written in
ing-form “including the ……….”.
Reconstruction:
My house is located in Pondok Bahar. Its location is very strategies and the situation is very comfortable. It is about 350 large and its forms is
simple but I like it very much. Everything in my house is made of wood, so that, it looks an antique house.
When you come into my house, the first thing you will find is a living-room where there are four chairs and a table that are usually used
for the guest. And when you step your feet to the left side, you will find a family room which we use to fill our resting time in my house. In family
room there is a television and a sofa. There are three bedrooms in my house. A room belongs to my
parents, a room belongs to my younger brother, and the other belongs to me. Each bedroom has a bathroom. So that, it is easy for us to take a bath.
And let me tell you what are there in my room. I have decorated my room as beautiful as possible in order I can stay calmly inside of it..
The last room is the kitchen. It is different as every families has. Like I have told that everything in my house is made of wood including the
kitchen Cabinets.
d. Analysis of Student Four
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
1 I live at Jl. Mansyur No 7
Gondrong Word Choice At is not correctly used to
show the address. On is
usually used to show the address
“ I
live on
Jl…………..”. 2
There are many flower and plant in front of it.
Plural To show a plural, a noun is
usually added by ses. And some nouns involve into
irregular plural. And the word flower and plant should
be added by s as plurals “Flowers and Plants”.
3 On the left side
Word Choice To show the position, in will be more correctly used to
complete the sentence above “In the left side”.
4 And on the right side
Word Choice To show the position, in will be more correctly used to
complete the sentence above “ And in the right side”.
5 Inside of house
Article To show some thing, English
people usually use an article. And because the word house
is mentioned in the sentence before, it involves into a
specified noun. So, article the
is used in this case “Inside of the house”.
Reconstruction:
I am Harry. I live at Jl. Mansur No.7 Gondrong. My house is very nice, it is pink and green. There are many flower and plants in front of it.
There is also a pond with some beautiful fishes, in the left side, there is a food shop and in the right side is my uncle’s house.
Inside of house, there is a large living room, there are bedrooms, a pretty kitchen and small a bathroom. There is a small TV and a beautiful
aquarium in the living room. And a refrigerator in the kitchen. Behind my house, there is a pretty large garden. My father grows many beautiful
plants there.
e. Analysis of Student Five
No Incorrect Sentence
Errors Explanation
1 And back side my house
Add Word The sentence above is still
incomplete, it should be added of after the word side
“And the back side of my house”.
2 Standing three high wall to
protect my house Omit Word
The word three in the sentence above should be
omitted because the word high wall
is actually only one wall
“standing a
high wall………”.
3 A guest room with the sofa
and tables Article
To show some thing, English people usually use an article.
And because the word sofa and table involve into an
unspecified noun. So, article a
is used in the two words “a sofa and a table”.
Omit Word The writer should omit some
word from the sentence beside; because the sentence
is still too complicated “you will see big rose embroidery
on the wall”. 4
Stand in the wall you will see a big rose embroidery
Word Order English word order is not the
same with Indonesian word order.
In English,
the explaining word
is put after the explained word as the
different from Indonesian word order that put the
explaining word before the
explained word like “baju
bagus” but in English “good shirt”. And the good order is
“you will see a big rose embroidery on the wall”.
5 Next to the guest room is
Article To show some thing, English
living room people usually use an article.
And because the word living room
is an unspecified noun, so article a is used to
complete the
sentence “………….is a living room”.
Add Word The
sentence above
is actually continual sentence
with two different actions. So, they should separate by
adding a word and “and talk about everything”.
6 Talk about everything
Verb Form The word talk should be a
gerund, and a gerund is using ing-form “and talking about
everything”.
7 In living room
Article It is a specified noun. So, it
should be added an article the
to show the word living room “In the living room”
Article The word sofa in the
sentence is an unspecified noun. In English, they use an
article to show something. Article a is used in this case
“a sofa..”. 8
Sofa to watching movie
Verb Form The verb above is exactly an
infinitive verb. And ing-form is not used in the verb “a
sofa to watch movie”
Article The
cupboard is
an unspecified noun. And article
a is usually used to show it
in English “a cupboard, a small dining table”.
