proofreader also st clear and reliable a
Another exam proofreader argued
conclusion; she al reader.
3. Language Accur a. Tenses
Based on the proofreaders stated
they corrected. Th thirty nine particip
corrected were corr stated that he could not be persuaded since he
e arguments in the body.
ample is the essay entitled Giving a Piec
ed that the writer should conclude the argum also should put some persuasive sentence t
uracy
Figure 4.8 Tenses
the data, there were eighteen proofreaders fr ted that there were some incorrect tenses on th
The rest of the participants or twenty one pa icipants stated that all the tenses on the ess
orrect.
Incorrec Correct
he could not find
iece of Life , the
umentation in the e to convince the
from thirty nine the essays which
participants from essay which they
rrect :46 ect
Two proofread some incorrect ten
correction on the which part the inc
participants who
Coffee, just stated
1, the last sentence 4, the first and the
the incorrect tenses One of the p
Prevent Teen Preg which she thought
the writing which incorrect. For the e
is a family whic proofreader, the t
Figure 4.9Incorrect Tenses
eaders from eighteen participants who stated tenses on the essays which they corrected di
e essays so that it could make the writers we incorrect tenses. One of the proofreaders fro
o corrected the essay entitled, Life Health
ed that the incorrect tenses on the essay were i ce, in the paragraph 3, the first sentence and i
he last sentence. However, the proofreader did ses were, she also did not give any correction.
proofreaders who read the essay entitled W egnancy
, she gave some corrections on the ten ht that the tenses were wrong. However, actual
ich she corrected were correct and her co e example, “As in real story which I can find a
hich is in bad condition. incorrect”. Acc tenses on that sentence was wrong. She
Giving co correctio
No comm
ed that there were did not give any
were confused in from the eighteen
th with Organic
e in the paragraph d in the paragraph
id not point which
Why We Should tenses of the essay
ually the tenses of corrections were
around me, there ccording to the
he also gave the
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