Analysis of Student Nine

bathroom are beside of my dining room.

i. Analysis of Student Nine

No Incorrect Sentence Errors Explanation Verb Tense In infinitive form, letter ses is not used “I would like to tell you…..”. 1 I would like to tells you about my hous Spelling The correct spelling of the word hous is house. Article To show something, In English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in this case to complete the sentence “I have a big house” 2 I have big hous Spelling The correct spelling of the word hous is house. Spelling The correct spelling of the word hous is house 3 My hous has eight room Plural The word room is exactly a plural noun. So, it has to be added by s “My house has eight rooms”. Plural The word room is exactly a plural noun. So, it has to be added by s “there are three bedrooms,……….”. 4 There are three bedroom, living rooms, praying room, kitchen, dining room and one bathroom. Article To show something, In English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in this case to complete the sentence “There are three bedrooms, a living room, a praying room, a kitchen, a dining room, and a bathroom”. Verb Tense A verb should be written in ing-form because it is proceeded by a preposition “Before entering my house,…………”. 5 Before enter my house, you will find the yard but it is not so big. Article To show something, In English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in this case to complete the sentence “……., you will find a yard….”. Verb Tense The sentence above is formed in simple tense. And for a third plural person, it uses are not is “………., there are many plants and …..”. Add Word The writer should add some words to complete the sentence and make it more understandable “……….., there are many kind of plants and….”. 6 In the yard, there is many plants and fish pond. Article To show something, In English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in this case to complete the sentence “…………., there are many kind of plants and a fish pond”. 7 Beside living room is my parent’s bedroom. Article The word living room is a specified noun, so, article the should be added in the sentence “Beside the living room is………..”. Punctuation The sentence above is actually formed from two sentences that should be separated by a coma because one of the sentences is an explaining sentence “ In front of it, there is a television. 8 In front of it there is television. Article To show something, In English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in this case because the word television is an unspecified noun “In front of it, there is a television”. 9 And my bedroom is at the right side of the television Word Choice The word at is incorrectly used in the sentence. And room. also the word television room is not appropriately used in the sentence, living- room will be more appropriate used in the sentence “And my bedroom is in the right side of the living room”. 10 the left side my bedroom is brother’s room. Add Word The sentence above is still not understandable. Because there is no an explanation about the position of the room. So the writer should add some word to make it more understandable “In the left side of my bedroom is my brother’s room”. Omit Word The word of room is not needed to explain the word kitchen . Because, the word kitchen is including the room. So, the writer should omit the word room. 11 The kitchen room is beside of praying room. Article The word praying in the sentence above has been mentioned in the sentence before. So, it is a specified noun and should be shown by article the “The kitchen is beside the praying room”. 12 My bathroom is at corner of the kitchen. Word Choice The preposition at is incorrectly used to show a position of something. But the preposition in will be more correct “My bathroom is in the corner of the kitchen”. 13 My house is comportable for my family Spelling The correct spelling of the word comportable is not using p but f “comfortable” Reconstruction: My name is Ahmad Fauzi. I live on Jl. H Mansyur Tangerang no. 45. I would like to tell you about my house. I have a big house. My house has eight rooms. They are three bedrooms, a living room, a praying room, a kitchen, a dining room, an a bathroom. Before entering my house, you will find a yard but it is not too big. In the yard, there are many kinds of plants and a fish pond. Beside the living room is my parent’s bedroom. In front of it, there is a television. And my bedroom is in the right side of the television room. In the left side of my bedroom is my brother’s room. The kitchen is beside of the praying room. And the last room is bathroom. My bathroom is inj the corner of the kitchen. My house is comfortable for my family.

j. Analysis of Student Ten