Factors which Influence Students’ Writing Anxiety in Paragraph
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that 60.7 7.1 for strongly agree and 53.6 for agree of the respondents felt anxious because their Basic Writing score was bad and 39.3 35.7 for disagree
and 3.6 for strongly disagree of the respondents felt anxious because their Basic Writing score was not bad. It was also supported by the open-ended result
which answered that they were not satisfied with their Basic Writing score and they were afraid if they could not write well. The researcher found that the bad
Basic Writing score was one of the factors which influenced their writing anxiety. Therefore, the researcher concluded that EFL Students with low score on their
writing mostly felt anxious than others who got high scores. The second statement is related to whether the respondents felt anxious
because their vocabulary is bad. The result showed that six respondents 21.4 chose “strongly agree”, eleven respondents 39.3 chose “agree”, and eleven
respondents 39. 3 chose “disagree”. It showed that most of the respondents felt
anxious because hisher vocabulary was bad since 60.7 21.4 for strongly agree and 39.3 for agree of the respondents agreed with that statement. It was
supported by the result of open-ended question which answered that they lost their self-esteem because their vocabulary was weak and they thought it could affect
their score. It was also strengthened by the interview result which explained that the respondents felt anxious because they were lack of vocabulary as shown by
Respondent A: “…I feel anxious because I am lack of vocabulary”.
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It can be concluded that lack of vocabulary considered as one of many causes which mostly influenced students
’ writing anxiety. In connection with this, it is perceived that the deficient grasp of vocabulary and grammar becomes part of
the cause students’ writing anxiety Hyland, 2003. The third statement is related to whether the respondents felt anxious
because their structure was bad. Based on the data questionnaire, five respondents 17.
8 chose “strongly agree”, fifteen respondents 53.6 chose “agree”, seven respondents 25 chose “disagree”, and one respondent 3.6 chose “strongly
disagree”. It showed that 71.4 17.8 for strongly agree and 53.6 for agree of the respondents felt anxious because their structure was bad. The open-ended
result supported the statement that they felt anxious and afraid to write a paragraph because they often made grammatical mistakes. Based on the interview,
one respondent explained that she felt that her grammar was very bad because she had not comprehended the tenses used. Based on the result, the researcher
concluded that most of the students in Paragraph writing class felt anxious because hisher structure was bad.
The next statement is mainly related to whether the respondents felt anxious because they cannot develop their ideas well. Based on the questionnaire,
no one 0 chose “strongly agree”, fifteen respondents 53.6 chose “agree”, twelve respondents 42.
8 chose “disagree”, and one respondent 3.6 chose “strongly disagree”. It can be concluded that the students felt anxious because
they could not develop their ideas well since 53.6 of the respondents agreed
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with that statement. The researcher got the reasons from the open-ended questionnaire why Paragraph Writing students could not develop their ideas well.
The reasons were because they were confused and got difficulties in finding main topic and idea to write.
The fifth statement is related to whether the respondents felt anxious because they do not like writing. It showed that five respondents 17.8 chose
“strongly agree”, four respondents 14.35 chose “agree”, seventeen respondents 60.
7 chose “disagree”, and two respondents 7.1 chose “strongly disagree”. Since 67.8 60.7 for disagree and 7.1 for strongly disagree of the
respondents disagreed with the statement, the researcher concluded that most of students actually liked writing. However, writing is difficult.
The last statement is related to whether the respondents felt anxious because they think that writing is difficult. It showed that two respondents 7.1
chose “strongly agree”, fourteen respondents 50 chose “agree”, eleven respondents 39.
3 chose “disagree”, and one respondent 3.6 chose “strongly disagree”. Therefore, the researcher concluded that most of the respondents which
means 57.1 7.1 for strongly agree and 50 for agree thought that writing was difficult. The result was slightly confusing when the respondents actually
liked writing as stated in the previous paragraph but they thought that writing was difficult. From the interview, the researcher found that the respondents might
think that writing was difficult because they got lower score in their Basic Writing
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course. They focused on the outcomes of learning. That was why the respondents thought that writing was difficult while actually they liked writing.