printer on the table. Beside the computer, there is a spring bed and two pillows on it. I put my photograph and a calendar on the wall.
g. Analysis of Student Seven
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
Word Choice The word stay
in the sentence is not correctly used
to complete and make the sentence
understandable. Liv
e is more correct in this case.
1 I stay at my house when I
was in baby.
Verb Tense The sentence above actually
show a perfect continues tense. So, ing-form is used in
the sentence. The correct sentence is “I have been
living in my house since I was still baby”.
2 I will Never Forget my
house Capitalization Capitalization is not used in
the middle of the sentence “I will never forget my house”.
Spelling The correct spelling of the
word acompany is using double c “accompany”.
3 My house has acompany me
to live in it.
Verb Form The tense of the sentence
above is perfect tense. So, the verb of the tense is in
participle form “My house has accompanied me……..”.
4 My
house have
many
appliances
Verb Tense The
sentence above
is formed in simple tense. And
for a third singular person, it uses has not have “ my house
has many…….”
5 Such as guess room, living
room, sleeping room, etc. Spelling
The correct spelling of the word guess room is guest
room . Because the word
guess has different meaning.
6 A small garden with the all
plants. Add Word
The sentence above is still incomplete sentence. It is
still not understandable. It
still needs to be added with some word “A small garden
with any kind of plants”. 7
You will see a guess room Spelling
The correct spelling of the word guess room is guest
room . Because the word
guess has different meaning.
Spelling The correct spelling of the
word guess room is guest room
. Because the word guess
has different meaning. 8
In the guess room there are sofas and the tables with the
beautiful flowers.
Punctuation The sentence should be
separated by a coma after the word guest room. Because,
the next sentence is an emphasizing sentence “In the
guest room, there are……..”.
Punctuation The sentence should be
separated by a coma after the word house. Because, the
next sentence
is an
emphasizing sentence “In my house, we………”
9 In my house we has two
small rooms
Verb Tense The
sentence above
is formed in simple tense. And
for a first plural person, it uses have not has “In my
house, we have two small rooms”.
10 One of them is for pray and the other is for putting books
and computer Word
Verb Tense A verb should be written in ing-form if it is proceeded by
a preposition “one of them is for praying and……….”.
11 In the back side of my house
is the kitchen.
Word Order The word order of the
sentence is unwell placed, and the best arrangement of
the sentence is “The kitchen is in the back side of house
” Omit Word
The sentence above is too long. So, the writer needs to
omit some word to make the sentence more simple “In the
kitchen, there are….”. 12 In the kitchen of course
there are two gas stoves
Punctuation The sentence should be
separated by a coma after the word kitchen. Because, the
next sentence
is an
emphasizing sentence” In the kitchen, there are….”.
Article The word cupboard in the
sentence is an unspecified noun. So, article aan is used
to show it not the “a cupboard to………..”.
13 The cupboard to put all the equipment such as plate,
spoon
Word Choice The word equipment is not correctly used to complete
the sentence. Tool is more correct to make the sentence
more understandable.
14 And next to the kitchen there
is the bathroom
Word Order The word order of the
sentence is not correctly arranged,
and the
best arrangement is “And the
bathroom is next to the kitchen”.
Reconstruction:
I really love my house. I have been living in my house since I was still baby. I will never forget my house, because it has accompanied me to
live in it. My house has many appliances such as guest room, living room, bed room, kitchen, bathroom, garden, etc.
For the first time you enter my house, you will see a small garden with any kinds of plants. If you come into my house, you will see the guest
room. In the guest room, there are sofas and tables with beautiful flowers. In my house, we have two small rooms. One of them is for praying and the
other is for putting all books and computer. The kitchen is in the backside of my house. In the kitchen, there
are two gas stoves, a cupboard to put all kitchen tools such as plates, spoons, pans, knives, and so on. And the bathroom is next to the kitchen.
h. Analysis of Student Eight
