shelf………” Omit Word
The article the is not needed in “the plates”. Because it is
an unspecified noun that the things are not specified but it
shows a number of plates “put plates, glasses,……”.
Reconstruction:
My Lovely House My house is small. I have six rooms in my house. There are two
bedrooms, a kitchen, a living-room, a dinning room, and a bathroom. The first is the living-room. In my living room there is a small chair
completed with it’s table and also a garnish of flower on the table. And next to the living room is the bedroom. In my parents’ room, there is
a big size of bed, a wardrobe, a dressing table, and a television. In my bedroom there is a single bed, and a dressing table.
In my kitchen, I have a stove, a sink to wash all dirty kitchen equipments, and a shelf to put plates, glasses, etc.
b. Analysis of Student Two
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
Omit Word The
sentence “I
don’t have…..” will not be an
understandable word in the sentence above because the
point of view of the sentence is not reached, but it will be
more understandable “I have a small……..”.
1. I don’t have a big house but
it is very nice
Word Choice The word “big” will be a contrary word in the sentence
above. The sentence will be more
meaningful and
understandable “ I have a small house but it is very
nice”. Add Word
There are some word missing in the sentence that make the
sentence incomplete and can not be understood. So, the
writer should add some word in it “It is small but……….”.
Word Choice The word stay
is not
appropriate to the sentence. Because, it explains that it
will happen for awhile, the word live will be more
appropriate to the sentence “……..I
feel very
comfortable living in it”. 2
It small but I stay here very comfortable
Verb Tense Verb tense is dependable. It
depends on the time when something happens and also
depends on the context. For example, I am eating. And in
this case, after added by some word the verb should
be in ing-form, because it is a present perfect continuous
tense “……..I feel very comfortable living in it”.
Verb Tense Verb tense is dependable. It
depends on the time when something happens and also
depends on the context. And the sentence above will be
more correct “they are only …………”.
Punctuation In mentioning some things, a
coma is usually used. It is used to separate one thing to
another “….a bedroom, and a kitchen”.
3 It is only living room, a
bedroom and kitchen
Article In English usage, to show a
specified or
unspecified noun, they usually use an
article. Article a should be
added in this case “……a living room, a bedroom, and
a kitchen”. Punctuation
In mentioning some things, a coma is usually used. It is
used to separate one thing to another
“…..behind the
house, the bedroom is in the middle, and………..”.
4 The kitchen is behind the
house and bedroom in the middle and living room is in
front of the bedroom
Omit Word The word and should be
omitted from the sentence above, the word and in the
first is not necessarily used because in mentioning some
thing, and is not put in each thing mentioned “…..behind
the house, the bedroom is in the middle, and………..”.
Punctuation The sentence above is a
complex sentence. And the sentence above is actually a
combination sentence
between a
main and
supported sentences. Coma is usually used to separate
between a
main and
supported sentences like the sentence
“Beside TV,………..”.
Add Word The sentence is incomplete
sentence, it is still not understandable
and still
needs some word to make the
sentence more
understandable “ Beside TV, there is…….”.
5 beside TV a refrigerator
Capitalization Capitalization is used in the first sentence or to show a
proper noun
“Beside TV,…….”.
6 Like
my photograph.
Calendar. Clock and my schedule
Capitalization The capitalization is not used in the middle of the sentence
except the word is a proper noun or a first singular
pronoun “….calendar,
clock……..”.
Punctuation In mentioning some things,
full stop is used only in the last of the sentence but not in
the middle of mentioning. Coma is usually used in it
“……photograph, a calendar, a clock,………..”.
Article In English usage, an article is
usually used to show a noun either
specified and
unspecified noun
“……photograph, a calendar, a clock,…..”.
Reconstruction:
I have a small house but it is very nice and beautiful. It is mall, but I feel very convertible living in it. There are only a living-room, a bedroom,
a kitchen and there is a small bath room in the kitchen. The kitchen is behind the house, the bedroom is in middle, and the
living room is in the front of in the bedroom. In the living room there is television set. And in the right and left side
of it there is a pair of saloon with an excellence sound. Beside TV, there is a refrigerator and a telephone on it. The color of the wall is white. And
there are many pictures like my photograph, a Calendar, a clock and my schedule.
c. Analysis of Student Three
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
1. My house located in Pondok
Bahar
Add Word The sentence above is still
incomplete. It still need an auxiliary verb to make the
sentence complete
“My house is located………”
2 And
the situation
is
comfortable. Word Choice The word of situation is not
appropriately used. Because the situation is not used to
show a surrounding but a condition of a thing. The
circumstance
is more
appropriate in this case.
3 Is made by wood
Word Choice To show what a material is made is not used by but of or
from . And of is used in this
case “Is made of wood”. Verb Tense
The word comes is not correct. It is a simple tense
and the word you here as a subject that does not need
additional ses in the verb “…….you come……..”.
