Is the introduction effective? Explain your answer Respondents Feedback

70 RAW DATA OF PEER FEEDBACK CHECKLIST 1. Is the introduction effective? Explain your answer Respondents Feedback 1 Yes, the introduction is effective. It is effective because the explanation matches with the idea. It means that the writer describes the idea well. 2 Yes, he has introduced some points that lead to the supporting arguments. 3 Yes, it is. 4 Yes, the introduction explains what will she explains. 5 The introduction is not too effective because there is no list of supporting arguments. 6 Yes, it is. The introduction can make the reader sure about the topic. 7 No, it is not. The writer has to give her own statement to support the introduction so that the reader gets some point from the introduction. 8 The introduction is effective, but I have a suggestion. “The reasons are……economy aspect”, I found two ‘and’s; . the first ‘and’ could be deleted, so the phrase become social-economy aspect 9 Yes, she gives clear introduction, but she didn’t write the general reason. She should write her three general reason. 10 Yes, it is. Because she mentions the reason of her main idea and clear enough. 11 No, it isn’t because in introduction paragraph, the writer just write two sentences. I think it is need more sentence for making or for describing a problem idea first, so, the introduction is not interesting. 12 It has been effective, because the writer has stated his position whether he agrees or disagrees. 13 Yes, it is. Because in my opinion, the writer has described the situation or the topic clearly. And he also mentioned or listed the three supporting ideas at the introduction part. But in the other hand, the writer’s position isn’t strong enough. 14 Yes, it is. Because there are some reasons to support the main idea. APPENDIX 6 RAW DATA OF PEER FEEDBACK CHECKLIST 71 Respondents Feedback 15 Yes, it is. The writer can state her position of her argumentative writing whether she is pro or contra. 16 Yes, it’s effective enough. 17 Yes, it is. The introduction is effective and the reasons are related to this statement. 18 No, isn’t it. It’s too dramatic. 19 The introduction is effective. The introduction is interesting. The introduction related to the title. But in introduction, the writer uses past tense and the third reasons in introduction should be written because the writer gives 3 reasons in explanation. 20 Not yet effective. Try to find a sentence that will invitewill catch your readers’ curiosity t read your work. Your introduction is sound a statement. 21 Yes, the introduction is effective, because the writer mention about the main idea first. 22 Yes, it is. We can know about the…. 23 Yes, it is. In this paragraph the writer explain about National Exam, and introduce what he will explain. 24 Yes, it shows about of them like to smoking about the fact that men or women in the world 25 The introduction is effective. It is enough thesis. 26 Yes, the introduction is about the important thing of three planting. 27 It is effective enough. 28 Yes, it is. It has good support sentences. 29 Yes the writer explain about National Exam and explain that from general to the specific one. 30 Yes, it is. He hives the problem and background information. 31 Yes. the writer gives the introduction why we should do tree planting. The introduction is explained from general one to the specific one. 32 Yes, it is effective because the writer gives the background and the problem why tree planting should be done. 33 Yes, then introduction can explain the problem clearly. 34 Not really, because in my opinion she doesn’t explain the thesis clearly. She doesn’t give some evidences too. 35 Yes, it is. In the introduction, she has explained ehat the polygamy the basic of having polygamy. She also give a statement that the polygamy can make the human in unlucky condition. It is related to the topic. 36 Yes, it is. Because the introduction can make us understanding the topic sentence. 37 Yes, it is. It explains the topic sentence clearly. 72 Respondents Feedback 38 There is no introduction at the text. 39 I think you have the introduction is effective because you explain about tree planting is important so in the reasons you explain the mean of her introduction. 40 Yes, it is, because it shows the background of the problem. 41 Yes, the introduction is effective. 42 No, because the introduction can’t introduces the problem. 43 The introduction is effective, because he mentions the arguments. 44 No. it has no restatement of the argument. 45 Yes, because the writer has presented the reasons why unofficial marriage can happen. 46 Yes. it can cover the whole reason but it is only like main idea. Why don’t you use like a sentence. 47 Yes, it is. Because it has mentioned the reason. 48 Yes, it is. There are mention about environment and writer’s comment writer will explain many advantages from her comment. 49 No, it isn’t. I think the introduction is not effective. Because in that paragraph the writer write something common and it is poor idea. 2. What is the writer’s main idea? Restate here: Respondents Feedback