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128. Go on. Go, go, go. If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Pergilah. Pergi, pergi,
pergi” The subtitle ” Go on. Go, go, go.”changes to the shorter utterance“Pergilah. Pergi “. Condensation is making the text brief to miss unneccesary utterance using
the shorter utterance, but it does not lose the message. The utterance “go” has involved in repetition. Linguistic element such as repetition is intentionally to be
condensed. 130. How could you do that to me?
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Bagaimana bisa kau melakukan itu padaku?”. The subtitle ” How could you do that to me?”changes to
the shorter utterance“Teganya kau melakukan itu padaku?“. Condensation is making the text brief to miss unneccesary utterance using the shorter utterance, but it does
not lose the message. 132. Well, Ill be a mealy worm, gladly Anything but a filthy,
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Baik, Aku akan jadi seekor cacing gemuk dengan senang hati Apapun tetapi seekor bau”. The subtitle ”
Well, Ill be a mealy worm, gladly Anything but a filthy,”changes to the shorter utterance“aku lebih suka menjadi cacing gemuk daripada anjing kotor bau “.
Condensation is making the text brief to miss unneccesary utterance using the shorter utterance, but it does not lose the message.
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Decimation is used to translate when the actors are quarrelling with the fast speaking. So, the translator is also to condense the utterance because the utterances
have difficulty to be absorbed quickly from unstructured written text.
No. English Subtitle
Indonesian Subtitle
8 Whyd you get to tell her?
Mengapa kau memberitahunya? 105
Well, we have to blend in,dont we? Kita harus mampu membaur, kan?
Data Analysis: 8. Whyd you get to tell her?
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Mengapa jadi kau yang akan memberitahunya?”, but here it is translated as “Mengapa kau
memberitahunya?.”, which the translator condense the utterance because the utterances have difficulty absorbing unstructured written text quickly.
105. Well, we have to blend in,dont we? The phrase “Well, we have to blend in,dont we?” It was not translated word-to-word
because it was represented by “dont we?” which in TL could be translated “Kita harus mampu membaur, kan?”, which the translator condense the utterance because
the utterances have difficulty absorbing unstructured written text quickly.
4.1.2.6. Imitation
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Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. Imitation is ussualy used to deal with the name of person, place, names of magzine, journals, newspapers, the
titles of as yet untranslated literary works, name of company and instituitions, addresses, etc.
No. English Subtitle
Indonesian Subtitle
14 Im called Stefan.
Namaku Stefan.
39 You will not have the Moors.
Kau tak akan bisa menguasai Moors.
49 Maleficent
, Ive cometo warn you. Maleficent, aku datang untuk
memperingatkanmu. 50
King Henry will stopat nothing. Raja Henry akan mengerahkan
segala upaya. 68
King Stefan and the Queenhave had a child.
Raja Stefan dan Ratunya telah memiliki seorang anak.
75 I am Knotgrassof the Moorland fair
folk. Aku Knotgrass dari kaum peri
Moorland.
96 Maleficent
, please dont do this. Maleficent, jangan lakukan ini.
102 while his soldiers rode far and wide
to hunt Maleficent down
sementara pasukannya berkuda ke segala penjuru untuk memburu
Maleficent
125 Not a wall, not Maleficent Begitu juga tembok itu dan
Maleficent
Data Analysis:
14. Im called Stefan. ”Im called Stefan” translated to be “Namaku Stefan.”. Imitation is re-writing the
word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Stefan’.
39. You will not have the Moors.
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” You will not have the Moors” is translated to be “Kau tak akan bisa menguasai Moors”.
Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of place ‘Moors’.
49. Maleficent, Ive cometo warn you. ” Maleficent, Ive cometo warn you” is translated to be “Maleficent, aku datang
untuk memperingatkanmu”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Maleficent’.
50. King Henry will stopat nothing. ” King Henry will stopat nothing.” is translated to be “Raja Henry akan
mengerahkan segala upaya”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Henry’.
68. King Stefan and the Queenhave had a child. ” King Stefan and the Queenhave had a child” is translated to be “Raja Stefan dan
Ratunya telah memiliki seorang anak”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Stefan’.
75. I am Knotgrassof the Moorland fair folk. ” I am Knotgrassof the Moorland fair folk” is translated to be “Aku Knotgrass dari
kaum peri Moorland”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this
subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Knotgrass’ and in the name of place ‘Moorland’.
96. Maleficent, please dont do this.
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”Maleficent, please dont do this” is translated to be “Maleficent, jangan lakukan
ini”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Maleficent’.
102. While his soldiers rode far and wide to hunt Maleficent down ”While his soldiers rode far and wide to hunt Maleficent down” is translated to be
“Sementara pasukannya berkuda ke segala penjuru untuk memburu Maleficent”.
Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle, imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Maleficent’.