4 When you comes to my
house
Word Choice To is not appropriately used in the sentence above, into is
more appropriately used in this
case ”……..come
into……” 5
Where there are four chair. Plural
To show a plural usually determine by adding ses in
the last of the word, or some words involve into irregular
plural in this case. S is added in the word chair to show a
plural “ ………four chairs”.
Word Choice The sentence above is one main idea. So, the word and
is not appropriately used but that
is more appropriate to show an explanation in one
sentence “And a table that is…………”.
6 And a table and it is usually
use for the guest
Verb Tense The sentence above is a
passive form. So, participle that should be used in this
case “………that is usually used for…….”.
7 A family room which is used
by us to fill Verb Tense
The sentence above will be more understandable if we
use an active form. So, infinitive should use in this
case “…which we use to fill…”.
8 There are three bedroom in
my house Plural
A plural is usually determine by adding ses in the last of
the word, or some words involve in irregular plural. S
is
added in
the word
bedroom to show a plural
“…….three bedrooms……”.
9 A room is belong to my
parents. Verb Tense
The sentence above is a verbal sentence formed in a
simple present form. So, to be is is not correctly used in
this case. And because, it is a third singular person the verb
should be added by ses “A room
belongs to
my parents”.
Word Choice Because the sentence above is not coherent to the
sentence before. So, the word choice of the sentence is still
not appropriate if related to the sentence before “A room
belongs to my younger brother”.
10 And then
my younger
brother
Add Word The sentence above is still
not understandable, so, the writer still needs to add some
words to make the sentence understandable
“A room
belongs to my younger brother”.
11 And the last is my bedroom Word Choice Because the sentence above
is not coherent to the sentence before. So, the word
choice of the sentence is still not appropriate if related to
the sentence before “ and the other belongs to me “.
Verb Tense The word bedrooms above
seems to be plural, but because there is the word
each make the word to be
singular. So, it should use has
not have in this case “Each
bedrooms has
a bathroom”.
12 Each bedrooms
have
bathroom.
Article In English usage, to point
something, they usually use an article whether it is a
specified or an unspecified noun. And because it is an
unspecified noun, so article a is used in this case “Each
bedrooms has a bathroom”.
13 So that easy for us when we want to take a bath
Punctuation The word so that is an
utterance to emphasize the explanation of the sentence
before. A coma is usually used
in this
case “So,that………..”.
Omit Word The
sentence above
is actually a complete sentence,
however the sentence is too long. So, the writer should
omit some word to shorten the
sentence without
changing its point of view “So, it is easy for us to take a
bath…..”.
Word Choice There are still some words that are not appropriate to
make the
sentence understandable. In this case
the word make is not appropriately used but can ”
In order I can stay calmly inside of it”.
14 In order to make me stay calm inside it.
Add Word The writer still need to add
some word to make the word more
complete and
understandable ” In order I can stay calmly inside of it”.
Word Form The word calm is not
correctly used
in the
sentence. Because, it is an adjective but it should be an
adverb to
explain the
sentence “In order I can stay calmly inside of it.
15 The last room is a kitchen Article
The word kitchen above is a specified word, because it
has been told in the first paragraph. So, article the is
that should be used “……..is the kitchen.
16 It is different as every families has it
Omit Word The word it in the last of the
sentence above
is not
necessarily used
“…………….every family
has”. Word Choice The word such in the
sentence above
is not
appropriately used. Because, such as
is usually used in the opening
of pointing
something. For
example “There are many fruits such
as apples,………”. But the word like will be more
suitable “Like I have told you”
17 Such I have tell you
Verb Tense The sentence above is to
repeat the composer told in the first paragraph. So, it
uses present perfect tense, and in perfect tense participle
is used not infinitive ”like I have told you”.
18 Everything in my house is made by wood
Word Choice The word
by is
not appropriately used in the
sentence. Of is correctly used to replace by. Because, it
shows not who made the house but what the house is
made from “……………..is made of wood”.
19 Include the kitchen cabinet Verb Tense
The word include in the sentence
is necessarily
written in
ing-form “including the ……….”.
Reconstruction:
My house is located in Pondok Bahar. Its location is very strategies and the situation is very comfortable. It is about 350 large and its forms is
simple but I like it very much. Everything in my house is made of wood, so that, it looks an antique house.
When you come into my house, the first thing you will find is a living-room where there are four chairs and a table that are usually used
for the guest. And when you step your feet to the left side, you will find a family room which we use to fill our resting time in my house. In family
room there is a television and a sofa. There are three bedrooms in my house. A room belongs to my
parents, a room belongs to my younger brother, and the other belongs to me. Each bedroom has a bathroom. So that, it is easy for us to take a bath.
And let me tell you what are there in my room. I have decorated my room as beautiful as possible in order I can stay calmly inside of it..
The last room is the kitchen. It is different as every families has. Like I have told that everything in my house is made of wood including the
kitchen Cabinets.
d. Analysis of Student Four
