h. Analysis of Student Eight
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
1 it has six rooms.
Capitalization In the first sentence, a capital letter is used “It has six
rooms”. Spelling
The correct spelling of the word plower is using f not p
“flowers”. 2
In front of my house, there are many plower and plant.
Plural In English, to show a plural
it usually uses s or es or there are some irregular
plural “Flowers and plants”.
3 There are three bedroom in
my house. Plural
In English, to show a plural it usually uses s or es or
there are some irregular plural
“………three bedrooms in my house”.
4 In my bedroom, there are
television, computer, radio, and many others.
Article In
English, to
show something, they usually use
an article. Article a is used in this
case “………………there are a
television, a computer, a radio, and many others”.
5 That is way I very happy in
my room. Verb Tense
The sentence
above is
formed in simple present tense. But it is a nominal
sentence and in nominal sentence a tobe or an
auxiliary verb is used. And a first singular person’s tobe is
am
in this case “That is why I am very...”.
6 Beside my room is my sister
room. Word Form
the word
room exactly
belong to the sister. And in this case an apostrophe
followed by a letter s indicates that is a possession
“…………..my
sister’s room”.
7 In my sister’s room, there is
cupboard, TV, mirror, radio, and cosmetics.
Verb Tense The
sentence above
is formed in simple tense. And
for a third plural, it uses are not is “In my sister’s room,
there are……….”.
Article In English, they usually use
an article to show something. And
because it
is an
unspecified noun, so article a is used in the sentence
”…………there are
a cupboard, a TV, a mirror, a
radio, and cosmetics”. 8
There are table, sofa, vass, my family’s fhoto and some
of pictures. Spelling
The spelling vass is using single s and e in the last of
the word. And the word fhoto is not using f but p “Vases
and photo”.
Verb Tense The sentence
above is
formed in simple tense. And for a third plural person, it
uses are
not is
“……………., there are a refrigerator…..”.
Article In English, they usually use
an article to show something. And
because it
is an
unspecified noun, so article a is used in the sentence
“………, there
are a
refrigerator, a chair, a table, a rice cooker, etc.”.
Spelling The word refigator is still
incorrect spelling, the correct one is refrigerator.
9 In my dining room, there is
refigator, chair, and table, rice cooker, etc.
Omit Word In mentioning some things,
the word and is not used in the middle of mentioning
“…………….a chair,
a table,a rice cooker, etc.”.
Verb Tense The sentence
above is
formed in simple tense. And for a third plural person, it
uses are not is “………….., there are a stove,…….”.
10 In my kitchen, there is stove, place plate, and some tools
for cooking.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case to complete the sentence “……….., there are
a stove, a plate shelf, and
some tools for cooking”. Word Choice The word place is incorrectly
used for the word plate, the word shelf is the most
correct. Word Order
The word place plate in English usage is incorrect
word order. Because, in English the explaining word
is put in the front of the explained word “plate shelf”
not “shelf plate”.
11 The praying room and the bathroom is beside of my
dining room.
Verb Tense The
sentence above
is formed in simple tense. And
for a third plural person, it uses are not is “The praying
room and the bathroom are beside……..”.
Reconstruction:
My name is Lathifah Wiyatri. I live on Jl. H. Mansyur Gondrong Cipondoh Tangerang. I am going to tell you about my house. My house is not
too big. It has six rooms. In front of my house, there are many flowers and plants.
There are three bedrooms in my house. In my room, there are a television, a computer, a radio, and many others. That is why I am very happy in my
room. Next to my room is my sister’s room. In my sister’s room, there are cupboard, a TV, a mirror, and cosmetics. In front of my sister’s room is my
parent’s room. In the middle of my house is a living room. There are tables, sofas, vases,
my family’s photos, and some pictures. In my dining room, there are a refrigerator, chairs ,a dining table, a rice cooker, etc. in my kitchen, there are a
stove, a plate shelf, and some cooking tools. The praying room and the
bathroom are beside of my dining room.
i. Analysis of Student Nine
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