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London evening standard Standard.co.UK
Should we be smoke-free? By Ross Lydall, Evening Standard Last updated at
00:00am on 27.10.03 Add your view
Put it out: should smoking be banned from public places?
The debate is set to split the capital
– should we follow in the footsteps of New York
and ban smoking in all public buildings? The biggest-ever survey about the contentious issue
is launched this week, following research which shows
that three out of four people support a ban in public places - from pubs and bars to railway stations,
shopping centers and offices. The Mori survey, commissioned by pressure group
that seven out of 10 are bothered by other peoples while around four out of 10 have left or avoided a
restaurant or pub as a result.
Following the Mori results, the London Health Commission will begin asking Londoners tomorrow
to vote on the possibility of widening nonsmoking areas or introducing bans across the city.
The results from the internet poll - known as the Big Though the Mayor does not have the power
to introduce a smoking ban, he says he is committed to working with partners
to cut smoking in public places. The Government could also decide
to pass laws giving the Mayor the ability to introduce restrictions on the estimated two
million smokers in London. Mr Livingstone said: I look forward to hearing
what the public wants done about smoking in places and to working
to increase Londoners access to healthier, smoke- free venues.
The survey follows the introduction of smoking bans in bars and restaurants in New York and San
Francisco. to say
what level of restriction - if any - they want. They will be asked about seven areas - cafes, restaurants,
pubs and bars, shopping centres, railway stations, taxis and offices.
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Len Duvall, chairman of the London Health Commission,
which was set up by the Mayor three years ago to improve public health, said: Smoking is
something that affects all Londoners
whether they smoke or not. We want to give them the chance
to have their say on whether smoking should or should not be allowed in a range of public settings.
Arguments are already raging in Londons bars. In Clapham Commons SW4 bar
which has smoking and no-smoking zones - Tammy Hollamby, a nursery nurse from Borough,
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if smoking was banned altogether from certain places, particularly restaurants.
Even smokers I know dont like the smell of smoke when they are eating.
But on the smoking side of the bar, property developer Dominic Woods disagreed. Mr Woods,
To say that a person cannot smoke in a public place that individuals civil liberties. Obviously, that isnt
fair.
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C. Data Interpretation
1. Data Interpretation of Text 1
Jakarta to scrap smoking rooms in public places and buildings Based on the data descriptions of lexicogrammar, cohesion system, text
structure and genre, the tenor of the text can be analyzed. Tenor consists of status, affect and contact.
a. Status
Status means the relative position of interlocutor in a social hierarchy. Its basic opposition is between equal and unequal status, depending on the
social ranking of the participants Martin, 1992, p. 525-526. The participants inside text 1 are the 2005 bylaw on air pollution
control, Swisscontact Indonesia Foundation, University of Indonesia Demography Institute, head of law enforcement from BPLHD Ridwan
Panjaitan, and Tulus Abadi from Indonesia Consumer Protection Foundation YLKI.
The status between the writer, the reader, and the participants inside the text is equal. It can be seen through the use of MOOD system since it
reflects the same position of the writer. There is no proposal clause in the text since the writer does not use her role as ‘adviser’ who has greatest position. It
means that all of the clauses in this text are indicative, declarative functioning proposition clause due to the function of the text informing the issue to the
readers. The dominance of full indicative, declarative clauses indicates that the
text share a common focus on the giving of information. The writer tries to
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