Individual Construction of the text
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4 Average to good
3 Poor to Fair
2 Very poor
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Unit 2 Task 1
MY IDOL
Emma Charlotte Duerre Watson was born in Paris, France , 15 April 1990. She is Hermione Granger of Harry Potter movie. Her nickname is Emma. She is the
daughter of Chris Watson and Jacqueline Luesby. She lived in Paris until the age of five before she moved with her mother and younger brother, Alexander to Oxford,
England.
Emma has wavy brown hair. Her height is 165 cm. She is a generous, friendly, and detremined person. She also said that she is a little bit stubborn. Emma
loves dancing, singing, tennis, and art.
Task 2 Complete the text with the suitable word provided in the box.
My idol is Niall James Horan. He …. usually called Niall Horan. He is a
singer and a member of the boy group One Direction. He ….. born on September 13,
1993 in County West- meath, Ireland. Niall …... slim body with height 171 cm. He has cute oval face with
beautiful lips. His nose is …….. Brunette wavy hair makes him different from other
boys in the band. He also has beautiful skin which is white. Niall is confident, generous, and friendly.
He …… music and Justin Bieber is his favorite …….... His ……. color is blue. He ……. loves to eat very …….
Name Physical appearance
Character
favorite likes on was much also is singer pointed has
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Task 4 Make a list of a person description. Follow the table below.
Task 5 Make a simple draft to describe your idol.
Name Physical appearance
Character
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Peer feedback checklist
No Content Yes No
1 The introduction is clear.
pengenalan objek sangat jelas 2
The description of physical appearance is clear. penjelasan secara fisik jelas
3 The description of the character is clear.
penjelasan secara sifat jelas
No Organization Yes
No 1
The text is begun with a good introduction. teks dimulai dengan introduction yang bagus
2 The text has clear description.
teks mempunyai deskripsi yang jelas 3
The text is using good coherences. teks menggunakan keselarasan yang baik
No Vocabulary Yes No
1 The text is using effective words choice.
teks menggunakan pilihant kata yang tepat dan akurat 2
The text is using good adjective words to describe objects. teks menggunakan kata sifat penjelas objek dengan baik
3 The text is using various vocabularies.
teks menggunakan kosa kata yang bervariasi
No Language use Yes No
1 The text has few errors of tense and number.
teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada tense dan number 2
The text has few errors in using pronoun. teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada penggunaan kata gantihe,
she, it 3
The text has few errors in using
to belinking verb
Partner: ____________________
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teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada penggunaan is,am,are
No Mechanic Yes No
1 The text has few errors of spelling.
teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada pengejaan kata 2
The text has few errors of punctuation. teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada penggunaan tanda baca
3 The text has few errors of capitalization.
teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada penggunaan huruf kapital 4
The text has few errors of paragraphing. teks mempunyai sedikit kesalahan pada penyusunan paragraph
5 The text is legible.
teks dapat dibaca