As I told you before that my house is not too big and not too small but I love my house. I feel safe if I am in my house.
f. Analysis of Student Six
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
1 I
live at
Jl. Kihajar
Dewantoro no. 18
Word Choice The word
at is
not appropriately used to show
an address. On is usually used “I live on……………”.
Word Choice The word stay
in the sentence is not correctly used
to complete and make the sentence
understandable. Liv
e is more correct in this case.
2 I stay here have ten years
Verb Tense The word ten years indicates
that it happens in long duration
of time.
And according the tenses, it uses
present perfect continues “I have been living here for ten
years”.
3 Plowers
Spelling F
is used to spell the word above “flowers”.
Word Choice The word Nearly is not appropriate
to show
a temporary action. Almost is
more appropriate in this case “almost………….”.
4 Nearly everyday I watering
them
Verb Tense The sentence above is a
simple tense form. So, ing- form is not used to show the
tense “……………I water them”.
5 My father often talk to his
friends Verb Tense
In simple present, for the third singular person, the
verb should be added s or es “………………talks to his
friends”
6 Sometimes my friend come
and sit here Plural
The word friend is actually a plural
according to
the
sentence. And in English, ses is usually added to show
a plural
noun “……….friends come and sit
here”. Capitalization In the first sentence, capital
letter is
used “Beside
sofa…”. Punctuation
After the word sofa it should be put a coma, because the
next sentence
is an
emphasizing sentence before “Beside sofa, there………”.
7 beside sofa there is a small
table
Article The word sofa is a specified
noun. And article the is usually used to show it in
English “Beside
the sofa,………..”.
8 and There is a Telephone on
it. Capitalization Capitalization is not used in
the middle of the sentence “and there is a telephone”.
9 In the wall
Word Choice The word
in is
not appropriately used in the
sentence but on “on the wall”.
10 Clock, and picture Article
In English,
to show
something it usually uses an article, and an article a is
used to show an unspecified noun “A clock, and a
picture”.
Capitalization In the first sentence, capital letter
is used
“Beside that……”.
11 beside that there is a
painting
Punctuation After the word that, it should
be put a coma, because the next
sentence is
an emphasizing sentence before
“Beside that, there………”. 12 My living room always
clean
Verb Tense The
sentence above
is actually a nominal sentence.
Tobe or auxiliary verb is used instead of a verb “my
living room
is always
cleaned” 13 My mother always keep it
Verb Tense In simple present tense, for a
clean third singular person. S or es
should be added in the verb “……….always
keeps it
clean” Add the word The
sentence above
is causative sentence. So, the
word because should be added “because my color is
blue, so I”.
14 My favorite color is blue so I
Punctuation The
sentence above
is causative sentence. And the
sentence “so I….” is the explaining sentence of the
sentence before. So, coma is used after the word blue
“because my color is blue, so I”.
15 And another books Word Choice The word another is used to
show a singular noun and it is not correctly used in the
sentence. Others that is used in this case “And others
books”.
Add Word A computer and a printer are
two different things. So, the word and should be added in
the sentence “A computer and its printer…….”.
16 A computer with printer I
put on the table
Word Order The word order of the
sentence above makes the sentence
can not
be understood well. The best
order is “I put the computer and its printer on the table”.
Punctuation After the word computer, it
should be put a coma, because the next sentence is
an explaining
sentence before “beside the computer,
there…”. 17 Beside the computer a spring
bed and two pillow on it
Add Word The writer should add the
word there are because the next sentence is explaining
sentence of the sentence before
“Beside of
the computer, there are……...”.
Plural The word pillow is actually a
plural noun according to the sentence. And in English,
ses is usually added to show a
plural noun
“……………and two pillows on it”.
Reconstruction:
My name is Ira Gunawan. I am nineteen years old. I live on Jl. Kihajar Dewantoro no. 18. I live with my family. I have been living here
for ten years. My house is very nice. In front of my house, there are many plants
and flowers. Almost everyday I water them. There are five rooms in my house. They are a living-room, a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen.
In the living-room, there is a set of sofa. My father often talks to his friends in the room. Sometimes my friends come and sit there. Beside
the sofa, there is a small table and there is a telephone on it. On the wall, there are a clock and a picture. Beside that, there is a painting. My living-
room is always clean. Because my mother always keeps it clean. The dining-room is behind the living-room. There is a table to eat. And there
are many things on the table like plates, spoons, forks, knives, etc. Every morning we have a breakfast there.
My bedroom is in the right side of the dining-room. I love it very much. I always clean it everyday. My favorite color is blue, so I paint my
bedroom blue. There is a bookshelf beside the table. I have many comics and others books. In front of the bookshelf, I put a computer with its
printer on the table. Beside the computer, there is a spring bed and two pillows on it. I put my photograph and a calendar on the wall.
g. Analysis of Student Seven
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