Berilah minimal 2 poin komentar positif tentang tulisan temanmu. Berilah minimal 2 poin saran terhadap tulisan temanmu. Apakah kamu setuju dengan pendapat temanmu? Mengapa?
178
179
Sample of student’s feedback in Cycle I
180
181
Sample of the students’ draft before peer feedback activities in Cycle I
182
Sample of the students’ draft after peer feedback activities in Cycle I
183
Sample of the students’ feedback in Cycle II
184
185
Sample of students’ draft before peer feedback activities in Cycle II
186
Sample of the students’ draft after peer feedback activities in Cycle II
187
Student’s writing in Posttest
188
Students’ scores in Pretest No
C O
V LU
M FS
R C
R C
R C
R C
R C
1 16
16 9
8 9
8 10
10 3
3
46
2 16
16 14
13 10
9 11
11 3
3
53
3 13
13 8
8 7
8 7
8 2
2
38
4 17
16 10
10 9
9 10
11 3
3
49
5 23
22 16
15 16
15 19
19 4
4
76,5
6 16
16 9
10 10
10 10
10 3
3
48,5
7 22
22 14
15 14
15 18
18 4
4
73
8 22
21 14
14 14
13 11
10 4
3
63
9 21
21 10
12 13
14 10
9 4
4
59
10 18
18 12
11 11
11 11
10 3
3
54
11 18
17 14
14 12
11 12
11 4
4
58,5
12 17
17 11
11 11
13 10
10 3
3
53
13 16
16 9
10 10
10 10
10 3
3
48,5
14 16
16 10
10 12
10 10
10 3
3
50
15 18
18 13
13 11
12 12
13 3
3
58
16 17
17 11
10 10
10 10
9 3
3
50
17 21
21 10
12 14
14 11
13 4
4
62
18 17
17 9
9 9
10 11
11 3
3
49,5
19 22
22 14
13 13
13 15
14 4
4
67
20 22
22 13
13 14
15 15
13 3
3
66,5
21 20
20 13
13 14
15 15
13 3
3
64,5
22 18
17 10
10 10
9 13
12 4
4
53,5
23 17
17 10
9 10
9 11
11 3
3
50
24 15
15 10
10 10
10 6
7 3
3
44,5
25 18
18 14
13 12
12 11
11 3
3
57,5
26 16
16 10
10 9
8 10
8 2
3
46
27 16
14 9
9 11
10 9
9 3
3
46,5
28 17
17 9
10 9
9 10
10 3
3
48,5
29 18
18 14
13 10
10 11
10 3
3
55
30 17
17 10
10 10
10 11
11 3
3
51
31 22
22 14
13 10
9 11
11 4
4
60
189
Students ’ scores in Cycle I
No C
O V
LU M
FS R
C R
C R
C R
C R
C
1
18 18
13 14
14 13
17 16
3 3
65
2
21 21
15 15
15 14
17 16
3 3
69,5
3
18 18
13 14
14 14
16 16
3 3
64,5
4
17 17
13 14
13 14
16 16
4 4
64,5
5
25 25
16 15
16 15
18 18
4 4
77,5
6
20 20
15 15
15 15
17 16
3 3
69,5
7
23 23
15 16
16 16
17 17
4 4
75,5
8
20 20
14 14
14 15
16 17
4 4
69,5
9
22 22
15 15
16 16
17 17
4 4
74
10
22 22
16 16
16 15
18 17
4 4
74,5
11
22 22
15 15
15 16
17 17
4 4
74
12
20 20
14 14
14 14
16 16
4 4
68
13
22 22
16 15
16 15
18 17
4 4
74
14
21 21
15 15
15 15
18 17
4 4
72,5
15
21 21
14 15
15 15
17 18
4 4
72
16
20 20
15 15
15 15
17 17
4 4
72
17
22 22
14 14
16 15
18 17
4 4
72,5
18
18 18
13 13
14 13
17 17
4 4
65
19
23 22
15 15
15 14
16 16
4 4
71,5
20
22 22
15 15
15 14
18 18
4 4
73
21
22 22
15 15
16 16
17 17
4 4
74
22
20 20
14 15
14 14
17 17
4 4
69,5
23
21 21
14 14
14 14
17 18
4 4
70,5
24
18 18
14 14
13 14
18 18
4 4
68
25
22 22
15 15
15 14
17 17
4 4
72
26
18 18
14 14
14 14
17 17
4 4
67
27
20 20
15 15
14 14
17 17
4 4
70
28
20 20
15 15
14 15
17 17
4 4
71
29
21 21
14 14
14 14
18 18
4 4
71
30
22 22
15 14
15 15
17 15
4 4
71,5
31
21 21
13 15
14 13
17 16
4 4
68,5
190
Students ’ scores in Cycle II
No C
O V
LU M
FS R
C R
C R
C R
C R
C
1
22 22
14 14
14 14
17 16
4 4
70,5
2
22 22
14 14
15 15
17 16
3 3
70,5
3
21 20
14 14
14 14
17 16
3 3
68
4
23 23
15 15
15 14
18 18
4 4
74,5
5
23 23
16 16
14 15
18 18
4 4
73,5
6
23 23
15 15
15 15
18 18
4 4
75
7
23 22
15 16
15 15
18 18
4 4
74,5
8
23 23
16 16
16 16
18 18
4 4
75,5
9
23 22
15 15
16 15
18 18
4 4
75
10
23 23
14 15
16 16
18 18
4 4
75,5
11
24 24
15 15
16 17
18 18
4 4
77,5
12
23 23
15 15
15 15
18 18
4 4
74,5
13
23 23
14 15
16 16
17 16
4 4
74
14
23 23
14 15
14 15
18 18
4 4
73,5
15
24 24
14 16
16 15
18 18
4 4
75,5
16
24 24
16 16
15 16
18 18
4 4
77,5
17
24 24
15 15
15 16
18 18
4 4
76,5
18
22 22
15 15
15 15
17 17
4 4
72,5
19
21 21
14 14
15 14
18 18
4 4
71,5
20
23 22
16 16
16 16
18 18
4 4
76
21
22 22
15 15
15 16
18 17
4 4
74
22
20 20
14 14
14 14
17 17
3 4
68
23
24 24
15 15
15 15
17 18
4 4
75
24
21 21
14 15
15 15
17 17
4 4
71,5
25
24 24
15 15
16 16
18 18
4 4
77
26
21 21
14 15
14 14
17 17
4 4
70,5
27
20 20
15 15
13 14
17 17
4 4
69
28
24 24
16 16
16 15
17 17
4 4
76
29
24 24
16 16
15 16
18 18
4 4
77,5
30
24 24
16 16
15 16
18 18
4 4
77
31
24 24
15 16
15 16
17 17
4 4
75,5
191
Students ’ scores in Posttest