125. Not a wall, not Maleficent ” Not a wall, not Maleficent” is translated to be “Begitu juga tembok itu dan
Maleficent”. Imitation is re-writing the word of the original text. In this subtitle,
imitation occurs in the name of person ‘Maleficent’.
4.1.2.7. Deletion
Deletionis refers to the elimination of parts of a text which this term carryless semantic meaning. Therefore, it can be deleted without changing the informationto
the audience.
No. English Subtitle
Indonesian Subtitle
3 So vast the discord between them
Begitu sengitnya pertentangan mereka 16
If I knew you would throw it away, Jika aku tahu kau akan membuangnya,
19 So, your parents are farmers then?
Jadi orang tuamu petani? 43
Each of you swore allegiance to meand to that cause
Kalian semua bersumpah bersekutu bersamaku demi tujuan itu
57 What have you done to my
beautiful south? Apa yang kau lakukan pada tubuh
indahku? 85
What an awkward situation
Situasi nan canggung sekali 88
And to show I bear no ill-will
Untuk membuktikan aku tak berniat jahat
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91 Listen well, all of you.
Dengarkanlah, kalian semua 95
A sleep from whichshe will never
awaken Tertidur dimana dia takkan pernah
terbangun lagi
106 So, gather around, ladies. Berkumpullah kemari, nona-nona.
113 Come on. Here you go. Kemarilah. Ini dia.
120 Were starting again. Kita mulai lagi.
122 Stop doing that. Hentikan kelakuanmu.
Data Analysis: 3. So vast the discord between them
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as ´Begitu sengitnya pertentangan diantara mereka ´, but here it is translated as ´Begitu sengitnya
pertentangan mereka ´, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “between” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted
without changing the information to the audience. 16. If I knew you would throw it away,
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as ´ Jika aku tahu kau akan membuangnya jauh´, but here it is translated as ´ Jika aku tahu kau akan
membuangnya, ´, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “away” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without
changing the information to the audience. 19. So, your parents are farmers then?
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Jadi orang tuamu petani kemudian?´, but here it is translated as “Jadi orang tuamu petani?”, which can give
same situation between SL and TL. The word “then” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the
audience.
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43. Each of you swore allegiance to meand to that cause If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as ´ Kalian semua bersumpah
bersekutu bersamaku dan demi tujuan itu´, but here it is translated as ´ Kalian semua bersumpah bersekutu bersamaku demi tujuan itu´, which can give same situation
between SL and TL. The word “and” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
57. What have you done to my beautiful south? If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Apa yang telah kau
lakukan pada tubuh indahku?”, but here it is translated as “Apa yang kau lakukan pada tubuh indahku?”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word
“have” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
66. Well, I saw nothing. If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Baiklah, aku tidak
melihat apapun”, but here it is translated as “Aku tak melihat apapun”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “well” in this term carry less
semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
85. What an awkward situation
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If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Apa sebuah situasi nan canggung”, but here it is translated as “Situasi nan canggung sekali”, which can
give same situation between SL and TL. The word “an” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to
the audience. 88. And to show I bear no ill-will
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “DanUntuk membuktikan aku tak berniat jahat”, but here it is translated as “Untuk membuktikan aku tak
berniat jahat”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “and” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without
changing the information to the audience. 91. Listen well, all of you.
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Dengarkanlah baik-baik, kalian semua”, but here it is translated as “Dengarkanlah, kalian semua”, which can
give same situation between SL and TL. The word “well” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to
the audience. 95. A sleep from whichshe will never awaken
If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Tertidur dari yang mana dia takkan pernah terbangun lagi”, but here it is translated as “Tertidur dimana dia
takkan pernah terbangun lagi”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “froml” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be
deleted without changing the information to the audience.
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96. Maleficent, please dont do this If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Maleficent, mohon jangan
lakukan ini”, but here it is translated as “Maleficent, jangan lakukan ini.”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “pleasel” in this term carry less
semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
106. So, gather around, ladies If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Jadi, berkumpullah
kemari, nona-nona.”, but here it is translated as “Berkumpullah kemari, nona-nona”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “so” in this term carry
less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
113. Come on. Here you go If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Kemarilah. Disini kau
pergi.”, but here it is translated as “Kemarilah. Ini dia.”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The words “go” and “you” in this term carry less
semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
120. Were starting again.
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If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Kita sedang mulai lagi.”, but here it is translated as “Kita mulai lagi.”, which can give same situation between
SL and TL. The word “are” in this term carry less semantic meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
121. Stop doing that. If the subtitle is literally translated, it will be translated as “Hentikan kelakuanmu
itu”, but here it is translated as “Hentikan kelakuanmu.”, which can give same situation between SL and TL. The word “that” in this term carry less semantic
meaning; therefore, it can be deleted without changing the information to the audience.
4.1.2.8. Transcription
