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B. Data Description
1. Text 1
a. Contextual Configuration
Text 1 is a headline of news text entitled Jakarta to scrap smoking
rooms in public places and buildings which was taken from The Jakarta Post published on Tuesday, March 30
th
, 2010. This news is used to inform the society about smoking ban in public places, particularly in Jakarta.
This text has several elements: the name of the newspaper The Jakarta Post, the name of the column headlines, title, date of publication
and the issue. The whole text is written in black color except the date of publication which is written
in grey color. It aims to grab the reader’s attention. The illustration shows that the society in Jakarta will agree to
extend the rule of smoking-ban law if the public do not smoke in infiltrating non-smoking areas anymore. Generally, the text tells the reader
about some arguments which are in the one side support the issue of smoking ban in public places.
b. Lexicogrammar Description
1. MOOD system
Table 4.1 Mood System of Text 1 MOOD
system Clause number
Total Indicative:
Declarative: Proposition
3, 5a, 5b, 5c, 6a, 6b, 6c, 7a, 7b, 7c, 8a, 8b, 8c, 8d, 8e, 9a, 9b, 9c, 11a, 11b, 11c,
11d, 11e, 11f, 12a, 12b, 13a, 13b, 13c, 13d, 14a, 14b, 14c, 14d, 14e, 14f, 15,
16, 17a, 17b, 17c, 17d, 18, 19a, 19b, 20a, 20b, 20c, 21a, 21b, 21c, 22, 23a,
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23b, 24a, 24b, 25. Indicative:
declarative: proposal
- -
-
Indicative: Interrogative:
proposal -
- -
Imperative: Proposal
- -
- Total
57 100 Table 4.1 shows that whole clauses of text 1 belong to indicative,
declarative functioning proposition 100. 2.
Clause system Table 4.2 Types of Clause of Text 1
Table 4.2 shows that text 1 applies dominant complex clauses 68, followed by simplex clauses 16 and minor clauses 4.
3. Type of Interdependence and Logico-Semantic Relation
Table 4.3 Type of Interdependence and Logico-Semantic Relation of Text 1
Type of Logico- Semantic
Relation Type of Interdependency
Hypotactic Paratactic
Projection - Locution
“ 5b-5c=1
7c-7a=1, 14f-a=1, 14a-14b=1, 17a-
17b=1, 19a-19b=1, 20c-20a=1, 23b-
23a=1. Type of Clause
Clause number Total
Minor Ellipsis 1, 2, 4, 10
4 16
Major: Simplex
15, 16, 18, 25 4
16 Complex
3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 11, 12, 13, 14, 17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24
17 68
Total 25 100
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- Idea ‘
6a-6b=1, 8a-8b=1, 8a-8d=1, 9a-9b=1,
11a-11b=1, 12a- 12b=1, 24a-24b=1
-
Expansion - Elaboration =
- -
- Extension + 11c-11d=1, 11d-
11e=1, 11d-11f=1, 13b-13c=1.
7a-7b=1
- Enhancement x 5a-5b=1, 6b-6c=1,
8b-8c=1, 8d-8e=1, 9b-9c=1, 11b-
11c=1 14b-14c=1, 14b-
14d, 14a-14e=1, 17b-17c=1, 17b-
d=1, 20a-20b=1, 21b-21c=1
Table 4.3 shows that text 1 has one hypotactic locution, seven paratactic locutions, seven hypotactic ideas, four hypotactic
extensions, one paratactic extension, seven hypotactic enhancements and six paratactic enhancements.
