What is the writer’s main idea? Restate here: Respondents Feedback
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38 There is no introduction at the text.
39 I think you have the introduction is effective because you
explain about tree planting is important so in the reasons you explain the mean of her introduction.
40 Yes, it is, because it shows the background of the problem.
41 Yes, the introduction is effective.
42 No, because the introduction can’t introduces the problem.
43 The introduction is effective, because he mentions the
arguments. 44
No. it has no restatement of the argument. 45
Yes, because the writer has presented the reasons why unofficial marriage can happen.
46 Yes. it can cover the whole reason but it is only like main idea.
Why don’t you use like a sentence. 47
Yes, it is. Because it has mentioned the reason. 48
Yes, it is. There are mention about environment and writer’s comment writer will explain many advantages from her
comment. 49
No, it isn’t. I think the introduction is not effective. Because in that paragraph the writer write something common and it is
poor idea.
2. What is the writer’s main idea? Restate here: Respondents Feedback
1 Smoking is unhealthy.
2 National Examination brings misery.
3 National Exam has negative sides.
4 The negative sides of National Exam.
5 Smoking should be banned by the government.
6 Classical music should be introduced to children.
7 Smoking has a lot of bad effects for smokers and society. It is
related to health, economic, and society. 8
The writer’s main idea is that he doesn’t agree if Indonesia use National Exam, so National Exam should be abolished.
9 She said that National Exam should be abolished because the
students can get stress, not proportional, not effective. 10
National examination should be abolished. 11
National examination should be abolished. 12
People should plant the idle land. 13
Idle land should be planted at this recent in order to save the earth.
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14 Music is very important for children and music must be
included in the school subject. 15
National examination should be abolished. 16
The idle land should be planted by plants or trees because it can give many advantages for the earth.
17 National examination should be abolished by government.
18 It’s so unfair if the six subjects in National Exam for the
students have to decide to pass or not in Senior High School. 19
The main idea is National Examination should be abolished. 20
Smoking: it is very general statement. 21
For smoker, smoking can make their body become bad and make their age be shorter.
22 Smoking can kill the people.
23 The negative sides of National Exam.
24 Smoking should be forbidden because has some negative sides.
25 The writer’s main idea is to restate that tree planting is
important. 26
Tree planting can prevent our earth from global warming. 27
Tree planting is very important. 28
Society’s life, religion value, growth of the children. 29 National
Exam. 30
Facebook should be banned for children. 31
The writer’s main idea is the reasons why tree planting is important.
32 The writer’s main idea is the reasons why tree planting should
be done. There are several reasons that related to freshness, water resources, and global warming.
33 Facebook should be banned.
34 She doesn’t agree about unofficial marriage. She explain 3
reasons which are related to support the argument. Unofficial marriage should be banned because of religious value, social
value and the bad effect of it. Unofficial marriage will bring many problems.
35 She doesn’t agree with the polygamy. That’s why, she states 3
reasons why polygamy should not be supported. They are about injustice in dividing money, time, and love.
36 Facebook should be banned.
37 Facebook should be supported.
38 Tree planting is important because tree has several functions
for our world. 39
About why tree is important for our life. 40
The writer is not agree with unofficial marriage because it decrease the woman’s and her children’s right.
41 About the reason why we should plant trees
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42 Facebook should not be banned in Indonesia.
43 1. Today we are very difficult to find trees.
2. The first reason is the tree can help for reducing CO2.
3. The first reason is the tree can help for producing O2.
4. The first reason is the tree can help for saving water.
5. We must do tree planting.
44 Tree planting is very important because the trees are the place
for animal to live. It has a lot of function and it can reduce global warming’s effects.
45 Unofficial marriage should be banned.
46 Why National Exam should be abolished.
47 She against to the government program. it is national
Examination. She thinks that National Examination should be abolished.
48 About idle land should be planted.
49 National Examination should be abolished.
3. Does the writer support that idea with evidence? What is that evidence? Respondents Feedback