt so excited because I hope my frinds will give comments on my writing. Has the audience changed your attitude to your work? Yes, I took part in the group discussion so I know the new information. Do you check other peoples work? Who? Why? Yes.I check my classmates writing. I want to see their writing and the mistakes they made on their writing. Have you commented on other peoples work? Why not? Yes, I give comment related to the topic or sometimes I tried to give feedback based on the assignment given by the teacher. What kind of comments have you left? Text, sentence, word, other focus? I gave comments related to the topic, and sometimes I check grammar mistake. How did you feel about commenting on other peoples work? I felt so excited because we can learn and give correction each others. Has anyone left comments on your work? Yes. What kind of comments? What areas of your work did they focus on? They gave comments related to the grammar mistakes I wrote in my paragraph. How did you feel? Were these comments useful? I felt so happy because I can learn from my mistakes. And those comments are really useful. Did you edit your text according to the comments made? Yes, of course. Do you think this process will help you to improve your writing? How? Yes, I think so because I can learn from my mistakes. And I can improve my writing by seeing other’s writing. Concluding remarks . What are your thoughts on using an Edmodo as a learning tool for writing? I think edmodo is such a good tool in learning writing. When I learn how to write better in English, I think the group discussion made on edmodo really help me. Do you have any suggestions on how to use it in a different way? I think we can use edmodo not only for learning writing, but also we can use it to learn reading or even other skills. Name : Jeny Amalia Gender : Female Class : X-1 Questions Technology