They are three bedrooms, a living room, a praying room, a kitchen, a dining room, an a bathroom. Before entering my house, you will find a yard but it is
not too big. In the yard, there are many kinds of plants and a fish pond. Beside the living room is my parent’s bedroom. In front of it, there is a
television. And my bedroom is in the right side of the television room. In the left side of my bedroom is my brother’s room. The kitchen is beside of the
praying room. And the last room is bathroom. My bathroom is inj the corner
of the kitchen. My house is comfortable for my family.
j. Analysis of Student Ten
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
Punctuation The
sentence above
is actually formed from two
sentences that should be separated by a coma because
one of the sentences is an explaining sentence “ In the
right side of it, …………..”.
Verb Tense The word living room is a singular noun. And tobe for a
singular is is
not ar
e “………….., there is a living
room”. 1
In the right side of it there are living room.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word living room
is an unspecified noun “……….., there is a
living room”. Word Form
The word dinner room is not correct form. Because it is
not explaining a person but a place. So, the correct one is
dining room
. 2
And beside it a dinner room, and the left side is kitchen
room.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word kitchen
is an unspecified noun “…………, and the left
side is a kitchen”. Omit Word
The word of room is not needed to explain the word
kitchen . Because, the word
kitchen is including the
room. So, the writer should omit the word room.
3 there is wide terrace
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word wide
terrace is
an unspecified noun “there is a
wide terrace”. Punctuation
The sentence
above is
actually formed from two sentences that should be
separated by a coma because one of the sentences is an
explaining sentence “ In my house,……. “.
4 In my house there is three
bathrooms.
Verb Tense The sentence
above is
formed in simple tense. And for a third plural person, it
uses are not is “……………, there are three bedrooms”.
5 The second is at my grand
mother’s room. Word Choice The
preposition at
is incorrectly
used in
the sentence, in is a correct
preposition to
point a
position of
place “The
second is in my grand mother’s room”.
6 And the third is at the
second floor. Word Choice The
preposition at
is incorrectly
used in
the sentence, on is a correct
preposition to
point an
ordinal number “And the third is on the second floor”.
7 a lot of interesting item
Plural The sentence above is about
to show a numbers that is
more than one or plural. And to show a plural, a noun is
usually added by s or es “a lot of interesting items”.
8 like computer, television,
radio, and guitar. Article
To show something, In English, it usually uses an
article. Article a is used in this
case because
all materials
mentioned are
unspecified nouns “like a computer, a television, a
radio, and a guitar”. Word Form
The word uncle room is exactly
talking about
a possessive. And to show a
possession the main word is usually
added by
an apostrophe and a letter s
“uncle’s room”. 9
In front of my uncle room is praying room.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word praying
room is
an unspecified
noun “………………….is
a praying room”.
Add Word The sentence above is still
incomplete. So, the writer should add some words to
make it more understandable “That is all about my
house……..”
Verb Tense The sentence above is a simple present form. So, the
word felt is not correctly verb used “………….and I
feel my house is…….”. 10 That all my house and I felt
my house is like the heaven
Article To show something, In
English, they usually use an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word heaven
is an unspecified noun
“…………………….my house is like a heaven”.
Reconstruction:
My name is Rahmat. I live on Jl. Hasyim Ashari cipondoh. I am going to tell you about my house. There are many rooms in my house. In
the middle of my house is a living room. In front of my house, there is a wide terrace. In the right side of my house, there is a living room., beside
of it is a dining room, and in the left side of it a kitchen. In my house, there are three bathroom. First is in the backside of the kitchen, the second is in
my grand mother’s room, and the other is on the second floor. My bedroom is on the second floor. I always spend my time in my
room. Because, there are lots of interesting items like a television, a computer, a radio, and a guitar. Beside my room, there is my uncle’s
room. In front of my uncle’s room is praying room. My family always pray together at that room. That is all about my house and I feel my house
is like a heaven.
2. Error Causes
