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17, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 27, 28, 29, 30,
31, 35, 36, 37, 38, 40, 41, 42, 43, 45, 46,
47,48, 51, 52, 53, 54, 55, 56, 57, 58, 61, 63,
64, 66, 67, 68, 69, 70, 72, 73, 74, 76, 80, 81,
82, 84, 86, 88, 89, 91, 92, 94, 95, 96, 97, 98,
99, 100, 101, 103, 104, 105, 107, 108,
109, 110, 111, 112, 113, 116, 117, 118,
119, 120 3
C 12, 26, 39, 44, 62, 75,
85, 87, 102, 115, 122, 123
12 9, 6
2.1 Classification A
The data which belong to this classification are acceptable data. The mean score of classification A is 1 up to 1, 5. The data is acceptable if it is naturally
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translated into the target readers and does not sound like a translation product. There are 23 data 18, 4 belonged to classification A.
Example 1 :
06. The Tea Party was the culmination of a resistance movement throughout
British America against the Tea Act, which had been passed by the British Parliament in 1773.
The Tea Party, adalah puncak dari sebuah gerakan perlawanan di seluruh Inggris Amerika terhadap UU Teh, yang telah disahkan oleh Parlemen
Inggris pada 1773
All the three raters give the same opinion about the acceptability of datum number 06. It is acceptable since the translation does not sound like a translation
product and it is naturally translated into the target readers. They all agree that datum number 06 is easy to understand for the target readers. The mean score of
datum number is 1. Also, the researcher agrees with all raters. Example 2
: 59.
This would allow the company to reduce costs by eliminating the middlemen who bought the tea at wholesale auctions in London.
Hal ini akan memungkinkan perusahaan untuk mengurangi biaya dengan menghilangkan perantara yang membeli grosir teh di lelang di London.
The mean score of datum number 59 is 1, 3 so that it belongs to classification A. However, R1 gives different opinion about the acceptability of
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datum number 59. He assesses it less acceptable. According to R1, the translation sounds clumsy. It is seen from the translation of middlemen into
perantara.
In Indonesia, it is not familiar to use
perantara
for trading; the target readers will be familiar if it is translated into the word that Indonesia people usually used. R1
gives another alternative in translating datum number 59 which is
Hal ini akan memungkinkan perusahaan untuk mengurangi biaya dengan menghilangkan
pedagang tengkulak yang membeli teh pada lelang teh secara grosir di London.
From the researcher‘s point of view, the researcher agrees with R1 that datum number 59 is less acceptable. It is seen when the machine translates the
words ―by eliminating the middlemen who bought the tea at wholesale auctions in London‖ into ‖
dengan menghilangkan perantara yang membeli grosir teh di lelan
g di London”. It makes translation sounds unnatural and clumsy. Example 3
: 79.
Protestors were instead concerned with a variety of other issues.
Pemrotes itu bukannya prihatin dengan berbagai masalah lain.
Datum number 79 is considered acceptable because the mean score of the acceptability is 1, 3. From the three raters, R1 and R3 consider it acceptable and
R2 comments that it is less acceptable. R2 considers datum number 79 less acceptable because
the translation sounds clumsy when the word ―instead‖ is translated into
bukannya.
So that the target readers will catch that it is indeed a translation product.
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However, the researcher agrees with R1 and R3. Datum number is acceptable. In other words, there is no problem with the translation. The
translation sounds natural and does not seem like a translation product. The translation is also familiar to the target readers.
2.2 Classification B
