bathroom are beside of my dining room.
i. Analysis of Student Nine
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
Verb Tense In infinitive form, letter ses
is not used “I would like to tell you…..”.
1 I would like to tells you
about my hous Spelling
The correct spelling of the word hous is house.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case to complete the sentence “I have a big
house” 2
I have big hous
Spelling The correct spelling of the
word hous is house. Spelling
The correct spelling of the word hous is house
3 My hous has eight room
Plural The word room is exactly a
plural noun. So, it has to be added by s “My house has
eight rooms”.
Plural The word room is exactly a
plural noun. So, it has to be added by s “there are three
bedrooms,……….”. 4
There are three bedroom, living rooms, praying room,
kitchen, dining room and one bathroom.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case to complete the sentence “There are three
bedrooms, a living room, a praying room, a kitchen, a
dining
room, and
a bathroom”.
Verb Tense A verb should be written in
ing-form because
it is
proceeded by a preposition “Before
entering my
house,…………”. 5
Before enter my house, you will find the yard but it is
not so big.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case to complete the sentence “……., you will
find a yard….”.
Verb Tense The sentence
above is
formed in simple tense. And for a third plural person, it
uses are not is “………., there are many plants and
…..”.
Add Word The writer should add some
words to
complete the
sentence and make it more understandable
“……….., there are many kind of plants
and….”. 6
In the yard, there is many plants and fish pond.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case to complete the sentence “…………., there
are many kind of plants and a fish pond”.
7 Beside living room is my
parent’s bedroom. Article
The word living room is a specified noun, so, article the
should be added in the sentence “Beside the living
room is………..”.
Punctuation The
sentence above
is actually formed from two
sentences that should be separated by a coma because
one of the sentences is an explaining sentence “ In
front of it, there is a television.
8 In front of it there is
television.
Article To show something, In
English, it usually uses an article. Article a is used in
this case because the word television
is an unspecified noun “In front of it, there is a
television”. 9
And my bedroom is at the right side of the television
Word Choice The word at is incorrectly used in the sentence. And
room. also the word television
room is not appropriately used in the sentence, living-
room will
be more
appropriate used
in the sentence “And my bedroom
is in the right side of the living room”.
10 the left side my bedroom is brother’s room.
Add Word The sentence above is still
not understandable. Because there is no an explanation
about the position of the room. So the writer should
add some word to make it more understandable “In the
left side of my bedroom is my brother’s room”.
Omit Word The word of room is not
needed to explain the word kitchen
. Because, the word kitchen
is including the room. So, the writer should
omit the word room. 11 The kitchen room is beside
of praying room.
Article The word praying in the
sentence above has been mentioned in the sentence
before. So, it is a specified noun and should be shown
by article the “The kitchen is beside the praying room”.
12 My bathroom is at corner of the kitchen.
Word Choice The preposition
at is
incorrectly used to show a position of something. But
the preposition in will be more correct “My bathroom
is in the corner of the kitchen”.
13 My house is comportable for my family
Spelling The correct spelling of the
word comportable is not using p but f “comfortable”
Reconstruction:
My name is Ahmad Fauzi. I live on Jl. H Mansyur Tangerang no. 45. I would like to tell you about my house. I have a big house. My house has eight rooms.
They are three bedrooms, a living room, a praying room, a kitchen, a dining room, an a bathroom. Before entering my house, you will find a yard but it is
not too big. In the yard, there are many kinds of plants and a fish pond. Beside the living room is my parent’s bedroom. In front of it, there is a
television. And my bedroom is in the right side of the television room. In the left side of my bedroom is my brother’s room. The kitchen is beside of the
praying room. And the last room is bathroom. My bathroom is inj the corner
of the kitchen. My house is comfortable for my family.
j. Analysis of Student Ten