4. Nominal Groups
Table 4.4 Nominal Groups of Text 1 Nominal
clause Clause number
total Complex
5ciii, 6ai, 7ai, 9cii, 10 ii, 11di, 12b i, 15i, 16iii, 18iii,
21ai, 22ii, 23aiii, 24bv. 14 23.73
Simplex 1, 2, 3 iv, 4, 5aiv, 6bii, 6ci,
7bii, 7ci, 8ai, 8biii, 8ci, 8dii, 8eii, 9aii, 9bi 11ai, 11bi,
11cv, 11ei, 11fii, 12ai, 13ai, 13biii,
13ci, 13diii,
14ai, 14bii, 14ci, 14ei, 14fi, 17ai
17bii, 17civ,
17di, 19aiii,
19bii, 20aiii,
20biv, 20ci,
21bii, 21ci, 23bii, 24ai, 25iv. 45 76.27
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Table 4.4 shows that text 1 dominantly applies simplex nominal groups 76.27 and followed by complex nominal groups 23.73 .
5. Verbal Groups
Table 4.5 Verbal Groups of Text 1 Nominal
clause Clause number
total Complex
7b 1
1.79 Simplex
3, 5a, 5b, 5c, 5d, 6a, 6b, 6c, 7a, 7b, 7c, 8a, 8b, 8c,
8d, 8e, 9a, 9b, 9c, 10, 11a, 11b, 11c, 11d, 11e, 11f,
12a, 12b, 13a, 13b, 13d, 14a, 14b, 14c, 14d, 14e,
14f, 15, 16, 17a, 17b, 17c, 17d, 18, 19a, 19b, 20a, 20b,
20c, 21a, 21b, 21c, 22, 23a, 23b, 25.
55 98.21
Total 56
100 Table 4.5 shows that text 1 mostly applies simplex verbal groups
98.21 followed by complex verbal groups 1.79 . 6.
Modality a.
Modulation There is no modulation in this text because all of the clauses only
have mood system which consists of indicative, declarative functioning proposition.
b. Modalization
5a the city will
extend the smoking… medium probability
6b his office would
revise the 2005… medium probability
7a people working in the buildings can still smoke low
probability
7b but they will have to smoke outside the buildings medium
probability
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8b the smoking free regulation would
be imposed on all… medium probability
11c the new regulation could
spark opposition in night clubs… low probability
11e would comply once.. medium probability 14b that 62 percent of the respondents would still visit
restaurants medium probability
14c although they would not be allowed medium probability 17b would make an assessment medium probability
18 a building will then be given
one of four ratings… medium probability
19a we will
also publish data on buildings… medium probability
20b will
be more effective than law enforcement… medium probability
21b the city should impose stern sanctions medium
probability 22
… the regulation in the media will only affect them for a
while medium probability
23 the city should
impose sanctions with a financial… medium probability
7. Polarity
5c that smoking rooms in buildings do not
stop smoke… Negative polarity
8d that the non-smoking areas were c
ontaminated… Positive polarity
8e when they were available positive polarity
9b that people are not allowed negative polarity 11d but he was
confident the entertainment… Positive polarity
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13b 93 percent of the respondents were aware of the regulations
positive polarity
14e after the ban is imposed positive polarity
From the finding above, text 1 has seven numbers of polarities that consist of two negative polarities and five positive polarities.
8. Descriptive and Attitudinal Lexis
1. Descriptive Lexis
Smoking rooms 3 Public places 3, 5a, 10
Public buildings 3, 5a Non-smoking areas 5a
Office 6b People 7a, 9b
Monday 7c Laboratory test 8c
Law on air pollution control 9a Five types of facilities 9c
New regulation 11c, 13b, 13d, 19b Night clubs, bars, and restaurants 11c
Food industry 11d Survey 13a, 14a, 15, 16, 24b
Public closed areas 13d Females, males 16
Public buses and minivans 24b
2. Attitudinal Lexis
Free regulation 8b Supported the plan 12b
Not be allowed to smoke 14c
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Encourage implementation 17d We hope prestige and shame 20a
More effective than law enforcement 20b Stern sanctions 21b
Affect them for a while 22 9.
Metaphors 1.
