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2. Factors  which  Influence  Students’  Writing  Anxiety  in  Paragraph
Writing class
The  following  part  presented  the  factors  which  might  influence  EFL students’ writing anxiety in Paragraph Writing class. According to Hyland 2003
and  Sawalha  et  al.  2012,  the  six  major  factors  of  anxiety  were:  1  having difficulty in finding ideas, 2 having lack of vocabulary, 3 having difficulty in
producing  correct  sentence,  4  making  grammatical  mistakes,  5  making minimum  requirement  mistakes,  and  6  being  evaluated.  Moreover,  Iswandari
2013 in her research which was conducted to 29 Basic Writing Skill students of English  Language Education Study Program of Sanata Dharma University found
out  three  major  factors  which  influence  students’  writing  anxiety.  According  to Iswandari  2013,  the  three  major  factors  which  influence  stude
nts’  writing anxiety  were:  1  making  grammatical  mistakes,  2  having  difficulty  in  finding
ideas,  3  making  minimum  requirement  mistakes.  Furthermore,  the  researcher adapted  Hyland  2003  and  Sawalha  e  al.  2012  theory  about  the  factors  which
influence students’ writing anxiety. The result can be seen in Table 4.2.
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Table 4.2 Factors Which Influence Students’ Writing Anxiety in Paragraph
Writing class No
Statements Frequency of Points Agreements
1 Strongly
Disagree 2
Disagree 3
Agree 4
Strongly Agree
1. I feel anxious because
my  Basic  Writing score is bad
1 3.6
10 35.7
15 53.6
2 7.1
2. I feel anxious because
my vocabulary is bad 11
39.3
11 39.3
6 21.4
3. I feel anxious because
my structure is bad 1
3.6 7
25
15 53.6
5 17.8
4. I feel anxious because
I  can’t  develop  my ideas well
1 3.6
12 42.8
15 53.6
5. I feel anxious because
I don’t like writing 2
7.1
17 60.7
4 14.3
5 17.8
6. I feel anxious because
I  think  writing  is difficult
1 3.6
11 39.3
14 50
2 7.1
Table  4.2  deals  with  the  factors  which  might  influence  EFL  Students’ writing  anxiety  in  Paragraph  Writing  class.  The  first  statement  is  related  to
whether the respondents felt anxious because hisher Basic Writing score was bad. Basic Writing is a course which has to be taken before in the first semester, while
Paragraph  Writing  is  a  course  which  has  to  be  taken  in  second  semester.  The result  showed  that  two  respondents  7.
1  chose  “strongly  agree”,    fifteen respondents  53.6  cho
se  “agree”,  ten  respondents  35.7    chose  “disagree”, and one respondent 3.
6 chose “strongly disagree”. The first statement showed
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that 60.7 7.1 for strongly agree and 53.6 for agree of the respondents felt anxious because their Basic Writing score was bad and 39.3 35.7 for disagree
and  3.6  for  strongly  disagree  of  the  respondents  felt  anxious  because  their Basic Writing score was not bad.  It was  also supported by the open-ended result
which  answered  that  they  were  not  satisfied  with  their  Basic  Writing  score  and they  were  afraid  if  they  could  not  write  well.  The  researcher  found  that  the  bad
Basic Writing score was one of the factors which influenced their writing anxiety. Therefore,  the  researcher  concluded  that  EFL  Students  with  low  score  on  their
writing mostly felt anxious than others who got high scores. The  second  statement  is  related  to  whether  the  respondents  felt  anxious
because  their  vocabulary is  bad. The result showed that  six respondents  21.4 chose  “strongly  agree”,  eleven  respondents  39.3  chose  “agree”,  and  eleven
respondents 39. 3 chose “disagree”. It showed that most of the respondents felt
anxious  because  hisher  vocabulary  was  bad  since  60.7  21.4  for  strongly agree and 39.3 for agree of the respondents  agreed with that statement. It was
supported by the result of open-ended question which answered that they lost their self-esteem  because  their  vocabulary  was  weak  and  they  thought  it  could  affect
their score.  It was also strengthened by the interview result which explained that the  respondents  felt  anxious  because  they  were  lack  of  vocabulary  as  shown  by
Respondent A: “…I feel anxious because I am lack of vocabulary”.