What evidence is missing or incomplete? Respondents Feedback
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38 Yes. the tree can absorb air pollution, restrain flood, and tree is
used to reforestation process. 39 -
40 Yes, she does. Some people have a willingness to do their
marriage in an easy way. 41
No, the writer doesn’t support her idea with evidence. Because she doesn’t give specific explanation with her argument and
she doesn’t give some examples. 42
Yes, the evidence is the explanation at the reasons. 43
Yes. par. 2. CO2 can be reduced by tree. 44
Yes. In the paragraph 4, the writer’s writing is based on survey. 45
The writer directly states the example in paragraph 2. 1.
The proof is very important to arrange many letters. 2.
The society never accepts a family who has unofficial marriage.
46 Yes, she does. She gives the idea which covers the whole
reason. 47
Actually, she doesn’t support that idea with evidence completely.
48 Yes, it does. She shows four evidences. She mentions the
advantages. She said that idle land should be planted because: First, it can make beautiful. Second, it will improve the florish
land. Third, it can make oxygen improve. Fourth, it can reduce the global warming.
49 Yes. I think in second paragraph, the writer mention the reasons
with carefully and there are example there.
4. What evidence is missing or incomplete? Respondents Feedback
1 There are not incomplete. But the second reason isn’t
effective. I think the last sentence in the second reason should be omitted.
2 I think it is enough for young writer.
3 - 4
Many students pay for the answer. 5 -
6 Yes. 7 -
8 There is no missing evidence, but the example on the first
aspect make the readers quite confused: it is better to make the examples as one paragraph.
9 In each three reason she didn’t give clear and real reason.
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10 Second reason is missing. In the last paragraph, she said “It’s
better if the money is used for the other importance”. She doesn’t explain the other importance.
11 The time
connectives. 12 -
13 In my opinion, there is no missing evidence in this passage.
14 There is no missing or incomplete evidence but there is one
paragraph that is a jumping sentence. 15
In the second paragraph, she just says “It means that it doesn’t have advantage to develop Indonesia’s quality”. I think it’s
weak to support her statement. it’s too general, need to be more describe
16 “It will make the land can be planted with every species of the
plants”. 17
No, it isn’t. 18 -
19 The time to do national examination last year.
20 Example: what are the substances contained in the cigarette
that cause the sickness. 21
all of the evidences… 22 -
23 - 24 -
25 None.
26 No missing evidence.
27 No evidence is missing.
28 I found nothing for the missing evidence.
29 There is no incomplete evidence.
30 The bad impact is only according to his argument.
31 The evidences are complete because the writer has stated the
evidences on each reason. 32
In paragraph 3, maybe you can relate water resources with drought disaster. For example, the tree’s root absorbs the rain
water. The root keeps the water under the land, so it can’t be the cause of drought.
33 The evidence is complete.
34 In the third reason, there is no evidence. It will be better if
there is an evidence what effect of unofficial marriage for the couple new family.
35 Nothing. 36 -
37 No evidence
missing 38
I think that the evidence of the third reason is missing. 39
Your evidence is not missing.
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40 - 41
The evidence is not complete. 42 -
43 In 2
nd
argument, the writer explain but incomplete. 44 -
45 - 46 Nothing
47 For example: in the first reason, she doesn’t give clear
evidence. 48
I think the first and second evidence can be one reason. Because both of them have related.
49 Nothing I think.
5. What questions do you have about this composition? Respondents Feedback