Ideational Metaphors 3 J
akarta to scrap smoking rooms… 5a the city will extend the smoking ban in public places and
buildings 5c
that smoking rooms in buildings do not stop smoke… 6b his office would revise the 2005 gubernatorial decree
9a the 2005 by law on air po llution states…
13a the survey said…
14a the survey revealed…
16 the survey comprised 65 percent females and 34 percent males…
18 a building will then be given one of four ratings…
21b the city should impose stern sanctions…
2. Interpersonal Metaphors
19 We will also publish data on buildings that breach the regulation in the mass media.
22 Publishing information on buildings violating the regulations in the media will only affect them for a while.
10. Technicality and Nominalization
a. Technicality
Headlines 2, 4 Laboratory test 8c
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Pollution 9a Industry 8d
Respondent 12b, 13b, 14b, 15 Survey 13a, 14a, 15, 16, 24b
Mass media 19b, 22 b.
Nominalization Smoking room 3, 5c
Smoking ban 5a Non-smoking areas 5c
Enforcement 6a,8d,20b Regulation 8b, 11c, 13d, 19b
Entertainment 11d Education 16
Implementation 17d Assessment 17b
11. Text Structure and Genre
Table 4.6 Text Structure of Text 1 Clause
Activity sequence Rhetorical
function Text
structure 3
Stating the title- Jakarta to scrap smoking rooms
in public places and buildings.
Introducing the main point of the
issue to the readers.
Title
5 Stating by the city,
Jakarta will extend the smoking ban since may
non-smoking area still infiltrating the smoke.
Announce the issue about the
reason why the city will extend
the ban. Thesis
6-7 Stating by the head of
law enforcement Ridwan P. that his
office would revice the 2005 gubernatorial
decree. Giving the
information about the plan
will be done by the BPLHD to
consider toward the issue.
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8 Stating by Ridwan P.
about the reason why the smoking free
regulation would be imposed in building by
giving the true condition of the building.
giving more detail about to
support the point of the argument
1
Supporting Point
9-10 Stating from the new
regulation of law on air pollution control-people
are not allowed to smoke in public places.
Giving more argument to
support the point of argument 1.
11 Stating by Ridwan P.
about the new regulation will find the
optimist result in food industry and
entertainment. Giving the
information about the
probability of people who will
disagree or agree toward the
smoking ban in public places.
12-14 Stating by Ridwan P.
according to the survey done by BPLHD about
the respondents who support the plan for
100 free smoking areas, aware of the
regulation- they still visit the restaurant
although they would not be allowed to smoke.
Giving more information
more about the people who
support the plan and it support
the point of argument 2
15-16 Stating by the survey
about 747 respondents living in the five
municipalities in the city, 65 females and
34 males aged 20-49 with education
background of Senior High School.
Giving information
about the kind of the people who
will be the respondents.
17-18 Stating by the BPLHD
about the plan to make an assessment to
encourage implementation and a
Giving the information
about the ways to know the
level of
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building will be given one of four ratings
poor, satisfactory, good and very good.
compliance of building owners.
19-20 Stating by the BPLHD
will also publish the data on buildings that
breach the regulation in the mass media and they
hope this way will be affective.
Giving more information to
support the point of argument 4.
21 Stating by Tulus of
YLKI about the plan, the city should impose
stern sanction in order to the plan work well.
Giving the information
about the sanction for the
city that disobeys the
plan.
22-23 Stating by the YLKI
about the plan-the publishing information
on buildings will only affect them for a while
and the city should impose sanctions with a
financial impact. Giving the
information that people who
disobeys the regulation
should get the heavy sanction
24-25 Stating by YLKI that
89 of 549 public buses, minivans and 60
cities of malls also do the violation of smoking
ban. Giving more the
information about people
who violates the smoking ban.
Table 4.6 shows that text 1 is Exposition Genre. Text structure above shows that the text starts from the title clause 3, thesis clause 5,
arguments that shows the supporting point in one side clause 6-23, and there is no conclusion.
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