9 The
cupboard, a
small
dining table
Add Word The sentence above is about
mentioning two
different things. And is usually used to
make the sentence more understandable “a cupboard,
and a dining table”.
10 I have two bookcase to put
all the books
Plural The
word bookca
se is
actually a plural according to the sentence. However, in
English, s es is usually added to show a plural noun
“….two bookcases...”
11 If I in my bedroom Verb Tense
To show a nominal sentence, a to be or an auxiliary verb
is usually used. And it is a simple tense, so am is used
to show a first singular person “if I am in my
bedroom”.
Add Word The
sentence above
is actually continual sentence
with two different actions. So, they should be separated
by adding a word and “and the dressing table”.
12 the dressing room
Article The dressing room is an
unspecified noun. And article a
is usually used to show it in English “ and a dressing
table”. 13 The double bed
Article The double bed is an
unspecified noun. And article a
is usually used to show it in English “a table bed”.
14 The place
to produce
everything to eat
Word Choice The word produce is not appropriately used in the
sentence above. Because it is a kitchen so the word cook is
more appropriately used in this case “The place to cook
everything to eat”.
Verb Tense The word two indicates that
the word is more than one. The personal pronoun of it is
they. And to be for they is are
“there are two stoves”. 15
There is two stove
Plural The word stove is actually a
plural according
to the
sentence. And in English, ses is usually added to show
a plural noun “there are two stoves”.
16 Kitchen cabinet Spelling
The word kabinet is not letter k
used here but c “cabinet”.
17 Plates, glasses Add Word
The sentence above is about mentioning
two different
things. And is usually used to
make the sentence more understandable “plates, and
glasses” Verb Tense
The word two indicates that the word is more than one.
The personal pronoun of it is they. And tobe for they is are
“…there are two…”. 18 In my house there is two
bathroom
Plural The
word bathroom
is actually a plural according to
the sentence. And in English, ses is usually added to show
a plural
noun “…two
bathrooms” 19 And one is beside the
kitchen
Word Choice The word one is not correctly used
in the
sentence. Because
it is
about mentioning something and
the sentence is the last thing mentioned,
so, “the
other……” is more correctly used.
Capitalization In the first sentence, capital letter in the first sentence is
used
20 as I tell you
Verb Tense The sentence above is to
repeat what was told before. So, it uses simple past “as I
told you”
21 If I in my house Verb Tense
In nominal sentence, tobe or an auxiliary verb is used to
show the tense of the sentence. And it is a simple
tense. And tobe am is used for first singular person “if I
am in my house”.
Reconstruction: My name is Etha. I live in Cikarang. My house is not too big and
not to small. It is 150 meters large. On the right, left, and back side of my house standing a high wall to protect my house
The first thing if you enter my house you will see green fences and a small yard. In front of my house there is bench, the place for enjoying
the night air. If you open the door, you will see a guest room completed with sofas and the tables. The roof of my guest room decorated with some
unique lamps made from Batavia. You will see a big rose embroidery on the wall.
Next to guest room is living room the place for us to take rest, talk about everything. In living room there is a television, a sofa to watch a
movie, a cupboard, and a small dining table. I have two bookcases to put all books.
On the west side of the living-room is my bed room. I feel comfortable if I am in my bedroom. There is wardrobe, a single bed, and a
dressing table. And I can see my small yard and my neighbor’s house from the window.
On the north side there is my parent’s room. In it exists a double bed, a wardrobe, and my mother’s dressing table,. Next to my parent’s
room is my brother’s room. There is a wardrobe, a single bed, and a door which connected to a small hall to put a computer.
In the back side, there is a kitchen. The place to produce everything to eat. There is two stoves, a kitchen cabinet, a sink to wash all dirty
cooking equipments, plates, and glasses. Beside the kitchen there is a bathroom. In my house there are two bathrooms. One is in my parent’s
room, and one is beside the kitchen.
As I told you before that my house is not too big and not too small but I love my house. I feel safe if I am in my house.
f. Analysis of Student Six
